Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
In 6:00, I get up. In 6:10, I go to brush my teeth. In 6:30, I eat breakfast, After , I go to read my book.

Corrected essay:
At 6:00, I get up. At 6:10, I go to brush my teeth. At 6:30, I eat breakfast. After that, I go to read my book.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: In 6:00, I get up.
correct_sentence: At 6:00, I get up.
error: In
correction: At
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English time expression norms, the preposition 〈At〉 must be used to introduce specific clock times, whereas 〈In〉 is used for longer periods (like months, seasons, or years). Therefore, the incorrect preposition 〈In〉 is replaced with the correct preposition 『At』, as shown in the standard expression 『At 6:00』. This correction aligns with the fixed collocation rule 'at + specific time point' in English grammar, ensuring the accuracy of the time expression.
error_sentence: In 6:10, I go to brush my teeth.
correct_sentence: At 6:10, I go to brush my teeth.
error: In
correction: At
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English time expression norms, the preposition 〈At〉 must be used to introduce specific clock times, whereas 〈In〉 is used for longer periods (like months, seasons, or years). Therefore, the incorrect preposition 〈In〉 is replaced with the correct preposition 『At』, as shown in the standard expression 『At 6:10』. This correction aligns with the fixed collocation rule 'at + specific time point' in English grammar, ensuring the accuracy of the time expression.
error_sentence: In 6:30, I eat breakfast, After , I go to read my book.
correct_sentence: At 6:30, I eat breakfast.
error: In
correction: At
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English time expression norms, the preposition 〈At〉 must be used to introduce specific clock times, whereas 〈In〉 is used for longer periods (like months, seasons, or years). Therefore, the incorrect preposition 〈In〉 is replaced with the correct preposition 『At』, as shown in the standard expression 『At 6:30』. This correction aligns with the fixed collocation rule 'at + specific time point' in English grammar, ensuring the accuracy of the time expression.
error_sentence: In 6:30, I eat breakfast, After , I go to read my book.
correct_sentence: At 6:30, I eat breakfast. After that, I go to read my book.
error: , After
correction: . After that
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the complete sentence 『At 6:30, I eat breakfast.』 and the following time adverbial 〈After〉 are two independent clauses and should be separated by a period. Therefore, the connecting comma is changed to a period 『.』 to ensure sentence structure integrity; ② Space Error: According to English punctuation rules, a comma should immediately follow the preceding word; there is an extra space in 〈After ，〉. It is corrected to 『After,』 to comply with standard formatting requirements; ③ Pronoun Error: Based on the context, the time adverbial 〈After〉 needs a clear referent; the pronoun 『that』, referring to the preceding action, is added to form the complete time adverbial structure 『After that』, maintaining sentence cohesion and grammatical correctness. The final correction is 『. After that』 to properly separate the sentences and maintain logical coherence.