Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Hi, My name is Gao Feng. I like footboll. I have four footboll, and I have many foot boll star's potorts. Ihave tow friends. The are Mike and Dave . Mike like basketboll, and Dave like soccer, too.

Corrected essay:
Hi, my name is Gao Feng. I like football. I have four footballs, and I have many football stars' photos. I have two friends. They are Mike and Dave. Mike likes basketball, and Dave likes soccer, too.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Hi, My name is Gao Feng.
correct_sentence: Hi, my name is Gao Feng.
error: My
correction: my
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: Following the comma after 'Hi', which indicates a greeting, the first letter of the subsequent sentence's first word does not need to be capitalized; therefore, 〈My〉 is changed to 『my』 to comply with English capitalization rules.
error_sentence: I like footboll.
correct_sentence: I like football.
error: footboll
correction: football
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, the word 〈footboll〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling should be 『football』, meaning 'soccer ball'.
error_sentence: I have four footboll, and I have many foot boll star's potorts.
correct_sentence: I have four footballs, and I have many football stars' photos.
error: footboll
correction: footballs
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈footboll〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『football』, meaning 'soccer ball'; ② Noun Number Error: According to the quantifier 〈four〉, the following noun needs to be in the plural form 『footballs』, so 〈football〉 is changed to 『footballs』 to indicate multiple soccer balls.
error_sentence: I have four footboll, and I have many foot boll star's potorts. Ihave tow friends.
correct_sentence: I have four footballs, and I have many football stars' photos. I have two friends.
error: foot boll star's potorts. Ihave tow
correction: football stars' photos. I have two
error_type: Noun Possessive Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈foot boll〉 is misspelled and should be combined into 『football』, meaning 'soccer'; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to the sentence meaning, 'I have many photos of football stars', 〈star's〉 should be in the plural possessive form 『stars'』, indicating 'of multiple stars'; ③ Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈potorts〉 is misspelled; the correct spelling is 『photos』; ④ Space Error: 〈Ihave〉 consists of two separate words and should not be joined; it should be changed to 『I have』; ⑤ Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, the intention is to express 'two', so 〈tow〉 should be changed to 『two』.
error_sentence: The are Mike and Dave .
correct_sentence: They are Mike and Dave.
error: The
correction: They
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: Here, 〈The〉 does not fit the context and should be changed to 『They』 to correctly refer to the two friends mentioned earlier. This change ensures the pronoun aligns with the sentence's meaning.
error_sentence: Mike like basketboll, and Dave like soccer, too.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball, and Dave likes soccer, too.
error: like basketboll
correction: likes basketball
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈Mike〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈like〉 needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it should be changed to 『likes』; ② Spelling Error: According to English writing conventions, 〈basketboll〉 is misspelled; it should be changed to 『basketball』, meaning 'basketball'.
error_sentence: Mike like basketboll, and Dave like soccer, too.
correct_sentence: Mike likes basketball, and Dave likes soccer, too.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the subject 〈Dave〉 is third-person singular, so the verb 〈like〉 needs to be in the third-person singular form; therefore, it should be changed to 『likes』 to comply with grammar rules.