Writing prompt: An Email

Student essay:
Dear Vivian,
How are you? Long time no see. I'd liike to tell you something about my last holiday.
On my last holiday, I went to Thailand together with my parents. It was fantastic! Everything was so great, just like a dream! We flew there and stayed there for six days.It took us six hours to got to Thailand.
On the first day of the journey,we went swimming in the beautiful sea. To my surprise,finally I could swim in the sea. You know, I wasn't able to swim at all in the past.
And on the next three days, we visited a lot of places of interest. The scenery was so beautiful! We saw an elephant show in a theme park as well.
On the last two days, we went surfing in the sea and went down into the sea. I saw various kinds of fish. I was so excited because I can even touch the lovely fish! And I bought some souvenirs for my friengs as well.
Everything in Thailand was prefect! I had a great time there! I'm looking forward to going there again. And I hope we can go there together very soon.
Best wishes,
X.

Corrected essay:
Dear Vivian,
How are you? Long time no see. I'd like to tell you something about my last holiday.
On my last holiday, I went to Thailand together with my parents. It was fantastic! Everything was so great, just like a dream! We flew there and stayed there for six days. It took us six hours to get to Thailand.
On the first day of the journey, we went swimming in the beautiful sea. To my surprise, finally, I could swim in the sea. You know, I wasn't able to swim at all in the past.
And on the next three days, we visited a lot of places of interest. The scenery was so beautiful! We saw an elephant show in a theme park as well.
On the last two days, we went surfing in the sea and went down into the sea. I saw various kinds of fish. I was so excited because I can even touch the lovely fish! And I bought some souvenirs for my friends as well.
Everything in Thailand was perfect! I had a great time there! I'm looking forward to going there again. And I hope we can go there together very soon.
Best wishes,
X.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I'd liike to tell you something about my last holiday.

correct_sentence: I'd like to tell you something about my last holiday.

error: liike
correction: like
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to basic English spelling rules, the repeated letter 'i' in 〈liike〉 does not conform to standard spelling. Delete the extra letter, correct it to the verb infinitive 『like』, to maintain the correct form of the word, expressing the meaning 'to like'.
error_sentence: It took us six hours to got to Thailand.

correct_sentence: It took us six hours to get to Thailand.

error: got
correction: get
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The infinitive structure requires the use of the verb's base form. Change the past participle form 〈got〉 to the base form 『get』, forming the correct adverbial of purpose 『to get』, meaning 'to arrive'.
error_sentence: To my surprise,finally I could swim in the sea.
correct_sentence: To my surprise, finally, I could swim in the sea.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: As a sentence adverb, 〈finally〉 must be set off by commas. Add the missing 『,』 after the adverb, forming the standard parenthetical format 『finally, I』 to ensure clear sentence structure.
error_sentence: And I bought some souvenirs for my friengs as well.

correct_sentence: And I bought some souvenirs for my friends as well.

error: friengs
correction: friends
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: The letter order in 〈friengs〉 is incorrect. According to the standard plural form of 'friend', adjust the letter order to 『friends』 to conform to English standards.
error_sentence: Everything in Thailand was prefect!
correct_sentence: Everything in Thailand was perfect!
error: prefect
correction: perfect
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: 〈prefect〉 does not conform to the correct spelling of 'perfect'. According to pronunciation rules (per-fect), correct it to 『perfect』 to conform to English standards.