Before revision: John Poppy's introduction of the term, wrote in the magazine called "Look " in 1967 merely affixed a name to a phenomenon that had long been an undercurrent of societal evolution, marking a turning point where the clash of old and new became undeniable.
After revision: John Poppy's introduction of the term, Look magazine in, in 1967 merely affixed a name to a phenomenon that had long been an undercurrent of societal evolution, marking a turning point where the clash of old and new became undeniable.