Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Based on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:
Writing hints:
On Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon
On Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00

Student essay:
Tom has a plan for next weekend . On Saturday, he is going to do his homework at 9:30 in the morning. He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00. In the afternoon he's going to the park with his friends. On Sunday, he is going to clean his room frist at 10:00a.m.At14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour. In the evening, he is going to have a bath at18:0o and go to the bed ealy.

Corrected essay:
Tom has a plan for next weekend. On Saturday, he is going to do his homework at 9:30 in the morning. He is going to relax by watching TV at 11:00. In the afternoon he's going to the park with his friends. On Sunday, he is going to clean his room first at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour. In the evening, he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: On Sunday, he is going to clean his room frist at 10:00a.m. At14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour.
correct_sentence: On Sunday, he is going to clean his room first at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00, he is going to play basketball for half an hour.
error: frist at 10:00a.m.At14:00
correction: first at 10:00 a.m. At 14:00
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the English word for '首先', 〈frist〉, is misspelled; it needs to be corrected to 『first』 to conform to English spelling rules. ② Space Error: The time expression 〈10:00a.m.〉 should have a space between the specific time and the time marker abbreviation; change it to 『10:00 a.m.』. ③ Space Error: The time adverbial 〈At14:00〉 lacks a space; a space should be added between the preposition and the specific time, changing it to 『At 14:00』 to conform to English expression norms.
error_sentence: In the evening, he is going to have a bath at18:0o and go to the bed ealy.
correct_sentence: In the evening, he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early.
error: at18:0o
correction: at 18:00
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English syntax rules, words need to be separated by spaces; the time adverbial 〈at18:00〉 lacks a space after the preposition; it should be changed to 『at 18:00』 to conform to English syntax rules. ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, in the time expression 〈18:0o〉, the numeral 〈0〉 is mistakenly written as the letter 〈o〉; it should be changed to 『18:00』 to conform to correct English time expression spelling rules.
error_sentence: In the evening, he is going to have a bath at18:0o and go to the bed ealy.
correct_sentence: In the evening, he is going to have a bath at 18:00 and go to bed early.
error: the bed ealy
correction: bed early
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to the English fixed phrase, 'go to bed' means '去睡觉'; the fixed phrase 〈go to bed〉 does not require the article 〈the〉; therefore, the redundant 『the』 should be deleted to conform to the English fixed phrase. ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the word 'early' means '早一点'; here, 〈ealy〉 is misspelled; it should be changed to 『early』 to conform to English spelling rules.