Writing prompt: My Favorite Teacher

Student essay:
My favourite teacher is Ms Bai.She is a chemistry teacher.
They say that first impressions are very important.when i first meet her,i think that she is so beautiful and fridenly.It was the first lesson with us,she introduced herself to us.It is important for us to better understand her.After a week,she is already popular.Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.During scientific experiments,she explains excatly what is happening and as a result.She often cited examples in order to us can understand better.She tells jokes when she think we are getting bored.The reason is why i like her.
Remember once,i get bad marks.I felt so sad.She made a conversation with me.I think she might criticize me,but she gave me comfort and encourage.She said she can help me solution my problem.I am grateful her.This is my favourite teacher Ms Bai.

Corrected essay:
My favourite teacher is Ms. Bai. She is a chemistry teacher.
They say that first impressions are very important. When I first meet her, I think that she is so beautiful and friendly. It was the first lesson with us. She introduced herself to us. It is important for us to better understand her. After a week, she is already popular because Ms. Bai's method of teaching is very interesting. When we get into trouble, Ms. Bai teaches us solution methods instead of answers so that we can get good marks in chemistry. During scientific experiments, she explains exactly what is happening as a result. She often cites examples in order for us to understand better. She tells jokes when she thinks we are getting bored. This is the reason why I like her. Remember once, I got bad marks. I felt so sad. She had a conversation with me. I thought she might criticize me, but she gave me comfort and encouragement. She said she could help me solve my problem. I am grateful to her. This is my favourite teacher Ms. Bai.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My favourite teacher is Ms Bai.
correct_sentence: My favourite teacher is Ms. Bai.
error: Ms
correction: Ms.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, when the abbreviation 〈Ms〉 is used as a title, a period 『.』 needs to be added. It was not added in the original sentence; 〈Ms〉 should be changed to 『Ms.』 to conform to English abbreviation rules.
error_sentence: They say that first impressions are very important.when i first meet her,i think that she is so beautiful and fridenly.
correct_sentence: They say that first impressions are very important. When I first meet her, I think that she is so beautiful and friendly.
error: important.when i
correction: important. When I
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈They say that first impressions are very important.〉 and 〈when i first meet her〉 are two independent sentences; a space should be added after the period of the first sentence; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized, and the pronoun “I” should always be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈when i〉 does not conform to the rules and should be changed to 『When I』.
error_sentence: They say that first impressions are very important.when i first meet her,i think that she is so beautiful and fridenly.
correct_sentence: When I first meet her, I think that she is so beautiful and friendly.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 should be capitalized as 『I』 in a sentence. In the original sentence, the writing of 〈i〉 does not conform to the rules and needs to be changed to 『I』.
error_sentence: They say that first impressions are very important.when i first meet her,i think that she is so beautiful and fridenly.
correct_sentence: When I first meet her, I think that she is so beautiful and friendly.
error: fridenly
correction: friendly
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, the intention here is to express “she is so beautiful and friendly”, so 〈fridenly〉 is a misspelling of 『friendly』; 〈fridenly〉 needs to be changed to 『friendly』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: It was the first lesson with us,she introduced herself to us.
correct_sentence: It was the first lesson with us. She introduced herself to us.
error: ,she
correction: . She
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈It was the first lesson with us〉 and 〈she introduced herself to us〉 are two independent sentences, each containing an independent subject-verb structure and can stand alone as a sentence. Using a comma to connect them in the original sentence is a punctuation error; they need to be separated by a period. 〈,she〉 should be changed to 『. She』 to conform to English sentence structure rules; ② Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space should be added between the period 『.』 of the previous sentence and the word 『She』 of the next sentence.
error_sentence: After a week,she is already popular. Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
correct_sentence: After a week, she is already popular because Ms. Bai's method of teaching is very interesting.
error: .Because Ms
correction: because Ms.
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈because Ms Bai's method of teaching is very interesting〉 is a subordinate clause and cannot stand alone as a sentence; it needs to be combined with the preceding sentence. Using a period to separate them in the original sentence is an error; the 〈.〉 should be deleted; ② Contraction Error: According to English writing conventions, a period should be added after the abbreviation 〈Ms〉. In the original sentence, it was not added to 〈Ms〉, which does not conform to writing conventions, and should be changed to 『Ms.』.
error_sentence: Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
correct_sentence: After a week, she is already popular because Ms. Bai's method of teaching is very interesting.
