From: manley@optilink.UUCP (BIFF!!!!1)
Newsgroups: ca.politics
Subject: Re: Letter for Cramer
Date: 30 Sep 92 23:06:36 GMT
Organization: DSC/Optilink Access Products

Len - let me help you a little.  Allow me to make a few
      comments on the construction of your post.  This
      should help you to create better posts in the future.
      You can do a few simple things that will vastly improve
	  the quality of your postings.

      This one is better than those you have made in the past.
      I guess that's why I didn't BIFF you this time.

In article <8415.32644@stratus.SWDC.Stratus.COM> lpb@florida.swdc.stratus.com (Len Bucuvalas) writes:
>BTW Cramer....I am not (at least) your foll...perhaps my wife's
>but definitely not yours.

[spelling] Excuse me, but what is a foll?

>Cramer....if you weren't such a gay-bashing obsessive compulsive
>neurotic with deep seated fears of change
> ...you might actually be respected for your
>opinions. But I can't let you get away with it.

[sentence structure] You can't let him get away with not having 
                     his opinions respected?

>And the reason why is...you know nothing of any note concerning
>AIDS

[credibility] This from the man who told us AIDS was going 
              to wipe out humanity.

>      except what you have accepted as truth from the American
>Medical Establishment....and they aren't telling the whole
>truth. As a result, neither are you.

[looniness] Here's the conspiracy part.  Please let us all in on
            the concealed deadly secrets you have discovered. Please
            do so on sci.med.aids.

>When you come out and speak "monogamy" and other AIDspeak
>bullshit, you are lieing .. though perhaps not intentionally...to
>everyone...you are lieing to me, the net, your friends, your
>kids!

[more looniness] if "not intentionally" then why else?

[spelling] "lying" not "lieing".

>Wise the hell up Cramer. This petty war of yours is not going to
>get you anything....nothing, not at the grassroots level nor at
>the state government level.  You could be taking all this energy
>and actually making a mark...but instead you choose to grind
>your personal axe.....what a waste!

>I just cant let you do this anymore....and I dont even have the
>time...

It is too bad you had the time for this.

>        BUT for you cuz your so special, I am declaring NET WAR
>on everything you say that remotely concerns AIDS. 

[netiquette] If you must please do so on sci.med.aids. The people
             who reside there will keep you both honest.

>                                                    And Clayton
>old chap.....I wont stop until you do or they toss us BOTH off

[spelling] "wont" is a word dealing with habit.

>the Internet. 

[misstatement] But, but, but, Clayton is not on the Internet.

>               Personally, I dont give a rat's ass whether YOU
>ever learn or not.....but I feel it imperative to counter each
>lie about AIDS that you print on this forum.

Something tells me Clayton knows more about HIV/AIDS then you do.

>Of course I dont want you to misread this Email. I bear no

[misstatement] Excuse me, you posted your letter.  You did not email it.

>hatred to you...I'm actually beginning to like you in an
>adversarial sort of way.

I doubt Clayton cares "a rat's ass" what you think about him.

>                          I just think that your perceptions have
>been twisted around without your knowledge

[looniness] Ooooooh, more conspiracy stuff!  Who is twisting him?

>                                          ....so I figure a good
>strong net boot in the butt should wake you up bud.

Yes, and I'm sure you'll be able to do it. Just make sure it
isn't a jack boot!

>You claim you are an historian eh? Well, I certainly hope that
>you are up to this.....good luck Cramer. This should even be
>fun. 

Hoo, boy!

>     Of course most people dont like looking like
>assholes....unfortunately...<sigh>.....when I had rock bands

[sentence structure] What does "when I had rock bands" mean?  Do you
mean when you managed rock bands, or when you were a member of a rock
band, or something else?  Is it possibly a medical disorder? 

>back east I was PAYED to look like an asshole! ;^) As a direct

[spelling] An employee is "paid", rope is "payed out".

>result....I no longer care! :^) 

That's perfectly obvious.

BTW: cant, dont, and  wont are contractions.  As such, they require
     the use of an apostrophe, for example, can't, don't, won't.

Len:  Why don't you try proofreading what you write.  You should
      learn to self-edit your writings to remove the ever present
      conspiracy theories.  They make you look looney. Also, try 
      using a dictionary occasionally.  I won't even comment on
      your punctuation (as I have my own problems with that).

If you want, email me your posts first and I will proofread them
for you.  At no cost to you.  Really.

Your net-pal,

dave
manley@optilink.com

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