Before revision: They, among others, argue that adherence to the dominator model over the partnership model denies the possibility of a more equal society, systematically allowing for the persecution of those who are “dominated” —including racial and ethnic minorities, LGBT people, and women.
After revision: They, among others, argue that adherence to the dominator model over the partnership model denies the possibility of a more equal society, systematically allowing for the persecution of those who are "dominated" —including racial and ethnic minorities, LGBT people, and women.