Before revision: Other music writers have used "new sincerity" to describe later performers such as Arcade Fire,Huffington Post, "ultra-sincere indie artists from Arcade Fire" Huffington Post, May 16, 2013.
After revision: Other music writers have used "new sincerity" to describe later performers Arcade Fire,Huffington Post, "ultra-sincere indie artists from Arcade Fire" Huffington Post, May 16, 2013.