Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Gao Feng like football. He has four footballs, and he has many football star pictures. But he never plays football, he only watch football games at TV. He has two friends. One is Mike and another is Dave. Mike like basketball very much, but he don't like ping-pong, because he fells ping-pong is boring. Dave like soccer very much, but he don't like baseball, because he feels it is difficult. They are very good friends.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng likes football. He has four footballs, and he has many football stars' pictures. But he never plays football, and he only watches football games on TV. He has two friends. One is Mike and the other is Dave. Mike likes basketball very much, but he doesn't like ping-pong, because he feels ping-pong is boring. Dave likes soccer very much, but he doesn't like baseball, because he feels it is difficult. They are very good friends.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Gao Feng like football.
correct_sentence: Gao Feng likes football.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈Gao Feng〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb; there is a subject-verb agreement error here, requiring the base form 〈like〉 to be changed to the third-person singular present tense form 『likes』 to conform to the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: He has four footballs, and he has many football star pictures.
correct_sentence: He has four footballs, and he has many football stars' pictures.
error: star
correction: stars'
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Possessive Error: According to the prompt, this refers to 'pictures of many football stars,' requiring the possessive form to indicate ownership; thus, there is a noun possessive error here. According to English grammar rules, the possessive form of a plural countable noun ending in 's' should add an apostrophe 『'』; 〈star〉 needs to be changed to the plural possessive 『stars’』 to align with the original prompt and English grammar rules.
error_sentence: But he never plays football, he only watch football games at TV.
correct_sentence: But he never plays football, and he only watches football games on TV.
correction: and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English writing conventions, the original clauses 〈But he never plays football〉 and 〈he only watch...〉 contain independent subject-verb structures and have a semantic transitional relationship, capable of standing as independent sentences; therefore, the conjunction 『and』 is added to avoid a comma splice error.
error_sentence: But he never plays football, he only watch football games at TV.
correct_sentence: But he never plays football, and he only watches football games on TV.
error: watch
correction: watches
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb; there is a subject-verb agreement error here. The base form 〈watch〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular present tense form 『watches』 to conform to the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: But he never plays football, he only watch football games at TV.
correct_sentence: But he never plays football, and he only watches football games on TV.
error: at
correction: on
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the fixed expression for 'on television' is 'on TV'; therefore, there is a preposition error here. The preposition 〈at〉 needs to be changed to 『on』 to form the correct prepositional phrase meaning 'on TV' in accordance with the English fixed expression.
error_sentence: One is Mike and another is Dave.
correct_sentence: One is Mike and the other is Dave.
error: another
correction: the other
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, when referring to the second of two items, the fixed expression 'one...the other' should be used. Therefore, there is a pronoun error here causing unclear reference. 〈another〉 needs to be changed to 『the other』 to conform to grammatical rules and the original sentence's meaning.
error_sentence: Mike like basketball very much, but he don't like ping-pong, because he fells ping-pong is boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball very much, but he doesn't like ping-pong, because he feels ping-pong is boring.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈Mike〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb; there is a subject-verb agreement error here, requiring the base form 〈like〉 to be changed to the third-person singular present tense form 『likes』 to conform to the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Mike like basketball very much, but he don't like ping-pong, because he fells ping-pong is boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball very much, but he doesn't like ping-pong, because he feels ping-pong is boring.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular form of the auxiliary verb; based on the principle of subject-verb agreement, the first-person present tense negative auxiliary 〈don't〉 needs to be changed to the third-person negative auxiliary 『doesn't』 to conform to the context and English grammar rules.
error_sentence: Mike like basketball very much, but he don't like ping-pong, because he fells ping-pong is boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball very much, but he doesn't like ping-pong, because he feels ping-pong is boring.
error: fells
correction: feels
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the original sentence's meaning, the intention is to express 'he feels ping-pong is boring'; the correct spelling for the verb 'feel' is 'feel'. Therefore, there is a spelling error here. The incorrect spelling 〈fells〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular present tense form 『feels』 meaning 'feels' to conform to the original sentence's meaning.
error_sentence: Dave like soccer very much, but he don't like baseball, because he feels it is difficult.
correct_sentence: Dave likes soccer very much, but he doesn't like baseball, because he feels it is difficult.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈Dave〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb; there is a subject-verb agreement error here. The base form 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular present tense form 『likes』 to conform to the context's tense and the principle of subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Dave like soccer very much, but he don't like baseball, because he feels it is difficult.
correct_sentence: Dave likes soccer very much, but he doesn't like baseball, because he feels it is difficult.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the third-person singular subject 〈he〉 requires the third-person singular form of the auxiliary verb; based on the principle of subject-verb agreement, the first-person present tense negative auxiliary 〈don't〉 needs to be changed to the third-person negative auxiliary 『doesn't』 to conform to the context and English grammar rules.