Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Hi, my name is Zhao Yeuzhu. Gao Feng likes football. He has got four football. But he never play football. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Mike like play basketball, but he doesn't like play ping-pong. Dave like play soccer, but he doesn't like play baseball.

Corrected essay:
Hi, my name is Zhao Yeuzhu. Gao Feng likes football. He has four footballs. But he never plays football. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong. Dave likes to play soccer, but he doesn't like to play baseball.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: He has got four football.
correct_sentence: He has four footballs.
error: got four football
correction: four footballs
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to the sentence structure, the verb 〈has〉 already indicates possession, making the verb 〈got〉 redundant; therefore, 〈got〉 should be deleted; ② Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, the noun 〈football〉 should be in the plural form 『footballs』 to agree with the number 〈four〉; therefore, 〈football〉 should be changed to 『footballs』 to conform to English grammar rules.
error_sentence: But he never play football.
correct_sentence: But he never plays football.
error: play
correction: plays
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, there is a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈he〉 is third-person singular, while the verb 〈play〉 is in the plural form; therefore, the verb 〈play〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『plays』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.
error_sentence: Mike like play basketball, but he doesn't like play ping-pong.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong.
error: like
correction: likes to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, there is a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈Mike〉 is third-person singular, while the verb 〈like〉 is in the plural form; therefore, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure; therefore, 『to』 needs to be added after 〈like〉 in the original sentence to form 『likes to play』 to conform to grammar rules.
error_sentence: Mike like play basketball, but he doesn't like play ping-pong.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure; therefore, 『to』 needs to be added after 〈like〉 in the original sentence to form 『like to play』 to conform to grammar rules.
error_sentence: Dave like play soccer, but he doesn't like play baseball.
correct_sentence: Dave likes to play soccer, but he doesn't like to play baseball.
error: like
correction: likes to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to English grammar rules, there is a subject-verb agreement error; the subject 〈Dave〉 is third-person singular, while the verb 〈like〉 is in the plural form; therefore, the verb 〈like〉 needs to be changed to the third-person singular form 『likes』 to maintain subject-verb agreement; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure; therefore, 『to』 needs to be added after 〈like〉 in the original sentence to form 『likes to play』 to conform to grammar rules.
error_sentence: Dave like play soccer, but he doesn't like play baseball.
correct_sentence: Dave likes to play soccer, but he doesn't like to play baseball.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 should be followed by an infinitive structure; therefore, 『to』 needs to be added after 〈like〉 in the original sentence to form 『like to play』 to conform to grammar rules.