From: tlynch@cco.caltech.edu (Timothy W. Lynch)
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Subject: Synopsis, "Chain of Command, Part II"
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Date: 23 Dec 1992 01:28:56 GMT
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Summary: == synopsis
Keywords: TNG, Cardassians, Picard, torture

WARNING:  The following post contains intense spoilers for "Chain of Command, 
Part II" that the faint of heart may find disturbing.  Proceed with caution.












Picard, now heavily drugged, is being interrogated.  He answers all questions 
put to him as best he can, including giving the names of the rest of his 
team; but when Gul Madred asks about the defense plans for Minos Korva, Picard 
has no answer.  Madred orders the dosage increased and begins again...

Meanwhile, the negotiations are stalling back aboard the Enterprise, and are 
only made worse when Gul Lemec raises the issue of Celtris Three.  When he is 
asked what evidence he has for Picard's team's "attack", he responds that 
they have Picard himself, and assures them that, although exactly how is not 
known, "we *will* respond."  After he leaves, Jellico confirms to Riker and 
Troi that Picard and company were sent to Celtris, and that he may well be 
captured.  He sends Riker in a shuttle to the planned rendezvous point to 
pick up whichever team members do return.

Picard is now brought back to Gul Madred, blindfolded.  He asks to see a 
neutral representative, and is assured that one is en route.  Madred plays 
the gracious host, removing Picard's blindfold and shackles, and the two then 
talk of Cardassian archaeology.  When Picard eventually asks to be returned 
to his ship, however, Madred chuckles.  "My dear captain, you are a 
*criminal*.  You have been apprehended invading one of our secret facilities. 
The least that will happen is for you to stand trial, and be punished.  But I 
am offering you the opportunity for that experience to be ... _civilized_."  
The price, of course, is cooperation with Madred's questioning, particularly 
as regards the defense plans for Minos Korva.  When Picard assures Madred 
that he does not *know* those plans, Madred is skeptical; the Enterprise, 
after all, would be the command ship for that planet's sector in the event of 
an attack.  

Picard is manhandled by the arriving guards and resists.  "Wasted energy, 
Captain..." says Madred, now approaching Picard with a very sharp knife.  
"Are you in good health?"  Picard protests that torture is forbidden by the 
code regarding prisoners of war, but Madred relentlessly carves off Picard's 
clothing.  "From this point on, you will enjoy no privilege of rank, no 
privileges of person.  From now on, I will refer to you only as ... *human*.  
You have no other identity."  Picard, stripped naked, is shackled at both 
hands and feet and left to sleep while stretched vertically like a side of 
beef.

When Riker returns with Beverly and Worf (both bruised and scratched, but 
intact), Jellico puts Geordi to work analyzing Bev's tricorder readings.  
Riker asks permission to prepare a rescue operation for Picard, but Jellico 
refuses, saying that under the current circumstances, it would be foolhardy.  
"He's _gone_.  I'm sorry, Will, but you're going to have to accept that."

Morning arrives for Picard, and with it Gul Madred.  "Good morning; I trust 
you slept well."  Picard is unshackled, but then subjected to watching Madred 
cheerfully drink his morning beverage while Picard suffers from thirst.  
"Thirsty?"  Picard nods.  "I would imagine so."

The interrogation begins again, with Madred professing to believe that Picard 
knows nothing of Minos Korva.  Instead, Madred turns on four very bright 
lights behind him and asks Picard how many lights he sees.  When Picard, 
not surprisingly, sees four, Madred rejects his answer.  He calls Picard's 
attention to a small device that has been implanted in his chest, which 
Madred can use to produce pain in any part of Picard's body at will.  When 
Picard continues to insist that there are four lights, Madred begins to use 
this device...

