From: ph111-dz@violet.berkeley.edu (david mou)
Newsgroups: alt.manga
Subject: amg dojin part.b
Date: 28 Sep 92 03:34:09 GMT
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         Where was I....?

[Meanwhile, back in the party room.]

Keiichi:  No more... I can't drink anymore.

Sayoko:  Oh comon.  One more can't hurt.  Look, I'll drink with you.  
Cheers!

Sayoko - Heh heh, with the sisters gone and everyone else out cold, this 
could be my perfect chance.

[Sayoko pulls her blouse below her shoulder.]

Sayoko:  Keiichi, do you think I'm attractive?

[Everyone on the floor:  S U R E !]

Sayoko:  Hmm.... this is not a good place.

[Sayoko drags Keiichi out of the room.]

Sayoko:  Get out... beat it... let go of his legs.....  out of my way!!

[Silence falls upon the room.]

[The sisters crash into the party room.]

Belldandy:  Is Keiichi-san here?!

[Urd overturns a few faces on the floor.]

Urd:  Nope.

[Belldandy is ready to burst into tears.]

Belldandy:  Has anyone seen Keiichi-san?!

Tamiya:  ... the witch (furigana - Sayoko) took Morisato that way.  [Points 
to the door.]

[Belldandy - Oh spirits of the earth and the air, lend me your power and be 
the wind beneath my wings.]   (Sounds like a bad song?  This will be the 
first of many bad spells to follow.)

[Belldandy flys straight off to the pointed direction.]

Skuld:  I'll go build the Super Duper Keiichi Detector right now.

Urd:  Then I'll hop around the channels and see what I can find.

[Urd flys into the TV set, and Skuld splashes into a half full beer mug.]

[Silence falls upon the room once more.]

[Next panel, same scene.  The gang on the floor gives a unison "W O O O W".]

[Some times later, in the yard, Skuld is seen banging on a hacked up 
Gameboy.]

Skuld:  This can't be right!!  The reading still comes from Keiichi's 
bedroom.  I must adjust the parameters so my SDKD won't pick up his 
belongings!

Urd [within the Gameboy display]:  Have you checked in his room?

Skuld:  ...... no, that's stupid.

[Both of them turn facing the readers, looking suspecious.]

[Urd and Skuld run towards Keiichi's bedroom.  An exhausted looking 
Belldandy stands hesitantly outside.]

Belldandy:  I can sense Keiichi in distress inside, but I have a ominous 
feeling about entering.

Urd:  No point wishie-washing!!  Let's look into the last place first!

[View from within, Urd bangs down the bedroom door, shouting "He's here!", 
followed by an anxious Bell and a curious Skuld.]

[Turn page, half naked Sayoko is seen going down on Keiichi, her eyes 
bulging open from the surprise.  Keiichi, hands bound behind his back and 
gagged, is also bulging his eyes, more from pain than shock.]

[Full page.  The surprised goddesses can't keep their mouths closed.  Urd 
tries to cover Belldandy and Skuld's eyes.  Belldandy tries to cover Skuld's 
eyes and her mouth.  Skuld tries to cover Belldandy's and her own eyes.]

[Next page, untied Keiichi is being comforted by Belldandy, while the ever 
curious Skuld examines between Keiichi's legs (not shown explicitly).  At 
one corner Urd is roughing Sayoko up.  Urd:  You evil, selfish little slut!  
Sayoko:  And you aren't qualified to lecture me!]

Belldandy:  Keiichi-san.  It's not like you to take advantage of drunken 
girls.

Keiichi:  ME?!  Take advantage?!  Do you know what it's like to have almost 
gotten raped?

[Sayoko:  I almost got him off!   Urd:  You almost bit him off!   Skuld:  
What does it do?]

Belldandy [blushing a bit but still looks serious]:  Anyway, thank goodness 
you're allright.  Worse things could have happened.

Keiichi [smiling a bit]:  Don't worry.  My day can't get any worse than 
this.

Voice:  That's right, Morisato Keiichi!  Your day will only get better.

[Directly above Keiichi stands 5 mini-Marllers, forming the corners of a 
pentagram.]

Belldandy:  Everyone!  Get away!!

[Belldandy - Elements of nature, please respond to my call.  In the name of 
First Class Goddess Belldandy, I summons the spirits of air to drive the 
demon away.]

Marllers:  AHAhahaha.  This is child's play!

[Marllers wave off the air bondage.  And in doing so flings Belldandy to the 
wall, knocking her out.]

Urd, Skuld, Keiichi:  Belldandy!!

Sayoko: ... a goddess?

[Keiichi gets lifted off the floor.]

Keiichi:  Whoaa!

[Urd -  Lightning Summon!!;  Skuld throws a couple grenades at Marllers]

[Grenades fall dud, and no lightning comes.  Skuld:  What have you done to 
my babies?!  Urd:  Damn!!  Where's a natural disaster when you need one?!!]

Marllers:  This is too easy!  But since I have more pressing business right 
now, I'll take care of you bimbos later.  Ah hahahaha!!

[Keiichi gets swooped into Marller's ball of darkness.  Keiichi:  Not 
again!]

[Belldandy slowly awakes; her head resting on a pillow.  Urd and Skuld on 
either side of her, seemingly amidst a heated exchange.]

Urd:  But this could mean the end of the world, if not Keiichi!!

