Before revision: This is why an effective online marketing strategy requires an omnichannel approach that combines various traffic sources, campaigns and re-engagement paths, and makes them work as one to finalize the purchase and even lead to loyal customers or brand advocates
After revision: .This is why an effective online marketing strategy requires an omnichannel approach that combines various traffic sources, campaigns and re-engagement paths, and makes them work as one to finalize the purchase and even lead to loyal customers or brand advocates