Picard's initial interrogation is shown to Jellico, Riker and Troi.  Picard, 
it so happens, is not protected by the Seldonis Four Convention unless he is 
officially a prisoner of war; and the only way to establish that is to admit 
that he was acting under Federation orders, an admission Jellico is by no 
means prepared to make.  Gul Lemec, of course, offers an alternate option:  
if the Federation withdraws completely from the sector, they will release 
Picard and forget the whole thing.  Jellico requests a recess to consult his 
superiors, and ultimately ends up involved in a shouting match with Riker, 
who demands that Picard's life is worth the admission that he *was* acting on 
behalf of the Federation.  Despite Troi's attempts to mediate, the argument 
escalates:  "Are you questioning my judgement, Commander?"  "As first 
officer, it is my responsibility to point out any actions that may be 
*mistakes* by a commanding officer, _sir_," snarls Riker.  "Then maybe," 
responds Jellico in kind, "it's time you found other responsibilities.  
You're relieved; don't make me confine you to quarters as well."  Riker 
stalks off.

Some time later, Jellico confers with Geordi and Data, who is now acting 
first officer.  They reason that the Cardassians may have deliberately set a 
trap for Picard, and further suggest that it may be to get defense plans for 
this sector.  They become convinced that the Cardassians are planning an 
imminent attack somewhere in the sector, and Jellico orders Geordi to scan 
Lemec's ship in an attempt to find out where it might be.

Gul Madred, meanwhile, has a brief meeting with his daughter in Picard's 
presence.  After she leaves, Picard (now robed) expresses his surprise at 
Madred allowing her to see him.  He further suggests, upon hearing statements 
from Madred that she knows "enemies deserve their fate," that she will soon 
learn to devalue those other than the "enemies," perhaps even including her 
own parents.  This quickly evolves into a discussion of Cardassian history 
and what the ruling military junta has done for (and to) the Cardassians.  
Madred brags that since the military takeover, feeding the population is no 
longer a problem, and that "my daughter will never have to worry about going 
hungry."  "Her belly may be full, but her spirit will be empty," retorts 
Picard.  Madred, furious, slugs Picard and begins again.  "How many lights do 
you see?"

Geordi's scans suggest that Lemec's ship may have recently been in the 
McAllister Nebula, a nebula very near the Cardassian/Federation border.  
Jellico quickly believes that a Cardassian fleet is hiding in that nebula 
until they can attack, and a check of the area suggests that Minos Korva (a 
prior Cardassian target) would be a prime location to attack from that site.  
Jellico orders the Enterprise to Minos Korva on the double.

Madred, at this point, tries another tactic.  He commends Picard as being 
remarkably strong-willed: "I see no point in keeping you here any further; 
you may go."  Picard slowly pulls himself up off the floor of the chamber and 
begins to lurch towards the open doors, only to hear "We will get what we 
need from the human female."  Madred tells him that both Beverly and Worf 
have been captured (Worf killed), and that since he proved so unhelpful, they 
will have to get their information from her.  Picard protests that Bev knows 
nothing of defenses; she's a medical officer.  "You might be right; I'll have 
to determine that for myself."  Picard drags himself back to Madred's desk 
and sits, offering to stay.

With the Enterprise en route to Minos Korva, Jellico outlines his plans to 
hit the Cardassian fleet in the nebula before it leaves it.  Despite 
objections from crewmembers that his theory is by no means certain, he holds 
firm, ordering Worf to prep 500 antimatter mines and Geordi to prepare a 
shuttle for the journey.  Beverly goes to prepare sickbay for the inevitable 
casualties, very bitter at Jellico's attitude.  

As morning comes again, Gul Madred shares a breakfast of taspa eggs with 
Picard.  Picard, finding his egg contains a still-living taspa, eats it 
greedily anyway.  Madred, amused, talks of eating his first live taspa when 
he was six years old, and of having other eggs from the same nest taken 
from him forcibly by an older boy.  Rather than accepting this, however, 
Picard pursues it.  "It must be rewarding you to repay others for all those 
years of misery."

