Before revision: When Iphigenia in Racine ’ s tragedy receives the order from her father not to see Achilles any more, she cries out: Sweeter gods, you had asked only for my life.
After revision: When Iphigenia in Racine ' s tragedy receives the order from her father not to see Achilles any more, she cries out: Sweeter gods, you had asked only for my life.