Writing prompt: My Spring Festival

Student essay:
The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival that people get togrther to celebrate the arrive of the new year.During those days,the families are usually happy and busy.
My Spring Festival was spent in my grandparent's home.On the first day of the New Year,I helped my parents put up paper cuts and made dumplings.We saw beautiful fireworks through the windows at night and watched the Spring Festival party together.We were so excited that we have chatted with each other for a long time.But the next day,I also got up early to visit relatives.
Though my Spring Festival is common,I am happy with it as well,because everyone is alive and talk with smile at the special festival.

Corrected essay:
The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival where people get together to celebrate the arrival of the new year. During those days, families are usually happy and busy.
My Spring Festival was spent in my grandparents' home. On the first day of the New Year, I helped my parents put up paper cuts and made dumplings. We saw beautiful fireworks through the windows at night and watched the Spring Festival party together. We were so excited that we chatted with each other for a long time. The next day, I also got up early to visit relatives.
Though my Spring Festival was common, I was happy with it as well, because everyone was alive and talked with smiles at the special festival.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival that people get togrther to celebrate the arrive of the new year.
correct_sentence: The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival where people get together to celebrate the arrival of the new year.
error: that
correction: where
error_type: Relative Word Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Relative Word Error: According to English grammar rules, the relative word 〈that〉 is used to refer to things, but here it needs to express the occasion where people gather during the festival; the relative word for place 『where』 should be used to connect the clause, so 〈that〉 is changed to 『where』 to correctly introduce the adverbial clause of place, conforming to grammatical rules.
error_sentence: The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival that people get togrther to celebrate the arrive of the new year.
correct_sentence: The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival where people get together to celebrate the arrival of the new year.
error: togrther
correction: together
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is understood that the intention here is to express 'together', thus 〈togrther〉 is a misspelling of 『together』; it needs to be changed from 〈togrther〉 to 『together』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival that people get togrther to celebrate the arrive of the new year.
correct_sentence: The Spring Festival is considered as a traditional festival where people get together to celebrate the arrival of the new year.
error: arrive
correction: arrival
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to the context, 〈arrive〉 is a verb form, whereas a noun is needed here as an object; it should be changed to the noun form 『arrival』, therefore 〈arrive〉 needs to be modified to 『arrival』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: During those days,the families are usually happy and busy.

correct_sentence: During those days, families are usually happy and busy.

error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the plural noun 〈families〉 cannot be modified by the article 〈the〉, so 〈the〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English grammar.
error_sentence: My Spring Festival was spent in my grandparent's home.
correct_sentence: My Spring Festival was spent in my grandparents' home.
error: grandparent's
correction: grandparents'
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt requirements, 'grandparents' is a plural noun and should use the plural possessive form; in the original text, 〈grandparent's〉 is a singular possessive, therefore 〈grandparent's〉 needs to be changed to the plural possessive 『grandparents'』 to conform to grammar and context.
error_sentence: We were so excited that we have chatted with each other for a long time.
correct_sentence: We were so excited that we chatted with each other for a long time.
error: have
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes a past event and should use the simple past tense, whereas the original sentence uses 〈have chatted〉 in the present perfect tense; therefore, 〈have chatted〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『chatted』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: But the next day,I also got up early to visit relatives.

correct_sentence: The next day, I also got up early to visit relatives.

error: But the
correction: The
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to the context, this sentence has no contrastive relationship, making the conjunction 〈But〉 redundant; therefore, 〈But the〉 needs to be changed to 『The』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: Though my Spring Festival is common,I am happy with it as well,because everyone is alive and talk with smile at the special festival.
correct_sentence: Though my Spring Festival was common, I was happy with it as well, because everyone was alive and talked with smiles at the special festival.
error: is
correction: was
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes a past event and should use the simple past tense, whereas the original sentence uses 〈is〉 in the simple present tense; therefore, 〈is〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『was』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: Though my Spring Festival is common,I am happy with it as well,because everyone is alive and talk with smile at the special festival.
correct_sentence: Though my Spring Festival was common, I was happy with it as well, because everyone was alive and talked with smiles at the special festival.
error: am
correction: was
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes a past event and should use the simple past tense, whereas the original sentence uses 〈am〉 in the simple present tense; therefore, 〈am〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『was』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: Though my Spring Festival is common,I am happy with it as well,because everyone is alive and talk with smile at the special festival.
correct_sentence: Though my Spring Festival was common, I was happy with it as well, because everyone was alive and talked with smiles at the special festival.
error: is
correction: was
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes a past event and should use the simple past tense, whereas the original sentence uses 〈is〉 in the simple present tense; therefore, 〈is〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『was』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: Though my Spring Festival is common,I am happy with it as well,because everyone is alive and talk with smile at the special festival.
correct_sentence: Though my Spring Festival was common, I was happy with it as well, because everyone was alive and talked with smiles at the special festival.
error: talk with smile
correction: talked with smiles
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes a past event and should use the simple past tense, whereas the original sentence uses 〈talk〉 in the simple present tense; therefore, 〈talk〉 needs to be changed to the simple past tense 『talked』 to fit the context; ② Noun Number Error: According to the context, 〈smile〉 in the original sentence should use the plural form 『smiles』 to express 'everyone talked with smiles', therefore 〈smile〉 should be changed to 『smiles』 to fit the context.