Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
She get up at 7:40. She read English texts at 8:30-9:45. She do her homework at the time. She clean house at afternoon. She watch TV and movies after supper.

Corrected essay:
She gets up at 7:40. She reads English texts from 8:30 to 9:45. She does her homework at that time. She cleans the house in the afternoon. She watches TV and movies after supper.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: She get up at 7:40.
correct_sentence: She gets up at 7:40.
error: get
correction: gets
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third person singular, so the corresponding verb 〈get〉 should also be in the third person singular form; change 〈get〉 to 『gets』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: She read English texts at 8:30-9:45.
correct_sentence: She reads English texts from 8:30 to 9:45.
error: read
correction: reads
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third person singular, so the corresponding verb 〈read〉 should also be in the third person singular form; change 〈read〉 to 『reads』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: She read English texts at 8:30-9:45.
correct_sentence: She reads English texts from 8:30 to 9:45.
error: at 8:30-
correction: from 8:30 to
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English expression conventions, expressing a time range requires the prepositional phrase 『from ... to ...』 rather than 〈at ...-〉, so 〈at 8:30-〉 is changed to 『from 8:30 to』; ② Punctuation Error: According to English writing conventions, the hyphen 〈-〉 is not standard for expressing a time range; 『to』 should be used instead.
error_sentence: She do her homework at the time.
correct_sentence: She does her homework at that time.
error: do
correction: does
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third person singular, so the verb 〈do〉 should also be in the third person singular form; change 〈do〉 to 『does』 to comply with subject-verb agreement rules.
error_sentence: She do her homework at the time.
correct_sentence: She does her homework at that time.
error: the
correction: that
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to the sentence's meaning, 〈the time〉 is ambiguous; the demonstrative determiner 『that』 is needed to specifically refer to the previously mentioned time period, so it is changed to 『that time』 for clarity.
error_sentence: She clean house at afternoon.
correct_sentence: She cleans the house in the afternoon.
error: clean house at
correction: cleans the house in the
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third person singular, so the predicate verb should also be in the third person singular form; change 〈clean〉 to 『cleans』 to comply with the subject-verb agreement principle; ② Determiner Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the countable noun 〈house〉 requires the definite article 〈the〉 before it to specify the object; ③ Preposition Error: According to the sentence's meaning, the intention is to express 'in the afternoon', which is a period of time, so the preposition 『in the』 should be used; therefore, change 〈at afternoon〉 to 『in the afternoon』 to conform to English grammatical norms.
error_sentence: She watch TV and movies after supper.
correct_sentence: She watches TV and movies after supper.
error: watch
correction: watches
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The subject 〈She〉 is third person singular, so the predicate verb should also be in the third person singular form; change 〈watch〉 to 『watches』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.