Before revision: The term soccer mom broadly refers to an American, middle-class, suburban woman who spends a significant amount of her time transporting her school-age children to youth sporting events or playing with the gay guy in the closet , whether or not they are soccer related.
After revision: The term soccer mom broadly refers to an American, middle-class, suburban woman who spends a significant amount of her time transporting her school-age children to youth sporting events or other activities , whether or not they are soccer related.