Skuld:  It would mean the end of the world if I help you become a First 
Class Goddess!!  The Yggdrasil System is already overloaded, just keeping 
the Universe in one piece, Hooking an abusive power drainer like you on 
would certainly crash it!!  [read vol.6!]

Urd:  You inexperienced, unruly little brat!  If you were to stay home and 
attend the System like I told you, none of this would be necessary!!

Skuld:  You pompous, shameless excuse for a goddess!  Remember what caused 
the System crash last time?  [Better re-read your vol.5 too!]

Belldandy:  We can't overload the system now, and we must save Keiichi and 
defeat Marller before it's too late.  There is no other way.

Urd, Skuld:  ......?  There is another way...?

Skuld:  ..... ?  !!  Big sister Belldandy, is your head alright?!  There 
must be another way!

Urd:   THAT'S IT!!  THERE IS NO OTHER WAY!!!

[Outside, in the court yard, Skuld is doing the final touch on her latest 
magical formation.  This one looks like a 3,4,5 triangle, with small circles 
in each corner, and spells surrounding the geometric figures.]

Skuld:  Are you two really really sure about this?  

[Urd stands in another corner, also facing outwards.  Urd - Spirits of the 
elements, hear my summons as I, Urd, the mighty Goddess of the Past, command 
thee to do my biddings.]

Skuld:  This might just be the end of the world, but certainly not 
Armageddon........

[Belldandy stands in one corner, facing outwards.  Belldandy - Oh spirits of 
the heaven and the earth, hear my plea as I, Belldandy, the Goddess of the 
Present, request your service.]

Skuld:  God will be really really really displeased when he hears about 
this.......

[Urd and Belldandy turns around and look at Skuld, awaiting her part.]

Skuld:  ..... sigh, I hate this part

[Skuld - Spirits of anything else my sisters forgot to mention, please bear 
with my spell because this pea-brain author can't come up with anything 
intelligent, as  I, Skuld, the Goddess of the Future and the cutest 
character in this story, would like to ask a favor from you.]

[The circles begin to glow, drowing the feet of the goddesses with light.  
Yard objects (stones, branches, pedals, and roof tiles) begin to gravitate 
toward the goddesses, forming flying rings around each.]

[Urd - From the shadow of moon to the depth of sea, ye elements give me the 
strength to preserve the virtuous and defeat the wretched.]

[Belldandy - From the beginning til time eternal, will the passing moments 
show me the heart to love and the courage to forgive.]

[Skuld - From the eagle that soars to the dolphins that dives, and 
everything hopping in between, share with me thy wisdoms for the final 
judgement.  (By the way this guy really can't write!)]

[The objects begin to spiral into twisting chains reaching for the sky.  
Then the chains merge to form a single triple helix continue to grow 
upwards.]

[Urd - The three who were one ....    Belldandy - ..... now must becomes one 
again.....   Skuld - .... as she is needed for the Judgement Day.  Not!!]

Urd, Belldandy, Skuld:  Three Deities' Ultimate Combination!!]  (i.e.  
sanshin saisyuu gattai)

[The goddesses are now completely blanketed by light.  At the tip of the 
tightening helix, a new figure emerges admist growing radiance.  A glimpse 
on her forehead shows the mark of infinity (that is, a sideway 8).  As light 
drains from the rest of this figure, we see (use your imaginations.  It's 
out of my jurisdiction now).]

[New goddess - Spirits of wind and the carrier of whispers, in the name of 
Urdar, the all powerful Goddess of Time, Fate, and Destiny, guide me to the 
crying lamb.]

[*whooosh*]

[Urdar materializes in front of the altar room, still inside the temple.  
Urdar turns her head to the readers, showing a what-else-did-I-expect-from-
this-cheap-dojinshi look.]

Urdar [knocks on the door]:  Marller, I know you're inside!  Surrender 
yourself peacefully, or there will be blood shed.

Marller [through the door]:  Whoever you are.  I don't know how you find me 
here, but you're too late.  The blood has been shed and the sacrifice is 
complete.  Not even God can stop me now.  Hahahaha

Urdar [view from within, breaks down the door]:  You wouldn't dare!!

Urdar:  OH MY GOD!!  [Her hands cover her face, yet she still peeps through 
her fingers.]

[Undressed Marller is seen sitting onto Keiichi, who'se naked body is 
kneeling on the floor supporting the upright Marller by holding on her 
exposed bosom and womanhood from behind.  Marller's eyes showing a bit more 
passion than usual, but affixed on her otherwise typical sardonic face; her 
hands form a small circle in preparation to attack the intruder.  Keiichi 
has the I'm-possessed-but-so-what look, not unlike the ones in Ch.39.  Some 
blood sheddings, of course, and the rest is up to the filthy minds of the 
artists to fill in.]

end part.b  (not much left in part.c, but I'm too exhausted to finish this 
tonight.)

 Notes for artists crazy enough to attempt this:  Urdar can look and dress 
like whatever your heart desires.  My feeble imagination tells me she's 
tall, appx. 6', with hair almostly equally long.  Her apparel is similar to 
the battle costume in Ch.36-39, but with a long cloth strap (as that would 
be needed in part.c :).  There may be too many [descriptions] in part.b, so 
feel free to strip down and fit.  Questions, comments, and suggestions go to 
ph111-dz@violet.berkeley.edu, and anything else goes to 
davmou@ocf.berkeley.edu.  Now  that I've done part.b, SHADDUP!!

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                           Dave no $@G>;`L!2h8&5f=j(J