Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
My classmate is very smartly dreessed today. Her wear a puer white shirt and blue shoes. And her very like red dress. I vrey love the way she looks in her dress.

Corrected essay:
My classmate is very smartly dressed today. She wears a pure white shirt and blue shoes. And she really likes her red dress. I really love the way she looks in her dress.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My classmate is very smartly dreessed today.
correct_sentence: My classmate is very smartly dressed today.
error: dreessed
correction: dressed
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'dressed'. The word 〈dreessed〉 in the original sentence is misspelled; the extra letter 〈e〉 should be removed and the letter order adjusted to 『dressed』.
error_sentence: Her wear a puer white shirt and blue shoes.
correct_sentence: She wears a pure white shirt and blue shoes.
error: Her wear a puer
correction: She wears a pure
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: In the original sentence 〈Her wears a pure white shirt and blue shoes.〉, 〈Her〉 is in the subject position, but it is an object pronoun. It should be changed to the subject pronoun 『She』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Subject-verb Agreement Error: The correct subject of the sentence is the third-person pronoun 『She』. To maintain subject-verb agreement, the verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『wears』 for grammatical correctness; ③ Spelling Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'pure'. The word 〈puer〉 in the original sentence is misspelled; it should be changed to 『pure』 to ensure correct spelling.
error_sentence: And her very like red dress.
correct_sentence: And she really likes her red dress.
error: her very like
correction: she really likes her
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Pronoun Error: In the original sentence, 〈Her〉 is in the subject position, but it is an object pronoun. It should be changed to the subject pronoun 『She』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Adverb Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'very' or 'really'. The original sentence uses the adverb 〈very〉 to modify the verb 〈like〉, meaning 'very like', which does not conform to English grammar rules. It needs to be changed to the adverb 『really』 to make the expression more accurate and fluent; ③ Subject-verb Agreement Error: The correct subject of the sentence is the third-person pronoun 『She』, which is singular. To maintain subject-verb agreement, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to ensure grammatical correctness and fluency; ④ Determiner Error: In the original sentence, the countable noun 〈red dress〉 cannot stand alone. The determiner 『her』 is added here to indicate possession ('her red dress'), making the meaning more complete.
error_sentence: I vrey love the way she looks in her dress.
correct_sentence: I really love the way she looks in her dress.
error: vrey
correction: really
error_type: Adverb Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Adverb Error: Based on the context, the intended meaning is 'very' or 'really'. The original sentence uses the adverb 〈vrey〉 to modify the verb 〈love〉, meaning 'very love', which does not conform to English grammar rules, and 〈very〉 is misspelled. It needs to be changed to the adverb 『really』 to make the expression more accurate and fluent.