Writing prompt: Knowledge or Experience?

Student essay:
For me ,I am a student ,we get the knowledge alomst from books . Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.Now you see that there are different situations for the knowledge get.and that needs you to judge.
anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life. Now you see the knowledge of ooks and self experience all the same important,that is my thought.

Corrected essay:
For me, I am a student. We get knowledge almost from books. Not all knowledge comes from books. For example, when you are cooking, the book can just tell you what you need to do, but we always sum up the experience of putting seasoning or salt. But when you are doing homework (especially Math), the books will tell you the principle or formula. Now you see that there are different situations in gaining knowledge, and these situations need you to judge.
Anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together. When you go to climb a mountain, if you have done that before, you will need your experience. Last time I did not bring warm clothes, so I need to bring them this time. That needs the knowledge from books: temperature, air density, and when you feel bad, what can help you to feel better or save your life. Now you see that knowledge from books and from self-experience is equally important. That is my thought.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: For me ,I am a student ,we get the knowledge alomst from books .
correct_sentence: For me, I am a student. We get knowledge almost from books.
error: ,we get the knowledge alomst
correction: . We get knowledge almost
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: 〈For me ,I am a student〉 and 〈we get the knowledge alomst from books〉 contain independent predicate structures and can be independent sentences, so 〈,we〉 is changed to 『. We』; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space of one letter should be kept between a comma or period and the following word, so a space needs to be added and changed to 『. We』; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when we refer to knowledge in a general sense, the definite article 〈the〉 is not needed, so 〈the〉 is deleted; ④ Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is intended to express "almost", so 〈alomst〉 is a misspelling of 『almost』, and 〈alomst〉 needs to be changed to 『almost』 to make the sentence fluent.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: Not all knowledge comes from books.
error: get
correction: comes
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: The use of the verb 〈get〉 does not fit the context; 〈get〉 means "to obtain", but here it needs to express "source". A more accurate verb 『comes』 should be chosen to correctly express the meaning that knowledge is obtained from books, so 〈get〉 is changed to 『comes』.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: Not all knowledge comes from books. For example, when you are cooking, the book can just tell you what you need to do, but we always sum up the experience of putting seasoning or salt.
error: ,for example
correction: . For example,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: 〈Not all knowledge get from books〉 and 〈for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do〉 contain independent predicate structures, can be independent sentences, and a space is needed after the punctuation, so 〈,for〉 is changed to 『. For』; ② Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, when 〈for example〉 is used as an parenthetical phrase, it is separated from the content of the main clause. To make the sentence clearer and easier to understand, we add a comma after it, so 『,』 is added after 〈example〉; ③ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space of one letter should be kept between a comma or period and the following word, so a space needs to be added and changed to 『. We』.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: For example, when you are cooking, the book can just tell you what you need to do, but we always sum up the experience of putting seasoning or salt.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: A comma needs to be added after the adverbial clause 〈when you are cooking〉 to separate it from the main clause, so 『,』 is added after 〈cooking〉 to make the sentence structure more standard.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: For example, when you are cooking, the book can just tell you what you need to do, but we always sum up the experience of putting seasoning or salt.
error: need you
correction: you need to
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Word Order Error: In an object clause introduced by an interrogative word, the subject 〈you〉 should be placed before the verb 〈need〉, so 〈need you〉 is changed to 『you need』 to conform to the idiomatic expression of English verb phrases; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: In English, when expressing "need to do something", the common structure is "need to do something", so 『to』 is added after 『you need』.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: For example, when you are cooking, the book can just tell you what you need to do, but we always sum up the experience of putting seasoning or salt.
error: exerience of puting
correction: experience of putting
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is intended to express "experience", so 〈exerience 〉 is a misspelling of 『experience』, and 〈exerience 〉 needs to be changed to 『experience』 to make the sentence fluent; ② Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is intended to express "putting", so 〈puting〉 is a misspelling of 『putting』, and 〈puting〉 needs to be changed to 『putting』 to make the sentence fluent.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: For example, when you are cooking, the book can just tell you what you need to do, but we always sum up the experience of putting seasoning or salt. But when you are doing homework (especially Math), the books will tell you the principle or formula.
