Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. It is 3 PM. Based on the information provided below about Linda, use the present continuous tense to describe what Linda sees and hears at the mall:
Writing hints:
A little girl: buy some food
A young lady: look at a dress
Linda's mother: try on the shoes
Linda's father: stay on the sofa; wait for

Student essay:
It is 3 p.m. now, i see a little girl is buying some food. And i see a young lady is looking at a dress. The dress is very beauiful. My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, and waiting for my mother.

Corrected essay:
It is 3 p.m. now, I see a little girl buying some food. And I see a young lady looking at a dress. The dress is very beautiful. My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, waiting for my mother.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: It is 3 p.m. now, i see a little girl is buying some food.
correct_sentence: It is 3 p.m. now, I see a little girl buying some food.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person singular pronoun 〈i〉 should always be capitalized as 『I』, regardless of its position in the sentence. The original sentence uses the lowercase 〈i〉, which does not conform to standard writing rules. Changing it to 『I』 makes the sentence comply with English writing requirements.
error_sentence: It is 3 p.m. now, i see a little girl is buying some food.
correct_sentence: It is 3 p.m. now, I see a little girl buying some food.
error: is
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the expression for the sensory verb 〈see〉 as in 'seeing someone doing something' is 'see sb. doing sth.'. In the original sentence 'see a little girl is buying some food', the verb 〈is〉 is redundant and does not conform to grammatical rules. The redundant 〈is〉 should be deleted, and the present participle 〈buying some food〉 should be used directly as the object complement to make the sentence structure grammatically correct.
error_sentence: And i see a young lady is looking at a dress.
correct_sentence: And I see a young lady looking at a dress.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person singular pronoun 〈i〉 should always be capitalized as 『I』, regardless of its position in the sentence. The original sentence uses the lowercase 〈i〉, which does not conform to standard writing rules. Changing it to 『I』 makes the sentence comply with English writing requirements.
error_sentence: And i see a young lady is looking at a dress.
correct_sentence: And I see a young lady looking at a dress.
error: is
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the expression for the sensory verb 〈see〉 as in 'seeing someone doing something' is 'see sb. doing sth.'. In the original sentence 'see a young lady is looking at a dress', the verb 〈is〉 is redundant and does not conform to grammatical rules. The redundant 〈is〉 should be deleted, and the present participle 〈looking at a dress〉 should be used directly as the object complement to make the sentence structure grammatically correct.
error_sentence: The dress is very beauiful.
correct_sentence: The dress is very beautiful.
error: beauiful
correction: beautiful
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention is to express 'this dress is very beautiful'. The adjective 〈beauiful〉 in the original sentence is misspelled. The correct spelling should be 『beautiful』. 〈beauiful〉 needs to be corrected to 『beautiful』 to ensure correct expression and adherence to spelling rules.
error_sentence: My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, and waiting for my mother.
correct_sentence: My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, waiting for my mother.
correction: on
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English usage, when 'try' means 'to put on clothing to see if it fits', it needs to be paired with the preposition 'on' to form the phrasal verb 'try on'. The phrase 〈trying the shoes〉 in the original sentence is incomplete, missing the preposition 'on', and cannot accurately convey the meaning of 'trying on shoes'. The preposition 『on』 should be added after 〈trying〉 to complete the phrase, conforming to grammatical rules and meaning requirements.
error_sentence: My mother is trying the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, and waiting for my mother.
correct_sentence: My mother is trying on the shoes, and my father is staying on the sofa, waiting for my mother.
error: and
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English grammar rules, in this sentence, 'waiting for my mother' is a participle phrase acting as an adverbial of attendant circumstances, supplementing the action 'my father is staying on the sofa'. Such adverbials should use a present participle structure. However, the original sentence uses the conjunction 〈and〉 to connect, causing a confusing sentence structure. Deleting the redundant 〈and〉 makes the sentence structure conform to grammatical norms.