Before revision: They used the language of companionate ties..." (Allen, K.R., Blieszner, R., Roberto, K.A., 2011, 1167) In addition to mother-daughter ties, sibling ties can be carefully examined for further exemplification in female bonding.
After revision: They used the language of companionate ties..." In addition to mother-daughter ties, sibling ties can be carefully examined for further exemplification in female bonding.