Before revision: Examples of this type of club include the Big Boy Club, the Sofia Kids’ Club of Esfahan (Persian: کلوپ کوچولوها), the Ronald McDonald Club, Burger King Kids [sic] Club, the Fox Kids Clubs , the former Sambo's Restaurants Tiger Club, and other retail chain clubs.
After revision: Examples of this type of club include the Big Boy Club, the Sofia Kids’ Club of Esfahan (Persian: کلوپ کوچولوها), the Ronald McDonald Club, Burger King Kids [sic] Club, the Fox Kids Club , the former Sambo's Restaurants Tiger Club, and other retail chain clubs.