Writing prompt: Based on what you learned in this unit and the provided hints, use colors to describe your classmate's attire.
Writing hints: wear; shirt; shoes; beautiful; like

Student essay:
I like my classmate's wear. She wear is so beautiful. I like it. She wear a pink shirt, a white dress and a pink shose.

Corrected essay:
I like my classmate's clothes. Her clothes are so beautiful. I like them. She wears a pink shirt, a white dress and pink shoes.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: I like my classmate's wear. She wear is so beautiful.
correct_sentence: I like my classmate's clothes. Her clothes are so beautiful.
error: wear. She wear is
correction: clothes. Her clothes are
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 4
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to the sentence's meaning, it expresses 'I like my classmate's clothes'. When 〈wear〉 is used as a noun, it means 'the act of wearing', while the specific 'clothing' should use the countable noun 'clothes'; 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to 『clothes』; ② Pronoun Error: According to the sentence's meaning, a possessive pronoun is needed here to show possession. Therefore, the subjective pronoun 〈She〉 should be changed to the possessive pronoun 『Her』 to accurately express 'her clothes'; ③ Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The plural subject 〈Her clothes〉 requires the plural form of the verb. Therefore, 〈is〉 needs to be changed to 『are』 to comply with the subject-verb agreement principle.
error_sentence: I like it.
correct_sentence: I like them.
error: it
correction: them
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 2
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to the context, this refers to 'I like my classmate's clothes', and the object requires a plural pronoun. Therefore, there is a pronoun error here. The singular word 〈it〉 needs to be changed to the plural pronoun 『them』 to match the number consistency in the context.
error_sentence: She wear a pink shirt, a white dress and a pink shose.
correct_sentence: She wears a pink shirt, a white dress and pink shoes.
error: wear
correction: wears
error_type: Subject-Verb Agreement Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Subject-Verb Agreement Error: The third-person singular subject 〈she〉 requires the third-person singular form of the verb; there is a subject-verb agreement error here. The base form verb 〈wear〉 needs to be changed to the simple present third-person singular form 『wears』 to comply with the context's tense and the subject-verb agreement principle.
error_sentence: She wear a pink shirt, a white dress and a pink shose.
correct_sentence: She wears a pink shirt, a white dress and pink shoes.
error: a pink shose
correction: pink shoes
error_type: Determiner Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Determiner Error: According to the sentence's meaning, it expresses 'a pair of shoes', which is a plural countable noun. An indefinite article cannot precede a plural noun; therefore, the redundant 〈a〉 needs to be deleted; ② Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the correct spelling for the plural form of 'shoe' is 'shoes'; the misspelling 〈shose〉 needs to be changed to 『shoes』 to conform to English spelling conventions.