Write a recruiter message to someone in tech on LinkedIn

Dear person xy, 
I hope this message finds you well. 
I am with company z and we're currently looking for a position p role. 
Given your extensive experience with technologies t1 and t2, I believe that you might be a good fit for the role. 
Would you be open to discussing the role in more detail?
I am looking forward to hearing from you,
All the best,
recruiter r