Writing prompt: My New Teachers

Student essay:
My new English teacher is a very kind person. She's gentle and beautiful. She always smile to us and never get angry with us. Her classes are so interesting and lively that I enjoy them very much. My homework always be correct carefully. She tried many ways to improve our English basic skills. For example, she allow us to memorize the lessons in 'New Concept English'. She also exercise our speaking in the class, tell us how to pronounce purely. Every time I made mistakes in homework or papers, she always point out them and allow me to correct. If I have any problems in study, she will teach me patiently. Her attitude in teaching was arousing my interests in English. We all like her very much.

Corrected essay:
My new English teacher is a very kind person. She's gentle and beautiful. She always smiles to us and never gets angry with us. Her classes are so interesting and lively that I enjoy them very much. My homework is always corrected carefully. She tries many ways to improve our English basic skills. For example, she allows us to memorize the lessons in "New Concept English". She also exercises our speaking in the class and tells us how to pronounce purely. Every time I make mistakes in homework or papers, she always points out them and allows me to correct them. If I have any problems in study, she teaches me patiently. Her attitude in teaching is arousing my interest in English. We all like her very much.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: She always smile to us and never get angry with us.
correct_sentence: She always smiles to us and never gets angry with us.
error: smile
correction: smiles
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, and in the simple present tense, the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, 〈smile〉 is not in the third-person singular form; change 〈smile〉 to 『smiles』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: She always smile to us and never get angry with us.
correct_sentence: She always smiles to us and never gets angry with us.
error: get
correction: gets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, and in the simple present tense, the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. Because the subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, 〈get〉 is not in the third-person singular form; 〈get〉 should be changed to 『gets』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: My homework always be correct carefully.
correct_sentence: My homework is always corrected carefully.
error: always be correct
correction: is always corrected
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Verb Voice Error: According to English grammar rules, the sentence expresses 'homework is corrected', requiring the passive voice (be + past participle). The original phrase 〈be correct〉 does not use the correct passive voice form; it is changed to 『is corrected』 to meet passive voice requirements. ② Auxiliary Error and Verb Tense Error: The subject 〈My homework〉 is third-person singular; in the simple present passive voice, the auxiliary verb should be 〈is〉. The original 〈be〉 is not correctly conjugated; change 〈always be correct〉 to 『is always corrected』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: She tried many ways to improve our English basic skills.
correct_sentence: She tries many ways to improve our English basic skills.
error: tried
correction: tries
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the entire passage mainly uses the simple present tense to describe current actions. In the original sentence, the verb 〈tried〉 uses the past tense, which does not conform to the contextual tense requirement; therefore, change 〈tried〉 to 『tries』 to maintain tense consistency.
error_sentence: For example, she allow us to memorize the lessons in 'New Concept English'.
correct_sentence: For example, she allows us to memorize the lessons in "New Concept English".
error: allow
correction: allows
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈she〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, 〈allow〉 does not agree with the subject; change 〈allow〉 to 『allows』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: For example, she allow us to memorize the lessons in 'New Concept English'.
correct_sentence: For example, she allows us to memorize the lessons in "New Concept English".
error: '
correction: "
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, English book titles should use double quotation marks 〈"..."〉 instead of single quotation marks. In the original sentence, the single quotation marks in 〈'New Concept English'〉 are used incorrectly; 〈'〉 should be changed to 『"』, so the book title is correctly represented as 『"New Concept English"』.
error_sentence: For example, she allow us to memorize the lessons in 'New Concept English'.
correct_sentence: For example, she allows us to memorize the lessons in "New Concept English".
error: '
correction: "
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, English book titles should use double quotation marks 〈"..."〉 instead of single quotation marks. In the original sentence, the single quotation marks in 〈'New Concept English'〉 are used incorrectly; 〈'〉 should be changed to 『"』, so the book title is correctly represented as 『"New Concept English"』.
error_sentence: She also exercise our speaking in the class, tell us how to pronounce purely.
correct_sentence: She also exercises our speaking in the class and tells us how to pronounce purely.
error: exercise
correction: exercises
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, 〈exercise〉 is not in the correct form; change 〈exercise〉 to 『exercises』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: She also exercise our speaking in the class, tell us how to pronounce purely.
correct_sentence: She also exercises our speaking in the class and tells us how to pronounce purely.
error: , tell
correction: and tells
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, two independent clauses connected by a comma need a conjunction for linkage. In the original sentence, the two actions 〈exercise〉 and 〈tell〉 need a conjunction to maintain coherence; therefore, add 『and』. ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈She〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, 〈tell〉 does not agree with the subject; it needs to be changed to 『tells』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: Every time I made mistakes in homework or papers, she always point out them and allow me to correct.
correct_sentence: Every time I make mistakes in homework or papers, she always points out them and allows me to correct them.
error: made
correction: make
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, the time adverbial 〈Every time〉 indicates a recurring action, requiring the simple present tense. In the original sentence, 〈made〉 is in the past tense, which does not meet the tense requirement; change 〈made〉 to 『make』.
error_sentence: Every time I made mistakes in homework or papers, she always point out them and allow me to correct.
correct_sentence: Every time I make mistakes in homework or papers, she always points out them and allows me to correct them.
error: point
correction: points
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈she〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, 〈point〉 is not in the correct form; change 〈point〉 to 『points』.
error_sentence: Every time I made mistakes in homework or papers, she always point out them and allow me to correct.
correct_sentence: Every time I make mistakes in homework or papers, she always points out them and allows me to correct them.
error: allow
correction: allows
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈she〉 is third-person singular, and the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, 〈allow〉 is not in the correct form; 〈allow〉 needs to be changed to 『allows』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: Every time I made mistakes in homework or papers, she always point out them and allow me to correct.
correct_sentence: Every time I make mistakes in homework or papers, she always points out them and allows me to correct them.
correction: them
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈correct〉 needs an object to clarify the action's target. The original sentence lacks a pronoun at the end; therefore, add 『them』 to refer to the preceding 〈mistakes〉, making the meaning complete.
error_sentence: If I have any problems in study, she will teach me patiently.
correct_sentence: If I have any problems in study, she teaches me patiently.
error: will teach
correction: teaches
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the entire passage mainly uses the simple present tense. In a conditional adverbial clause, the main clause needs to use the simple present tense to express a habitual action. In the original sentence, 〈will teach〉 uses the simple future tense, which is inconsistent with the contextual tense; therefore, change 〈will teach〉 to 『teaches』 to maintain tense consistency.
error_sentence: Her attitude in teaching was arousing my interests in English.
correct_sentence: Her attitude in teaching is arousing my interest in English.
error: was
correction: is
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the passage mainly uses the simple present tense to describe the current state. In the original sentence, 〈was〉 is in the past tense, which does not meet the tense requirement; change 〈was〉 to 『is』 to maintain tense consistency.
error_sentence: Her attitude in teaching was arousing my interests in English.
correct_sentence: Her attitude in teaching is arousing my interest in English.
error: interests
correction: interest
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, when 〈interest〉 means 'curiosity/concern', it is an uncountable noun. In the original sentence, 〈interests〉 is incorrectly used in the plural form; change 〈interests〉 to 『interest』 to comply with grammatical rules.