Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Gaofeng is a football lover. He has four footballs and so much football star's photos. But he never plays football, he only watches football match on TV. Mike likes basketball very much, but he don't like playing ping-pong because he feels it's boring. Dave likes soccer. He don't like baseball, he feels it's difficult. Mike used to find it hard to understand.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng is a football lover. He has four footballs and so many football stars' photos. But he never plays football. He only watches football matches on TV. Mike likes basketball very much, but he doesn't like playing ping-pong because he feels it's boring. Dave likes soccer. He doesn't like baseball. He feels it's difficult. Mike used to find it hard to understand.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Gaofeng is a football lover.
correct_sentence: Gao Feng is a football lover.
error: Gaofeng
correction: Gao Feng
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Space Error: According to English writing conventions, the pinyin for Chinese surnames and given names should be separated; a space needs to be added to 〈Gaofeng〉; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the pinyin for both the surname and the given name should be capitalized; the first letter of 'feng' should be capitalized, therefore 〈Gaofeng〉 is modified to 『Gao Feng』 to conform to English name writing conventions.
error_sentence: He has four footballs and so much football star's photos.
correct_sentence: He has four footballs and so many football stars' photos.
error: much football star's
correction: many football stars'
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈much〉 modifies uncountable nouns, while 『many』 modifies countable nouns; in the original sentence, 〈photos〉 is a plural countable noun, so 〈much〉 needs to be changed to 『many』 to comply with English grammar; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules and the prompt requirements, 'many football stars' is a plural noun and should use the plural possessive form; the original 〈star's〉 is the singular possessive form, so it needs to be changed to the plural possessive form 『stars'』 to comply with grammar and context.
error_sentence: But he never plays football, he only watches football match on TV.
correct_sentence: But he never plays football. He only watches football matches on TV.
error: , he
correction: . He
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈But he never plays football〉 and 〈he only watches football match〉 are two independent clauses and should be separated by a 『.』; therefore, 〈,〉 needs to be replaced with 『.』 to make the sentence structure correct.
error_sentence: But he never plays football, he only watches football match on TV.
correct_sentence: He only watches football matches on TV.
error: match
correction: matches
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules and context, the meaning here 'watches football matches' is general and should use the plural form of the noun; the original 〈match〉 is singular, so it needs to be changed to 『matches』 to be consistent with the context indicating watching multiple matches.
error_sentence: Mike likes basketball very much, but he don't like playing ping-pong because he feels it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball very much, but he doesn't like playing ping-pong because he feels it's boring.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular; the original 〈don't〉 is the third-person plural form, so 〈don't〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『doesn't』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: He don't like baseball, he feels it's difficult.
correct_sentence: He doesn't like baseball.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈He〉 is third-person singular; the original 〈don't〉 is the third-person plural form, so 〈don't〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『doesn't』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: He don't like baseball, he feels it's difficult.
correct_sentence: He doesn't like baseball. He feels it's difficult.
error: , he
correction: . He
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, 〈He don't like baseball〉 and 〈he feels it's difficult〉 are two independent clauses and should be separated by a 『.』; therefore, 〈,〉 needs to be replaced with 『.』 to make the sentence structure correct.