Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Briefly introduce your family members:
Writing hints:
Father: like reading, tallest
Mother: like to see the movies
My sister: like muddy puddles
I: like to do some games with my dogs

Student essay:
My father like reading he is tallest. My mother is like to see the movies. My sister like muddy puddles. I like to do some games with my dogs.

Corrected essay:
My father likes reading. He is the tallest. My mother likes to see movies. My sister likes muddy puddles. I like to play games with my dogs.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My father like reading he is tallest.
correct_sentence: My father likes reading. He is the tallest.
error: like reading he is
correction: likes reading. He is the
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the English third-person singular rule, when the subject is the singular noun phrase 〈My father〉, the predicate verb must be in the singular form. The original verb 〈like〉 is plural and should be corrected to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to form the correct subject-verb structure 『My father likes』; ② Punctuation Error: According to English sentence division principles, the original sentence 〈like reading he is tallest〉 contains a run-on sentence error. A period 『. He is the tallest.』 should be added after the verb phrase 〈like reading〉 to terminate the first complete thought group, splitting the compound sentence into two independent sentences to ensure syntactic clarity; ③ Case Error: Following English capitalization rules, the pronoun 〈he〉 at the beginning of a new sentence must be capitalized. Therefore, 〈he〉 is corrected to 『He』 to conform to English written language capitalization rules; ④ Determiner Error: According to the rules for using superlative adjectives, the superlative form 〈tallest〉 must be preceded by the definite article 『the』 to form a complete grammatical structure. Thus, 〈he is tallest〉 is modified to the grammatically correct 『He is the tallest』.
error_sentence: My mother is like to see the movies.
correct_sentence: My mother likes to see movies.
error: is like
correction: likes
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to the English third-person singular rule, when the subject is the singular noun phrase 〈My mother〉, the predicate verb must be in the singular form. In the original verb phrase 〈is like〉, 〈like〉 itself can function as the predicate verb meaning 'to like', making the linking verb 〈is〉 redundant. It should be deleted and the verb corrected to the third-person singular form 『likes』, forming the correct subject-verb structure 『My mother likes』.
error_sentence: My mother is like to see the movies.
correct_sentence: My mother likes to see movies.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English article usage rules, when the plural noun 〈movies〉 refers to a general category, the definite article 〈the〉 should not be added. The determiner in the original phrase 〈the movies〉 makes the meaning specific; deleting it and keeping 『see movies』 accurately expresses the concept of 'movies (in general)', conforming to native English speaker usage.
error_sentence: My sister like muddy puddles.
correct_sentence: My sister likes muddy puddles.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the English third-person singular rule, when the subject is the singular noun phrase 〈My sister〉, the predicate verb must be in the singular form. The original verb 〈like〉 is plural and should be corrected to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to form the correct subject-verb structure 『My sister likes』.
error_sentence: I like to do some games with my dogs.
correct_sentence: I like to play games with my dogs.
error: do some
correction: play
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to English verb-object collocation rules, the verb used with the noun 〈games〉 should be 『play』 to form a fixed phrase. The original phrase 〈do some games〉 contains a collocation error; the non-standard verb 〈do〉 needs to be replaced with the standard verb 『play』 to form the idiomatic structure 『play games』. Additionally, the redundant quantifier 〈some〉 should be deleted to make the expression more concise and natural.