Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
In the future,high technigue will be filled with our life.In the school,computer will take the place of book of paper making.The student will accomplish schoolwork in the computer.Then the computer software will take the place of teacher that getting homework over for the student.In our life,the car will be on the way out.The trolleybus will replace to the car.The resident got out to take the trolleybus.We rely on the solar energy to generate electricity.The environment will be more and more good.people will be more and more well.

Corrected essay:
In the future, high technology will be filled with our lives. In the school, computers will take the place of paper books. The students will accomplish schoolwork on the computer. Then the computer software will take the place of teachers, reviewing homework for the students. In our life, the car will be on the way out. The trolleybus will replace the car. The residents will go out taking the trolleybus. We will rely on solar energy to generate electricity. The environment will be better and better. People will be better and better as well.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: In the future,high technigue will be filled with our life.
correct_sentence: In the future, high technology will be filled with our lives.
error: technigue
correction: technology
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that the intention here is to express “technology”, therefore 〈technigue〉 is a misspelling of 『technology』, and it needs to be changed from 〈technigue〉 to 『technology』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: In the future,high technigue will be filled with our life.
correct_sentence: In the future, high technology will be filled with our lives.
error: life
correction: lives
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: Judging from the context, this describes a plural concept and should be in the plural form, therefore the singular form 〈life〉 is changed to the plural form 『lives』 to match the number of the subject.
error_sentence: In the school,computer will take the place of book of paper making.
correct_sentence: In the school, computers will take the place of paper books.
error: computer
correction: computers
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, this place expresses a general concept, referring to a category, and should be in the plural form, therefore the singular form 〈computer〉 is changed to the plural form 『computers』 to match the sentence meaning.
error_sentence: In the school,computer will take the place of book of paper making.
correct_sentence: In the school, computers will take the place of paper books.
error: of book
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: Judging from the context, the intention here is to express “paper books”, 〈book of paper making〉 does not conform to English expression habits, is unclear in meaning, and easily causes ambiguity, so it should be changed to the compound noun 『paper books』.
error_sentence: In the school,computer will take the place of book of paper making.
correct_sentence: In the school, computers will take the place of paper books.
error: making
correction: books
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: Judging from the context, the intention here is to express “paper books”, 〈book of paper making〉 does not conform to English expression habits, is unclear in meaning, and easily causes ambiguity, so it should be changed to the compound noun 『paper books』.
error_sentence: The student will accomplish schoolwork in the computer.
correct_sentence: The students will accomplish schoolwork on the computer.
error: student
correction: students
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, the intention here is to generally refer to students, expressing a plural concept, and should be in the plural form, therefore the singular form 〈student〉 is changed to the plural form 『students』 to match the sentence meaning.
error_sentence: The student will accomplish schoolwork in the computer.
correct_sentence: The students will accomplish schoolwork on the computer.
error: in
correction: on
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: Judging from the context, the intention here is to express “students complete homework on the computer”, so the preposition 『on』 should be used instead of 〈in〉 to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: Then the computer software will take the place of teacher that getting homework over for the student.
correct_sentence: Then the computer software will take the place of teachers, reviewing homework for the students.
error: teacher that getting homework over
correction: teachers, reviewing homework
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, the intention here is to generally refer to teachers, expressing a plural concept, and should be in the plural form, therefore the singular form 〈teacher〉 is changed to the plural form 『teachers』 to match the sentence meaning; ② Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence 〈teacher that getting homework over〉 does not conform to English sentence structure norms and is unclear in meaning; judging from the context, it should be changed to 『teachers, reviewing homework』.
error_sentence: Then the computer software will take the place of teacher that getting homework over for the student.
correct_sentence: Then the computer software will take the place of teachers, reviewing homework for the students.
error: student
correction: students
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, the intention here is to generally refer to students, expressing a plural concept, and should be in the plural form, therefore the singular form 〈student〉 is changed to the plural form 『students』 to match the sentence meaning.
error_sentence: The trolleybus will replace to the car.
correct_sentence: The trolleybus will replace the car.
error: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: Judging from the context, the intention here is to express “replace the car”, 〈replace〉 is a transitive verb, and does not require a preposition when followed by an object, so the preposition 〈to〉 should be deleted to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: The resident got out to take the trolleybus.
correct_sentence: The residents will go out taking the trolleybus.
error: resident got out to take
correction: residents will go out taking
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, the intention here is to generally refer to residents, expressing a plural concept, and should be in the plural form, therefore the singular form 〈resident〉 is changed to the plural form 『residents』 to match the sentence meaning; ② Verb Tense Error: Judging from the context, this describes a future scene and should use the future tense, therefore 〈got〉 is changed to the future tense 『will go』 to match the narrative time background; ③ Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the intention here is to express a concomitant action, so the infinitive 〈to take〉 should be changed to the present participle 『taking』.
error_sentence: We rely on the solar energy to generate electricity.
correct_sentence: We will rely on solar energy to generate electricity.
correction: will
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: Judging from the context, this describes a future scene and should use the future tense, therefore the auxiliary verb 『will』 is added before 〈rely〉 to match the narrative time background.
error_sentence: We rely on the solar energy to generate electricity.
correct_sentence: We will rely on solar energy to generate electricity.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the uncountable noun 〈solar energy〉 does not require a definite article before it, therefore the definite article 〈the〉 is deleted to make the sentence more concise.
error_sentence: The environment will be more and more good.people will be more and more well.
correct_sentence: The environment will be better and better. People will be better and better as well.
error: more and more good.people
correction: better and better. People
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Adjective Error: Judging from the context, the intention here is to express “better and better”, so the comparative form of 〈good〉, which is 『better』, should be used, therefore 〈more and more good〉 is changed to 『better and better』; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized, therefore 〈people〉 needs to be changed to 『People』 to conform to the convention.
error_sentence: The environment will be more and more good.people will be more and more well.
correct_sentence: People will be better and better as well.
error: more and more
correction: better and better as
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Adjective Error: Judging from the context, the intention here is to express “better and better”, so the comparative form of 〈good〉, which is 『better』, should be used, therefore 〈more and more good〉 is changed to 『better and better as』.