Before revision: However, since the maturing of older Millenials in the late 2000s, it has increasingly dropped in favor of challenging real-world sexism that has become mainstream as of Generation Z's maturing of the 2020s.
After revision: beenHowever, since the maturing of older Millenials in the late 2000s, it has increasingly dropped in favor of challenging real-world sexism that has become mainstream as of Generation Z's maturing of the 2020s.