Writing prompt: Will E-book Be Necessary in the Future?

Student essay:
With the society's development and prosperity, it has sprung up many electronic products, such as e-book. It insteads of traditional books. But whether e-book will be a necessary in the future has become a subject of hearted discussion.
Some think e-book will be a necessary in the future. On the one hand, such books are obviously handy and convenient and thanks to their multi-functions. Because Internet offers abundant resources, you can read various kinds of books. On the other hand, traditional books are made up of papers , so they are not easily portable. If you want to read books, you can read anywhere and anyplace.
Others hold that e-book will not be a necessary in the future. They support the opposite idea. First, using the e-book always is bad for people's eyesight. It leads to poor eyesight and other symptoms. Second, traditional books are more available because they are sold in various bookshops, while e-books need to refer to what you want to read.
Different people have different ideas. So, in my opinion, e-book will become popular under the invention of electronic products, but we should use them appropriately. On the contrary, traditional books is always a form of study, we can't throw them away. In the future, the science and technology will used in a diverse way.

Corrected essay:
With the society's development and prosperity, many electronic products have sprung up, such as e-books. They replace traditional books. But whether e-books will be necessary in the future has become a subject of heated discussion.
Some think e-books will be necessary in the future. On the one hand, such books are obviously handy and convenient thanks to their multi-functions. Because Internet offers abundant resources, you can read various kinds of books. On the other hand, traditional books are made of papers, so they are not easily portable. If you want to read books, you can read anywhere and anytime.
Others hold that e-books will not be necessary in the future. They support the opposite idea. First, using the e-book always is bad for people's eyesight. It leads to poor eyesight and other symptoms. Second, traditional books are more available because they are sold in various bookshops, while e-books need to refer to what you want to read.
Different people have different ideas. So, in my opinion, e-books will become popular with the invention of electronic products, but we should use them appropriately. On the contrary, reading traditional books is always a form of study, we can't throw them away. In the future, the science and technology will be used in diverse ways.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: With the society's development and prosperity, it has sprung up many electronic products, such as e-book.
correct_sentence: With the society's development and prosperity, many electronic products have sprung up, such as e-books.
error: it has sprung up
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence's subject 〈it〉 has an unclear reference and does not logically match the predicate 〈has sprung up〉. According to English grammar rules, the subject's referent should be clarified; this expression should be deleted and changed to 『many electronic products have sprung up』 to make the sentence structure complete and semantically clear.
error_sentence: With the society's development and prosperity, it has sprung up many electronic products, such as e-book.
correct_sentence: With the society's development and prosperity, many electronic products have sprung up, such as e-books.
correction: have sprung up
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The new subject 『many electronic products』 is plural; according to the principle of subject-verb agreement, the predicate verb needs to be in the plural form 『have』. Therefore, the singular verb 〈has〉 is changed to 『have sprung up』 to ensure grammatical correctness.
error_sentence: With the society's development and prosperity, it has sprung up many electronic products, such as e-book. It insteads of traditional books.
correct_sentence: With the society's development and prosperity, many electronic products have sprung up, such as e-books. They replace traditional books.
error: book. It insteads of
correction: books. They replace
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: 〈e-book〉 in the sentence generally refers to the category of e-books; according to English grammar rules, the plural form 『e-books』 should be used to express a generic concept; ② Pronoun Error: The original sentence uses the singular pronoun 〈It〉 to refer to the preceding plural noun 〈electronic products〉, violating the principle of pronoun agreement. It should be changed to the plural pronoun 『They』 to maintain consistent reference; ③ Verb Choice Error: 〈insteads of〉 is an incorrect verb phrase; according to the sentence's meaning (expressing a “replacement” relationship), the transitive verb 『replace』 should be used, and redundant parts should be deleted to ensure accurate expression; ④ Preposition Error: The verb 『replace』 is a transitive verb and does not require a preposition when followed by an object. Therefore, the redundant preposition 〈of〉 is deleted to make the sentence structure conform to grammatical norms.
error_sentence: But whether e-book will be a necessary in the future has become a subject of hearted discussion.

correct_sentence: But whether e-books will be necessary in the future has become a subject of heated discussion.

error: book
correction: books
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈e-book〉 in the sentence generally refers to the category of e-books; according to English grammar rules, the plural form 『e-books』 should be used to express a generic concept.
error_sentence: But whether e-book will be a necessary in the future has become a subject of hearted discussion.

correct_sentence: But whether e-books will be necessary in the future has become a subject of heated discussion.

error: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: The indefinite article 〈a〉 is misused before the adjective 〈necessary〉; according to English grammar rules, an article is not needed when an adjective modifies a noun alone. The redundant determiner is deleted to ensure grammatical correctness.
error_sentence: But whether e-book will be a necessary in the future has become a subject of hearted discussion.

correct_sentence: But whether e-books will be necessary in the future has become a subject of heated discussion.

