Writing prompt: The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars

Student essay:
As the standard of living is getting higher, more and more people are buying cars.As we all know,one coin has two sides.The same way be true of private car.It also has its benefits and harm.
On the one hand,It's one of the most comfortable and convenient means of transportation.You can go wherever you like in time instead of rushing in the crowed bus.What's more,there is no doubt that private cars will have a great impact on the economic growth.The rapid car industry growth will contribute much to keeping the country's economy growing at a higher rate in the near futrue.
On the other hand,The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems.For example,the cars' exhaust leads the problem of Global Warming.And the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health.Furthermore,private cars will result in many originally evitable traffic jams or road accidents once the private cars are not correctly drived.
As my opinion,private cars definitely benefit us.However,we need to consider the problem that causes from cars.After all,recognizing a problrm is the firet step in finding a solution.We should looking for new energy replaces gas in order to ease the environment situation.In the long term I think we should contral the number of cars.
Altogether,we should not throw away an apple for its core.As long as we take several feasible measures to enhance the management of private cars,we will make the most of the them.

Corrected essay:
As the standard of living is getting higher, more and more people are buying cars. As we all know, one coin has two sides. The same may be true for private cars. They also have their benefits and harm.
On the one hand, it's one of the most comfortable and convenient means of transportation. You can go wherever you like in time instead of rushing on the crowded bus. What's more, there is no doubt that private cars will have a great impact on economic growth. The rapid car industry growth will contribute much to keeping the country's economy growing at a higher rate in the near future.
On the other hand, the development of private cars will bring about a series of problems. For example, the cars' exhaust will lead to the problem of global warming. And the polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health. Furthermore, private cars will result in many originally evitable traffic jams or road accidents once the private cars are not correctly driven.
In my opinion, private cars definitely benefit us. However, we need to consider the problems that are caused by cars. After all, recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution. We should look for new energy to replace gas in order to ease the environmental situation. In the long term, I think we should control the number of cars. Altogether, we should not throw away an apple for its core. As long as we take several feasible measures to enhance the management of private cars, we will make the most of them.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: The same way be true of private car.
correct_sentence: The same may be true for private cars.
error: way
correction: may
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English idiomatic expression rules, 〈The same way be〉 in the original sentence 〈The same way be true of private car〉 is an incorrect fixed phrase. The correct expression for “the same may be true for” should be 『The same may be』; here, the auxiliary verb 〈may〉 is needed to express possibility, not 〈way〉, so 〈way〉 should be changed to 『may』.
error_sentence: The same way be true of private car. It also has its benefits and harm.

correct_sentence: The same may be true for private cars. They also have their benefits and harm.

error: of private car.It also has its
correction: for private cars. They also have their
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, when expressing “be true for,” 〈for〉 should be used; the use of 〈of〉 in the original sentence does not conform to this usage, so 〈of〉 should be changed to 『for』; ② Noun Number Error: According to the contextual meaning, this refers to the plural concept of “private cars”; in the original sentence, 〈private car〉 is in singular form and should be changed to the plural form 『private cars』; ③ Pronoun Error: Since the preceding text refers to the plural concept of “private cars,” the singular pronoun 〈It〉 in the original sentence cannot correctly refer to it; according to the principle of subject-verb agreement, it needs to be changed to the plural form 『They』.
error_sentence: On the one hand,It's one of the most comfortable and convenient means of transportation.
correct_sentence: On the one hand, it's one of the most comfortable and convenient means of transportation.
error: It
correction: it
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter after a comma should not be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈It's〉 is after a comma, and its capitalization does not conform to the rules, so 〈It's〉 should be changed to the lowercase form 『it's』 to comply with English punctuation and capitalization standards.
error_sentence: You can go wherever you like in time instead of rushing in the crowed bus.
correct_sentence: You can go wherever you like in time instead of rushing on the crowded bus.
error: in the crowed
correction: on the crowded
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, “on the bus” should use the preposition 〈on〉; the use of 〈in〉 in the original sentence does not conform to common collocations and should be changed to 『on』; ② Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express “crowded”; 〈crowed〉 is misspelled, the correct spelling is 『crowded』, so 〈crowed〉 needs to be changed to 『crowded』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.
error_sentence: What's more,there is no doubt that private cars will have a great impact on the economic growth.
correct_sentence: What's more, there is no doubt that private cars will have a great impact on economic growth.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when the abstract noun 〈economic growth〉 expresses a general meaning, it does not require an article before it; the original sentence has an extra determiner 〈the〉, which should be deleted to make the sentence conform to English grammar and expression habits.
error_sentence: The rapid car industry growth will contribute much to keeping the country's economy growing at a higher rate in the near futrue.

