Writing prompt: Film or Book, Which Do You Prefer?

Student essay:
Someone likes read the book of original ,someone likes see the movie instead of the book in the original.In my opinion,i l rather see a movie than read a book.
As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.Firstly, its waste time that we read a book in one day ,especially in the holiday.Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.
At the last ,it is important that to make a book adapt to a film. We can stay at home reading quietly a situation in my holiday.

Corrected essay:
Some people like to read the original book, while others like to see the movie instead of reading the original book. In my opinion, I would rather see a movie than read a book.
As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book. Firstly, it wastes time to read a book in one day, especially during the holidays. Secondly, seeing a movie is more interesting than reading a book. Although the original book contains lots of details, I think that language in movies can make the story more and more interesting.
Lastly, it is important to adapt a book into a film. I can stay at home and read quietly during my holiday.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Someone likes read the book of original ,someone likes see the movie instead of the book in the original.
correct_sentence: Some people like to read the original book, while others like to see the movie instead of reading the original book.
error: Someone likes
correction: Some people like to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'some people like', the original pronoun 〈Someone〉 is singular and does not fit the contrasting structure later in the sentence; it needs to be changed to the plural 『Some people』 to conform to grammar; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈likes〉 needs to be followed by an infinitive structure, therefore in the original sentence, 〈likes〉 needs to be modified to 『like to』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Someone likes read the book of original ,someone likes see the movie instead of the book in the original.
correct_sentence: Some people like to read the original book, while others like to see the movie instead of reading the original book.
error: book of original ,someone likes
correction: original book, while others like to
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Order Error: According to English expression habits, the meaning here is 'original work/book', the word order in the original phrase 〈book of original〉 is incorrect, so it needs to be changed to the noun phrase 『original book』 to conform to expression habits; ② Conjunction Error: According to English expression habits, a contrasting sentence needs to use 『while』 to connect two clauses, so 〈someone likes〉 is modified to 『while others like』 to conform to expression habits; ③ Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈likes〉 needs to be followed by an infinitive structure, therefore in the original sentence, 〈likes〉 needs to be modified to 『like to』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Someone likes read the book of original ,someone likes see the movie instead of the book in the original.
correct_sentence: Some people like to read the original book, while others like to see the movie instead of reading the original book.
error: the book in
correction: reading
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈instead of〉 should be followed by a gerund form, and the original phrase 〈the book in〉 does not fit the meaning of the sentence, so 〈the book in〉 needs to be changed to 『reading』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Someone likes read the book of original ,someone likes see the movie instead of the book in the original.
correct_sentence: Some people like to read the original book, while others like to see the movie instead of reading the original book.
correction: book
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Error: According to the context, the intention here is to express 'original work/book', the original phrase 〈the original〉 is missing a noun, so 『book』 needs to be added to make the meaning clearer.
error_sentence: In my opinion,i l rather see a movie than read a book.

correct_sentence: In my opinion, I would rather see a movie than read a book.

error: i l
correction: I would
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'I would rather see a movie', the original phrase 〈i l〉 causes redundancy, because 〈i〉 should be deleted to ensure correct grammar; ② Auxiliary Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'I would rather see a movie', the original sentence is missing a modal verb, so the modal verb 『would』 needs to be added to fit the meaning.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
error: read
correction: reading
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when a verb acts as the subject, the gerund form is needed, therefore in the original sentence, when the verb 〈read〉 acts as the subject, it needs to be in the gerund form 『reading』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
error: need
correction: needs
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, there is a subject-verb agreement error in the original sentence; the subject 〈reading a book〉 is singular, and the predicate 〈need〉 in the original sentence is in the plural form, therefore the verb 〈need〉 needs to be changed to the singular form 『needs』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
error: see
correction: seeing
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈than〉 needs to be followed by a gerund form, therefore in the original sentence, 〈see〉 needs to be changed to 『seeing』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
error: see
correction: seeing
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when a verb acts as the subject, the gerund form is needed, therefore in the original sentence, when the verb 〈see〉 acts as the subject in the object clause introduced by 〈think〉, it needs to be in the gerund form 『seeing』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
correction: is
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'seeing a movie is better than reading the original book', the original phrase 〈see a movie better than...〉 is missing the linking verb 『is』, causing an incomplete sentence structure, therefore 『is』 needs to be added to fit the meaning.
error_sentence: As we know ,read a book need more time than see a movie, so i think that see a movie better than read the original book.
correct_sentence: As we know, reading a book needs more time than seeing a movie, so I think that seeing a movie is better than reading the original book.
error: read
correction: reading
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈than〉 needs to be followed by a gerund form, therefore in the original sentence, 〈read〉 needs to be changed to 『reading』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Firstly, its waste time that we read a book in one day ,especially in the holiday.
correct_sentence: Firstly, it wastes time to read a book in one day, especially during the holidays.
error: its waste time that we
correction: it wastes time to
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'it wastes time to do...', 〈its〉 is a misuse of the possessive form and should be changed to the formal subject 『it』, therefore the original phrase 〈its waste time that we〉 needs to be modified to 『it wastes time to』 to conform to grammatical expression.
error_sentence: Firstly, its waste time that we read a book in one day ,especially in the holiday.
correct_sentence: Firstly, it wastes time to read a book in one day, especially during the holidays.
error: in the holiday
correction: during the holidays
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, 『during』 is used to indicate a period of time, the preposition 〈in〉 in the original sentence is incorrect, so 〈in〉 needs to be changed to 『during』 to fit the meaning and expression habits; ② Noun Number Error: According to the context, 〈holiday〉 in the original sentence should be in the plural form 『holidays』 to refer to holidays in general, to fit the context.
error_sentence: Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.

