Writing prompt: My Life in the Future

Student essay:
Toay evenyboby should have themselfs wonderfu life . Now l am a student .But l belive l can go to the Univercity in the future. And in the ten years l have a l likes job . That is must l am interested in job .Then in fifty years l hope l can have a family .Must have a child and happylies family.I thank my life is very wonderful in the future.My deam is l can have a big car and with my ded mom tavel around the world in the future.I belive l can more happer.

Corrected essay:
Today everybody should have a wonderful life. Now I am a student. But I believe I can go to the university in the future. And in ten years I will have a job I like. It must be a job I am interested in. Then in fifty years I hope I can have a family. I must have a child and a happy family. I think my life will be very wonderful in the future. My dream is to have a big car and travel around the world with my dad and mom in the future. I believe I can be happier.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Toay evenyboby should have themselfs wonderfu life .
correct_sentence: Today everybody should have a wonderful life.
error: Toay evenyboby
correction: Today everybody
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “Today, everybody”, so 〈Toay evenyboby〉 is a misspelling of 『Today everybody』, and 〈Toay evenyboby〉 needs to be changed to 『Today everybody』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: Toay evenyboby should have themselfs wonderfu life .
correct_sentence: Today everybody should have a wonderful life.
error: themselfs wonderfu
correction: a wonderful
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to the context, this place means “a wonderful life”, the original sentence lacks an article, so 〈themselfs〉 should be replaced with the indefinite article 『a』 to modify the subsequent adjective to conform to the semantics; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “wonderful”, so 〈wonderfu〉 is a misspelling of 『wonderful』, and 〈wonderfu〉 needs to be changed to 『wonderful』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: Now l am a student .But l belive l can go to the Univercity in the future.
correct_sentence: Now I am a student.
error: l
correction: I
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “I”, so 〈l〉 is a misspelling of 『I』, and 〈l〉 needs to be changed to 『I』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: Now l am a student .But l belive l can go to the Univercity in the future.
correct_sentence: Now I am a student. But I believe I can go to the university in the future.
error: .But l belive l
correction: . But I believe I
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words, the original sentence 〈.But〉 lacks a space, so 〈.But〉 needs to be changed to 『. But』 to conform to writing conventions; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “I believe I”, so 〈l belive l〉 is a misspelling of 『I believe I』, and 〈l belive l〉 needs to be changed to 『I believe I』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: Now l am a student .But l belive l can go to the Univercity in the future.
correct_sentence: But I believe I can go to the university in the future.
error: Univercity
correction: university
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “university”, so 〈Univercity〉 is a misspelling of 『university』, and 〈Univercity〉 needs to be changed to 『university』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: And in the ten years l have a l likes job .
correct_sentence: And in ten years I will have a job I like.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English expression habits, the definite article 〈the〉 indicates specificity, the original sentence 〈in the ten years〉 does not need an article, this place indicates a general reference, so 〈in the ten years〉 needs to be changed to 『in ten years』 to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: And in the ten years l have a l likes job .
correct_sentence: And in ten years I will have a job I like.
error: l
correction: I will
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Case Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “I”, so 〈l〉 is a misspelling of 『I』, and 〈l〉 needs to be changed to 『I』 to make the sentence meaning smooth; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the future tense should be used here, while in the original sentence 〈have〉 is in the simple present tense, so 〈have〉 needs to be changed to the future tense 『will have』 to conform to the context.
error_sentence: And in the ten years l have a l likes job . That is must l am interested in job .Then
correct_sentence: And in ten years I will have a job I like. It must be a job I am interested in.
error: l likes job . That is must l
correction: job I like. It must be a job I
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Order Error: According to the context, this place means “the job I like”, the original sentence 〈l likes job〉 should be adjusted to 『job I like』 to conform to English expression habits; ② Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, this place means “this job must be one I like”, the original sentence 〈That is must l〉 has a chaotic structure, so 〈That is must l〉 needs to be changed to 『It must be a job I』 to correctly express the sentence meaning.
error_sentence: That is must l am interested in job .Then
correct_sentence: It must be a job I am interested in. Then in fifty years I hope I can have a family.
