Writing prompt: Will E-book Be Necessary in the Future?

Student essay:
As we all know, with the development of science and technology ,E-books are more and more popular . At the same time,the production of traditional books are decreasing step by step.
Everying coin has two sides .E-books also have advantages and disandantages .First ,with the wide use of computes and celephones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere . so ,we can find it more convenient and frivolus .What's more ! It is more easy to carry out outside .Second, I think E-books are cheaper than traditional books. For example ,we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online besides , if you are tired to read the book now ,you can preserve it and you can read this place the next time .The last one but not the least one,E-books are more envirmental protection .we don't need to cut trees to make books which made of paper. It is known to all that disasters are hanppened frequently and the most important reason for the phenomenon is the decreasing of trees .so ,if we read E-books ,we can protect trees being destroyde .
E-books also have dis adevantages .Reading E-books for a long time can harm our eyes . And we can't make signs on the contents which we think it is important and useful . So that the books will not have more influence on me .
As far as I am concerned ,we can read some not so important books by computers and celephone .And we can look into the distance after the long time reading .In my mind it's necessary of the E-books existence .

Corrected essay:
As we all know, with the development of science and technology, E-books are more and more popular. At the same time, the production of traditional books is decreasing step by step.
Every coin has two sides. E-books also have advantages and disadvantages. First, with the wide use of computers and cellphones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere. So, we can find it more convenient and frivolous. What's more, it is easier to carry outside. Second, I think E-books are cheaper than traditional books. For example, we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online. Besides, if you are tired of reading the book now, you can preserve it and you can read from this place the next time. Last but not least, E-books are more environmentally friendly. We don't need to cut trees to make books which are made of paper. It is known to all that disasters happen frequently, and the most important reason for the phenomenon is the decrease in trees. So, if we read E-books, we can protect trees from being destroyed.
E-books also have disadvantages. Reading E-books for a long time can harm our eyes. And we can't make signs on the contents which we think are important and useful, so that the books will not have more influence on me.
As far as I am concerned, we can read some not so important books on computers and cellphones. And we can look into the distance after a long time reading. In my mind, it's necessary for E-books to exist.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: At the same time,the production of traditional books are decreasing step by step.

correct_sentence: At the same time, the production of traditional books is decreasing step by step.

