Before revision: A successful Kickstarter campaign from Hello in 2014 raised 2.4 million from more than 19,000 backers, and a preliminary financing round from Silicon Valley backers raised another 2.4 million from more than 19,000 backers, making it one of the most successful Kickstarter campaigns of all time.
After revision: A successful Kickstarter campaign from Hello in 2014 raised 2.4 million from more than 19,000 backers, making it one of the most successful Kickstarter campaigns of all time.