Before revision: By applying national statistics to the city’s deomographics , they estimate that 200,000 San Francisco residents lack access to informational URL Today, the Internet and other digital technologies, are very important for employment, information/education, and social networking.
After revision: By applying national statistics to the city’s demographics , they estimate that 200,000 San Francisco residents lack access to informational URL Today, the Internet and other digital technologies, are very important for employment, information/education, and social networking.