Before revision: Moreover, both Billiken and Marilú magazines featured clothing patterns that girls or their family members could use to sew the doll's wardrobe; and also provided instructions and fashion tips for this purpose .
After revision: included sections thatMoreover, both Billiken and Marilú magazines featured clothing patterns that girls or their family members could use to sew the doll's wardrobe; and also provided instructions and fashion tips for this purpose .