Writing prompt: How to Make Friends?

Student essay:
As is vividly seen from the picture , the boy gives 100 dollars for the girl to express the friendship ,saying this is low case.The boy consider that the money can buy the friendship. I consider the boy's action is wrong . I think the real friendship is princeless.
The benefits of friendship are bondless and sometimes invisible. A good friend is adviser . When we face problem ,the friend can give us some advice.We need a realiable friends to guide us and help us on our way. Because out own points of view towads things may not be always right .Therefore,it is necessary for us to seek advice from friends.As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.
We need real friends ,we should make friends to hlep us and give us some advice.

Corrected essay:
As is vividly seen from the picture, the boy gives 100 dollars to the girl to express friendship, saying this is a low case. The boy considers that money can buy friendship. I consider the boy's action wrong. I think real friendship is priceless.
The benefits of friendship are boundless and sometimes invisible. A good friend is an adviser. When we face problems, the friend can give us some advice. We need reliable friends to guide us and help us on our way. Because our own points of view towards things may not always be right. Therefore, it is necessary for us to seek advice from friends. At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.
We need real friends, and we should make friends to help us and give us some advice.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: As is vividly seen from the picture , the boy gives 100 dollars for the girl to express the friendship ,saying this is low case.
correct_sentence: As is vividly seen from the picture, the boy gives 100 dollars to the girl to express friendship, saying this is a low case.
error: for
correction: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the preposition 〈for〉 is used to indicate purpose or reason; when the verb 〈gives〉 is followed by a recipient, the preposition 『to』 should be used, so 〈for〉 needs to be changed to 『to』 to conform to grammatical rules.
error_sentence: As is vividly seen from the picture , the boy gives 100 dollars for the girl to express the friendship ,saying this is low case.
correct_sentence: As is vividly seen from the picture, the boy gives 100 dollars to the girl to express friendship, saying this is a low case.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the determiner 〈the〉 indicates specificity; in the original sentence, the abstract noun 〈friendship〉 here represents a general concept and does not require the definite article 〈the〉, so 〈the〉 is deleted to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: As is vividly seen from the picture , the boy gives 100 dollars for the girl to express the friendship ,saying this is low case.
correct_sentence: As is vividly seen from the picture, the boy gives 100 dollars to the girl to express friendship, saying this is a low case.
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, a singular countable noun must be preceded by an article; the original sentence is missing the necessary determiner 『a』 before 〈case〉, therefore, the sentence is modified to 『a low case』 to conform to English grammar rules.
error_sentence: The boy consider that the money can buy the friendship.
correct_sentence: The boy considers that money can buy friendship.
error: consider that the
correction: considers that
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈The boy〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate 〈consider〉 is in the third-person plural form, so the verb 〈consider〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『considers』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the determiner 〈the〉 indicates specificity; in the original sentence, the abstract noun 〈money〉 here represents a general concept and does not require the definite article 〈the〉, so 〈the〉 is deleted to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: The boy consider that the money can buy the friendship.
correct_sentence: The boy considers that money can buy friendship.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the determiner 〈the〉 indicates specificity; in the original sentence, the abstract noun 〈friendship〉 here represents a general concept and does not require the definite article 〈the〉, so 〈the〉 is deleted to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: I consider the boy's action is wrong .
correct_sentence: I consider the boy's action wrong.
error: is
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar rules, when the verb 〈consider〉 is followed by an object complement, the structure “consider + object + adjective” should be used, and the linking verb 〈is〉 is not needed; therefore, the redundant 〈is〉 in the original sentence needs to be deleted, and it should be modified to 『I consider the boy's action wrong』 to conform to grammatical rules.
error_sentence: I think the real friendship is princeless.

correct_sentence: I think real friendship is priceless.

error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the determiner 〈the〉 indicates specificity; in the original sentence, the abstract noun 〈friendship〉 here represents a general concept and does not require the definite article 〈the〉, so 〈the〉 is deleted to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: I think the real friendship is princeless.

correct_sentence: I think real friendship is priceless.

