Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the picture, write a short essay. Based on the information provided about Sarah and the picture, describe her winter holiday. The beginning is provided:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.

Student essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my hoilday schedule. In moring. I get up on 7'o clock. I brush the teeth after get up. I eat brackfast on 8'o clock. On PM 9'o clock, I read book. Sometimes I help my mother do the housework. I really like clean my bedroom and my mother's room. At night I always watch TV with my parents.

Corrected essay:
My name is Sarah, and I have a good winter holiday this year. Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule. In the morning, I get up at 7 o'clock. I brush my teeth after getting up. I eat breakfast at 8 o'clock. At 9 PM, I read books. Sometimes I help my mother do the housework. I really like cleaning my bedroom and my mother's room. At night I always watch TV with my parents.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: Let me tell you something about my hoilday schedule.
correct_sentence: Let me tell you something about my holiday schedule.
error: hoilday
correction: holiday
error_type: Spelling Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is clear that the intended word is “holiday”; therefore, 〈hoilday〉 is a misspelling of 『holiday』 and needs to be corrected to 『holiday』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: In moring.
correct_sentence: In the morning, I get up at 7 o'clock.
error: moring.
correction: the morning,
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to English idiomatic expression, the definite article 『the』 indicates specificity; phrases referring to specific time periods like 〈moring〉 usually require the article 『the』 to clearly refer to the specific holiday, therefore, 〈In moring〉 in the sentence is changed to 『In the morning』 to conform to English idiomatic expression; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is clear that the intended word is “morning”; therefore, 〈moring〉 is a misspelling of 『morning』 and needs to be corrected to 『morning』 to make the sentence coherent; ③ Punctuation Error: According to English expression habits, the time adverbial 〈In moring〉 in the original sentence, as an independent component, needs to be separated from the main clause by a comma, therefore, 〈In moring.〉 is changed to 『In the morning,』 to comply with English punctuation usage rules.
error_sentence: I get up on 7'o clock.
correct_sentence: In the morning, I get up at 7 o'clock.
error: on 7'o clock
correction: at 7 o'clock
error_type: Preposition Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 『at』 should be used before specific times, not 〈on〉; therefore, 〈on 7'o clock〉 is changed to 『at 7 o'clock』 to conform to grammar; ② Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is clear that the intended expression is “o'clock”; the original phrase 〈7'o clock〉 is misspelled and needs to be corrected to 『7 o'clock』 to make the sentence coherent.
error_sentence: I brush the teeth after get up.
correct_sentence: I brush my teeth after getting up.
error: the
correction: my
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English grammar rules, using the determiner 〈the〉 with 〈teeth〉 in the original sentence does not conform to grammatical norms; 『my』 should be used to clarify possession. Therefore, 〈the teeth〉 is changed to 『my teeth』 to reflect the subject of the action.
error_sentence: I brush the teeth after get up.
correct_sentence: I brush my teeth after getting up.
error: get
correction: getting
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the word 〈after〉 should be followed by the present participle form to indicate the sequence of actions; therefore, 〈get〉 in the original sentence needs to be changed to 『getting』 to comply with grammatical rules.
error_sentence: I eat brackfast on 8'o clock. On PM 9'o clock, I read book.
correct_sentence: I eat breakfast at 8 o'clock. At 9 PM, I read books.
error: brackfast on 8'o clock. On PM 9'o clock
correction: breakfast at 8 o'clock. At 9 PM
error_type: Word Order Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is clear that the intended word is “breakfast”; therefore, 〈brackfast〉 is a misspelling of 『breakfast』 and needs to be corrected to 『breakfast』 to make the sentence coherent; ② Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 『at』 should be used before specific times, not 〈on〉; therefore, 〈on 8'o clock〉 is changed to 『at 8 o'clock』 to conform to grammar; ③ Spelling Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is clear that the intended expression is “o'clock”; the original phrase 〈8'o clock〉 is misspelled and needs to be corrected to 『8 o'clock』 to make the sentence coherent; ④ Preposition Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 『At』 should be used before specific times, not 〈On〉; therefore, 〈On PM 9'o clock〉 is changed to 『At 9 PM』 to conform to grammar; ⑤ Word Order Error: According to English conventions for expressing time, the time expression in the original sentence 〈On PM 9'o clock〉 needs to be adjusted to 『At 9 PM』 to conform to English time expression habits; ⑥ Word Redundancy Error: According to English time expression norms, 〈PM〉 and 〈'o clock〉 cannot appear simultaneously; therefore, 〈'o clock〉 should be deleted, retaining the correct form 『At 9 PM』 which both conforms to time expression norms and clearly indicates the time.
error_sentence: On PM 9'o clock, I read book.
correct_sentence: At 9 PM, I read books.
error: book
correction: books
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to the context, it indicates a habit of “reading books,” not a single specific book; therefore, 〈book〉 in the original sentence should be changed to the plural form 『books』 to generally refer to the act of reading, in line with the context.
error_sentence: I really like clean my bedroom and my mother's room.
correct_sentence: I really like cleaning my bedroom and my mother's room.
error: clean
correction: cleaning
error_type: Nonfinite Verb Form Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Nonfinite Verb Form Error: According to English grammar rules, the verb 〈like〉 is followed by a gerund to express a habitual preference; therefore, 〈like clean〉 in the original sentence needs to be changed to 『like cleaning』 to comply with grammatical rules.