its better not to judge the flow of his grammar but to correct it. american's would rather understand it, as long as it is nearly and clearly stated from what you were trying to implies... so with the pinoy's out there who's criticizing that the content of his english story is kinda awful well, those kind of people are those who haven't try/tried to talk with the live foreigner out there... well, kuddos and bravo to you author...looking forward to a person who can make me feel perfect and completely de-virginized. lmfao. NBSB... and no expirience since birth... kidding:)
I never cried for a story dito sa blog na ito. Pero ikaw lamang ton ang nakapagpatulo ng luha ko. Tyinaga ko basahin mula una hanggang sa finale, kahit na nag-aaral ako. Ang hirap tanggapin na iyong mula pagkabata mo ay nakasama mo na hanggang pagtanda ay mawawalang bigla. I hope mapanatag na loob dahil nasa magandang pangangalaga na si Marcus. Just pray na malagpasan mo ang lahat ng struggles mo kahit wala na sya. Naix_0431