error: teachering
correction: teaching
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, the intention here is to express “the teaching method is very interesting”, so 〈teachering〉 is a misspelling of 『teaching』; 〈teachering〉 needs to be changed to 『teaching』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
correct_sentence: After a week, she is already popular because Ms. Bai's method of teaching is very interesting. When we get into trouble, Ms. Bai teaches us solution methods instead of answers so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
error: interesting.when
correction: interesting. When
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space should be added between the preceding 〈interesting.〉 and 〈when〉; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence needs to be capitalized. In the original sentence, 〈when〉 is at the beginning of the sentence, and its first letter is not capitalized; 〈when〉 should be changed to 『When』.
error_sentence: Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
correct_sentence: When we get into trouble, Ms. Bai teaches us solution methods instead of answers so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
error: Ms Bai teach
correction: Ms. Bai teaches
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Contraction Error: According to English writing conventions, a period should be added after the abbreviation 〈Ms〉. In the original sentence, 〈Ms Bai〉 is not written correctly and should be changed to 『Ms. Bai』; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈Ms. Bai〉 is third-person singular. In the simple present tense, the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, the predicate verb 〈teach〉 is not in the third-person singular form and should be changed to 『teaches』.
error_sentence: Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
correct_sentence: When we get into trouble, Ms. Bai teaches us solution methods instead of answers so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
error: method
correction: methods
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, when the noun 〈method〉 is not preceded by a singular determiner (such as a, the, etc.), and the context implies a plural meaning (it can be understood from the context as multiple solution methods), the plural form should be used. In the original sentence, using the singular form 〈method〉 is incorrect; it needs to be changed to the plural form 『methods』 to ensure accurate semantic expression.
error_sentence: Because Ms Bai's method of teachering is very interesting.when we get into trouble,Ms Bai teach us solution method instead of answeras so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
correct_sentence: When we get into trouble, Ms. Bai teaches us solution methods instead of answers so that we can get good marks in chemistry.
error: answeras
correction: answers
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it can be known that the intention here is to express “answers”, so 〈answeras〉 is a misspelling of 『answers』; 〈answeras〉 needs to be changed to 『answers』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: During scientific experiments,she explains excatly what is happening and as a result.
correct_sentence: During scientific experiments, she explains exactly what is happening as a result.
error: excatly
correction: exactly
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the meaning of the sentence, it can be known that the intention here is to express “exactly”, so 〈excatly〉 is a misspelling of the adverb 『exactly』; 〈excatly〉 needs to be changed to 『exactly』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: During scientific experiments,she explains excatly what is happening and as a result.
correct_sentence: During scientific experiments, she explains exactly what is happening as a result.
error: and
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: Judging from the context, the conjunction 〈and〉 is redundant. Deleting it does not affect the understanding of the sentence and makes the sentence more concise and fluent, so 〈and〉 is deleted.
error_sentence: She often cited examples in order to us can understand better.
correct_sentence: She often cites examples in order for us to understand better.
error: cited
correction: cites
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: According to the sentence context, this describes her current habitual action, which belongs to the simple present tense. In the original sentence, the predicate verb 〈cited〉 is in the past tense, which does not fit the context, and should be changed to the simple present tense third-person singular form 『cites』.
error_sentence: She often cited examples in order to us can understand better.
correct_sentence: She often cites examples in order for us to understand better.
error: to us can
correction: for us to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: In the fixed phrase “in order for sb. to do sth.”, which means “so that someone can do something”, the preposition 『for』 is needed. In the original sentence, the structure 〈to us can〉 is confusing and does not conform to the grammatical rules of this fixed phrase; it should be changed to 『for us to』 to make the sentence structure correct and the meaning clear.
error_sentence: She tells jokes when she think we are getting bored.
correct_sentence: She tells jokes when she thinks we are getting bored.
error: think
correction: thinks
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈she〉 is third-person singular. In the simple present tense, the predicate verb needs to be in the third-person singular form. In the original sentence, the predicate verb 〈think〉 is not in the third-person singular form and should be changed to 『thinks』 to meet the requirement of subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: The reason is why i like her.