error: hearted
correction: heated
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: 〈hearted〉 is a misspelling; according to the sentence's meaning, to express a “heated” discussion, the adjective 『heated』 should be used, correcting the spelling error.
error_sentence: Some think e-book will be a necessary in the future.
correct_sentence: Some think e-books will be necessary in the future.
error: book
correction: books
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈e-book〉 in the sentence generally refers to the category of e-books; according to English grammar rules, the plural form 『e-books』 should be used to express a generic concept.
error_sentence: Some think e-book will be a necessary in the future.
correct_sentence: Some think e-books will be necessary in the future.
error: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: The indefinite article 〈a〉 is misused before the adjective 〈necessary〉; according to English grammar rules, an article is not needed when an adjective modifies a noun alone. The redundant determiner is deleted to ensure grammatical correctness.
error_sentence: On the one hand, such books are obviously handy and convenient and thanks to their multi-functions.
correct_sentence: On the one hand, such books are obviously handy and convenient thanks to their multi-functions.
error: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: The conjunction 〈and〉 causes sentence structure redundancy; according to English expression habits, deleting it allows 〈thanks to〉 to directly introduce an adverbial of reason, making the sentence logic more concise and clear.
error_sentence: On the other hand, traditional books are made up of papers , so they are not easily portable.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, traditional books are made of papers, so they are not easily portable.
error: up
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: In the fixed phrase 〈be made up of〉 when expressing material composition, 〈up〉 is a redundant component. According to English idiomatic usage, simplifying it to 『be made of』 accurately expresses the material composition relationship.
error_sentence: If you want to read books, you can read anywhere and anyplace.

correct_sentence: If you want to read books, you can read anywhere and anytime.

error: anyplace
correction: anytime
error_type: Adverb Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Adverb Error: The original sentence's 〈anyplace〉 is semantically redundant with the preceding 〈anywhere〉. According to the contextual temporal logic, it should be changed to the time adverb 『anytime』 to make the expression more accurate and avoid repetition.
error_sentence: Others hold that e-book will not be a necessary in the future.
correct_sentence: Others hold that e-books will not be necessary in the future.
error: book
correction: books
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈e-book〉 in the sentence generally refers to the category of e-books; according to English grammar rules, the plural form 『e-books』 should be used to express a generic concept.
error_sentence: Others hold that e-book will not be a necessary in the future.
correct_sentence: Others hold that e-books will not be necessary in the future.
error: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: The indefinite article 〈a〉 is misused before the adjective 〈necessary〉; according to English grammar rules, an article is not needed when an adjective modifies a noun alone. The redundant determiner is deleted to ensure grammatical correctness.
error_sentence: So, in my opinion, e-book will become popular under the invention of electronic products, but we should use them appropriately.
correct_sentence: So, in my opinion, e-books will become popular with the invention of electronic products, but we should use them appropriately.
error: book
correction: books
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈e-book〉 in the sentence generally refers to the category of e-books; according to English grammar rules, the plural form 『e-books』 should be used to express a generic concept.
error_sentence: So, in my opinion, e-book will become popular under the invention of electronic products, but we should use them appropriately.
correct_sentence: So, in my opinion, e-books will become popular with the invention of electronic products, but we should use them appropriately.
error: under
correction: with
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: The original sentence's use of 〈under〉 is inconsistent with the context. According to the sentence's meaning, to express “in the context of the invention”, it should be changed to the preposition 『with』, forming the correct collocation 『with the invention』 to accurately express an accompanying relationship.
error_sentence: On the contrary, traditional books is always a form of study, we can't throw them away.
correct_sentence: On the contrary, reading traditional books is always a form of study, we can't throw them away.
correction: reading
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: The original sentence's missing subject leads to an incomplete structure. According to English grammar rules, the gerund 『reading』 is added as the subject, and 〈traditional books〉 becomes the object, forming the complete structure 『reading traditional books is always a form of study』.
error_sentence: In the future, the science and technology will used in a diverse way.
correct_sentence: In the future, the science and technology will be used in diverse ways.
correction: be
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The original sentence's predicate 〈will used〉 lacks the necessary auxiliary verb to form the passive voice. According to English grammar rules, 『be』 is added to form the correct structure 『will be used』 to express future passive meaning.
error_sentence: In the future, the science and technology will used in a diverse way.
correct_sentence: In the future, the science and technology will be used in diverse ways.
error: a diverse way
correction: diverse ways
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: In the phrase 〈a diverse way〉, the indefinite article contradicts the plural concept. According to the context (indicating multiple ways), the article should be removed and the plural form 『diverse ways』 should be used to maintain logical consistency; ② Noun Number Error: The original sentence's 〈way〉 is in singular form, which is inconsistent with the context indicating multiple ways. According to semantic requirements, it is changed to the plural form 『ways』 to accurately express the meaning of “multiple ways”.