Writing prompt: My Dreaming Destination in Europe

Student essay:
The European country I most want to visit is Switzerland.So I will introduce Switzerland to you.
It is located in the middle of European .Its area is 41,000 square kilometers and it has a population of 7.5 million.Berne is its capital city.And Geneva which is famous in the world is a city of Switzerland,too.
Swizerland has some famous neighbouring countries.They are Asutria,France,Italia and Germany.And it's one of reasons of its rich.
Swizerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.what is more,Swizerland is called "the garden of the world"because of its beautiful scenery.
Swizerland is also known for its industry.As far as I know,the developed industry of watches,chemistry and food is really famous.
In a word,Swizerland is a very pretty and rich country.I really love it and I want to travel to there very much.

Corrected essay:
The European country I most want to visit is Switzerland. So I will introduce Switzerland to you.
It is located in the middle of Europe. Its area is 41,000 square kilometers and it has a population of 7.5 million. Berne is its capital city. And Geneva, which is famous in the world, is a city in Switzerland, too.
Switzerland has some famous neighbouring countries. They are Austria, France, Italy, and Germany. And it's one of the reasons for its wealth.
Switzerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there. What is more, Switzerland is called "the garden of the world" because of its beautiful scenery.
Switzerland is also known for its industry. As far as I know, the developed industries of watches, chemistry, and food are really famous.
In a word, Switzerland is a very beautiful and rich country. I really love it and I want to travel there very much.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: It is located in the middle of European .Its area is 41,000 square kilometers and it has a population of 7.5 million.
correct_sentence: It is located in the middle of Europe. Its area is 41,000 square kilometers and it has a population of 7.5 million.
error: European .Its
correction: Europe. Its
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① PoS Confusion: 〈European〉 is an adjective; a noun form is needed here to represent the country name, so 〈European〉 is changed to 『Europe』; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there should be no space between the last word of a sentence and the period at the end of it; therefore, 〈.Its〉 is changed to 『. Its』 to ensure correct separation between sentences.
error_sentence: And Geneva which is famous in the world is a city of Switzerland,too.

correct_sentence: And Geneva, which is famous in the world, is a city in Switzerland, too.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the non-restrictive relative clause 〈which is famous in the world〉 needs to be set off by commas before and after; therefore, a comma 『,』 is added after 〈Geneva〉 to make the sentence structure clear.
error_sentence: And Geneva which is famous in the world is a city of Switzerland,too.

correct_sentence: And Geneva, which is famous in the world, is a city in Switzerland, too.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the non-restrictive relative clause 〈which is famous in the world〉 needs to be set off by commas before and after; therefore, a comma 『,』 is added after 〈world〉 to make the sentence structure clear.
error_sentence: And Geneva which is famous in the world is a city of Switzerland,too.

correct_sentence: And Geneva, which is famous in the world, is a city in Switzerland, too.

error: of
correction: in
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: When indicating that a city belongs to a country, the preposition 〈in〉 should be used; therefore, 『of』 is changed to 『in』 to conform to common English prepositional usage.
error_sentence: Swizerland has some famous neighbouring countries.
correct_sentence: Switzerland has some famous neighbouring countries.
error: Swizerland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "Switzerland" is intended here; therefore, 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』 and needs to be changed to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: They are Asutria,France,Italia and Germany.
correct_sentence: They are Austria, France, Italy, and Germany.
error: Asutria
correction: Austria
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "Austria" is intended here; therefore, 〈Asutria〉 is a misspelling of 『Austria』 and needs to be changed to 『Austria』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: They are Asutria,France,Italia and Germany.
correct_sentence: They are Austria, France, Italy, and Germany.
error: Italia
correction: Italy,
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: 〈Italia〉 is the Italian name; the English form is 『Italy』, so 〈Italia〉 is changed to 『Italy』 to conform to standard usage.
error_sentence: And it's one of reasons of its rich.

correct_sentence: And it's one of the reasons for its wealth.

