Writing prompt: Write a short essay titled "My next weekend." Based on the picture information, use the future tense (be going to) to introduce your plans for next weekend.

Student essay:
My name is Li Hua. I will have a good weekend life. Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparent with my parents. We plan to buy some fruits and presents for them. And then, I am going to clean my room, because it haven't cleaned for a long time. Second, I am going to play computer games to take a relax. After that, I am going to play soccer with my friends. So, I will have a good time for my next week.

Corrected essay:
My name is Li Hua. I will have a good weekend. Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. We plan to buy some fruit and presents for them. And then, I am going to clean my room, because it hasn't been cleaned for a long time. Second, I am going to play computer games to relax. After that, I am going to play soccer with my friends. So, I will have a good time for my next weekend.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I will have a good weekend life.
correct_sentence: I will have a good weekend.
error: life
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈weekend〉 itself already contains the meaning of 'weekend life', so there is no need to add 〈life〉; therefore, 〈life〉 is deleted.
error_sentence: Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparent with my parents.
correct_sentence: Firstly, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents.
error: grandparent
correction: grandparents
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈grandparent〉 is singular, but the context indicates visiting both grandparents, so the singular 〈grandparent〉 needs to be changed to the plural form 『grandparents』 to match the meaning.
error_sentence: We plan to buy some fruits and presents for them.
correct_sentence: We plan to buy some fruit and presents for them.
error: fruits
correction: fruit
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: 〈fruits〉 specifically refers to different kinds of fruit, whereas expressing 'fruit' as a food category here requires the uncountable noun 『fruit』.
error_sentence: And then, I am going to clean my room, because it haven't cleaned for a long time.
correct_sentence: And then, I am going to clean my room, because it hasn't been cleaned for a long time.
error: haven't
correction: hasn't been
error_type: Verb Voice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈it〉 is third-person singular and requires the auxiliary verb 『hasn't』, so 〈haven't 〉 is changed to 『hasn't』 to comply with grammatical rules; ② Verb Voice Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express 'because it hasn't been cleaned for a long time', requiring the passive voice; therefore, 『been』 needs to be added before 〈cleaned〉 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: Second, I am going to play computer games to take a relax.
correct_sentence: Second, I am going to play computer games to relax.
error: take a
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Word Redundancy Error: 〈take a relax〉 is not a standard English collocation; 『relax』 should be used directly here to express 'to relax', so 〈take a〉 is deleted.
error_sentence: So, I will have a good time for my next week.
correct_sentence: So, I will have a good time for my next weekend.
error: week
correction: weekend
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Noun Error: According to the prompt, this essay is about plans for the next weekend, so 〈week〉 is changed to 『weekend』 to align with the essay's theme.