Writing prompt: How Do You Study English?

Student essay:
To learn good English, i used the following ways:\nFirst to learn English well, you must know your grammar, only when you know how to use grammar, you can improve your English quickly. You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well

Corrected essay:
To learn good English, I use the following ways:
First, to learn English well, you must know your grammar. Only when you know how to use grammar can you improve your English quickly. You can also listen to English tapes or watch TV programs to improve your listening and also speaking.
Second, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people. They will not make fun of you. Take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.
Finally, prepare an English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.
All in all, if you study English hard, you can learn English well.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: To learn good English, i used the following ways:\nFirst to learn English well, you must know your grammar, only when you know how to use grammar, you can improve your English quickly.
correct_sentence: To learn good English, I use the following ways:
First, to learn English well, you must know your grammar.
error: i used
correction: I use
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English grammar rules, the first-person pronoun must always be capitalized; therefore, the lowercase form 〈i〉 is changed to the uppercase form 『I』 to conform to the standard writing conventions for English pronouns.; ② Verb Tense Error: Since the context describes "the methods I usually take," which falls under the scope of the simple present tense, 〈i used〉 incorrectly uses the past tense. Therefore, 〈i used〉 is changed to 『I use』 to maintain tense consistency and accurately express habitual actions.
error_sentence: To learn good English, i used the following ways:\nFirst to learn English well, you must know your grammar, only when you know how to use grammar, you can improve your English quickly.
correct_sentence: To learn good English, I use the following ways:
First, to learn English well, you must know your grammar.
error: ways:\nFirst
correction: ways:
First,
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Format Error: In the original text 〈ways:\nFirst〉, the newline character does not correctly achieve paragraph separation, instead affecting reading fluency. This newline character should be deleted, and a blank line should be used after 〈ways:〉 to make the structural hierarchy clearer.; ② Punctuation Error: When listing items, the ordinal number 〈First〉 should be followed by a comma to clearly delineate itemized narration. The original text 〈ways:\nFirst〉 lacks a comma, so a comma is added, changing it to 『First,』 to make the sentence structure conform to English listing conventions.
error_sentence: To learn good English, i used the following ways:\nFirst to learn English well, you must know your grammar, only when you know how to use grammar, you can improve your English quickly.
correct_sentence: To learn good English, I use the following ways:
First, to learn English well, you must know your grammar. Only when you know how to use grammar can you improve your English quickly.
error: , only
correction: . Only
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: In the original text 〈…grammar, only…〉, two independent clauses are connected only by a comma, constituting a grammatical error. It should be changed to a period for separation, correcting 〈, only〉 to 『. Only』, to make the sentence structure correct and also strengthen the transitional tone.; ② Case Error: The first word of a sentence must be capitalized; therefore, 〈, only〉 is changed to 『. Only』 to ensure the initial letter is capitalized, conforming to English capitalization rules for sentence beginnings.
error_sentence: To learn good English, i used the following ways:\nFirst to learn English well, you must know your grammar, only when you know how to use grammar, you can improve your English quickly.
correct_sentence: Only when you know how to use grammar can you improve your English quickly.
error: , you can
correction: can you
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: In 〈only when you know how to use grammar, you can〉, a comma is incorrectly inserted between the conditional adverbial clause and the main clause, affecting sentence fluency. The comma should be deleted and changed to a natural connection 『only when you know how to use grammar you can』, making the meaning coherent.; ② Word Order Error: When "Only when + clause" is at the beginning of a sentence, the main clause requires partial inversion (auxiliary verb comes first). The original sentence 〈, you can〉 is not inverted, violating grammatical rules; it should be changed to 『can you』, forming the correct inverted structure 『Only when…can you…』.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch TV programs to improve your listening and also speaking.

error: Tv
correction: TV
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: 〈Tv〉 is an abbreviation for “television,” but English acronyms should be fully capitalized. Therefore, it is corrected to the standard form 『TV』 to avoid reducing the formality of the text and to conform to English writing conventions.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch TV programs to improve your listening and also speaking.
 Second, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people.
error: speaking.\nSecond
correction: speaking.
Second
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Format Error: The newline format in the original text 〈speaking.\nSecond〉 is non-standard and fails to correctly achieve paragraph separation. The invalid newline character should be deleted, and a blank line should be used at the end of the preceding sentence to make the structural hierarchy clearer, conforming to English writing conventions.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: Second, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people. They will not make fun of you.
error: , they
correction: . They
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: In the original text 〈…people, they will…〉, two independent main clauses are connected only by a comma, constituting a grammatical error. It should be changed to a period for separation, correcting 〈, they〉 to 『. They』, to make the sentence structure correct and improve readability.; ② Case Error: The first word of a sentence must be capitalized; therefore, 〈, they〉 is changed to 『. They』 to ensure the initial letter is capitalized, conforming to English capitalization rules for sentence beginnings.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: They will not make fun of you. Take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.

error: , take
correction: . Take
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: The independent main clauses 〈…you, take…〉 are connected only by a comma, violating English sentence connection rules. It should be changed to a period for separation, correcting 〈, take〉 to 『. Take』, to make the sentence structure correct and avoid ambiguity.; ② Case Error: The first word of a sentence must be capitalized; therefore, 〈, take〉 is changed to 『. Take』 to ensure the initial letter is capitalized, conforming to English capitalization rules for sentence beginnings.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: Take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.
 Finally, prepare an English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.

error: foreigners.\nFinally
correction: foreigners.
Finally
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Format Error: The newline character in the original text 〈foreigners.\nFinally〉 does not correctly achieve paragraph separation. The invalid newline character should be deleted, and a blank line should be used at the end of the preceding sentence to make the new paragraph clearly independent, conforming to English writing format requirements.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: Finally, prepare an English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.

error: for a
correction: an
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, the verb “prepare” usually takes a direct object without needing the preposition 〈for〉. Therefore, the redundant preposition 〈for〉 is deleted to make the expression more concise and accurate, e.g., 『prepare an English notebook』 instead of 〈prepare for a English notebook〉.; ② Determiner Error: The word 〈English〉 begins with a vowel sound (/ɪ/) and should use the indefinite article 『an』 instead of 〈a〉. Therefore, 〈for a English〉 is changed to 『an English』, conforming to English article usage rules.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: Finally, prepare an English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.
 All in all, if you study English hard, you can learn English well.
error: on.\nAll
correction: on.
All
error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Format Error: The newline character in the original text 〈on.\nAll〉 does not correctly achieve paragraph separation. The invalid newline character should be deleted, and a blank line should be used at the end of the preceding sentence to make the new paragraph clearly independent, conforming to English writing format requirements.
error_sentence: You can also listen to English tapes or watch Tv programs to improve your listening and also speaking.\nSecond, remember not to be shy when you speak to other people, they will not make fun of you, take a deep breath and smile when you're speaking to foreigners.\nFinally, prepare for a English notebook to write down all of the English words that you often make mistakes on.\nAll in all,if you study English hard,you can learn English well
correct_sentence: All in all, if you study English hard, you can learn English well.
correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: English declarative sentences must end with a period, but the original sentence lacks terminal punctuation. A period should be added at the end of the sentence 『 you can learn English well.』, to make the sentence structure complete and conform to formal writing conventions.