correct_sentence: The rapid car industry growth will contribute much to keeping the country's economy growing at a higher rate in the near future.

error: futrue
correction: future
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express “future”; therefore, the word 〈futrue〉 is a misspelling of 『future』, and 〈futrue〉 needs to be changed to 『future』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.
error_sentence: On the other hand,The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, the development of private cars will bring about a series of problems.
error: The
correction: the
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter after a comma should not be capitalized; in the original sentence, 〈The〉 is after a comma, and its capitalization does not conform to the rules, so 〈The〉 should be changed to the lowercase form 『the』 to comply with English punctuation and capitalization standards.
error_sentence: On the other hand,The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems.
correct_sentence: On the other hand, the development of private cars will bring about a series of problems.
error: the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar rules, the plural noun 〈private cars〉 here expresses a general meaning and does not require the article 〈the〉 before it; the original sentence has an extra determiner 〈the〉, which should be deleted to make the sentence conform to English grammar and expression habits.
error_sentence: For example,the cars' exhaust leads the problem of Global Warming.
correct_sentence: For example, the cars' exhaust will lead to the problem of global warming.
error: leads
correction: will lead to
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: According to the contextual meaning, this discusses a possible future impact and should use the future tense; the use of the simple present tense 〈leads〉 in the original sentence does not fit the context and needs to be changed to 『will lead』 to correctly express a future action; ② Preposition Error: According to English fixed collocations, when “lead” means “to cause,” it needs to be paired with the preposition “to”; the original sentence is missing the preposition 〈to〉, and 『to』 should be added to form the “lead to” structure, making the expression conform to English grammar rules.
error_sentence: For example,the cars' exhaust leads the problem of Global Warming.
correct_sentence: For example, the cars' exhaust will lead to the problem of global warming.
error: Global Warming
correction: global warming
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the common noun phrase 〈global warming〉 is not a proper noun and does not require initial capitalization; in the original sentence, 〈Global Warming〉 is capitalized, which does not conform to the rules, and it should be changed to the lowercase form 『global warming』 to comply with standard writing.
error_sentence: Furthermore,private cars will result in many originally evitable traffic jams or road accidents once the private cars are not correctly drived.

correct_sentence: Furthermore, private cars will result in many originally evitable traffic jams or road accidents once the private cars are not correctly driven.

