Before revision: "; Dr. Seuss's ode to brevity: "So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads"; Johan Cruyff's "Playing football is very simple but playing simple football is the hardest thing there is"; Antoine de Saint-Exupéry's "It seems that perfection is reached not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away"; Colin Chapman, the founder of Lotus Cars, urged his designers to "Simplify, then add lightness"; Attributed to Albert Einstein, although this may be an editor's paraphrase of a lecture he gave ., "Make everything as simple as possible, but not simpler"; Steve Jobs's "Simplify, Simplify, Simplify", which simplified Henry David Thoreau's quote "Simplify, simplify, simplify" for emphasis .
After revision: "; Dr. Seuss's ode to brevity: "So the writer who breeds more words than he needs, is making a chore for the reader who reads"; Johan Cruyff's "Playing football is very simple but playing simple football is the hardest thing there is"; Antoine de Saint-Exupéry's "It seems that perfection is reached not when there is nothing left to add, but when there is nothing left to take away"; Colin Chapman, the founder of Lotus Cars, urged his designers to "Simplify, then add lightness"; Attributed to Albert Einstein, although this may be an editor's paraphrase of a lecture he gave : "Make everything as simple as possible, but not simpler"; Steve Jobs's "Simplify, Simplify, Simplify", which simplified Henry David Thoreau's quote "Simplify, simplify, simplify" for emphasis