Before revision: Examples Anthropologist Darryl Li writes that RTLM, a radio station that supported the Rwandan genocide, "played on existing dominant discourses in Rwandan public life for the purposes of encouraging listeners to participate in the killings" .
After revision: Anthropologist Darryl Li writes that RTLM, a radio station that supported the Rwandan genocide, "played on existing dominant discourses in Rwandan public life for the purposes of encouraging listeners to participate in the killings"