Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
GaoFeng is likes scooer very much. He has got four scooers and scooer stars' photos. But he doesn't play scooer, he only watch scooer games on TV. He has got two friends, Mike and Dave. Milk likes play basketball, he doesn't like play ping-pong, he think it's boring.

Corrected essay:
GaoFeng likes soccer very much. He has got four footballs and soccer stars' photos. But he doesn't play soccer, and he only watches soccer games on TV. He has got two friends, Mike and Dave. Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong, as he thinks it's boring.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: GaoFeng is likes scooer very much.
correct_sentence: GaoFeng likes soccer very much.
error: is likes scooer
correction: likes soccer
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Word Redundancy Error: According to English simple present tense rules, the predicate only needs the main verb 〈likes〉; the linking verb 〈is〉 conflicts with it, so the redundant 〈is〉 is deleted, retaining the correct predicate verb 『likes』; ② Spelling Error: The noun 〈scooer〉 does not conform to English word formation rules; based on the correct English expression for the sport of football, it should be corrected to 『soccer』.
error_sentence: He has got four scooers and scooer stars' photos.
correct_sentence: He has got four footballs and soccer stars' photos.
error: scooers and scooer
correction: footballs and soccer
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to English noun usage norms, 〈soccer〉 as an uncountable noun specifically refers to "the sport of football", whereas when referring to a specific "football (object)", the countable noun 『football』 should be used. Therefore, the sport name 〈soccer〉 needs to be changed to the specific object name 『football』; ② Spelling Error: Based on the sentence meaning, the intention here is to express "soccer stars"; it is presumed that 〈scooer〉 is a misspelling of 『soccer』, therefore 〈scooer〉 needs to be modified to 『soccer』 to fit the sentence meaning.
error_sentence: But he doesn't play scooer, he only watch scooer games on TV.
correct_sentence: But he doesn't play soccer, and he only watches soccer games on TV.
error: scooer,
correction: soccer, and
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: The noun 〈scooer〉 violates English soccer terminology spelling norms, corrected to the noun 『soccer』; ② Conjunction Error: According to English parallel structure rules, when expressing consecutive negative and positive actions by the same subject, a coordinating conjunction is required for connection. The original sentence lacks the necessary conjunction between 〈he doesn't play soccer〉 and 〈he only watches soccer games〉, so 『and』 is added to maintain syntactic integrity.
error_sentence: But he doesn't play scooer, he only watch scooer games on TV.
correct_sentence: But he doesn't play soccer, and he only watches soccer games on TV.
error: watch scooer
correction: watches soccer
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the rules for verb conjugation in the English third-person singular present tense, when the subject is 〈he〉, the predicate verb 〈watch〉 must use the singular form 『watches』; ② Spelling Error: 〈scooer〉 does not conform to the standard English terminology spelling for the sport of football and should be corrected to the noun 『soccer』.
error_sentence: Milk likes play basketball, he doesn't like play ping-pong, he think it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong, as he thinks it's boring.
error: Milk likes
correction: Mike likes to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English personal name writing conventions, 〈Milk〉 is an incorrect spelling and should be corrected to the standard male English name 『Mike』; ② Nonfinite Verb Form Error: Based on the rules for infinitive structures, when 〈play〉 serves as an adverbial of purpose, the infinitive marker 『to』 must be added to form the complete infinitive structure 『to play』, complying with the grammatical requirements for nonfinite verbs.
error_sentence: Milk likes play basketball, he doesn't like play ping-pong, he think it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong, as he thinks it's boring.
correction: but
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Conjunction Error: According to English coordinate clause structure rules, when two independent clauses 『likes basketball』 and 『doesn't like ping-pong』 appear consecutively, they must be connected by an appropriate conjunction. Since there is a contrastive semantic relationship between the two clauses, the contrastive conjunction 『but』 needs to be added to form a complete compound sentence structure.
error_sentence: Milk likes play basketball, he doesn't like play ping-pong, he think it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong, as he thinks it's boring.
correction: to
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to the usage rules of English infinitives, when the verb 〈play〉 serves as the object of the predicate verb 〈likes〉, the infinitive marker 『to』 must be added to form the complete infinitive structure 『to play』.
error_sentence: Milk likes play basketball, he doesn't like play ping-pong, he think it's boring.
correct_sentence: Mike likes to play basketball, but he doesn't like to play ping-pong, as he thinks it's boring.
error: he think
correction: as he thinks
error_type: Conjunction Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Conjunction Error: According to English coordinate clause grammar rules, when two independent clauses 〈he doesn't like to play ping-pong〉 and 〈he thinks it's boring〉 both contain complete predicate structures, they must be connected by a conjunction. The subordinating conjunction 『as』 needs to be added to introduce the subordinate clause, clearly expressing the logical relationship of "because/since", making the sentence structure complete and the meaning clear; ② Subject-Verb Agreement Error: According to the rules for verb conjugation in the English third-person singular present tense, when the subject is 〈he〉, the predicate verb 〈think〉 must use the singular form 『thinks』 to maintain subject-verb agreement.