error: .But
correction: . But
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: A space is needed between the period here and 〈But〉, so 〈.But〉 is changed to 『. But』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: Not all knowledge get from books ,for example when you are cooking the book can just tell you what need you do,but we always sum up the exerience of puting seasoning or salt .But when you are writing homework(especially the Math) ,the books will tell you the principle or formula.
correct_sentence: But when you are doing homework (especially Math), the books will tell you the principle or formula.
error: writing homework(especially the
correction: doing homework (especially
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: The collocation 〈writing homework〉 is inappropriate; a more accurate verb 『doing』 should be chosen to correctly express the meaning of doing homework, so 〈writing〉 is changed to 『doing』; ② Space Error: A space is needed between 〈homework〉 and the following 〈(especially〉, so 〈homework(especially〉 is changed to 『homework (especially』 to conform to writing conventions; ③ Determiner Error: The article in 〈the Math〉 is redundant; subject names do not need an article, so 〈the〉 is deleted.
error_sentence: Now you see that there are different situations for the knowledge get.and that needs you to judge.

correct_sentence: Now you see that there are different situations in gaining knowledge, and these situations need you to judge.

error: for the knowledge get.and that needs
correction: in gaining knowledge, and these situations need
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: The preposition 〈for〉 should be changed to 『in』 to indicate a field or area; ② Determiner Error: According to English rules for determiners and noun collocations, the uncountable noun "knowledge" does not need the redundant definite article "the" before it, so it should be deleted; ③ Verb Choice Error: The verb 〈get〉 does not fit the context; "gain" should be used to correctly express the meaning of acquiring knowledge, so 〈the knowledge get〉 is changed to 『gaining knowledge』 to make the meaning clear; ④ Noun Error: The reference of 〈that〉 in the original sentence is unclear, so 〈that〉 is changed to 『these situations』 to conform to grammar rules; ⑤ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the noun before the predicate verb, the predicate verb should be in the plural form to maintain subject-verb agreement, so 〈needs〉 should be changed to 『need』.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: Anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.
error: anyway
correction: Anyway
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized, so 〈anyway〉 needs to be changed to 『Anyway』 to conform to conventions.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: Anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together. When you go to climb a mountain, if you have done that before, you will need your experience.
error: together.when
correction: together. When
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space is needed between punctuation and a word, and the first letter of a sentence needs to be capitalized, so 〈together.when〉 is changed to 『together. When』; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence and the first letter of proper nouns need to be capitalized, so 〈when〉 needs to be changed to 『When』 to conform to the requirements of the question and writing conventions.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: When you go to climb a mountain, if you have done that before, you will need your experience.
error: the
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: The determiner 〈the〉 is used inappropriately; to refer to a mountain in a general sense, the indefinite article 『a』 should be used, so 〈the〉 is changed to 『a』 to indicate a non-specific mountain.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: When you go to climb a mountain, if you have done that before, you will need your experience.
error: and you
correction: if you have
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: The conjunction 〈and〉 is not suitable for expressing a conditional relationship; 『if』 should be used to clarify the conditional sentence structure, so 〈and〉 is changed to 『if』; ② Auxiliary Error: In the present perfect tense, the auxiliary verb 『have』 is essential, so 『have』 is added after 〈you〉 to conform to grammar rules.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: When you go to climb a mountain, if you have done that before, you will need your experience. Last time I did not bring warm clothes, so I need to bring them this time.
error: that will needs you experience :last time i
correction: you will need your experience. Last time I
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: The sentence structure is chaotic, leading to unclear meaning; 〈that will needs you〉 needs to be changed to 『you will need your』 to clearly express the action and conditional relationship; ② Punctuation Error: A declarative sentence should end with a period, so 〈experience :last time〉 is changed to 『experience. Last time』 to conform to writing conventions; ③ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, 『I』 as a first-person pronoun must always be capitalized in a sentence, regardless of whether it is at the beginning or in the middle of the sentence, so 〈i〉 needs to be changed to 『I』 to conform to conventions.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: Last time I did not bring warm clothes, so I need to bring them this time.
