Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Based on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:
Writing hints:
On Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon
On Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00

Student essay:
On Saturday , Tom does his homework at 9:30 . At 11:00 , he watch TV . He go to park in the afternoon . On Sunday , he cleans his room . He play basketball at 14:00 . Finaly , he has a bath at 18:00 .

Corrected essay:
On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30. At 11:00, he will watch TV. He will go to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday, he will clean his room. He will play basketball at 14:00. Finally, he will have a bath at 18:00.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: On Saturday , Tom does his homework at 9:30 .
correct_sentence: On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30.
error: does
correction: will do
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend, but the original sentence uses the simple present tense, which is a tense error. According to the prompt's requirement, the simple present tense 〈does〉 needs to be changed to the future tense 『will do』.
error_sentence: At 11:00 , he watch TV .
correct_sentence: At 11:00, he will watch TV.
correction: will
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend. The sentence only has the verb 〈watch〉 after the subject, lacking the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 to form the simple future tense structure. Therefore, 『will』 needs to be added before 〈watch〉 to complete the tense conversion.
error_sentence: He go to park in the afternoon .
correct_sentence: He will go to the park in the afternoon.
correction: will
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend. The sentence only has the verb 〈go〉 after the subject, lacking the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 to form the simple future tense. Therefore, 『will』 needs to be added before 〈go〉 to complete the tense conversion.
error_sentence: He go to park in the afternoon .
correct_sentence: He will go to the park in the afternoon.
correction: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Determiner Error: In English, countable nouns need to be modified by a determiner. This sentence specifically refers to 'a certain park', so 『the』 needs to be added before 〈park〉, changing it to 『go to the park』.
error_sentence: On Sunday , he cleans his room .
correct_sentence: On Sunday, he will clean his room.
error: cleans
correction: will clean
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend, but the verb in the original sentence uses the simple present tense, which is a tense error. According to the prompt's requirement, the simple present tense verb 〈cleans〉 needs to be changed to the simple future tense 『will clean』.
error_sentence: He play basketball at 14:00 .
correct_sentence: He will play basketball at 14:00.
correction: will
error_type: Auxiliary Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Auxiliary Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend. The sentence only has the verb 〈play〉 after the subject, lacking the auxiliary verb 〈will〉 to form the simple future tense. Therefore, 『will』 needs to be added before 〈play〉 to complete the tense conversion.
error_sentence: Finaly , he has a bath at 18:00 .
correct_sentence: Finally, he will have a bath at 18:00.
error: Finaly
correction: Finally
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the word 〈Finaly〉 is misspelled; it is missing the letter l before 〈y〉. The correct spelling should be 『Finally』 'lastly'.
error_sentence: Finaly , he has a bath at 18:00 .
correct_sentence: Finally, he will have a bath at 18:00.
error: has
correction: will have
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: The prompt requires the use of the simple future tense to describe Tom's activities next weekend, but the verb in the original sentence uses the simple present tense 〈has〉, which is a tense error. According to the prompt's requirement, the simple present tense verb 〈has〉 needs to be changed to the simple future tense 『will have』.