error: princeless
correction: priceless
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “priceless”; therefore, 〈princeless〉 is a misspelling of 『priceless』, and 〈princeless〉 needs to be changed to 『priceless』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: The benefits of friendship are bondless and sometimes invisible.
correct_sentence: The benefits of friendship are boundless and sometimes invisible.
error: bondless
correction: boundless
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “boundless”; therefore, 〈bondless〉 is a misspelling of 『boundless』, and 〈bondless〉 needs to be changed to 『boundless』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: A good friend is adviser .
correct_sentence: A good friend is an adviser.
correction: an
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, a generic singular countable noun 〈adviser〉 needs to be preceded by the indefinite article 『an』; therefore, 『an』 needs to be added to the original sentence to conform to expression habits.
error_sentence: When we face problem ,the friend can give us some advice.
correct_sentence: When we face problems, the friend can give us some advice.
error: problem
correction: problems
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to the context, 〈problem〉 in the original sentence should be in the plural form 『problems』 to indicate a general situation; therefore, 〈problem〉 should be changed to 『problems』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: We need a realiable friends to guide us and help us on our way.
correct_sentence: We need reliable friends to guide us and help us on our way.
error: a realiable
correction: reliable
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the plural noun 〈friends〉 cannot be modified by the article 〈a〉; therefore, 〈a〉 needs to be deleted to conform to English grammar; ② Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “reliable”; therefore, 〈realiable〉 is a misspelling of 『reliable』, and 〈realiable〉 needs to be changed to 『reliable』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Because out own points of view towads things may not be always right
correct_sentence: Because our own points of view towards things may not always be right.
error: out
correction: our
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “our”; therefore, 〈out〉 is a misspelling of 『our』, and 〈out〉 needs to be changed to 『our』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Because out own points of view towads things may not be always right
correct_sentence: Because our own points of view towards things may not always be right.
error: towads
correction: towards
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “towards”; therefore, 〈towads〉 is a misspelling of 『towards』, and 〈towads〉 needs to be changed to 『towards』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Because out own points of view towads things may not be always right .Therefore
correct_sentence: Because our own points of view towards things may not always be right. Therefore, it is necessary for us to seek advice from friends.
error: be always right .Therefore
correction: always be right. Therefore
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Word Order Error: According to English grammar rules, the frequency adverb 〈always〉 should be placed after the auxiliary verb 〈be〉; therefore, the original 〈be always〉 needs to be changed to 『always be』 to conform to grammar; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there is no space between the last word of a sentence and the period; in the original sentence, there is a space in 〈right .〉, so 〈right .〉 needs to be changed to 『right.』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.

correct_sentence: At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.

error: As
correction: At
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, 『At the same time』 is a fixed phrase meaning “simultaneously”; therefore, the original phrase 〈As the same time〉 needs to be changed to 『At the same time』 to conform to expression habits.
error_sentence: As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.

correct_sentence: At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English expression habits, the original phrase 〈As the same time〉, as an independent element, needs to be separated from the main clause by a comma; therefore, 〈As the same time〉 is modified to 『At the same time,』 to conform to English punctuation usage rules.
error_sentence: As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.

correct_sentence: At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.

error: to make
correction: making
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈avoid〉 needs to be followed by a gerund form as its object, while 〈to make〉 in the original sentence is an infinitive; therefore, 〈to make〉 needs to be changed to 『making』 to conform to grammatical rules.
error_sentence: As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.

correct_sentence: At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.

error: bacause
correction: because
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “because”; therefore, 〈bacause〉 is a misspelling of 『because』, and 〈bacause〉 needs to be changed to 『because』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.

correct_sentence: At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.

correction: us
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, the intention here is to express “teach us”; the verb 〈teach〉 needs an object to refer to the recipient. Adding 『us』 clarifies the object of the action; therefore, 〈teach some bad things〉 is modified to 『teach us some bad things』 to show to whom it relates and fit the context.
error_sentence: As the same time we should avoid to make bad friends,bacause they always do harm to us and teach some bad things for us.

correct_sentence: At the same time, we should avoid making bad friends, because they always do harm to us and teach us some bad things.

error: for us
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, 『teach us some bad things』 directly expresses “teach us some bad things”; in the original sentence, 〈for us〉 is a redundant component and therefore needs to be deleted to make the sentence more concise and semantically clear.
error_sentence: We need real friends ,we should make friends to hlep us and give us some advice.
correct_sentence: We need real friends, and we should make friends to help us and give us some advice.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence, 〈We need...〉 and 〈we should...〉 have complete subject-verb structures and function as parallel structures; therefore, 『and』 needs to be added to connect them to conform to English grammar rules.
error_sentence: We need real friends ,we should make friends to hlep us and give us some advice.
correct_sentence: We need real friends, and we should make friends to help us and give us some advice.
error: hlep
correction: help
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intended expression here is “help”; therefore, 〈hlep〉 is a misspelling of 『help』, and 〈hlep〉 needs to be changed to 『help』 to make the sentence coherent.