Writing prompt: We Are What We Read

Student essay:
Reading, on a person's growth and learning is very useful. The book contains many philosophy and life value. Is the so called: live and learn. Knowledge is to learn. A book, with our growth, broaden our horizons. A man without learning, witout reading, leave the books, more from knoeledge.
Whenever I read every book, I will feel knowledge bring me unlimited power. Every book is worth us to appreciate, it is worth us to explore, is worth us to learn more. Unconsciously, we grow in learning, we in the ocean of knoeledge is permeated with endless happiness.
I hope everyone like reading books.

Corrected essay:
Reading is very useful for a person's growth and learning. Books contain much philosophy and life value. As the saying goes: live and learn. Knowledge is acquired through learning. A book, with our growth, broadens our horizons. A man without learning and without reading is far from knowledge.
Whenever I read a book, I feel knowledge brings me unlimited power. Every book is worth appreciating, worth exploring, and worth learning from. Unconsciously, we grow in learning, and in the ocean of knowledge, we are permeated with endless happiness.
I hope everyone likes reading books.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Reading, on a person's growth and learning is very useful.
correct_sentence: Reading is very useful for a person's growth and learning.
error: , on
correction: is very useful for
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, the prepositional phrase 〈on a person's growth〉 is incorrectly used as the subject; therefore, it needs to be restructured as 『is very useful for』 to connect the subject and the adverbial of purpose, to fit the context; ② Preposition Error: According to English usage, the preposition indicating purpose should be 『for』 instead of 〈on〉; therefore, 〈on〉 needs to be changed to 『for』 to fit the meaning.
error_sentence: Reading, on a person's growth and learning is very useful. The book contains many philosophy and life value.
correct_sentence: Reading is very useful for a person's growth and learning. Books contain much philosophy and life value.
error: is very useful. The book contains many
correction: . Books contain much
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: According to the context, 〈The book contains〉 in the sentence should be in the plural form; therefore, 〈The book contains〉 needs to be changed to 『Books contain』 to match the meaning of the text; ② Determiner Error: According to English usage, 〈many〉 is used for countable nouns, while 〈philosophy〉 is an uncountable noun; therefore, 〈many〉 needs to be changed to 『much』 to conform to grammar and usage.
error_sentence: Is the so called: live and learn.
correct_sentence: As the saying goes: live and learn.
error: Is the so called
correction: As the saying goes
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, this means "as the saying goes"; the original sentence 〈Is the so called〉 lacks a clear expression of subject and predicate, resulting in an incomplete structure; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『As the saying goes』 to fit the meaning.
error_sentence: Knowledge is to learn.
correct_sentence: Knowledge is acquired through learning.
error: to learn
correction: acquired through learning
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the context, this means "knowledge is acquired through learning"; the original phrase 〈to learn〉 does not fit the context; therefore, 〈to learn〉 needs to be changed to 『acquired through learning』 to emphasize that knowledge is obtained through the learning process.
error_sentence: A book, with our growth, broaden our horizons.
correct_sentence: A book, with our growth, broadens our horizons.
error: broaden
correction: broadens
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈A book〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate 〈broaden〉 is in the third-person plural form; therefore, the verb 〈broaden〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『broadens』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: A man without learning, witout reading, leave the books, more from knoeledge.

correct_sentence: A man without learning and without reading is far from knowledge.

error: , witout reading, leave the books, more from knoeledge
correction: and without reading is far from knowledge
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, the original sentence 〈A man without learning, witout reading, leave the books, more from knoeledge〉 has confusing punctuation and unclear expression; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『and without reading is far from knowledge』 to concisely express "a man without learning and reading is far from knowledge"; ② Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "knowledge" is intended here; therefore, 〈knoeledge〉 is a misspelling of 『knowledge』, and 〈knoeledge〉 needs to be changed to 『knowledge』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Whenever I read every book, I will feel knowledge bring me unlimited power.
correct_sentence: Whenever I read a book, I feel knowledge brings me unlimited power.
error: every
correction: a
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to the context, a generic singular concept is needed here; therefore, 〈every〉 needs to be changed to 『a』 to express a generic meaning.
error_sentence: Whenever I read every book, I will feel knowledge bring me unlimited power.
correct_sentence: Whenever I read a book, I feel knowledge brings me unlimited power.
error: will
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to English usage, the adverbial clause 〈Whenever〉 indicates a habitual action and requires the simple present tense; therefore, 〈will feel〉 needs to be changed to 『feel』 to maintain tense consistency.
error_sentence: Whenever I read every book, I will feel knowledge bring me unlimited power.
correct_sentence: Whenever I read a book, I feel knowledge brings me unlimited power.
error: bring
correction: brings
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈knowledge〉 is third-person singular, and the original predicate 〈bring〉 is in the third-person plural form; therefore, the verb 〈bring〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『brings』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Every book is worth us to appreciate, it is worth us to explore, is worth us to learn more.
correct_sentence: Every book is worth appreciating, worth exploring, and worth learning from.
error: us to appreciate, it is worth us to explore, is worth us to learn more
correction: appreciating, worth exploring, and worth learning from
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English usage, 〈worth〉 should be followed by a gerund; the original phrase 〈us to appreciate〉 does not fit the meaning; therefore, 〈us to appreciate〉 needs to be changed to 『appreciating』 for idiomatic expression; ② Word Redundancy Error: According to the context, 〈it is〉 and 〈us〉 cause redundancy in the sentence, making it less fluent; therefore, the redundant 〈it is〉 and 〈us〉 need to be deleted to make the sentence concise; ③ Conjunction Error: According to the context, the original sentence lacks a conjunction; therefore, 『and』 needs to be used to connect 『worth exploring』 and 『worth learning from』 to enhance sentence fluency; ④ Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English usage, 〈worth〉 should be followed by a gerund; the original phrases 〈us to explore〉 and 〈us to learn more〉 do not fit the meaning; therefore, they need to be changed to 『exploring』 and 『learning from』 respectively, for idiomatic expression.
error_sentence: Unconsciously, we grow in learning, we in the ocean of knoeledge is permeated with endless happiness.

correct_sentence: Unconsciously, we grow in learning, and in the ocean of knowledge, we are permeated with endless happiness.

error: we
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, in the original sentence, 〈we grow in learning〉 and 〈we in the ocean of knoeledge〉 are parallel structures and require 『and』 for connection; therefore, in the original sentence, 〈we〉 needs to be changed to 『and』 to conform to English grammar rules.
error_sentence: Unconsciously, we grow in learning, we in the ocean of knoeledge is permeated with endless happiness.

correct_sentence: Unconsciously, we grow in learning, and in the ocean of knowledge, we are permeated with endless happiness.

error: knoeledge is
correction: knowledge, we are
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it is clear that "knowledge" is intended here; therefore, 〈knoeledge〉 is a misspelling of 『knowledge』, and 〈knoeledge〉 needs to be changed to 『knowledge』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Sentence Structure Error: According to the context, the original phrase 〈is permeated〉 needs a subject, causing a structural error; therefore, it needs to be changed to 『we are permeated』 to make the sentence structure complete.
error_sentence: I hope everyone like reading books.
correct_sentence: I hope everyone likes reading books.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈everyone〉 is singular, and the original predicate 〈like〉 is in the plural form; therefore, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.