Writing prompt: Using the given vocabulary and sentence patterns, and referring to the table, write a short essay.
Gao Feng is a football fan. He owns four footballs and many photos of soccer stars, but he never plays football; he only watches games on TV. He has two friends, Mike and Dave. Based on the table hints, introduce the hobbies of Gao Feng and his two friends in about 50 words.
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Student essay:
Gao Feng likes football. He has 4 footballs, and he has many football people photo, but he doesn't play football, he likes looking ply football on TV. Mike and Dave are his friends. Mike likes playing basketball, but he doesn't like playing ping-pong, because it's boring for he. Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, because it's difficulr for he.

Corrected essay:
Gao Feng likes football. He has 4 footballs, and he has many football stars' photos, but he doesn't play football. He likes watching football games on TV. Mike and Dave are his friends. Mike likes playing basketball, but he doesn't like playing ping-pong, because it's boring for him. Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, because it's difficult for him.

Error analysis:
error_sentence: He has 4 footballs, and he has many football people photo, but he doesn't play football, he likes looking ply football on TV.
correct_sentence: He has 4 footballs, and he has many football stars' photos, but he doesn't play football.
error: people photo
correction: stars' photos
error_type: Noun Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Noun Error: According to the context, 〈people〉 in 〈football people〉 generally refers to "people in the football world", but a more precise expression for football stars is needed here, so the common noun 〈people〉 is changed to the specific noun 『stars』 for accurate meaning; ② Noun Possessive Error: According to English grammar rules, the possessive form is needed to indicate possession, so the common noun 〈stars〉 is changed to the possessive form 『stars'』 to modify the following noun; ③ Noun Number Error: According to the sentence meaning, 〈photo〉 refers to multiple photos and needs to be in the plural form for general reference, so the singular countable noun 〈photo〉 is changed to the plural noun 『photos』 to conform to logical semantics.
error_sentence: He has 4 footballs, and he has many football people photo, but he doesn't play football, he likes looking ply football on TV.
correct_sentence: He has 4 footballs, and he has many football stars' photos, but he doesn't play football. He likes watching football games on TV.
error: , he likes looking ply football
correction: . He likes watching football games
error_type: Word Redundancy Error
error_severity: 5
error_description: ① Punctuation Error: According to English grammar rules, a comma 〈,〉 cannot connect two independent clauses (i.e., two complete sentences), so the comma should be changed to a period 『.』 to correctly separate the sentence structures; ② Case Error: According to English writing conventions, the first letter of the first word in a sentence must be capitalized, so the lowercase form 〈he〉 is changed to the uppercase form 『He』 to ensure correct format; ③ Verb Choice Error: According to the context semantics, 〈looking〉 does not collocate well with 〈football〉; it should be changed to the more logical verb 『watching』 to accurately express the meaning of "watching football"; ④ Word Redundancy Error: 〈ply〉 has no actual meaning in this context and does not conform to expression habits; it should be deleted directly to keep the sentence concise; ⑤ Noun Error: According to the sentence meaning, it is necessary to specify that the object being watched is "football games", so the countable noun 『games』 is added to make the expression more complete, i.e., modified to 『watching football games』.
error_sentence: Mike likes playing basketball, but he doesn't like playing ping-pong, because it's boring for he.
correct_sentence: Mike likes playing basketball, but he doesn't like playing ping-pong, because it's boring for him.
error: he
correction: him
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈for〉 should be followed by an objective pronoun as its object, but the original sentence mistakenly uses the subjective pronoun 〈he〉, so it needs to be changed to the objective form 『him』 to comply with grammatical norms.
error_sentence: Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, because it's difficulr for he.
correct_sentence: Dave likes soccer, but he doesn't like baseball, because it's difficult for him.
error: difficulr for he
correction: difficult for him
error_type: Pronoun Error
error_severity: 3
error_description: ① Spelling Error: According to English spelling rules, the adjective 〈difficulr〉 is misspelled; the correct form should be 『difficult』 to accurately express the meaning "difficult"; ② Pronoun Error: According to English grammar rules, the preposition 〈for〉 must be followed by an objective pronoun as its object, so the subjective pronoun 〈he〉 is changed to the objective form 『him』 to make the sentence structure conform to grammatical norms.