Writing prompt: Giving Advice

Student essay:
I'm very glad to talk with you.I know the problem about you and I can give you some advise.
First,you can try to do your best to read and spell the new words loudly.It's a good way to remember
the new words and you never forget it.The second is writing.you should write a diary a day and try to use
the new words.the third is speak the new words as much as possible.If you use the new words a lot of times and you well never forget it.
these is all the suggests for you.I hope I can help you a lot.

Corrected essay:
I'm very glad to talk with you. I know the problem about you and I can give you some advice.
First, you can try to do your best to read and spell the new words loudly. It's a good way to remember the new words and you will never forget them. Second is writing. You should write a diary every day and try to use the new words. Third is speaking the new words as much as possible. If you use the new words a lot of times, you will never forget them.
These are all the suggestions for you. I hope I can help you a lot.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I know the problem about you and I can give you some advise.

correct_sentence: I know the problem about you and I can give you some advice.

error: advise
correction: advice
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈give〉 needs to be followed by a noun as an object. In the original sentence, 〈advise〉 is a verb form, which does not meet the sentence structure requirements. A noun form is needed here to express “suggestion”; therefore, the verb 〈advise〉 should be changed to the noun 『advice』 to conform to the context and grammatical rules.
error_sentence: It's a good way to remember
the new words and you never forget it.
correct_sentence: It's a good way to remember the new words and you will never forget them.
error: 

error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there is an unnecessary line break between 〈remember the〉 in the original sentence, which causes sentence structure fragmentation and disrupts sentence coherence. The line break should be deleted to make 『remember the』 a complete phrase, conforming to English writing requirements and maintaining sentence fluency.
error_sentence: It's a good way to remember
the new words and you never forget it.
correct_sentence: It's a good way to remember the new words and you will never forget them.
correction: will
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Auxiliary Error: According to English grammar rules, a modal auxiliary verb is needed when expressing future tense. The original sentence 〈you never forget〉 intends to express the future action “you will never forget” but lacks an auxiliary verb. 『will』 should be added before it to form the complete future tense structure 『you will never forget』, making the sentence grammatically correct.
error_sentence: It's a good way to remember
the new words and you never forget it. The second is writing.you should write a diary a day and try to use
the new words.the third is speak the new words as much as possible.
correct_sentence: It's a good way to remember the new words and you will never forget them. Second is writing. You should write a diary every day and try to use the new words.
error: it.The second is writing.you
correction: them. Second is writing. You
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, pronouns must agree in number with the nouns they refer to. In the original sentence, 〈it〉 refers to the plural noun 〈new words〉, creating a number disagreement issue; it should be changed to the plural pronoun 『them』 to ensure accurate reference; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence must be capitalized. In the original sentence 〈writing.you〉, the 〈y〉 is not capitalized and needs to be changed to a capital 『You』.
error_sentence: The second is writing.you should write a diary a day and try to use
the new words.the third is speak the new words as much as possible.
correct_sentence: You should write a diary every day and try to use the new words.
error: a
correction: every
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English semantic and grammatical rules, 〈a day〉 in the original sentence means “once a day”, but here the frequency “every day” needs to be expressed. The determiner 〈a〉 does not meet the semantic requirement. The determiner 〈a〉 should be changed to 『every』 to form the correct time adverbial 『every day』, accurately expressing the meaning of “writing a diary every day”.
error_sentence: The second is writing.you should write a diary a day and try to use
the new words.the third is speak the new words as much as possible.
correct_sentence: You should write a diary every day and try to use the new words.
error: 

error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, there is an unnecessary line break between 〈use the〉 in the original sentence, which disrupts the integrity of the phrase and causes sentence structure fragmentation. The line break should be deleted to make 『use the new words.』 a complete phrase, conforming to English writing requirements and maintaining sentence coherence and fluency.
error_sentence: The second is writing.you should write a diary a day and try to use
the new words.the third is speak the new words as much as possible.
correct_sentence: You should write a diary every day and try to use the new words. Third is speaking the new words as much as possible.
error: words.the third is speak
correction: words. Third is speaking
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Nonfinite Verb Form Error: In “the third is speak the new words as much as possible”, a nonfinite verb form is required after “is” as a subject complement. In the original sentence, 〈speak〉 is the base form of the verb, which is incorrect; it should be changed to the gerund form 『speaking』 to fit the sentence structure; ② Case Error: The 〈the〉 in 〈the third〉 at the beginning of the sentence is not capitalized. According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence must be capitalized; it should be changed to a capital 『The』.
error_sentence: If you use the new words a lot of times and you well never forget it.

correct_sentence: If you use the new words a lot of times, you will never forget them.

error: and you well
correction: , you will
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English grammar rules, the conditional adverbial clause “ If you use the new words a lot of times” and the main clause “you will never forget them” cannot be connected by 〈and〉; it should be separated by a comma to make the sentence structure conform to grammatical norms; ② Auxiliary Error: In the original sentence, 〈well〉 is misspelled. To express future tense here, it should be changed to the modal auxiliary verb 『will』 to form the correct future tense structure.
error_sentence: If you use the new words a lot of times and you well never forget it.

correct_sentence: If you use the new words a lot of times, you will never forget them.

error: it
correction: them
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, pronouns must agree in number with the nouns they refer to. In the original sentence, 〈it〉 refers to the plural noun 〈new words〉, creating a number disagreement issue. The singular pronoun 〈it〉 should be changed to the plural pronoun 『them』 to ensure accurate reference and maintain grammatical correctness.
error_sentence: these is all the suggests for you.
correct_sentence: These are all the suggestions for you.
error: these is
correction: These are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Case Error: In the original sentence, 〈these〉 is at the beginning of the sentence. According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence should be capitalized; 〈these〉 needs to be changed to 『These』; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: In English grammar, the subject and predicate verb must agree in person and number. In this sentence, the subject 〈These〉 is plural, so the predicate verb needs to be the plural form 『are』. The original sentence used the singular form 〈is〉, causing subject-verb disagreement; 〈is〉 should be changed to 『are』.
error_sentence: these is all the suggests for you.
correct_sentence: These are all the suggestions for you.
error: suggests
correction: suggestions
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: In the original sentence 〈these is all the suggests for you.〉, 〈suggests〉 is the third-person singular form of the verb 〈suggest〉, but a noun is needed here to express “suggestions”. According to English grammar and semantic requirements, the verb 『suggests』 should be changed to the noun 『suggestions』 to make the sentence correct in both part of speech and meaning.