From: wachtel@canon.co.uk (Tom Wachtel)
Newsgroups: rec.arts.poems
Subject: Re: Renga [Check follow-ups before continuing!!!]
Date: 15 Dec 92 21:17:49 GMT
Reply-To: wachtel@canon.co.uk
Organization: Canon Research Centre Europe Ltd

=

moh2@quads.uchicago.edu (Kateri/Mary Anne) writes:

> >"The challenge of renga, is to come up with lines that are very subtly
> >linked to the previous verse, but not necessarily to earlier
> >verses.....it's best to look at the preceding verse and ask 'What does


this is not an episode, but just a repost of one we did here between 12
november 1991 and 2 nanuary 1992, in case anyone is interested. each
entry was included as received, none were rejected. occasionally i
tidied things up when there were parallel postings, just to maintain an
unbranching line. incidentally, there was never any need for rules or
checks.  things sorted themselves out just fine.

there are some familiar old names in here...


----- Begin Included Message -----


Tom:
                easy over, lay me slow
                my arms are aching
                go go go
Tom:
                easy under, lay me deep
                my eyes are burning
                weep weep weep
Wlod:
                easy over,  lay me now
                fortune cookies
                up and down
Rebecca:
                easy over, lay me quick
                here come feet
                click click click
Tom:
                easy, easy, lay me cool
                not like that
                fool fool fool
Rebecca:  
                lay me under, seal my fate
                oh yes please
                wait wait wait
Rebecca:  
                lay me easy, don't be flip
                lots of crisco
                slip slip slip 
Laurae: 
                lay me behind, be my treat
                fetish crave
                feet feet feet
Rebecca: 
                lay me easy, lay me secret
                tell not a soul 
                debt debt debt
Rebecca: 
                lay me yummy nibble my toe
                ooohhhhh yes yes
                no no no
Sara:
                tom ? tom? tommy?
                three times nice?
                has no bad parts!
                ha ha ha
Tom:
                love me tender
                love me pure
                often? always?
                sure sure sure...
Pietro:
                lay me nimble, lay me quick
                time is money
                trick trick trick
Pietro:
                love me lonely
                love me cruel
                break my heart
                before the yule
Wlod:
                easy over, lay me, lay
                once right now,
                then once again
Wlod:
                lay, display
                count, discount,
                now or later
                it's so confusing
Jeannie:
                love me from afar
                love me everyday
                safe sex it is
                with an eletronic lay
Chris :
                love from behind
                sideways
                anyway
                but not today
Endwar:
                easy owner, layaway
                buy now, then later
                pay, pay, pay
Tom:
                easy season, lie with me
                play me, pay me
                free free free
Doug:
                Lay me not.
                Don't you touch.
                Don't look so broken.
                ouT oUT OUT
Doug:
                Lay me often lay me well.
                Of course it doesn't mean
                I love you, but you ARE
                swell swell swell.
Doug:
                Lay me lay me lay me,
                lamely lamely lamely
                It's all the same to me.
Tom:
                lay me, flay me
                ride astride
                play me seek
                raw (haha) hide


----- End Included Message -----




-- 

Tom Wachtel (wachtel@canon.co.uk)