Writing prompt: Written Expression.
Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay.
Based on the information provided by Tom below, and referring to the picture, describe Tom's activities for next weekend using the simple future tense:
Writing hints:
On Saturday: do his homework 9:30; watch TV 11:00; go to the park in the afternoon
On Sunday: clean his room 10:00; play basketball 14:00; have a bath 18:00

Student essay:
On Saturday. Tom does his homework at 9:30, and he watches TV at 11o'clock. He goes to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday, he cleaned his room at 10o'clock, and plays basketball at 14o'clock. He has a bath at 18o'clock.

Corrected essay:
On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30 a.m., and he will watch TV at 11 o'clock. He will go to the park in the afternoon. On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10 o'clock, and play basketball at 2:00 p.m. He will have a bath at 6:00 p.m.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: On Saturday. Tom does his homework at 9:30, and he watches TV at 11o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30 a.m., and he will watch TV at 11 o'clock.
error: . Tom does
correction: , Tom will do
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the period 〈.〉 is unsuitable for separating the time adverbial 〈On Saturday〉 from the main clause, as they belong to the same thought group. Therefore, the period is changed to a comma 『,』 to maintain sentence structure coherence and reflect the logical relationship between the adverbial and the main clause; ② Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the sentence describes planned future activities. When the subject is third-person singular, the present tense verb 〈does〉 does not meet the requirement for a future time adverbial; it should be changed to 『will do』 to form the simple future tense, accurately expressing an action that has not yet occurred.
error_sentence: Tom does his homework at 9:30, and he watches TV at 11o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30 a.m., and he will watch TV at 11 o'clock.
correction: a.m.
error_type: Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Number Error: According to English time writing conventions, the numerical time expression 〈9:30〉 requires a clear period indicator. Since the context does not provide other time references and daily activities often occur during the day, 『a.m.』 should be added to accurately indicate the morning period, avoid time ambiguity, and the complete form should be 『9:30 a.m.』.
error_sentence: Tom does his homework at 9:30, and he watches TV at 11o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30 a.m., and he will watch TV at 11 o'clock.
error: watches
correction: will watch
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the sentence describes planned future activities. When the subject is third-person singular, the present tense verb 〈watches〉 does not meet the requirement for a future time adverbial; it should be changed to 『will watch』 to form the simple future tense, accurately expressing an action that has not yet occurred.
error_sentence: Tom does his homework at 9:30, and he watches TV at 11o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Saturday, Tom will do his homework at 9:30 a.m., and he will watch TV at 11 o'clock.
error: 11o'clock
correction: 11 o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space must be kept when numbers and time units are used as separate words. The original form 〈11o'clock〉 does not conform to English numerical time expression standards; a space should be added between the number and the unit word, modifying it to 『11 o'clock』 to comply with English typesetting rules and common usage.
error_sentence: He goes to the park in the afternoon.
correct_sentence: He will go to the park in the afternoon.
error: goes
correction: will go
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the sentence describes planned future activities. When the subject is third-person singular, the present tense verb 〈goes〉 does not meet the requirement for a future time adverbial; it should be changed to 『will go』 to form the simple future tense, accurately expressing an action that has not yet occurred.
error_sentence: On Sunday, he cleaned his room at 10o'clock, and plays basketball at 14o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10 o'clock, and play basketball at 2:00 p.m.
error: cleaned
correction: will clean
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the sentence describes a planned future action. The past tense verb 〈cleaned〉 contradicts the future time reference; it should be changed to 『will clean』 to form the simple future tense, accurately expressing an action that has not yet occurred. When the subject is third-person singular, the structure of auxiliary verb 『will』 followed by the base form of the verb conforms to English grammar rules.
error_sentence: On Sunday, he cleaned his room at 10o'clock, and plays basketball at 14o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10 o'clock, and play basketball at 2:00 p.m.
error: 10o'clock
correction: 10 o'clock
error_type: Space Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Space Error: According to English writing conventions, a space must be kept when numbers and time units are used as separate words. The original form 〈10o'clock〉 does not conform to English numerical time expression standards; a space should be added between the number and the unit word, modifying it to 『10 o'clock』 to comply with English typesetting rules and common usage.
error_sentence: On Sunday, he cleaned his room at 10o'clock, and plays basketball at 14o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10 o'clock, and play basketball at 2:00 p.m.
error: plays
correction: play
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the modal verb 〈will〉 requires the base form of the verb without 'to' following it. The third-person singular form 〈plays〉 in the original sentence violates this basic grammatical principle when paired with the modal verb; it should be changed to the base form 『play』 to ensure grammatical correctness.
error_sentence: On Sunday, he cleaned his room at 10o'clock, and plays basketball at 14o'clock. He has a bath at 18o'clock.
correct_sentence: On Sunday, he will clean his room at 10 o'clock, and play basketball at 2:00 p.m. He will have a bath at 6:00 p.m.
error: 14o'clock. He has
correction: 2:00 p.m. He will have
error_type: Verb Tense Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Number Error: According to English time writing conventions, the 24-hour format 〈14o'clock〉 does not conform to common English daily expression habits. The 12-hour format should be used with a clear period indicator, changing the numerical time to 『2:00 p.m.』 to align with standard English usage; ② Verb Tense Error: Based on the context, the sentence describes planned future activities. When the subject is third-person singular, the present tense verb 〈goes〉 does not meet the requirement for a future time adverbial; it should be changed to 『will go』 to form the simple future tense, accurately expressing an action that has not yet occurred.
error_sentence: He has a bath at 18o'clock.
correct_sentence: He will have a bath at 6:00 p.m.
error: 18o'clock.
correction: 6:00 p.m.
error_type: Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Number Error: According to English time writing conventions, the 24-hour format 〈18o'clock〉 does not conform to common English daily expression habits. The 12-hour format should be used with a clear period indicator, changing the numerical time to 『6:00 p.m.』 to clearly indicate the afternoon period and align with standard English usage.