Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Based on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:
Writing hints:
On Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon
On Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00

Student essay:
Tom will have a good weekend. Because he made some nice plans to full his holiday. On Saturday, he will do his homework at 9:00. Then he will watch TV to have a relax at 11:00. In the afternoon, he will go to the park with his classmates. On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10:00. In the afternoon, he will play basketball at 14:00 with his friends. Then he will go to home to have a bath at 18:00.

Corrected essay:
Tom will have a good weekend because he has made some nice plans to fill his days. On Saturday, he will do his homework at 9:30. Then he will watch TV to relax at 11:00. In the afternoon, he will go to the park with his classmates. On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10:00. In the afternoon, he will play basketball at 14:00 with his friends. Then he will go home to have a bath at 18:00.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Tom will have a good weekend. Because he made some nice plans to full his holiday.
correct_sentence: Tom will have a good weekend because he has made some nice plans to fill his days.
error: . Because he
correction: because he has
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to the semantics, the sentence starting with 〈Because〉 provides the reason for the previous sentence, indicating a sequential relationship. Therefore, it can be combined with the preceding sentence to form a complete complex sentence, making the 〈Because〉 clause an adverbial clause of reason. According to English syntax rules, an adverbial clause of reason does not need to be separated from the main clause by punctuation; 〈. Because〉 should be changed to 『 because』 to comply with English syntax rules; ② Verb Tense Error: According to the meaning, the action of 'making plans' is completed and happened in the past, emphasizing the completion of the action. The present perfect tense is required; 〈made〉 should be changed to the present perfect tense 『has made』 to indicate the completion of the action 'making plans' to fit the semantics.
error_sentence: Because he made some nice plans to full his holiday.
correct_sentence: Tom will have a good weekend because he has made some nice plans to fill his days.
error: full his holiday
correction: fill his days
error_type: PoS Confusion Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① PoS Confusion Error: According to the semantics, the English idiom 'fill one's day' is needed here. The adjective 〈full〉 is misused as a verb; it should be replaced with the verb 『fill』 to conform to the correct part of speech usage and semantics; ② Noun Error: According to the semantic context, the intended meaning is 'weekend days,' not 〈holiday〉 meaning 'vacation.' Therefore, 〈holiday〉 needs to be changed to 『days』 to refer to the 'weekend' to fit the original semantics.
error_sentence: On Saturday, he will do his homework at 9:00.
correct_sentence: On Saturday, he will do his homework at 9:30.
error: 9:00
correction: 9:30
error_type: Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Number Error: According to the prompt, the time indicated is 9:30. Therefore, the time 〈9:00〉 here does not match the prompt, indicating a number error. 〈9:00〉 needs to be changed to 『9:30』 to comply with the original prompt requirements.
error_sentence: Then he will watch TV to have a relax at 11:00.
correct_sentence: Then he will watch TV to relax at 11:00.
error: have a
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression habits, 'take a break' or 'relax' can be directly expressed using the verb 'relax'. Since 〈relax〉 is not a noun, the structure 'have a + relax' cannot be used. Therefore, there is a word redundancy error here; 〈have a relax〉 needs to be changed to 『relax』 to conform to English expression habits.
error_sentence: Then he will go to home to have a bath at 18:00.
correct_sentence: Then he will go home to have a bath at 18:00.
error: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to the English fixed phrase, the fixed phrase for 'go home' is 'go home'. Also, according to English grammar rules, in the phrase 'go home', 'home' is an adverb of place and does not require modification by a preposition. Therefore, there is a preposition error here; 〈to〉 needs to be deleted to make the sentence conform better to English fixed phrases and grammatical rules.