Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Assume you are Tina; introduce your Monday routine to everyone. Writing hints: get up; have breakfast; go to school; begin; have lunch; go home.

Student essay:
I amTina. Tady isMonday. First I get up at 7 in the morning. Then I eats some food and drinks some juice for breakfast. After that I read a storybook. I go to school at 8 in the the morning. At school I patting, playing ball and toys. I eat lunch at school. In the aftrnoon I study in the school. I go home at 5 in the aftrnoon. I eat some fish and a lot of vegables and a little rice. After dinner I brush my teeth. Then I go to bad at 9 in the night.

Corrected essay:
I am Tina. Today is Monday. First, I get up at 7 in the morning. Then I eat some food and drink some juice for breakfast. After that, I read a storybook. I go to school at 8 in the morning. At school, I paint and play with balls and toys. I eat lunch at school. In the afternoon I study at school. I go home at 5 in the afternoon. I eat some fish, a lot of vegetables and a little rice. After dinner, I brush my teeth. Then I go to bed at 9 at night.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I amTina. Tady isMonday.
correct_sentence: I am Tina. Today is Monday.
error: amTina. Tady isMonday
correction: am Tina. Today is Monday
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: 〈am〉 and 〈Tina〉 are separate words and need a space between them; add a space to make it 『am Tina』; ② Spelling Error: 〈Tady〉 should be corrected to 『Today』, meaning "today"; ③ Space Error: 〈is〉 and 〈Monday〉 are separate words and need a space between them; add a space to make it 『is Monday』.
error_sentence: First I get up at 7 in the morning.
correct_sentence: First, I get up at 7 in the morning.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma is missing after the introductory adverb 〈First〉, making the sentence structure unclear; therefore, add 『,』 after 〈First〉 to comply with punctuation standards.
error_sentence: Then I eats some food and drinks some juice for breakfast.
correct_sentence: Then I eat some food and drink some juice for breakfast.
error: eats
correction: eat
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈I〉 is first-person singular, which does not agree with the third-person singular verb form 〈eats〉; therefore, 〈eats〉 needs to be changed to 『eat』 to follow subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: Then I eats some food and drinks some juice for breakfast.
correct_sentence: Then I eat some food and drink some juice for breakfast.
error: drinks
correction: drink
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈I〉 in this sentence is first-person singular, which does not agree with the third-person singular verb form 〈drinks〉; therefore, 〈drinks〉 needs to be changed to 『drink』 to follow subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: After that I read a storybook.
correct_sentence: After that, I read a storybook.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma should be added after the introductory adverbial phrase 〈After that〉 to separate it from the main clause; therefore, add 『,』 after 〈After that〉 to comply with punctuation standards.
error_sentence: I go to school at 8 in the the morning.
correct_sentence: I go to school at 8 in the morning.
error: the
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: Based on the original sentence's expression, the determiner 〈the〉 is repeated in 〈the the〉, which is determiner redundancy; therefore, one 『the』 needs to be deleted to make the sentence more concise.
error_sentence: At school I patting, playing ball and toys.
correct_sentence: At school, I paint and play with balls and toys.
error: I patting, playing ball
correction: , I paint and play with balls
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma should be added after the introductory adverbial phrase 〈At school〉 to separate it from the main clause; therefore, add 『,』 after 〈At school〉 to comply with punctuation standards; ② Verb Tense Error: Based on the intended meaning and the subject-verb-object structure, the forms 〈patting〉 and 〈playing〉 do not fit the sentence's grammatical requirements; according to the context, the intended meaning is "paint", so they should be changed to 『paint』 and 『play』 to fit the predicate verb form and follow the simple present tense principle; ③ Noun Number Error: Based on the context and the principle of parallelism with 〈and〉, 〈ball〉 should be changed to the plural form 『balls』 to be consistent with the following 〈toys〉; ④ Preposition Error: According to verb phrase structure, 〈playing ball〉 is missing the preposition 〈with〉; therefore, 『with』 should be added here, using 『play with balls』 to correctly express the action and object.
error_sentence: In the aftrnoon I study in the school.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon I study at school.
error: aftrnoon
correction: afternoon
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: From the original sentence, it is clear that the intended meaning is "afternoon", indicating a spelling error; therefore, the incorrect 〈aftrnoon〉 should be changed to 『afternoon』 for correct spelling.
error_sentence: In the aftrnoon I study in the school.
correct_sentence: In the afternoon I study at school.
error: in the
correction: at
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English usage conventions, the fixed phrase 『at school』 indicates location status; therefore, 〈in the school〉 should be changed to 『at school』 for correct preposition use.
error_sentence: I go home at 5 in the aftrnoon.
correct_sentence: I go home at 5 in the afternoon.
error: aftrnoon
correction: afternoon
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: From the original sentence, it is clear that the intended meaning is "afternoon", indicating a spelling error; therefore, the incorrect 〈aftrnoon〉 should be changed to 『afternoon』 for correct spelling.
error_sentence: I eat some fish and a lot of vegables and a little rice.
correct_sentence: I eat some fish, a lot of vegetables and a little rice.
error: and
correction: ,
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to the original sentence, the two 〈and〉 connect multiple parallel items. In English grammar principles, the conjunction 〈and〉 is used between the second-to-last and the last noun for parallelism, while preceding parallel items are separated by commas. Therefore, the 〈and〉 in 〈some fish and a lot of vegables〉 should be replaced with a comma to ensure conciseness and correct English grammatical expression.
error_sentence: I eat some fish and a lot of vegables and a little rice.
correct_sentence: I eat some fish, a lot of vegetables and a little rice.
error: vegables
correction: vegetables
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: From the original sentence, it is clear that the intended meaning is "vegetables", indicating a spelling error; therefore, the incorrect 〈vegables〉 should be changed to 『vegetables』 for correct spelling.
error_sentence: After dinner I brush my teeth.
correct_sentence: After dinner, I brush my teeth.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar principles, when a time adverbial is at the beginning of a sentence, the introductory phrase 〈After dinner〉 needs to be separated from the main clause by a comma; therefore, add 『,』 to comply with punctuation standards.
error_sentence: Then I go to bad at 9 in the night.
correct_sentence: Then I go to bed at 9 at night.
error: bad
correction: bed
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: From the original sentence, it is clear that the intended meaning is "bed", indicating a spelling error; therefore, the incorrect 〈bad〉 should be changed to 『bed』 for correct spelling.
error_sentence: Then I go to bad at 9 in the night.
correct_sentence: Then I go to bed at 9 at night.
error: in the
correction: at
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English time expressions, 〈at night〉 is a fixed phrase, while 〈in the night〉 is incorrect; therefore, 〈in the〉 should be changed to 『at』 for correct preposition use.