correct_sentence: This is the reason why I like her.
error: The reason is why i
correction: This is the reason why I
error_type: Sentence Structure Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Sentence Structure Error: In English expression, the original sentence 〈The reason is why〉 has a confusing structure and unclear meaning; 〈The reason is〉 should be changed to 『This is the reason』, which conforms to normal expression habits; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 should be capitalized as 〈I〉 in a sentence to conform to writing rules.
error_sentence: The reason is why i like her.

correct_sentence: This is the reason why I like her. Remember once, I got bad marks.
error: 

error_type: Format Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Format Error: The original sentence has an extra line break between paragraphs, which does not conform to normal writing format specifications and makes the text structure appear loose and incoherent. After deleting this line break, the contextual connection will be more natural and fluent, conforming to the format requirements of written expression.
error_sentence: Remember once,i get bad marks.
correct_sentence: Remember once, I got bad marks.
error: i get
correction: I got
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person pronoun 〈i〉 should be capitalized as 〈I〉 in a sentence to conform to writing conventions; ② Verb Tense Error: In the sentence, “once (formerly)” indicates that a past event is being narrated. According to English grammar, the predicate verb should be in the past tense. In the original sentence, 〈get〉 is in the simple present tense form and should be changed to the past tense 『got』 to fit the time context.
error_sentence: She made a conversation with me.
correct_sentence: She had a conversation with me.
error: made
correction: had
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: In English, to express “to have a conversation with someone”, the fixed phrase 〈have a conversation with sb.〉 is customarily used, where the verb is “have”. In the original sentence, using 〈made〉 does not conform to this customary usage and should be changed to 『had』 to make the expression conform to English language habits.
error_sentence: I think she might criticize me,but she gave me comfort and encourage.
correct_sentence: I thought she might criticize me, but she gave me comfort and encouragement.
error: think
correction: thought
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The overall context of this sentence is describing something that happened in the past. According to the principle of tense consistency in English grammar, the predicate verb 〈think〉 should be in the past tense. In the original sentence, 〈think〉 is in the simple present tense form, which does not fit the context, and needs to be changed to the past tense 『thought』 to accurately express past thoughts.
error_sentence: I think she might criticize me,but she gave me comfort and encourage.
correct_sentence: I thought she might criticize me, but she gave me comfort and encouragement.
error: encourage
correction: encouragement
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: In the noun phrase “comfort and encouragement”, two nouns need to be juxtaposed. In the original sentence, 〈encourage〉 is a verb and cannot be juxtaposed with the noun 〈comfort〉; it should be changed to the noun form 『encouragement』 to make the phrase structure and part-of-speech combination correct.
error_sentence: She said she can help me solution my problem.
correct_sentence: She said she could help me solve my problem.
error: can
correction: could
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The sentence “She said...” is indirect speech. According to the tense rules for indirect speech, when the main clause verb is in the past tense (said is the past tense of say), the tense in the subordinate clause should correspondingly change to a past tense. In the original sentence, 〈can〉 is a simple present tense auxiliary verb and should be changed to the past tense 『could』 to maintain tense consistency.
error_sentence: She said she can help me solution my problem.
correct_sentence: She said she could help me solve my problem.
error: solution
correction: solve
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: PoS Confusion Error: “help sb. do sth.” is a fixed phrase, meaning “to help someone do something”; the base form of the verb is needed here. In the original sentence, 〈solution〉 is a noun and cannot be used in this structure; it should be changed to the verb 『solve』 to make the sentence structure and meaning correct.
error_sentence: I am grateful her.
correct_sentence: I am grateful to her.
correction: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English expression habits, “be grateful to someone” is a fixed phrase, meaning “to be grateful to someone”. In the original sentence, 〈I am grateful her〉 is missing the preposition 『to』, which does not conform to the grammatical rules of this fixed phrase; the preposition 『to』 should be added to make the sentence structure complete and the meaning accurate.
error_sentence: This is my favourite teacher Ms Bai.
correct_sentence: This is my favourite teacher Ms. Bai.
error: Ms
correction: Ms.
error_type: Contraction Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Contraction Error: According to English writing conventions, when “Ms” is used as an abbreviation for “Miss” or “Mrs”, a period needs to be added after it. In the original sentence, a period was not added to 〈Ms Bai〉, which does not conform to the rules; 〈Ms〉 should be changed to 『Ms.』 to ensure correct writing.