error: drived
correction: driven
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Voice Error: According to English grammar rules, in the passive voice, the verb needs to be in the past participle form; in the original sentence, 〈drived〉 is an incorrect form, the correct past participle form should be 『driven』, so 〈drived〉 needs to be changed to 『driven』 to comply with the grammatical rules of the passive voice.
error_sentence: As my opinion,private cars definitely benefit us.
correct_sentence: In my opinion, private cars definitely benefit us.
error: As
correction: In
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, when expressing the viewpoint “in someone's opinion,” the fixed phrase is 『In my opinion』; the use of 〈As my opinion〉 in the original sentence does not conform to this common expression, and the preposition 〈As〉 should be changed to 『In』 to make the sentence conform to English language habits.
error_sentence: However,we need to consider the problem that causes from cars.
correct_sentence: However, we need to consider the problems that are caused by cars.
error: problem that causes from
correction: problems that are caused by
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: According to the contextual meaning, the “problem” mentioned here is not a single problem but multiple problems, and the plural form should be used; in the original sentence, 〈problem〉 is in singular form and needs to be changed to the plural form 『problems』 to match the actual situation of multiple problems; ② Verb Voice Error: According to the meaning, the “problems” are “caused” by cars, indicating a passive relationship; the use of the active voice 〈causes〉 in the original sentence is illogical and should be changed to the passive voice 『are caused』; ③ Preposition Error: In the passive voice, when expressing the agent of an action, the preposition 〈by〉 should be used; the use of 〈from〉 in the original sentence does not conform to grammatical rules and needs to be replaced with 『by』 to make the sentence expression conform to English grammar.
error_sentence: After all,recognizing a problrm is the firet step in finding a solution.
correct_sentence: After all, recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.
error: problrm
correction: problem
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express “problem”; therefore, the word 〈problrm〉 is a misspelling of 『problem』, and 〈problrm〉 needs to be changed to 『problem』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.
error_sentence: After all,recognizing a problrm is the firet step in finding a solution.
correct_sentence: After all, recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution.
error: firet
correction: first
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express “first”; therefore, the word 〈firet〉 is a misspelling of 『first』, and 〈firet〉 needs to be changed to 『first』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.
error_sentence: We should looking for new energy replaces gas in order to ease the environment situation.
correct_sentence: We should look for new energy to replace gas in order to ease the environmental situation.
error: looking
correction: look
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English grammar rules, the modal verb 〈should〉 must be followed by the base form of the verb; the use of 〈looking〉 in the original sentence does not meet grammatical requirements and should be changed to the base form of the verb 『look』 to make the sentence conform to grammatical standards.
error_sentence: We should looking for new energy replaces gas in order to ease the environment situation.
correct_sentence: We should look for new energy to replace gas in order to ease the environmental situation.
error: replaces
correction: to replace
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the purpose of “looking for new energy” here is “to replace gas,” and an infinitive should be used as an adverbial of purpose; the use of the third-person singular form 〈replaces〉 in the original sentence does not meet grammatical requirements and needs to be changed to the infinitive form 『to replace』 to make the sentence expression conform to grammatical rules and semantic logic.
error_sentence: We should looking for new energy replaces gas in order to ease the environment situation.
correct_sentence: We should look for new energy to replace gas in order to ease the environmental situation.
error: environment
correction: environmental
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, the noun 〈situation〉 needs to be modified by an adjective; the use of the noun 〈environment〉 to modify 〈situation〉 in the original sentence does not conform to grammatical standards, and 〈environment〉 should be changed to the adjective form 『environmental』 to make the sentence expression meet grammatical requirements.
error_sentence: In the long term I think we should contral the number of cars.

correct_sentence: In the long term, I think we should control the number of cars.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when an adverbial phrase like 〈In the long term〉 appears at the beginning of a sentence, a comma needs to be added after it to clearly separate the adverbial from the main clause; the original sentence is missing this comma, and a comma 『,』 should be added after 〈In the long term〉 to make the sentence structure clearer and conform to English punctuation rules.
error_sentence: In the long term I think we should contral the number of cars.

correct_sentence: In the long term, I think we should control the number of cars.
error: contral
correction: control
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that the intention here is to express “control”; therefore, the word 〈contral〉 is a misspelling of 『control』, and 〈contral〉 needs to be changed to 『control』 to make the sentence flow smoothly.
error_sentence: In the long term I think we should contral the number of cars.

correct_sentence: In the long term, I think we should control the number of cars. Altogether, we should not throw away an apple for its core.
error: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Format Error: According to English text formatting conventions, there should not be extra blank lines between paragraphs; the extra blank line in the original sentence disrupts the continuity of the format and needs to be deleted to make the text format coherent.
error_sentence: As long as we take several feasible measures to enhance the management of private cars,we will make the most of the them.
correct_sentence: As long as we take several feasible measures to enhance the management of private cars, we will make the most of them.
error: the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar rules, an article is not needed before the pronoun 〈them〉; the original sentence has an extra determiner 〈the〉, which should be deleted to make the sentence conform to English grammar and expression habits.