error: are
correction: is
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈the production〉 is singular, while the original verb 〈are〉 is plural, so the verb 〈are〉 needs to be changed to the singular form 『is』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Everying coin has two sides .E-books also have advantages and disandantages .First ,with the wide use of computes and celephones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere .
correct_sentence: Every coin has two sides.
error: Everying
correction: Every
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'every,' thus 〈Everying〉 is a misspelling of 『Every』, and 〈Everying〉 needs to be changed to 『Every』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Everying coin has two sides .E-books also have advantages and disandantages .First ,with the wide use of computes and celephones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere .
correct_sentence: Every coin has two sides. E-books also have advantages and disadvantages.
error: .E
correction: . E
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.E-books〉, so 〈.E-books〉 needs to be changed to 『. E-books』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: Everying coin has two sides .E-books also have advantages and disandantages .First ,with the wide use of computes and celephones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere .
correct_sentence: E-books also have advantages and disadvantages. First, with the wide use of computers and cellphones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere.
error: disandantages .First
correction: disadvantages. First
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'disadvantages,' thus 〈disandantages〉 is a misspelling of 『disadvantages』, and 〈disandantages〉 needs to be changed to 『disadvantages』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.First〉, so 〈.First〉 needs to be changed to 『. First』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: Everying coin has two sides .E-books also have advantages and disandantages .First ,with the wide use of computes and celephones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere .
correct_sentence: First, with the wide use of computers and cellphones, we can see that people use them to read any books they want to read everywhere.
error: computes and celephones
correction: computers and cellphones
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'computers and cellphones,' thus 〈computes and celephones〉 is a misspelling of 『computers and cellphones』, and 〈computes and celephones〉 needs to be changed to 『computers and cellphones』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: so ,we can find it more convenient and frivolus .What's more !
correct_sentence: So, we can find it more convenient and frivolous.
error: so
correction: So
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈so〉 is at the beginning of the sentence and needs to be capitalized, so 〈so〉 needs to be changed to 『So』 to conform to conventions.
error_sentence: so ,we can find it more convenient and frivolus .What's more !
correct_sentence: So, we can find it more convenient and frivolous. What's more, it is easier to carry outside.
error: frivolus .What
correction: frivolous. What
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'frivolous,' thus 〈frivolus〉 is a misspelling of 『frivolous』, and 〈frivolus〉 needs to be changed to 『frivolous』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.What〉, so 〈.What〉 needs to be changed to 『. What』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: so ,we can find it more convenient and frivolus .What's more ! It is more easy to carry out outside .Second
correct_sentence: What's more, it is easier to carry outside.
error: ! It is more easy
correction: , it is easier
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when 〈What's more〉 starts a new sentence, a comma is needed to separate the following clause, so 〈What's more!〉 should be changed to 『What's more,』 to conform to writing conventions; ② Adjective Error: According to English grammar rules, the comparative form of the adjective in the original sentence is incorrect; 〈more easy〉 does not follow the comparative rule for single-syllable adjectives, so 〈more easy〉 needs to be changed to 『easier』 to correctly express the comparison.
error_sentence: It is more easy to carry out outside .Second
correct_sentence: What's more, it is easier to carry outside. Second, I think E-books are cheaper than traditional books.
error: out outside .Second
correction: outside. Second
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Redundancy: According to the context, 『carry outside』 directly expresses 'carry outside'; in the original sentence, 〈out〉 is a redundant component and needs to be deleted to make the sentence more concise and semantically clear; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.Second〉, so 〈.Second〉 needs to be changed to 『. Second』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: For example ,we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online besides , if you are tired to read the book now ,you can preserve it and you can read this place the next time .The
correct_sentence: For example, we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online. Besides, if you are tired of reading the book now, you can preserve it and you can read from this place the next time.
error: besides
correction: . Besides
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent main clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid a run-on sentence; in the original sentence, 〈we can download books〉 and 〈besides , if you are tired〉 are two main clauses, so 〈besides〉 needs to be changed to 『. Besides』 to conform to grammar.
error_sentence: For example ,we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online besides , if you are tired to read the book now ,you can preserve it and you can read this place the next time .The
correct_sentence: Besides, if you are tired of reading the book now, you can preserve it and you can read from this place the next time.
error: to read
correction: of reading
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the English expression for 'being tired of' is 'be tired of doing'; in the original sentence, the preposition 〈to〉 does not fit with the verb 〈read〉, so 〈to read〉 needs to be changed to 『of reading』 to conform to the expression.
error_sentence: For example ,we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online besides , if you are tired to read the book now ,you can preserve it and you can read this place the next time .The
correct_sentence: Besides, if you are tired of reading the book now, you can preserve it and you can read from this place the next time.
correction: from
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to the context, this means 'continue reading from this place'; the original phrase 〈read this place〉 is semantically incomplete, so the preposition 『from』 needs to be added to conform to the context.
error_sentence: For example ,we can download books from the Internet for free or we can read them directly online besides , if you are tired to read the book now ,you can preserve it and you can read this place the next time .The last one but not the least one,E-books are more envirmental protection .we
correct_sentence: Besides, if you are tired of reading the book now, you can preserve it and you can read from this place the next time. Last but not least, E-books are more environmentally friendly.
error: .The last one
correction: . Last
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to English expression habits, the fixed expression should be 『Last but not least』; the original phrase 〈The last one but not the least one〉 is redundant, so the redundant part needs to be deleted and changed to 『Last but not least』 to conform to the expression.
error_sentence: last one but not the least one,E-books are more envirmental protection .we
correct_sentence: Last but not least, E-books are more environmentally friendly.
error: the least one
correction: least
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy: According to English expression habits, the fixed expression should be 『Last but not least』; the original phrase 〈The last one but not the least one〉 is redundant, so the redundant part needs to be deleted and changed to 『Last but not least』 to conform to the expression.
error_sentence: last one but not the least one,E-books are more envirmental protection .we
correct_sentence: Last but not least, E-books are more environmentally friendly. We don't need to cut trees to make books which are made of paper.
error: envirmental protection .we
correction: environmentally friendly. We
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① PoS Confusion: According to the context, this means 'environmentally friendly'; the original noun phrase 〈envirmental protection〉 should be changed to the adjective phrase 『environmentally friendly』 to conform to the context; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.we〉, so 〈.we〉 needs to be changed to 『. We』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: don't need to cut trees to make books which made of paper.
correct_sentence: We don't need to cut trees to make books which are made of paper.
correction: are
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Voice Error: According to the context, this means 'made of paper,' and the passive voice should be used; the passive voice structure in the original sentence is incomplete, so 〈made〉 needs to be changed to 『was made』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: It is known to all that disasters are hanppened frequently and the most important reason for the phenomenon is the decreasing of trees .so
correct_sentence: It is known to all that disasters happen frequently, and the most important reason for the phenomenon is the decrease in trees.
error: are hanppened frequently
correction: happen frequently,
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Verb Voice Error: According to English grammar rules, 『happen』 is an intransitive verb and cannot be used in the passive voice, so 〈are hanppened〉 needs to be changed to 『happen』 to conform to voice; ② Punctuation Error: According to English expression habits, a comma is needed for inter-clause connection, so 〈frequently and〉 needs to be changed to 『frequently, and』 to correctly connect the two clauses.
error_sentence: It is known to all that disasters are hanppened frequently and the most important reason for the phenomenon is the decreasing of trees .so
correct_sentence: It is known to all that disasters happen frequently, and the most important reason for the phenomenon is the decrease in trees. So, if we read E-books, we can protect trees from being destroyed.

