Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Briefly introduce your family members:
Writing hints:
Father: like reading, tallest
Mother: like to see the movies
My sister: like muddy puddles
I: like to do some games with my dogs

Student essay:
There is have four people in my family. My father , my mother, my sister and I. My father like reading. He is the tallest in my family. My mother like to see the movies. My sister like muddy puddles. I like to do some games with my dogs.

Corrected essay:
There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father likes reading. He is the tallest in my family. My mother likes to watch movies. My sister likes muddy puddles. I like to play some games with my dogs.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: There is have four people in my family.
correct_sentence: There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and I.
error: is have
correction: are
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the sentence meaning, the original sentence intends to express 'There are four people in my family'; in English, the 'there be' structure is used to express existence; the sentence subject is 〈four people〉, so according to the subject-verb agreement principle, 『There are』 should be used; ② Word Redundancy Error: Since 'there are' already expresses existence, the additional 〈have〉 is unnecessary and considered redundant; 〈have〉 should be removed to correctly express the meaning.
error_sentence: There is have four people in my family. My father , my mother, my sister and I. My father like reading.
correct_sentence: There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my sister and I.
error: . My
correction: : my
error_type: Punctuation Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, a colon introduces explanations, examples, or lists; therefore, a colon should follow 〈There are four people in my family〉 to introduce the specific members; the original sentence has a punctuation error, changing 〈.〉 to 『:』; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, when a colon is followed by a list and not a complete sentence, the first letter is typically lowercase; there is a case error here, changing 〈My〉 to 『my』.
error_sentence: My father , my mother, my sister and I. My father like reading.
correct_sentence: My father likes reading.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb form must agree with the subject's number (singular or plural); the subject 〈My father〉 is third-person singular, but the verb 〈like〉 is not in the third-person singular form 『likes』; therefore, there is a subject-verb agreement error, and 〈like〉 should be changed to 『likes』 for number agreement.
error_sentence: My mother like to see the movies.
correct_sentence: My mother likes to watch movies.
error: like to see the
correction: likes to watch
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb form must agree with the subject's number; the subject 〈My mother〉 is third-person singular, but the verb 〈like〉 is not in the third-person singular form 『likes』; there is a subject-verb agreement error here, change 〈like〉 to 『likes』 for number agreement; ② Verb Choice Error: According to English collocations, 'watch' is more commonly used for viewing activities like movies/TV, while 'see' is broader; there is a verb choice error here, change 〈see〉 to 『watch』 for correct collocation; ③ Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, 'the' refers to specific things; 〈movies〉 here is general; there is a determiner error, 〈the〉 should be deleted.
error_sentence: My sister like muddy puddles.
correct_sentence: My sister likes muddy puddles.
error: like
correction: likes
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb form must agree with the subject's number (singular or plural); the subject 〈My sister〉 is third-person singular, but the verb 〈like〉 is not in the third-person singular form 『likes』; there is a subject-verb agreement error here, and 〈like〉 should be changed to 『likes』 for number agreement.
error_sentence: I like to do some games with my dogs.
correct_sentence: I like to play some games with my dogs.
error: do
correction: play
error_type: Verb Choice Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Choice Error: According to the sentence meaning, the original sentence intends to express 'I like to play some games with my dogs'; according to English collocations, the verb 『play』 is typically used for playing games, not 〈do〉; there is a verb choice error here, and 〈do〉 should be changed to 『play』 to form the correct collocation.