"What do you mean?"
"Torture has never been a reliable means of extracting information.  It is 
ultimately self-defeating as a means of control.  One wonders why it is still 
practiced."
"I fail to see where this analysis is leading," says Madred dully.
Picard pounces, despite his tired voice.  "Whenever I look at you now, I 
won't see a powerful Cardassian warrior.  I will see a six-year old boy who 
is powerless to protect himself."
Madred erupts into a rage, turning the lights on Picard full blast.  "Be 
quiet!"
"In spite of all you have done to me, I find you a pitiable man."
"Picard, stop it -- " Madred raises the pain inducer.  "-- or I will turn 
this on and leave you in agony all night."
Picard laughs.  "Ha!  You called me Picard."
"What are the Federation's defense plans for Minos Korva?"
"There are four lights!"
Madred, enraged, begins tormenting Picard anew.  "There are _five_ lights!  
How many do you see now?"
Picard, despite his agony and growing incoherence, manages one final barb 
before lapsing into screams.  "You are six years old!  Weak and helpless!  
You cannot hurt me!"

Jellico and Geordi, meanwhile, talk in the newly prepared shuttle of old 
piloting runs.  When it turns out that Jellico needs the best pilot around to 
conduct this strafing run, Geordi tells him that Riker is the best they've 
got.  

Jellico eventually goes to Riker and asks him to pilot the shuttle, but not 
until the two drop ranks and trade barbs.  But eventually, Jellico asks Riker 
for help.  "Will you pilot the shuttle, Commander?"  "Yes."  Jellico turns to 
leave.  "You're welcome."

Riker and Geordi swoop into the nebula in their shuttle and plant the mines 
on the Cardassian ships.  Once they have returned, Jellico signals a very 
angry Gul Madred on the Reklar.  "I'm not going to argue with you, Gul 
Madred.  Every one of your ships has a mine on its belly, my finger's on the 
button, and you're in a _very_ bad position."  After the weakness of the 
situation becomes apparent, Madred agrees to all of Jellico's terms, 
including the immediate release of Picard.

This news, however, has yet to reach Picard, who finds himself alone and 
takes the opportunity to smash the pain inducer, despite the knowledge that 
Madred has duplicates.  Madred, arriving, tries to break Picard one last time 
by telling him that the battle has been won by the Cardassians, that the 
Enterprise is burning, and that Picard is theirs forever.

He offers Picard a choice:  academic pursuits and comfort, or a continuation 
of the days of torture.  "It's up to you.  A life of ease and reflection and 
intellectual challenge ... or this."

"What must I do?"

"Nothing, really.  Tell me ... how many lights you see.  How many?"

Picard stares at the lights abjectly for a long time.  As the guards come in, 
Madred urges Picard to tell him before it's too late.  "Don't be a stubborn 
fool!  How many?"

One of the arriving Cardassians, however, is Gul Lemec, who demands to know 
why Picard isn't ready for his journey back to the Enterprise.  He tells 
Picard to go with the guards to get cleaned up and ready for his return.  
Picard stands up and screams defiantly at Madred, "There are FOUR LIGHTS!", 
then stalks off with the guards, refusing any help with the walk.

Some time later, Picard returns to the Enterprise intact and obtains his 
command back from Jellico.  His first action as captain, however, is to give 
Will the bridge and talk to Troi in the ready room.

"What I didn't put in the report was that, at the end, he gave me a choice 
between a life of comfort, or more torture.  All I had to do was say that I 
could see five lights when in fact there were only four."

"You didn't say it."

Picard tries to reassure her.  "No.  No."  He becomes pensive again, however: 
"But I was going to.  I would have said anything.  But more than that, I 
believed that I _could see_ five lights..."

And the Enterprise sails out among the stars.

NEXT:  Four more weeks of reruns to let DS9 get going, and I go back to 
maintaining net.silence.  S'long for now...

Tim Lynch (Harvard-Westlake School, Science Dept.)
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