correct_sentence: Secondly, seeing a movie is more interesting than reading a book.
error: see
correction: seeing
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when a verb acts as the subject, the gerund form is needed, therefore in the original sentence, when the verb 〈see〉 acts as the subject, it needs to be in the gerund form 『seeing』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.

correct_sentence: Secondly, seeing a movie is more interesting than reading a book.
error: read
correction: reading
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈than〉 needs to be followed by a gerund form, therefore in the original sentence, 〈read〉 needs to be changed to 『reading』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.

correct_sentence: Secondly, seeing a movie is more interesting than reading a book. Although the original book contains lots of details, I think that language in movies can make the story more and more interesting.

error: although the book in
correction: . Although
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent clauses need to be separated by a period to avoid a run-on sentence; in the original sentence, 〈see a movie...〉 and 〈although the book...〉 are two main clauses, so 〈,〉 is changed to 『.』 to comply with grammar; ② Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'original work/book', the phrase 〈the book in〉 in the original sentence is a redundant component and should be deleted, therefore 〈although the book in〉 is modified to 『. Although』 to fit the meaning.
error_sentence: Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.

correct_sentence: Although the original book contains lots of details, I think that language in movies can make the story more and more interesting.

error: contain
correction: book contains
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'original work/book', the original phrase 〈the original〉 is missing a noun, leading to unclear meaning, so it needs to be modified to 『the original book』 to fit the meaning; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, there is a subject-verb agreement error in the original sentence; the subject 〈book〉 is singular, and the predicate 〈contain〉 in the original sentence is in the plural form, therefore the verb 〈contain〉 needs to be changed to the singular form 『contains』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.

correct_sentence: Although the original book contains lots of details, I think that language in movies can make the story more and more interesting.

error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 in English should always be capitalized as 『I』, therefore 〈i〉 is modified to 『I』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: Secondly,see a movie is more interesting than read a book although the book in the original contain lots of details, i think that language can give the original more and more interesting.

correct_sentence: Although the original book contains lots of details, I think that language in movies can make the story more and more interesting.

error: can give the original
correction: in movies can make the story
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'language in movies', the original sentence is missing a prepositional phrase, so 『in movies』 needs to be added to ensure semantic completeness; ② Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'make the story more and more interesting', the verb 〈give〉 in the original sentence means 'to give', which does not fit the sentence meaning, therefore 〈give the original〉 needs to be changed to 『make the story』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: At the last ,it is important that to make a book adapt to a film.
correct_sentence: Lastly, it is important to adapt a book into a film.
error: At the last
correction: Lastly
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English expression habits, the meaning here is 'lastly', the original phrase 〈At the last〉 cannot accurately express the meaning, so 〈At the last〉 needs to be modified to 『Lastly』 to concisely express the ending.
error_sentence: At the last ,it is important that to make a book adapt to a film.
correct_sentence: Lastly, it is important to adapt a book into a film.
error: that to make
correction: to adapt
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the context, the meaning here is 'it is important to do...', an infinitive phrase should be used, the form of the original phrase 〈that to make〉 is incorrect, so 〈that to make〉 needs to be changed to 『to adapt』 to express a purpose relationship and fit the meaning; ② Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'to adapt', the verb 〈make〉 in the original sentence means 'to make/produce', which does not fit the sentence meaning, therefore 〈make〉 needs to be changed to 『adapt』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: At the last ,it is important that to make a book adapt to a film.
correct_sentence: Lastly, it is important to adapt a book into a film.
error: adapt to
correction: into
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the meaning here is 'to adapt into', 『adapt...into』 is a fixed collocation, so 〈adapt to〉 needs to be modified to 『into』 to conform to usage.
error_sentence: We can stay at home reading quietly a situation in my holiday.
correct_sentence: I can stay at home and read quietly during my holiday.
error: We
correction: I
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'we', the pronoun 〈I〉 in the original sentence does not fit the meaning, so 〈I〉 is modified to 『We』 to maintain consistency with the subsequent subject and fit the context.
error_sentence: We can stay at home reading quietly a situation in my holiday.
correct_sentence: I can stay at home and read quietly during my holiday.
error: reading quietly a situation in
correction: and read quietly during
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence, 〈stay〉 and 〈reading〉 as parallel structures need to be connected by 『and』, therefore 〈reading quietly〉 needs to be modified to 『and read quietly』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, the intention here is to express 'during the holiday', the phrase 〈a situation〉 in the original sentence is a redundant component and needs to be deleted, therefore 〈a situation〉 needs to be modified to 『during』 to fit the meaning.