Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
I live in China.To the northwest of my hometown.There is a beautiful and developed country---Switzerland.It is situated in the middle part of the Europe.It is a big country with a population of 7500000 people and a area of 41000 square kilometers.I have ever visited its capital Beme and famous city Geneva.Both of their scenery are very beautiful.I think that this country is more attractive than its neighbor countrys---Austria,France,Italy and Germany.It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland"the garden of the world".But I don't think so.I think it is the heaven of the world.Before I left Switzerland.I bought many watches and food there as gifts to my friends.Because the watch and food industry of Switzerland is as famous as its chemical industry.Through my description,do you want to visit this country.If you ant,don't wait,just go.

Corrected essay:
I live in China. To the northwest of my hometown, there is a beautiful and developed country—Switzerland. It is situated in the middle part of Europe. It is a big country with a population of 7,500,000 and an area of 41,000 square kilometers. I have ever visited its capital Bern and the famous city Geneva. The scene in both cities is very beautiful. I think that this country is more attractive than its neighboring countries—Austria, France, Italy and Germany. It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland "the garden of the world". But I don't think so. I think it is the heaven of the world. Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry. Through my description, do you want to visit this country? If you want, don't wait and just go.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: To the northwest of my hometown. There is a beautiful and developed country---Switzerland.
correct_sentence: To the northwest of my hometown, there is a beautiful and developed country—Switzerland.
error: .There
correction: , there
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent clauses are incorrectly separated by a period; 〈.There〉 should be changed to 『, there』, using a comma to connect the adverbial and the main clause; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, a lowercase letter should follow a comma; therefore, 〈There〉 is corrected to 『there』 to maintain sentence coherence.
error_sentence: There is a beautiful and developed country---Switzerland.
correct_sentence: To the northwest of my hometown, there is a beautiful and developed country—Switzerland.
error: ---
correction: —
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English punctuation usage conventions, 〈---〉 should be changed to a standard em dash 『—』, used to connect an appositive, making it conform to formal writing requirements.
error_sentence: It is situated in the middle part of the Europe.
correct_sentence: It is situated in the middle part of Europe.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, articles are not used before continent names (such as 〈Europe〉); therefore, the redundant 『the』 is deleted, changing it to 『Europe』 to conform to idiomatic expression.
error_sentence: It is a big country with a population of 7500000 people and a area of 41000 square kilometers.
correct_sentence: It is a big country with a population of 7,500,000 and an area of 41,000 square kilometers.
error: 7500000 people and a
correction: 7,500,000 and an
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English number writing conventions, 〈7500000〉 should be changed to 『7,500,000』, adding a thousand separator to improve readability; ② Word Redundancy Error: According to the sentence meaning, 『people』 in 〈a population of 7,500,000 people〉 is redundant and should be deleted, as 〈population〉 already implies "people"; changed to 『a population of 7,500,000』; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, the article 『an』 should be used before a word starting with a vowel sound like 〈area〉, not 『a』; therefore, it is corrected to 『an area』 to ensure phonetic coordination.
error_sentence: It is a big country with a population of 7500000 people and a area of 41000 square kilometers.
correct_sentence: It is a big country with a population of 7,500,000 and an area of 41,000 square kilometers.
error: 41000
correction: 41,000
error_type: Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Number Error: According to English number writing conventions, 〈41000〉 should be changed to 『41,000』, adding a thousand separator to conform to standard format.
error_sentence: I have ever visited its capital Beme and famous city Geneva.
correct_sentence: I have ever visited its capital Bern and the famous city Geneva.
error: Beme and
correction: Bern and the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English place name conventions, the correct spelling for the capital of Switzerland is 『Bern』, not the incorrect 〈Beme〉; it needs correction to conform to the internationally accepted name; ② Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when specifically referring to a famous city, the definite article 『the』 should be added before 〈famous city〉, changing it to 『the famous city』 for clear reference.
error_sentence: Both of their scenery are very beautiful.
correct_sentence: The scene in both cities is very beautiful.
error: Both of their scenery are
correction: The scene in both cities is
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Order Error: According to English expression habits, the original sentence 〈Both of their scenery are very beautiful〉 has a loose structure and should be reorganized as 『The scene in both cities is very beautiful』, placing the adverbial of place at the beginning and clarifying the subject; ② Noun Error: 〈scenery〉 is an uncountable noun, usually referring to a wide range of natural landscapes; according to the sentence meaning, it refers to specific urban landscapes here, for which the countable noun 『scene』 is more appropriate, so it is changed to 『scene』 for accurate expression; ③ Pronoun Error: The reference of 〈their〉 is unclear and might mistakenly refer to "their (possessive)"; according to the context, it needs to be clarified as 『in both cities』, directly associating with "the two cities" to avoid ambiguity; ④ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 『scene』 is singular, requiring the plural verb 〈are〉 to be changed to the singular 『is』, corrected to 『The scene... is...』 to comply with the subject-verb agreement principle.
