Writing prompt: Write a short essay titled "My next weekend." Based on the picture information, use the future tense (be going to) to introduce your plans for next weekend.

Student essay:
I am going to visit my grandparents next weekend. My parents and i are going to buy some fruits and food for them. I am going to help my family clean the house. In the afternoon, I am going to play the computer games. I am also going to play the football with my friends. I think it is going to be happy on that day.

Corrected essay:
I am going to visit my grandparents next weekend. My parents and I are going to buy some fruit and food for them. I am going to help my family clean the house. In the afternoon, I am going to play the computer games. I am also going to play football with my friends. I think it is going to be a happy day.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: My parents and i are going to buy some fruits and food for them.
correct_sentence: My parents and I are going to buy some fruit and food for them.
error: i
correction: I
error_type: Case Error
error_severity: 1
error_description: Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first-person singular pronoun 〈i〉 must always be capitalized when used as a pronoun. Therefore, the lowercase form 〈i〉 is corrected to the uppercase form 『I』 to comply with writing standards.
error_sentence: My parents and i are going to buy some fruits and food for them.
correct_sentence: My parents and I are going to buy some fruit and food for them.
error: fruits
correction: fruit
error_type: Noun Number Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Noun Number Error: According to English grammar rules, the noun 〈fruits〉 should be in its singular form 『fruit』 here, as 『fruit』 is typically used as an uncountable noun to represent the general concept of fruit, rather than specific multiple types.
error_sentence: I am also going to play the football with my friends.
correct_sentence: I am also going to play football with my friends.
error: the
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Determiner Error: According to English collocation rules, articles are usually not used when referring to the names of sports (such as football, basketball, etc.). Therefore, the definite article 〈the〉 is deleted, correcting 〈play the football〉 to 『play football』 to conform to standard English expression. This rule also applies to other similar sports.
error_sentence: I think it is going to be happy on that day.
correct_sentence: I think it is going to be a happy day.
error: happy on that
correction: a happy
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: ① Determiner Error: The subject 〈it〉 referring to “that day” should not be modified by 〈happy〉; according to English expression habits, it is recommended to change it to 『happy day』. When 〈happy〉 as an adjective modifies the countable singular noun 〈day〉, the indefinite article 〈a〉 needs to be added to form the structure 『a happy day』, conforming to the correct pattern "indefinite article + adjective + noun"; ② Word Redundancy Error: According to English expression habits, the phrase 〈on that〉 is not needed before 〈a happy day〉; therefore, the redundant words 〈on that〉 are deleted, simplifying 〈on that day〉 to 『day』 to better align with the idiomatic structure of English time adverbials.