Writing prompt: When I Have a Different Opinion

Student essay:
There are many argument in my class. Different people may have different opinion.
Sometime my poinion is different with major of my classmates. When I meet this
question I always continue my opinion. I want to do it in this way because there must have my own reason.
Once, we held a small party of classmates. We talked about how should we get to the park. Most of my classmates thought we should go there by taxi but I thought we should go there by subway. Because that day is Saterday. A number of people will go out to do something by car like shopping or go hiking. There must have heavy traffic, and we will spend too much time on the road. SO we should take subway. Finally, they chose to take subway.
When you think you are right, contine it !

Corrected essay:
There are many arguments in my class. Different people may have different opinions.
Sometimes my opinion is different from the majority of my classmates. When I meet this question, I always continue with my opinion. I want to do it in this way because there must be my own reason.
Once, we held a small party of classmates. We talked about how we should get to the park. Most of my classmates thought we should go there by taxi, but I thought we should go there by subway because that day was Saturday. A number of people would go out to do something by car, like shopping or going hiking. There must be heavy traffic, and we would spend too much time on the road. So we should take the subway. Finally, they chose to take the subway.
When you think you are right, continue with it!

Error analysis:
error_sentence: There are many argument in my class.
correct_sentence: There are many arguments in my class.
error: argument
correction: arguments
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English quantity expression rules, when 〈many〉 modifies a countable noun, it must be followed by the plural form. Therefore, the singular noun 〈argument〉 is changed to the plural form 『arguments』 to ensure the grammatical correctness of 『many arguments』.
error_sentence: Different people may have different opinion.

correct_sentence: Different people may have different opinions.

error: opinion
correction: opinions
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: When 〈different〉 modifies a countable noun and refers to a plural concept, the noun needs to be in the plural form. 〈opinion〉 is corrected to 『opinions』 so that 『different opinions』 maintains number agreement with the plural subject 〈people〉.
error_sentence: Sometime my poinion is different with major of my classmates.
correct_sentence: Sometimes my opinion is different from the majority of my classmates.
error: Sometime my poinion
correction: Sometimes my opinion
error_type: Adverb Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Adverb Error: According to the semantic distinction of adverbs, 〈Sometime〉 means 'an unspecified time', while here it needs to express the frequency 'sometimes'. Therefore, it is replaced with the correct frequency adverb 『Sometimes』; ② Spelling Error: The noun 〈poinion〉 does not conform to English spelling rules; based on pronunciation and etymology, it should be corrected to the standard spelling 『opinion』, meaning 'viewpoint'.
error_sentence: Sometime my poinion is different with major of my classmates.
correct_sentence: Sometimes my opinion is different from the majority of my classmates.
error: with major
correction: from the majority
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English fixed collocation rules, phrases expressing difference should use the 〈different from〉 structure. Therefore, the misused preposition 〈with〉 is corrected to 『from』 to ensure the grammatical accuracy of 『different from』; ② Noun Error: The adjective 〈major〉 in this context needs to be converted to a noun form. According to semantic requirements, it is changed to 『majority』 to accurately express the concept of 'most people'; ③ Determiner Error: When the noun 『majority』 refers to a specific group, it must be paired with the definite article 〈the〉. Therefore, the missing determiner is added to form the standard expression 『the majority』.
error_sentence: When I meet this
question I always continue my opinion.
correct_sentence: When I meet this question, I always continue with my opinion.
error: 
question
correction: question,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English subordinate clause punctuation rules, a comma must be used to separate the adverbial clause of time 〈When I meet this question〉 from the main clause, so 『question,』 is added to correctly separate the clauses, making the sentence structure clearer.
error_sentence: When I meet this
question I always continue my opinion.
correct_sentence: When I meet this question, I always continue with my opinion.
correction: with
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: When the verb 〈continue〉 is followed by a noun object, it needs to be paired with the preposition 〈with〉 to form a phrasal verb, so the missing 『with』 is added to form the correct structure 『continue with』, indicating adherence to a certain viewpoint.
error_sentence: I want to do it in this way because there must have my own reason.

correct_sentence: I want to do it in this way because there must be my own reason.