error_sentence: I think that this country is more attractive than its neighbor countrys---Austria,France,Italy and Germany.
correct_sentence: I think that this country is more attractive than its neighboring countries—Austria, France, Italy and Germany.
error: neighbor countrys---
correction: neighboring countries—
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① PoS Confusion Error: According to the syntactic structure, 〈neighbor〉 is a noun, whereas an adjectival form 『neighboring』 is needed here to modify the noun; therefore, it is corrected to 『neighboring』 to ensure grammatical correctness; ② Spelling Error: According to English noun pluralization rules, 〈countrys〉 is misspelled and should be changed to 『countries』, conforming to the "consonant + y" changes to "-ies" pattern.
error_sentence: It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland"the garden of the world".
correct_sentence: It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland "the garden of the world".
error: Switzerland"the
correction: Switzerland "the
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Space Error: According to English punctuation conventions, a space should be kept before quotation marks; the incorrect 〈Switzerland"the〉 is changed to 『Switzerland "the』, making the layout conform to standard format.
error_sentence: It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland"the garden of the world".
correct_sentence: It is said that people all over the world call Switzerland "the garden of the world".
error: world"
correction: world"
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to American English punctuation rules, the period at the end of a sentence should be placed inside the quotation marks; therefore, it is corrected to 『."』 instead of 『".』 to ensure standard punctuation usage.
error_sentence: Before I left Switzerland.
correct_sentence: Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry.
error: .
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the adverbial clause 〈Before I left Switzerland〉 should be connected to the main clause with a comma; therefore, the period in 〈Before I left Switzerland.〉 is changed to a comma, resulting in 『Before I left Switzerland,』, to make the sentence structure complete.
error_sentence: I bought many watches and food there as gifts to my friends.
correct_sentence: Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry.
error: to
correction: for
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English idiomatic expression, when indicating the recipient of gifts, 『gifts for』 should be used instead of 〈gifts to〉; therefore, it is corrected to 『gifts for』 to conform to fixed collocation rules.
error_sentence: I bought many watches and food there as gifts to my friends. Because the watch and food industry of Switzerland is as famous as its chemical industry.
correct_sentence: Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry.
error: .Because
correction: , because
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a clause beginning with 〈Because...〉 needs to be connected to the preceding clause with a comma; the incorrect 〈.Because〉 is changed to 『, because』, making the complex sentence structure correct; ② Space Error: According to English written expression conventions, a single letter space should be maintained between a punctuation mark (comma or period) and the following word; therefore, a space needs to be added and changed to 『, because』; ③ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the subordinating conjunction 〈Because〉 should be in lowercase when in the middle of a sentence; therefore, it is changed to 『because』 to ensure sentence style consistency.
error_sentence: Because the watch and food industry of Switzerland is as famous as its chemical industry.
correct_sentence: Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry.
error: industry
correction: industries
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to the sentence meaning, 〈watch and food industry〉 involves multiple sectors and should use the plural form 『industries』; therefore, it is corrected to 『watch and food industries』.
error_sentence: Because the watch and food industry of Switzerland is as famous as its chemical industry.
correct_sentence: Before I left Switzerland, I bought many watches and food there as gifts for my friends, because the watch and food industries of Switzerland are as famous as its chemical industry.
error: is
correction: are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The plural subject 〈industries〉 requires the plural linking verb 『are』, not the singular form; therefore, it is corrected to 『industries are』 to comply with the subject-verb agreement principle.
error_sentence: Through my description,do you want to visit this country.
correct_sentence: Through my description, do you want to visit this country?
error: .
correction: ?
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English punctuation rules, a question mark must be used at the end of an interrogative sentence 『do you want to visit this country?』; therefore, the period is changed to a question mark, finally resulting in 『do you want to visit this country?』 to meet sentence type requirements.
error_sentence: If you ant,don't wait,just go.
correct_sentence: If you want, don't wait and just go.
error: ant,don't wait,
correction: want, don't wait and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the context, 〈ant〉 is a spelling error; the correct verb should be 『want』, and the correction makes the sentence meaning coherent, expressing the idea of "wanting"; ② Space Error: According to English written expression conventions, a single letter space should be maintained between a punctuation mark (comma or period) and the following word; therefore, a space needs to be added and changed to 『, don't』; ③ Conjunction Error: According to English parallel structure rules, 〈don't wait〉 needs to be followed by the conjunction 『and』 to connect the subsequent action, not a comma; therefore, it is changed to 『don't wait and just go.』 to ensure logical coherence of the sentence.