Writing prompt: School Studying Is More Important

Student essay:
As all of us have known,details aren't only the easiest things that we may ignore,but also the most pivotal ones in our daily life.
Some people may think that it mikes no difference to their life if they think little of being more careful about details. If you think so,stop it! Throw it away now because it's totally wrong!
Didn't you have a case where you should have to get a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you get the wrong number of the answer? I bet you did and you must be very upset then.
But have you thought about why? How could you be defeated by your negligence? The answer is that you pay almost no attention to details! If you had checked up your answers before handed them in,you will get the grade you should get! So you see,how details influence our study! As the famous saying goes:Details determine success or failure.

Corrected essay:
As all of us have known, details aren't only the easiest things that we may ignore, but also the most pivotal ones in our daily life.
Some people may think that it makes no difference to their life if they think little of being more careful about details. If you think so, stop it! Throw it away now because it's totally wrong!
Didn't you have a situation where you should have gotten a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you mistook the number of the answers? I bet you did and you must have been very upset then.
But have you thought about why? How could you be defeated by your negligence? The answer is that you pay almost no attention to details! If you had checked your answers before handing them in, you would have gotten the grade you should get! So you see, how details influence our study! As the famous saying goes, details determine success or failure.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Some people may think that it mikes no difference to their life if they think little of being more careful about details.
correct_sentence: Some people may think that it makes no difference to their life if they think little of being more careful about details.
error: mikes
correction: makes
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it intends to express 'cause', so 〈mikes〉 is a misspelling of 『makes』, and it needs to be changed to 『makes』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Didn't you have a case where you should have to get a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you get the wrong number of the answer?
correct_sentence: Didn't you have a situation where you should have gotten a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you mistook the number of the answers?
error: case
correction: situation
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Error: According to the context, it means 'scene' here. 〈case〉 in the original sentence is not accurate enough, which is a noun error. Therefore, 〈case〉 needs to be changed to 『situation』 to represent a specific context or situation, to fit the context.
error_sentence: Didn't you have a case where you should have to get a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you get the wrong number of the answer?
correct_sentence: Didn't you have a situation where you should have gotten a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you mistook the number of the answers?
error: to get
correction: gotten
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, this expresses a past hypothesis that should have been completed but was not realized, so the perfect tense should be used. In the original sentence, 〈to get〉 does not conform to the tense, so 〈to get〉 needs to be changed to the perfect tense 『gotten』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: Didn't you have a case where you should have to get a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you get the wrong number of the answer?
correct_sentence: Didn't you have a situation where you should have gotten a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you mistook the number of the answers?
error: get the wrong
correction: mistook the
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, the sentence here means 'mistakenly wrote the answer number'. In the original sentence, 〈get the wrong number〉 means 'got the wrong number', which does not fit the meaning. Therefore, 〈get the wrong number〉 needs to be changed to 『mistook the number』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: Didn't you have a case where you should have to get a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you get the wrong number of the answer?
correct_sentence: Didn't you have a situation where you should have gotten a wonderful grade in the final exam but you found that you did not even pass the exam in the end just because you mistook the number of the answers?
error: answer
correction: answers
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈answer〉 in the original sentence should use the plural form 『answers』 to be consistent with 'mistakes involving multiple answer numbers' in the context. Therefore, 〈answer〉 should be changed to 『answers』 to comply with English grammar rules.
error_sentence: I bet you did and you must be very upset then.

correct_sentence: I bet you did and you must have been very upset then.

error: be
correction: have been
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, this expresses a past hypothesis that should have been completed but was not realized, so the perfect tense should be used. In the original sentence, 〈be〉 does not conform to the tense, so 〈be〉 needs to be changed to the perfect tense 『have been』 to fit the context.
error_sentence: If you had checked up your answers before handed them in,you will get the grade you should get!
correct_sentence: If you had checked your answers before handing them in, you would have gotten the grade you should get!
error: up
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression habits, the word 〈checked〉 itself already contains the meaning of 'to check', so 〈up〉 is redundant in this context. Therefore, the redundant 〈up〉 needs to be deleted to make the sentence more concise and accurate.
error_sentence: If you had checked up your answers before handed them in,you will get the grade you should get!
correct_sentence: If you had checked your answers before handing them in, you would have gotten the grade you should get!
error: handed
correction: handing
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈before〉 should be followed by a gerund form to indicate the sequence of actions. Therefore, in the original sentence, 〈handed〉 needs to be changed to 『handing』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: If you had checked up your answers before handed them in,you will get the grade you should get!
correct_sentence: If you had checked your answers before handing them in, you would have gotten the grade you should get!
error: will get
correction: would have gotten
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English grammar rules, in a virtual conditional sentence, the main clause needs to use the 'would have + past participle' structure, and the subordinate clause needs to use the past perfect tense. The tense of 〈will get〉 in the original sentence is incorrect, so 〈will get〉 needs to be changed to 『would have gotten』 to comply with grammar.
error_sentence: As the famous saying goes:Details determine success or failure.
correct_sentence: As the famous saying goes, details determine success or failure.
error: :Details
correction: , details
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English expression habits, the introductory phrase before a direct quotation should be connected with a comma, not a colon. Therefore, 〈:Details〉 in the original sentence needs to be changed to 『, details』 to conform to idiomatic expression and be coherent with the subsequent content.