Writing prompt: What Is a Good Teacher?

Student essay:
To be a good teacher,you should rich in knowledge to teach student clear and organised.If you want
to give students a good impression,you must be kind and patient with them.Most students like an
active class,so that teacher should be amusing and interesting.You should take care about the students
in case they have any situation or problem.
But,a good teacher also must pay attention to something about tesching.You can't tend to be angry
when students make mistakes,you should answer questions until everyone understands.Test is very
improtant,but you must'n give students too much pressure with it.

Corrected essay:
To be a good teacher, you should be rich in knowledge to teach students clearly and in an organized way. If you want
to give students a good impression, you must be kind and patient with them. Most students like an
active class, so the teacher should be amusing and interesting. You should take care of the students
in case they have any situation or problem.
But, a good teacher must also pay attention to something about teaching. You can't tend to be angry
when students make mistakes. You should answer questions until everyone understands. Tests are very important, but you mustn't give students too much pressure with them.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: To be a good teacher,you should rich in knowledge to teach student clear and organised.
correct_sentence: To be a good teacher, you should be rich in knowledge to teach students clearly and in an organized way.
correction: be
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The adjective 〈rich〉 requires a be-verb to form a predicative structure; the modal verb 〈should〉 must be followed by the base form of a verb, so 『be』 is added after 〈should〉 to complete the sentence structure.
error_sentence: To be a good teacher,you should rich in knowledge to teach student clear and organised.
correct_sentence: To be a good teacher, you should be rich in knowledge to teach students clearly and in an organized way.
error: student clear and organised
correction: students clearly and in an organized way
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence is logically confused and semantically unclear; considering the context, it intends to express 'To be a good teacher, you should be rich in knowledge to teach students clearly and in an organized way', therefore 〈student clear and organised〉 is changed to 『students clearly and in an organized way』 to make the meaning coherent and conform to grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Most students like an
active class,so that teacher should be amusing and interesting.
correct_sentence: Most students like an
active class, so the teacher should be amusing and interesting.
error: that
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: A determiner should be used here to specifically refer to 'the teacher of the class', so 〈that〉 is changed to 『the』 to clarify the referent.
error_sentence: You should take care about the students
in case they have any situation or problem.

correct_sentence: You should take care of the students
in case they have any situation or problem.

error: about
correction: of
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: The correct fixed phrase is 『take care of』, so 〈about〉 is changed to 『of』 to conform to the collocation rule.
error_sentence: But,a good teacher also must pay attention to something about tesching.
correct_sentence: But, a good teacher must also pay attention to something about teaching.
error: also must
correction: must also
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Order Error: The adverb 〈also〉 should be placed after the modal verb 〈must〉, so 〈also must〉 is changed to 『must also』 to conform to grammatical rules.
error_sentence: But,a good teacher also must pay attention to something about tesching.
correct_sentence: But, a good teacher must also pay attention to something about teaching.
error: tesching
correction: teaching
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'teaching', so 〈tesching〉 is a misspelling of 『teaching』; 〈tesching〉 needs to be changed to 『teaching』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: You can't tend to be angry
when students make mistakes,you should answer questions until everyone understands.
correct_sentence: You can't tend to be angry
when students make mistakes. You should answer questions until everyone understands.
error: ,you
correction: . You
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: 〈You can't tend to be angry when students make mistakes〉 and 〈you should answer questions until everyone understands〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and can be independent sentences, so 〈,〉 is changed to 『.』 and 〈you〉 is changed to 『You』.; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between the end punctuation and the first word of the next sentence, so 〈,you〉 is changed to 『. You』 to conform to the convention.
error_sentence: Test is very
improtant,but you must'n give students too much pressure with it.
correct_sentence: Tests are very important, but you mustn't give students too much pressure with them.
error: Test is very
improtant
correction: Tests are very important
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: The plural form 『Tests』 should be used here to refer to exams in general, so 〈Test is〉 is changed to 『Tests are』 to conform to grammatical rules.; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'important', so 〈improtant〉 is a misspelling of 『important』; 〈improtant〉 needs to be changed to 『important』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: Test is very
improtant,but you must'n give students too much pressure with it.
correct_sentence: Tests are very important, but you mustn't give students too much pressure with them.
error: must'n
correction: mustn't
error_type: Contraction Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Contraction Error: The negative contraction form is incorrect; the correct form is 『mustn't』, so 〈must'n〉 is changed to 『mustn't』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: Test is very
improtant,but you must'n give students too much pressure with it.
correct_sentence: Tests are very important, but you mustn't give students too much pressure with them.
error: it
correction: them
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: A plural pronoun should be used here to refer to the preceding plural noun 『Tests』, so 〈it〉 is changed to 『them』 to conform to grammatical rules.