error: reasons of its rich
correction: the reasons for its wealth
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: When expressing "one of...", 〈one of〉 must be followed by the definite article 『the』; therefore, 『the』 needs to be added before 〈reasons〉 to comply with grammatical rules; ② Preposition Error: The fixed expression for indicating reasons should be 『reasons for』; therefore, 〈of〉 needs to be changed to 『for』 to conform to idiomatic expression; ③ PoS Confusion: 〈its〉 is a possessive pronoun used to modify a noun, while 〈rich〉 is an adjective; therefore, 〈rich〉 is changed to the noun 『wealth』 to fit the sentence structure.
error_sentence: Swizerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.what is more,Swizerland is called "the garden of the world"because of its beautiful scenery.

correct_sentence: Switzerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.
error: Swizerland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "Switzerland" is intended here; therefore, 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』 and needs to be changed to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Swizerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.what is more,Swizerland is called "the garden of the world"because of its beautiful scenery.

correct_sentence: Switzerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there. What is more, Switzerland is called "the garden of the world" because of its beautiful scenery.

error: there.what
correction: there. What
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, punctuation at the end of a sentence should be followed by a space before the first word of the next sentence; therefore, a space is added after 〈there.〉 to conform to the convention; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized; therefore, 〈what〉 needs to be changed to 『What』 to conform to the convention.
error_sentence: Swizerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.what is more,Swizerland is called "the garden of the world"because of its beautiful scenery.

correct_sentence: What is more, Switzerland is called "the garden of the world" because of its beautiful scenery.

error: Swizerland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "Switzerland" is intended here; therefore, 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』 and needs to be changed to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Swizerland's scenery is pretty beautiful and attracts a lot of tourists to visit there.what is more,Swizerland is called "the garden of the world"because of its beautiful scenery.

correct_sentence: What is more, Switzerland is called "the garden of the world" because of its beautiful scenery.

error: world"because
correction: world" because
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space needs to be added between the quotation mark and the conjunction 〈because〉; therefore, 〈world"because〉 is changed to 『world" because』 to ensure correct separation between punctuation and words.
error_sentence: Swizerland is also known for its industry.
correct_sentence: Switzerland is also known for its industry.
error: Swizerland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "Switzerland" is intended here; therefore, 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』 and needs to be changed to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: As far as I know,the developed industry of watches,chemistry and food is really famous.

correct_sentence: As far as I know, the developed industries of watches, chemistry, and food are really famous.

error: industry
correction: industries
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: The original sentence mentions multiple industrial sectors (watches, chemistry, food); the plural form 『industries』 is needed here, so 〈industry〉 needs to be changed to 『industries』 to match the description of multiple sectors.
error_sentence: As far as I know,the developed industry of watches,chemistry and food is really famous.

correct_sentence: As far as I know, the developed industries of watches, chemistry, and food are really famous.

correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: The introductory phrase 〈As far as I know〉 is usually separated from the main clause by a comma; therefore, a comma 『,』 is added after 〈know〉 to improve the readability and clarity of the sentence.
error_sentence: As far as I know,the developed industry of watches,chemistry and food is really famous.

correct_sentence: As far as I know, the developed industries of watches, chemistry, and food are really famous.

error: is
correction: are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject is the plural noun 『industries』, so the verb needs to be in the plural form 『are』; therefore, 〈is〉 needs to be changed to 『are』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: In a word,Swizerland is a very pretty and rich country.
correct_sentence: In a word, Switzerland is a very beautiful and rich country.
error: Swizerland
correction: Switzerland
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "Switzerland" is intended here; therefore, 〈Swizerland〉 is a misspelling of 『Switzerland』 and needs to be changed to 『Switzerland』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: In a word,Swizerland is a very pretty and rich country.
correct_sentence: In a word, Switzerland is a very beautiful and rich country.
error: pretty
correction: beautiful
error_type: Adjective Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Adjective Error: According to English expression habits, 〈pretty〉 is mostly used in colloquial speech to describe appearance; in a formal context describing a country, 『beautiful』 is more appropriate, so 〈pretty〉 is changed to 『beautiful』 to more accurately express the country's characteristics.
error_sentence: and I want to travel to there very much.
correct_sentence: I really love it, and I want to travel there very much.
error: to
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar rules, when 〈travel〉 is used as an intransitive verb, it can be directly followed by the adverb of place 〈there〉 without needing the preposition 〈to〉; therefore, 〈to〉 is deleted to comply with grammatical rules.