Writing prompt: An English Editor Wanted

Student essay:
I'm the nersonin charge of the school.Now we need an editor of the English version.If you do it,you will need to choose articles form English newspapers and magazinesand the Internet,and,you need to select and edit the articles from students.If youhave some spareltimo and you are willing to use it to serve the students,of course the work vequires your English tvanslation and artare very good,and will operate the computer.

Corrected essay:
I'm the person in charge of the school. Now we need an editor for the English version. If you do it, you will need to choose articles from English newspapers and magazines and the Internet, and you need to select and edit the articles from students. If you have some spare time and you are willing to use it to serve the students, of course the work requires your English translation and art skills to be very good, and you must be able to operate the computer.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I'm the nersonin charge of the school.
correct_sentence: I'm the person in charge of the school.
error: nersonin
correction: person in
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that the intention here is to express “person”, therefore 〈nersonin〉 is a misspelling of 『person in』, and it needs to be modified to 『person in』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: Now we need an editor of the English version.
correct_sentence: Now we need an editor for the English version.
error: of
correction: for
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: Here the intention is to express the purpose of the position; according to English preposition collocation rules, the preposition 『for』 should be used instead of 〈of〉.
error_sentence: If you do it,you will need to choose articles form English newspapers and magazinesand the Internet,and,you need to select and edit the articles from students.
correct_sentence: If you do it, you will need to choose articles from English newspapers and magazines and the Internet, and you need to select and edit the articles from students.
error: form
correction: from
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that the intention here is to express “from”, therefore 〈form〉 is a misspelling of 『from』, and it needs to be modified to 『from』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: If you do it,you will need to choose articles form English newspapers and magazinesand the Internet,and,you need to select and edit the articles from students.
correct_sentence: If you do it, you will need to choose articles from English newspapers and magazines and the Internet, and you need to select and edit the articles from students.
error: magazinesand
correction: magazines and
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: The word 〈magazines〉 and the conjunction 〈and〉 are two separate words; according to English writing conventions, they should be separated by a space, modified to 『magazines and』 to keep the sentence clear.
error_sentence: If you do it,you will need to choose articles form English newspapers and magazinesand the Internet,and,you need to select and edit the articles from students.
correct_sentence: If you do it, you will need to choose articles from English newspapers and magazines and the Internet, and you need to select and edit the articles from students.
error: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: There is no need to use a comma after the coordinating conjunction 〈and〉 to separate it from the following content 〈you need to...〉, therefore the extra punctuation is deleted to make the sentence concise.
error_sentence: If youhave some spareltimo and you are willing to use it to serve the students,of course the work vequires your English tvanslation and artare very good,and will operate the computer.
correct_sentence: If you have some spare time and you are willing to use it to serve the students, of course the work requires your English translation and art skills to be very good, and you must be able to operate the computer.
error: youhave some spareltimo
correction: you have some spare time
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, in 〈youhave〉, 〈you〉 and 〈have〉 are two separate words, and a space is missing in between; it needs to be split into 『you have』 to comply with word spacing rules; ② Spelling Error: Judging from the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express “spare time”, 〈spareltimo〉 is a misspelling of 『spare time』, and it needs to be corrected to the correct expression 『spare time』.
error_sentence: If youhave some spareltimo and you are willing to use it to serve the students,of course the work vequires your English tvanslation and artare very good,and will operate the computer.
correct_sentence: If you have some spare time and you are willing to use it to serve the students, of course the work requires your English translation and art skills to be very good, and you must be able to operate the computer.
error: vequires
correction: requires
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that the intention here is to express “requires”, therefore 〈vequires〉 is a misspelling of 『requires』, and it needs to be modified to 『requires』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: If youhave some spareltimo and you are willing to use it to serve the students,of course the work vequires your English tvanslation and artare very good,and will operate the computer.
correct_sentence: If you have some spare time and you are willing to use it to serve the students, of course the work requires your English translation and art skills to be very good, and you must be able to operate the computer.
error: tvanslation and artare
correction: translation and art skills to be
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that the intention here is to express “translation”, therefore 〈tvanslation〉 is a misspelling of 『translation』, and it needs to be modified to 『translation』 to make the sentence meaning smooth; ② Noun Error: After 〈art〉, 『skills』 needs to be added to clarify the meaning, therefore it is modified to 『art skills』 to make the sentence structure complete; ③ Sentence Structure Error: According to the English fixed phrase “require sb. to do sth.”, the structure should be “require sb. to do sth.”; here the infinitive structure “to do” is missing, and the original sentence should be a predicative structure, therefore the infinitive structure 『to be』 needs to be added here to make the sentence structure complete.
error_sentence: If youhave some spareltimo and you are willing to use it to serve the students,of course the work vequires your English tvanslation and artare very good,and will operate the computer.
correct_sentence: If you have some spare time and you are willing to use it to serve the students, of course the work requires your English translation and art skills to be very good, and you must be able to operate the computer.
error: will
correction: you must be able to
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: 〈will〉 does not have a clear subject and complete action, the sentence is incomplete; it should be changed to 『you must be able to』 to express the requirement for ability.