Before revision: In the "Manifesto", Haraway writes "there is nothing about being 'female' that naturally binds women", which goes against a defining characteristic of traditional feminism that calls women to join together in order to advocate for members of their gender .
After revision: In the "Manifesto", Haraway writes "there is nothing about being 'female' that naturally binds women", which challenges the belief that women shouldon the basis of their shared experiences join together in order to advocate for members of their gender .