Writing prompt: The weekend is coming. Classmates, what are you planning to do? Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay of about 60 words about your plans for the weekend.
Writing hints: be going to; do cleaning; visit grandparents; have a good time

Student essay:
In next weekend, I am going to finish my homework and my mother will see it. After that I am going to help my mother to do housework. And the next day, we will visit to my grandparents and fly a kite in the park. I think we'll have a good time

Corrected essay:
Next weekend, I am going to finish my homework and my mother will check it. After that, I am going to help my mother to do housework. And the next day, we will visit my grandparents and fly a kite in the park. I think we'll have a good time.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: In next weekend, I am going to finish my homework and my mother will see it.
correct_sentence: Next weekend, I am going to finish my homework and my mother will check it.
error: In next
correction: Next
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, when a time phrase includes determiners like 〈this/next/last〉, no preposition is needed before the determiner; therefore, the redundant preposition 〈In〉 should be deleted to comply with English grammar rules.
error_sentence: In next weekend, I am going to finish my homework and my mother will see it.
correct_sentence: Next weekend, I am going to finish my homework and my mother will check it.
error: see
correction: check
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: Based on context and sentence meaning, the intended action is the mother checking the homework, not simply seeing it. The verb 〈see〉 means 'to see' or 'to look at' but does not include the meaning of 'to check' or 'to inspect'; thus, there is a verb choice error here, and 〈see〉 needs to be changed to 『check』 to fit the context and meaning.
error_sentence: After that I am going to help my mother to do housework.
correct_sentence: After that, I am going to help my mother to do housework.
correction: ,
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English syntax rules, when the adverbial phrase 〈After that〉 is used as an adverbial at the beginning of a sentence, it should be followed by a comma to separate it from the subsequent sentence components; therefore, there is a missing punctuation mark here, and a 『,』 needs to be added after 〈After that〉 to comply with English syntax rules.
error_sentence: And the next day, we will visit to my grandparents and fly a kite in the park.
correct_sentence: And the next day, we will visit my grandparents and fly a kite in the park.
error: to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the transitive verb 〈visit〉 means 'to pay a visit to someone or somewhere' and does not require a preposition when followed by an object; therefore, there is a preposition error here, and the redundant preposition 〈to〉 needs to be deleted, changing it to 『visit my grandparents』 to comply with English grammar rules.
error_sentence: I think we'll have a good time
correct_sentence: I think we'll have a good time.
correction: .
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Punctuation Error: According to English syntax rules, a sentence must end with a terminal punctuation mark, such as a period; therefore, there is a missing punctuation mark here, and a 『.』 needs to be added at the end of the sentence to complete the declarative sentence structure and comply with English syntax rules.