Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Mike likes basketball, but he dosen't like ping-pong, he thinks it's boring. Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, he think it's difficult

Corrected essay:
Mike likes basketball, but he doesn't like ping-pong. He thinks it's boring. Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball. He thinks it's difficult.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Mike likes basketball, but he dosen't like ping-pong, he thinks it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball, but he doesn't like ping-pong.
error: dosen't
correction: doesn't
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is intended to express a 'negative form', therefore 〈dosen't〉 is a misspelling of 『doesn't』; it needs to be changed to 『doesn't』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: Mike likes basketball, but he dosen't like ping-pong, he thinks it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball, but he doesn't like ping-pong. He thinks it's boring.
error: , he
correction: . He
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentences “Mike likes...” and “he thinks it's boring” have complete subject-verb structures and are two independent clauses; a comma 〈,〉 cannot be used to separate two independent clauses, so it needs to be changed to 『.』 to comply with English grammar rules.
error_sentence: Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, he think it's difficult
correct_sentence: Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball. He thinks it's difficult.
error: , he think
correction: . He thinks
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, the original sentences “Dave likes...” and “he think it's difficult” have complete subject-verb structures; a comma 〈,〉 cannot be used to separate two independent clauses, so 〈, he〉 needs to be changed to 『. He』 to comply with English grammar rules; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, there is a subject-verb agreement error in the original sentence; the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, while the original verb 〈think〉 is in the third-person plural form, therefore the verb 〈think〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『thinks』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, he think it's difficult
correct_sentence: He thinks it's difficult.
correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to writing conventions, a declarative sentence must end with a period; the original sentence 〈he think it's difficult〉 is structurally complete but lacks a period at the end, therefore a 『.』 is added at the end of the sentence to comply with English punctuation usage rules.