Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
Hi. I am Tina. Today is Monday. I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and than I want to go to school. I read book, drow cantoo and play tinis. I go hame at 5 o'clock and play with my tow. I go to bed at 8 o'clock. This is my Monday. How are you?

Corrected essay:
Hi, I am Tina. Today is Monday. I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and then go to school. I read books, draw cartoons and play tennis. I go home at 5 o'clock and play with my toys. I go to bed at 8 o'clock. This is my Monday. How about you?

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Hi.
correct_sentence: Hi, I am Tina.
error: .
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Punctuation Error: In English, 〈Hi〉 is usually followed by a comma, which represents a natural pause in speech and fits the flow of conversation better than a period. Using a period, as in 〈Hi. I am Tina.〉, can make the tone seem more abrupt, formal, or cold, similar to sending two separate messages. However, in formal writing, a comma is still recommended. Therefore, 〈Hi〉 should be followed by a comma 『,』 instead of a period 〈.〉.
error_sentence: I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and than I want to go to school.
correct_sentence: I get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock and then go to school.
error: than I want to
correction: then
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: The English word 〈than〉 means 'compared to...' and is a conjunction used for comparison. Here it is misused for the adverb 『then』, which indicates time sequence, so it should be changed to 『then』; ② Word Redundancy Error: 〈I want to〉 is unnecessary in this context and should be deleted, allowing 〈and then go to school〉 to form a parallel structure with the preceding phrases 〈get up at 6 o'clock, have breakfast at 7 o'clock〉.
error_sentence: I read book, drow cantoo and play tinis.
correct_sentence: I read books, draw cartoons and play tennis.
error: book, drow cantoo
correction: books, draw cartoons
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Number Error: In English, countable nouns typically require a determiner. 〈book〉 is a singular countable noun and needs a determiner. 〈read book〉 is incorrect; it should be changed to 『read a book』 or 『read books』. Using 『read books』 indicates reading multiple books; ② Spelling Error: 〈drow〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『draw』; ③ Spelling Error: 〈cantoo〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『cartoon』. The plural form 〈cartoons〉 is used here to maintain parallelism with 『books』.
error_sentence: I read book, drow cantoo and play tinis.
correct_sentence: I read books, draw cartoons and play tennis.
error: tinis
correction: tennis
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: 〈tinis〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『tennis』, meaning '网球'. 〈play tennis〉 is a fixed phrase meaning 'play tennis'.
error_sentence: I go hame at 5 o'clock and play with my tow.
correct_sentence: I go home at 5 o'clock and play with my toys.
error: hame
correction: home
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, 〈hame〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『home』, meaning '家'.
error_sentence: I go hame at 5 o'clock and play with my tow.
correct_sentence: I go home at 5 o'clock and play with my toys.
error: tow
correction: toys
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: 〈tow〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『toys』, meaning '玩具'. This is a spelling error. 『play with my toys』 is a fixed phrase meaning 'play with toys'.
error_sentence: How are you?
correct_sentence: How about you?
error: are
correction: about
error_type: Other Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Other Error: 〈How are you?〉 is typically used for initial greetings or asking about someone's current condition. 『How about you?』 is used to ask the same question back to the other person. In this context, the intention is to ask about the other person's Monday routine, so 『How about you?』 should be used for comparative inquiry, not 〈How are you?〉 which asks about their well-being. Therefore, this is an error related to fixed expressions based on meaning.