error: decreasing of trees .so
correction: decrease in trees. So
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to the context, this means 'decrease'; 〈decreasing〉 is a gerund and should be changed to the noun 『decrease』 to conform to the context; ② Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, 『decrease in』 is a fixed phrase, so 〈of〉 needs to be changed to 『in』 to conform to idiomatic expression; ③ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.so〉, so 〈.so〉 needs to be changed to 『. So』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: ,if we read E-books ,we can protect trees being destroyde .

correct_sentence: So, if we read E-books, we can protect trees from being destroyed.

error: being destroyde
correction: from being destroyed
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to the context, this means 'protect...from,' so 『from』 needs to be added to the original sentence to form the 'protect...from' structure to conform to the context; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'destroyed,' thus 〈destroyde〉 is a misspelling of 『destroyed』, and 〈destroyde〉 needs to be changed to 『destroyed』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: E-books also have dis adevantages .Reading E-books for a long time can harm our eyes .
correct_sentence: E-books also have disadvantages. Reading E-books for a long time can harm our eyes.
error: dis adevantages .Reading
correction: disadvantages. Reading
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'disadvantages,' thus 〈dis adevantages〉 is a misspelling of 『disadvantages』, and 〈dis adevantages〉 needs to be changed to 『disadvantages』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.Reading〉, so 〈.Reading〉 needs to be changed to 『. Reading』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: And we can't make signs on the contents which we think it is important and useful .
correct_sentence: And we can't make signs on the contents which we think are important and useful, so that the books will not have more influence on me.

error: it is
correction: are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈contents〉 is plural, while the original verb phrase 〈it is〉 is singular, so 〈it is〉 needs to be changed to 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: And we can't make signs on the contents which we think it is important and useful . So that the books will not have more influence on me .

correct_sentence: And we can't make signs on the contents which we think are important and useful, so that the books will not have more influence on me.

error: . So
correction: , so
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, in a compound sentence, the conjunction 〈So〉 needs to be preceded by a comma to separate the main clauses, so 〈. So〉 needs to be changed to 『, so』 to conform to grammar rules.
error_sentence: As far as I am concerned ,we can read some not so important books by computers and celephone .And
correct_sentence: As far as I am concerned, we can read some not so important books on computers and cellphones.
error: by
correction: on
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the preposition 『on』 indicates reading using a tool; the preposition 〈by〉 is incorrectly paired with the verb 〈read〉, so 〈by〉 needs to be changed to 『on』 to conform to expression habits.
error_sentence: As far as I am concerned ,we can read some not so important books by computers and celephone .And
correct_sentence: As far as I am concerned, we can read some not so important books on computers and cellphones. And we can look into the distance after a long time reading.
error: celephone .And
correction: cellphones. And
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express 'cellphones,' thus 〈celephone〉 is a misspelling of 『cellphones』, and 〈celephone〉 needs to be changed to 『cellphones』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.And〉, so 〈.And〉 needs to be changed to 『. And』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: we can look into the distance after the long time reading .In
correct_sentence: And we can look into the distance after a long time reading.
error: the
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the definite article 〈the〉 indicates specificity, but to express a general period of time, the indefinite article 『a』 should be used, so the original 〈the〉 needs to be changed to 『a』 to conform to grammar rules.
error_sentence: we can look into the distance after the long time reading .In
correct_sentence: And we can look into the distance after a long time reading. In my mind, it's necessary for E-books to exist.
error: .In
correction: . In
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word; the original sentence lacks a space in 〈.In〉, so 〈.In〉 needs to be changed to 『. In』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: my mind it's necessary of the E-books existence .
correct_sentence: In my mind, it's necessary for E-books to exist.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English expression habits, in a compound sentence, 〈In my mind〉 is an introductory phrase and needs to be separated from the main clause by a comma to make the sentence structure clear, so a comma 『,』 needs to be added after 〈In my mind〉 to conform to conventions.
error_sentence: my mind it's necessary of the E-books existence .
correct_sentence: In my mind, it's necessary for E-books to exist.
error: of the
correction: for
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the preposition 『for』 is used to express necessity, so 〈of〉 needs to be changed to 『for』 to accurately express the meaning.
error_sentence: my mind it's necessary of the E-books existence .
correct_sentence: In my mind, it's necessary for E-books to exist.
error: existence
correction: to exist
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the context, this means 'to exist,' and an infinitive phrase should be used; the form of 〈existence〉 in the original sentence is incorrect, so 〈existence〉 needs to be changed to 『to exist』 to express a purpose relationship, to conform to the meaning.