Writing prompt: Honesty is the Best Policy

Student essay:
As we can see in the picture,a butcher has sold meat to a woman. Both of them felt happy,because the man sold out the meat with lots of water,while the woman used a false 100-yuan note to buy the meat.
It is vividly shown that dishonest people never get a good result. Trick other people to create some good things for oneself are selfish and can not forgive. People who are dishonest always think about self. Noboby wants to become friend with him.Lies never can change the truth. Finaily dishonest people will be punished after the lies.
In my life, I learn to know that honest is the best way to solve the problems. Once lies began, the more lies will follow. SO,it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy'.

Corrected essay:
As we can see in the picture, a butcher has sold meat to a woman. Both of them felt happy, because the man sold the meat with lots of water, while the woman used a false 100-yuan note to buy the meat.
It is vividly shown that dishonest people never get a good result. Tricking other people to create some good things for oneself is selfish and can not be forgiven. People who are dishonest always think about themselves. Nobody wants to become friends with them. Lies can never change the truth. Finally dishonest people will be punished for their lies.
In my life, I learn that honesty is the best way to solve problems. Once lies begin, more lies will follow. So, it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy.'

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Both of them felt happy,because the man sold out the meat with lots of water,while the woman used a false 100-yuan note to buy the meat.

correct_sentence: Both of them felt happy, because the man sold the meat with lots of water, while the woman used a false 100-yuan note to buy the meat.

error: out
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy: The original phrase 〈sold out〉 in context means 'selling water-injected meat' rather than 'selling out completely'. Based on the principle of semantic accuracy, the redundant adverb 〈out〉 is deleted, retaining the core verb 〈sold〉, to accurately express the meaning 『sold watered meat』.
error_sentence: Trick other people to create some good things for oneself are selfish and can not forgive.
correct_sentence: Tricking other people to create some good things for oneself is selfish and can not be forgiven.
error: Trick
correction: Tricking
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: The beginning of the sentence requires a gerund form to express an abstract action. According to English grammar rules, the noun 〈Trick〉 is changed to the gerund 『Tricking』 to form a complete subject 『Tricking other people』, which meets the sentence structure requirements.
error_sentence: Trick other people to create some good things for oneself are selfish and can not forgive.
correct_sentence: Tricking other people to create some good things for oneself is selfish and can not be forgiven.
error: are
correction: is
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The gerund phrase 『Tricking other people』 as the subject is treated as singular. According to the principle of subject-verb agreement, the plural verb 〈are〉 is changed to the singular form 『is』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: Trick other people to create some good things for oneself are selfish and can not forgive.
correct_sentence: Tricking other people to create some good things for oneself is selfish and can not be forgiven.
error: forgive
correction: be forgiven
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Voice Error: The passive voice structure is incomplete. According to English passive voice construction rules, the auxiliary verb 『be』 is added and 〈forgive〉 is changed to the past participle 『forgiven』, forming 『cannot be forgiven』 to express 'to be forgiven', in order to meet the contextual requirement.
error_sentence: People who are dishonest always think about self. Noboby wants to become friend with him.
correct_sentence: People who are dishonest always think about themselves. Nobody wants to become friends with them.
error: self. Noboby
correction: themselves. Nobody
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: The reflexive pronoun needs to be consistent with the plural subject 〈People〉. According to the principle of pronoun consistency, the singular reflexive pronoun 〈self〉 is changed to the plural form 『themselves』; ② Spelling Error: The indefinite pronoun 〈Noboby〉 has a letter order error. According to correct spelling, it is changed to the indefinite pronoun 『Nobody』, expressing the meaning 'no one'.
error_sentence: Noboby wants to become friend with him.
correct_sentence: Nobody wants to become friends with them.
error: friend with him
correction: friends with them
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: According to the semantic requirement of 'staying away from dishonest people' in the context, 〈friend〉 as a countable noun needs to use the plural form to express a general reference. Therefore, the singular noun 〈friend〉 is changed to the plural form 『friends』, forming the correct expression 『keep away from dishonest friends』; ② Pronoun Error: The subject 〈dishonest people〉 is plural, and subsequent pronouns need to maintain number consistency. According to English pronoun consistency principles, the singular pronoun 〈him〉 is changed to the plural form 『them』 to make the reference clear.
error_sentence: Lies never can change the truth.
correct_sentence: Lies can never change the truth.
error: never can
correction: can never
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Order Error: The positions of the modal verb and adverb are reversed. According to English word order rules, 〈never can〉 is adjusted to 『can never』, so that the modal verb 『can』 comes first, to conform to idiomatic expression.
error_sentence: Finaily dishonest people will be punished after the lies.

correct_sentence: Finally dishonest people will be punished for their lies.

error: Finaily
correction: Finally
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: The adverb 〈Finaily〉 is misspelled. According to adverb formation rules, it is changed to the correct adverb form 『Finally』, expressing the meaning 'eventually'.
error_sentence: Finaily dishonest people will be punished after the lies.

correct_sentence: Finally dishonest people will be punished for their lies.

error: after the
correction: for their
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: 〈after〉 cannot accurately express the reason for punishment. According to English idiomatic expressions, the preposition 『for』 is used to form 『punished for their behavior』 to express the reason for punishment; ② Pronoun Error: The possessive pronoun needs to correspond with the plural noun 〈people〉. According to pronoun reference rules, the definite article 〈the〉 is changed to the possessive pronoun 『their』, forming the accurate reference 『their behavior』.
error_sentence: In my life, I learn to know that honest is the best way to solve the problems.
correct_sentence: In my life, I learn that honesty is the best way to solve problems.
error: to know that honest
correction: that honesty
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Redundancy: The phrase 〈learn to know〉 has semantic repetition. According to the principle of conciseness in English expression, the redundant part 〈to know〉 is deleted, and the core verb 『learn』 is used directly, forming the concise expression 『we learn』; ② PoS Confusion Error: The original sentence uses the adjective 〈honest〉 as the subject, which does not conform to grammatical rules. According to sentence component requirements, it is changed to the noun form 『honesty』 as the subject, making the sentence structure complete 『honesty is...』.
error_sentence: In my life, I learn to know that honest is the best way to solve the problems.
correct_sentence: In my life, I learn that honesty is the best way to solve problems.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: When 〈problems〉 is used as a generic plural noun, it does not require a definite article. According to English article usage rules, the superfluous 〈the〉 is deleted, and 『problems』 is used directly to indicate general problems.
error_sentence: Once lies began, the more lies will follow.
correct_sentence: Once lies begin, more lies will follow.
error: began, the
correction: begin,
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Verb Tense Error: The main clause uses the simple present tense, and the tense of the subordinate clause verb 〈began〉 is inconsistent. According to the principle of tense agreement, it is changed to the present tense 『begin』, forming a temporally unified structure 『Once lies begin』; ② Determiner Error: The definite article in the comparative structure 〈the more lies〉 is redundant. According to English comparative usage, 〈the〉 is deleted, and 『more lies』 is used directly to indicate an increasing degree.
error_sentence: SO,it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy'.
correct_sentence: So, it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy.'
error: SO
correction: So
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: The all-caps form of the conjunction 〈SO〉 does not conform to writing conventions. According to English capitalization rules, it is changed to 『So』 with an initial capital letter to comply with standard writing conventions.
error_sentence: SO,it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy'.
correct_sentence: So, it is important to remember 'Honesty is the Best Policy.'
error: '.
correction: .'
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The position of the period inside English quotation marks is incorrect. According to English punctuation rules, 〈Policy'.〉, which is placed outside the quotation marks, is adjusted to 『Policy.'』 inside the quotation marks, to conform to English punctuation standards.