error: have
correction: be
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the fixed structure of existential sentences (there be pattern), 'must have' should be expressed using 〈there must be〉 instead of 〈there must have〉. Therefore, 〈have〉 is changed to 『be』 to form the correct 『there must be』 structure.
error_sentence: We talked about how should we get to the park.
correct_sentence: We talked about how we should get to the park.
error: should we
correction: we should
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Order Error: In indirect questions, English grammar requires the use of declarative word order rather than inverted word order. Therefore, the inverted structure 〈should we〉 is adjusted to the normal word order 『we should』, conforming to the grammatical norm of 『how we should get』.
error_sentence: Most of my classmates thought we should go there by taxi but I thought we should go there by subway.
correct_sentence: Most of my classmates thought we should go there by taxi, but I thought we should go there by subway because that day was Saturday.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: When the coordinating conjunction 〈but〉 connects two independent clauses, it must be preceded by a comma. According to compound sentence punctuation rules, 『taxi, 』 is added before 〈but〉 to ensure the accuracy of punctuation use.
error_sentence: but I thought we should go there by subway. Because that day is Saterday.
correct_sentence: Most of my classmates thought we should go there by taxi, but I thought we should go there by subway because that day was Saturday.
error: . Because
correction: because
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: An adverbial clause introduced by the subordinating conjunction 〈because〉 cannot stand as an independent sentence. According to English sentence structure rules, it needs to be merged with the main clause, and accordingly, the sentence-initial capitalized 〈Because〉 should be changed to lowercase 『because』; ② Case Error: The 〈Because〉 appearing in the sentence should not be capitalized when used as a subordinating conjunction. According to English capitalization rules, it is corrected to the lowercase form 『because』.
error_sentence: Because that day is Saterday.
correct_sentence: Most of my classmates thought we should go there by taxi, but I thought we should go there by subway because that day was Saturday.
error: is Saterday
correction: was Saturday
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: When describing past events, the copular verb needs to be in the past tense. Therefore, the present tense 〈is〉 is changed to the past tense 『was』 to maintain tense consistency; ② Spelling Error: 〈Saterday〉 does not conform to the correct spelling of the day of the week. According to English vocabulary norms, it is corrected to the standard spelling 『Saturday』, expressing the meaning 'Saturday'.
error_sentence: A number of people will go out to do something by car like shopping or go hiking.
correct_sentence: A number of people would go out to do something by car, like shopping or going hiking.
error: will
correction: would
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: When expressing future possibility in a past context, the past future tense is required. Therefore, the present future tense 〈will〉 is changed to the past future tense 『would』 to ensure accuracy in tense usage.
error_sentence: A number of people will go out to do something by car like shopping or go hiking.
correct_sentence: A number of people would go out to do something by car, like shopping or going hiking.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English punctuation rules for inserted phrases, an exemplary inserted phrase 〈like shopping...〉 must be preceded by a comma to separate it from the main clause. Therefore, 『car, 』 is added after the main clause to form a standard expression and make the sentence smoother.
error_sentence: A number of people will go out to do something by car like shopping or go hiking.
correct_sentence: A number of people would go out to do something by car, like shopping or going hiking.
error: go
correction: going
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The preposition 〈like〉 requires the gerund form when followed by a verb. The base form verb 〈go〉 is changed to 『going』 to form the correct 『like going...』 structure, indicating the specific content of the action.
error_sentence: There must have heavy traffic, and we will spend too much time on the road.
correct_sentence: There must be heavy traffic, and we would spend too much time on the road.
error: have
correction: be
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: The fixed collocation for an existential sentence is 〈there must be〉; the misused 〈have〉 is corrected to 『be』 to ensure the grammatical correctness of 『there must be』, meaning 'it must be'.
error_sentence: There must have heavy traffic, and we will spend too much time on the road.
correct_sentence: There must be heavy traffic, and we would spend too much time on the road.
error: will
correction: would
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: When describing future possibility within a past event, the past future tense is required. The present future tense 〈will〉 is changed to the subjunctive mood 『would』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: SO we should take subway.
correct_sentence: So we should take the subway.
error: SO
correction: So
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: The adverb 〈SO〉 should not be capitalized when it is not in an emphasized position within the sentence. According to English capitalization rules, it is changed to the lowercase form 『so』 to conform to sentence-initial capitalization norms.
error_sentence: SO we should take subway.
correct_sentence: So we should take the subway.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: The countable noun 〈subway〉 requires a definite article when referring to a specific mode of transport. 『the』 is added to form the standard expression 『the subway』 to specifically refer to the mode of transport.
error_sentence: Finally, they chose to take subway.

correct_sentence: Finally, they chose to take the subway.

correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: The countable noun 〈subway〉 requires a definite article when referring to a specific mode of transport. 『the』 is added to form the standard expression 『the subway』 to specifically refer to the mode of transport.
error_sentence: When you think you are right, contine it !
correct_sentence: When you think you are right, continue with it!
error: contine
correction: continue with
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: 〈contine〉 does not conform to the correct spelling of the verb 'to continue'. According to English vocabulary norms, it is corrected to 『continue』; ② Preposition Error: When the verb 〈continue〉 is followed by a pronoun object, it must be paired with the preposition 『with』. Therefore, the missing 『with』 is added to form the complete phrasal structure 『continue with it』 to make the sentence meaning complete.