Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
I often think what my life in the future is like. I think my life will be wonderful.
I will have a happy family, making me laugher. All my families will love me very much. So, I will be a fortunate person.
Ten years from now, I'll have a costly job that I want. Being an English teacher is my dream, because teachers are of importance. I'll get on well with my students. So they will like asking me some questions for English programs. I'll give right solutions to their problems in no time. What's more, with my patience, they will get good grades. With my dream to come true, I will become very pleased every day.
I hope my future will be as good as I think.

Corrected essay:
I often think about what my life in the future will be like. I think my life will be wonderful.
I will have a happy family, making me laugh. All my family members will love me very much. So, I will be a fortunate person.
Ten years from now, I'll have a job that I want. Being an English teacher is my dream, because teachers are of importance. I'll get on well with my students. So they will like asking me questions about English programs. I'll give the right solutions to their problems in no time. What's more, with my patience, they will get good grades. With my dream coming true, I will become very pleased every day.
I hope my future will be as good as I think.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I often think what my life in the future is like.
correct_sentence: I often think about what my life in the future will be like.
correction: about
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English usage, when the verb 〈think〉 is followed by an object clause, it is often paired with the preposition 〈about〉 to form the structure “think about sth.” The original sentence lacks 〈about〉; 『about』 should be added to make the sentence grammatically correct.
error_sentence: I often think what my life in the future is like.
correct_sentence: I often think about what my life in the future will be like.
error: is
correction: will be
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence describes a future state of life, so the predicate verb of the clause should be in the future tense. In the original sentence, 〈is〉 is in the simple present tense, which does not fit the context; it should be changed to 『will be』 to maintain tense consistency.
error_sentence: I will have a happy family, making me laugher.
correct_sentence: I will have a happy family, making me laugh.
error: laugher
correction: laugh
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, “make sb. do sth.” is a fixed structure, and a verb in its base form is needed here as an object complement. 〈laugher〉 is a noun, which does not meet the grammatical requirement; it should be changed to the verb 『laugh』.
error_sentence: All my families will love me very much.
correct_sentence: All my family members will love me very much.
error: families
correction: family members
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention here is to express “family members.” 〈families〉 indicates multiple families, so “family member” should be used, and “family” should be in its singular form to make the meaning clear.
error_sentence: Ten years from now, I'll have a costly job that I want.
correct_sentence: Ten years from now, I'll have a job that I want.
error: costly
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, 〈costly〉 means “expensive,” which does not align with the intended meaning of an ideal job in this context. When describing “job that I want (the job I want),” 〈costly〉 is redundant; deleting this adjective allows “job that I want” to more accurately express the meaning of an ideal profession, conforming to English usage.
error_sentence: So they will like asking me some questions for English programs.
correct_sentence: So they will like asking me questions about English programs.
error: some questions for
correction: questions about
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to English usage, in the structure “ask questions about sth.,” “questions” itself can express a general reference; 〈some〉 in the original sentence is semantically repetitive here. Deleting it makes the expression more concise and natural without affecting the sentence's meaning; ② Preposition Error: According to English usage, “ask questions about sth.” should be used to express “asking questions about...”; 〈for〉 in the original sentence is used incorrectly and should be changed to 〈about〉.
error_sentence: I'll give right solutions to their problems in no time.
correct_sentence: I'll give the right solutions to their problems in no time.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when specifically referring to “the correct solutions,” the definite article 〈the〉 is needed for modification. The original sentence lacks 〈the〉; 『the』 should be added to make the sentence grammatically correct.
error_sentence: With my dream to come true, I will become very pleased every day.

correct_sentence: With my dream coming true, I will become very pleased every day.

error: to come
correction: coming
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈with〉 is often followed by a gerund form to constitute an absolute nominative structure serving as an adverbial of accompaniment. The form 〈to come〉 in the original sentence is incorrect and should be changed to the gerund form 『coming』 to comply with nonfinite verb usage.