error: job .Then
correction: . Then
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words, the original sentence 〈.Then〉 lacks a space, so 〈.Then〉 needs to be changed to 『. Then』 to conform to writing conventions.
error_sentence: in fifty years l hope l can have a family
correct_sentence: Then in fifty years I hope I can have a family.
error: l hope l
correction: I hope I
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “I hope I”, so 〈l hope l〉 is a misspelling of 『I hope I』, and 〈l hope l〉 needs to be changed to 『I hope I』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: .Must have a child and happylies family.
correct_sentence: Then in fifty years I hope I can have a family. I must have a child and a happy family.
error: .Must
correction: . I must
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there needs to be a space between punctuation and words, the original sentence 〈.Must〉 lacks a space, so 〈.Must〉 needs to be changed to 『. I must』 to conform to writing conventions; ② Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, this place means “I must”, the original sentence 〈.Must have a child and happylies family.〉 lacks a subject, so 〈.Must〉 needs to be changed to 『. I must』 to express a complete sentence structure.
error_sentence: .Must have a child and happylies family.
correct_sentence: I must have a child and a happy family.
error: happylies
correction: a happy
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to the context, this place means “a happy family”, the original sentence lacks an article, so the indefinite article 『a』 needs to be added to modify the subsequent adjective to conform to the semantics; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “happy”, so 〈happylies〉 is a misspelling of 『happy』, and 〈happylies〉 needs to be changed to 『happy』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: I thank my life is very wonderful in the future.
correct_sentence: I think my life will be very wonderful in the future.
error: thank
correction: think
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “think”, so 〈thank〉 is a misspelling of 『think』, and 〈thank〉 needs to be changed to 『think』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: I thank my life is very wonderful in the future.
correct_sentence: I think my life will be very wonderful in the future.
error: is
correction: will be
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the context, the sentence should use the simple future tense, while in the original sentence 〈is〉 is in the simple present tense, so 〈is〉 needs to be changed to the simple future tense 『will be』 to conform to the context.
error_sentence: My deam is l can have a big car and with my ded mom tavel around the world in the future.
correct_sentence: My dream is to have a big car and travel around the world with my dad and mom in the future.
error: deam is l can
correction: dream is to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “dream”, so 〈deam〉 is a misspelling of 『dream』, and 〈deam〉 needs to be changed to 『dream』 to make the sentence meaning smooth; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English expression habits, when expressing a goal, the infinitive 『to have』 should be used, so 〈l can have〉 needs to be changed to 『to have』 to conform to expression habits.
error_sentence: My deam is l can have a big car and with my ded mom tavel around the world in the future.
correct_sentence: My dream is to have a big car and travel around the world with my dad and mom in the future.
error: with my ded mom tavel
correction: travel
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Order Error: According to English expression habits, the 〈with〉 structure needs to be placed later, so 〈with my ded mom tavel〉 is changed to 『travel around the world with my dad and mom』 to conform to expression habits; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “travel”, so 〈tavel〉 is a misspelling of 『travel』, and 〈tavel〉 needs to be changed to 『travel』 to make the sentence meaning smooth.
error_sentence: My deam is l can have a big car and with my ded mom tavel around the world in the future.
correct_sentence: My dream is to have a big car and travel around the world with my dad and mom in the future.
correction: with my dad and mom
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Order Error: According to English expression habits, the 〈with〉 structure needs to be placed later, so 〈with my ded mom tavel〉 is changed to 『travel around the world with my dad and mom』 to conform to expression habits.
error_sentence: I belive l can more happer.
correct_sentence: I believe I can be happier.
error: belive l can more happer
correction: believe I can be happier
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is known that this place wants to express “believe”, so 〈belive〉 is a misspelling of 『believe』, and 〈belive〉 needs to be changed to 『believe』 to make the sentence meaning smooth; ② Adjective Error: According to English grammar rules, a word that is already a comparative does not need 〈more〉; in the original sentence, 〈happier〉 is already a comparative, so 〈more happier〉 creates a double comparative error. Therefore, 〈more〉 is changed to 『be』 to conform to the rule of single change for comparative adjectives.