Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
I don't like reading,but I read a lot of thought.One day,I read a book.I have a feeling.
I read the book name"TEASING",it is the Berenstain Bears series.I love it becaues it tell me don't make fun of others.
I think brother bear is good.Though he teases siter bear,but when he tased by others,sister bear is happy.We don't make fun of others,and don't teases others.It is not good.We would like to get along with others.
I think if we like play with others,they would like you too.

Corrected essay:
I don't like reading, but I often think a lot. One day, I read a book and I had a feeling.
I read the book named "TEASING", which is in the Berenstain Bears series. I love it because it tells me not to make fun of others.
I think Brother Bear is good, though he teases Sister Bear, but when he is teased by others, Sister Bear is not happy. We should not make fun of others or tease others. It is not good. We would like to get along with others.
I think if we like to play with others, they would like us too.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I don't like reading,but I read a lot of thought.
correct_sentence: I don't like reading, but I often think a lot.
error: read
correction: often think
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, 〈read〉 in the original sentence does not collocate well with the object 〈a lot of thought〉; 『often think』 better fits the semantic logic of 『I don't like reading』, expressing 'thinking often' rather than 'reading thoughts'.
error_sentence: I don't like reading,but I read a lot of thought.
correct_sentence: I don't like reading, but I often think a lot.
error: of thought
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression norms, 〈of thought〉 is semantically redundant with the main verb 〈think〉; deleting 〈of thought〉 makes the expression more concise.
error_sentence: One day,I read a book. I have a feeling.

correct_sentence: One day, I read a book and I had a feeling.

error: .I have
correction: and I had
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: The two independent clauses 〈I read a book〉 and 〈I have a feeling〉 each contain a predicate structure and need to be connected by 『and』 to maintain semantic continuity; therefore, the comma between the two sentences should be removed and the conjunction 'and' added; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the contextual time logic, 〈have〉 should be changed to the past tense 『had』 to maintain consistency with the context's time.
error_sentence: I read the book name"TEASING",it is the Berenstain Bears series.
correct_sentence: I read the book named "TEASING", which is in the Berenstain Bears series.
error: name"TEASING",it is
correction: named "TEASING", which is in
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① PoS Confusion Error: 〈name〉 is a noun, meaning 'name'. It should be changed to the past participle 『named』 to function as a post-modifier indicating passive naming; ② Sentence Structure Error: 'I read the book name“TEASING”' and 'it is the Berenstain Bears series' are two independent sentences and cannot be connected by a comma; a relative pronoun 『which』 needs to be added to connect the main clause and the subordinate clause; ③ Preposition Error: Add 『in』 to indicate that “TEASING” is one book in “the Berenstain Bears series”.
error_sentence: I love it becaues it tell me don't make fun of others.

correct_sentence: I love it because it tells me not to make fun of others.

error: becaues it tell me don't
correction: because it tells me not to
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈becaues〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『because』, meaning 'because'; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject is third-person singular, so the verb needs to be in the third-person singular form to agree with it; therefore, 〈tell〉 should be changed to 『tells』; ③ Sentence Structure Error: The negative infinitive of a verb requires 『not to』 to replace 〈don't〉 to conform to idiomatic English expression.
error_sentence: I think brother bear is good.
correct_sentence: I think Brother Bear is good, though he teases Sister Bear, but when he is teased by others, Sister Bear is not happy.
error: brother bear
correction: Brother Bear
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the proper noun 〈brother bear〉 needs to be capitalized; it is changed to 『Brother Bear』 to conform to the norm.
error_sentence: I think brother bear is good. Though he teases siter bear,but when he tased by others,sister bear is happy.
correct_sentence: I think Brother Bear is good, though he teases Sister Bear, but when he is teased by others, Sister Bear is not happy.
error: .Though
correction: , though
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma 『,』 is needed to connect the main clause and the subordinate clause in the sentence; 〈.Though〉 is changed to 『, though』 to maintain semantic coherence.
error_sentence: Though he teases siter bear,but when he tased by others,sister bear is happy.
correct_sentence: I think Brother Bear is good, though he teases Sister Bear, but when he is teased by others, Sister Bear is not happy.
error: siter bear
correction: Sister Bear
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈siter〉 is misspelled and should be corrected to 'sister', meaning 'sister'; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the initial letter of a proper noun needs to be capitalized; therefore, 〈siter bear〉 is changed to 『Sister Bear』.
error_sentence: Though he teases siter bear,but when he tased by others,sister bear is happy.
correct_sentence: I think Brother Bear is good, though he teases Sister Bear, but when he is teased by others, Sister Bear is not happy.
error: tased
correction: is teased
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 'tased' is misspelled; the correct spelling is 'teased'; ② Verb Voice Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express 'being teased'; therefore, 'teased' is changed to 『is teased』 to indicate that the action is performed by others.
error_sentence: Though he teases siter bear,but when he tased by others,sister bear is happy.
correct_sentence: I think Brother Bear is good, though he teases Sister Bear, but when he is teased by others, Sister Bear is not happy.
error: sister bear is
correction: Sister Bear is not
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the initial letter of the proper noun 〈sister bear〉 needs to be capitalized; ② Verb Choice Error: According to the story's theme, the negative word 『not』 needs to be added after 'Sister Bear is' to complete the meaning, indicating 〈Sister Bear〉's emotional state.
error_sentence: We don't make fun of others,and don't teases others.
correct_sentence: We should not make fun of others or tease others.
error: don't
correction: should not
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, the auxiliary verb 〈don't〉 needs to be changed to 『should not』 to express a tone of advice and admonition, which better fits the sentence meaning.
error_sentence: We don't make fun of others,and don't teases others.
correct_sentence: We should not make fun of others or tease others.
error: ,and don't teases
correction: or tease
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, the parallel negative structures 'not make fun of others' and 'tease others' need to be connected by 『or』; ② Verb Tense Error: In the 'should not' sentence structure, 〈teases〉 should be changed to the base form 『tease』 to be parallel with 〈make〉.
error_sentence: I think if we like play with others,they would like you too.
correct_sentence: I think if we like to play with others, they would like us too.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, when the verb 〈like〉 is followed by an infinitive, 『to』 needs to be added, forming 『like to play』, which means 'want to do something'.
error_sentence: I think if we like play with others,they would like you too.
correct_sentence: I think if we like to play with others, they would like us too.
error: you
correction: us
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English writing conventions, the pronoun 〈you〉 is inconsistent with the contextual logic and needs to be changed to 『us』 to maintain logical consistency between the subject and object.