error: get the warm cloth,i
correction: bring warm clothes, so I
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Verb Choice Error: The verb 〈get〉 does not fit the context; usually, we use 『bring』 to mean "to carry something". 〈get〉 generally means to obtain or receive, and is not suitable for expressing carrying, so 〈get〉 is changed to the more accurate verb 『bring』; ② Determiner Error: 〈the〉 is a definite article, usually used to refer to specific, known, or previously mentioned things. Here we are talking about general clothing, not a specific piece of clothing, so 〈the〉 is deleted; ③ Noun Error: 〈cloth〉 means fabric or a single piece of textile, but here we are discussing "clothing" or "clothes", and the plural form 『clothes』 should be used, so 〈cloth〉 is changed to 『clothes』; ④ Conjunction Error: To clearly express a cause-and-effect relationship, the conjunction 『so』 should be used to connect the two sentences; the correct structure is 『clothes, so』; ⑤ Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space of one letter should be kept between a comma or period and the following word, so a space needs to be added and changed to 『, so』; ⑥ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, 『I』 as a first-person pronoun must always be capitalized in a sentence, regardless of whether it is at the beginning or in the middle of the sentence, so 〈i〉 needs to be changed to 『I』 to conform to conventions.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: Last time I did not bring warm clothes, so I need to bring them this time. That needs the knowledge from books: temperature, air density, and when you feel bad, what can help you to feel better or save your life.
error: it this time.that
correction: them this time. That
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: The pronoun 〈it〉 does not fit the context; the plural form 『them』 should be used to refer to multiple items of clothing, so 〈it〉 is changed to 『them』; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space of one letter should be kept between a comma or period and the following word, so a space needs to be added and changed to 『. That』; ③ Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized, and a space is needed after punctuation, so 〈time.that〉 needs to be changed to 『time. That』 to conform to conventions.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: That needs the knowledge from books: temperature, air density, and when you feel bad, what can help you to feel better or save your life.
error: of the
correction: from
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Preposition Error: The preposition 〈of〉 is used inappropriately; 『from』 should be used to correctly express the meaning of the source of knowledge, so 〈of〉 is changed to 『from』; ② Determiner Error: Here, the intention is to express knowledge obtained from all books, not a specific book, so 〈books〉 should be used in a general sense, therefore 〈the〉 is deleted.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: That needs the knowledge from books: temperature, air density, and when you feel bad, what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: A conjunction 『and』 needs to be added between the coordinate items 〈temperature, air density〉 and the subsequent content, so 『and』 is added before 〈when〉 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: anyway, sometimes you need to combine those together.when you go to climb the mountain,and you done that before,that will needs you experience :last time i did not get the warm cloth,i need to bring it this time.that needs the knowledge of the books :temperature , air density,when you feel bad what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correct_sentence: That needs the knowledge from books: temperature, air density, and when you feel bad, what can help you to feel better or save your life.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: A comma is needed after the adverbial clause 〈when you feel bad〉 to separate it from the main clause, so 『,』 is added after 〈when you feel bad〉 to make the sentence structure more standard.
error_sentence: Now you see the knowledge of ooks and self experience all the same important,that is my thought.
correct_sentence: Now you see that knowledge from books and from self-experience is equally important. That is my thought.
error: the knowledge of ooks and self experience all the same important,that
correction: that knowledge from books and from self-experience is equally important. That
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: After 〈Now you see〉 is a clause used to express "what you see". To correctly introduce this clause, 『that』 needs to be used as a conjunction to introduce an object clause, explaining the content after 〈you see〉, so 〈the〉 is changed to 『that』; ② Preposition Error: 『from』 indicates a source, while 〈of〉 is usually used to indicate an attribute of something, so 〈of〉 is changed to 『from』 to correctly express the meaning of the sentence; ③ Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is intended to express "books", so 〈ooks〉 is a misspelling of 『books』, and 〈ooks〉 needs to be changed to 『books』 to make the sentence fluent; ④ Preposition Error: 『from』 indicates a source; 『from』 should be added before 〈self experience〉 to correctly express the meaning of the sentence; ⑤ Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is intended to express "self-experience", which is a compound word, so 〈self experience〉 is a misspelling of 『self-experience』, and 〈self experience〉 needs to be changed to 『self-experience』 to make the sentence fluent; ⑥ Sentence Structure Error: The sentence structure is chaotic, leading to unclear meaning; 〈all the same important〉 needs to be changed to 『is equally important』 to make the meaning clear; ⑦ Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a declarative sentence ends with a period, so 〈,that〉 is changed to 『. That』 to conform to writing conventions.