Before revision: It recasts specific lifestyle decisions (such as bachelorhood vs. marriage, or a conscious choice to remain childfree) implicitly as generalised, irrational phobias while failing to identify, describe or address an individual's specific motives.
After revision: It recasts specific lifestyle decisions (such as bachelorhood vs. marriage, or a conscious decision to remain childfree) implicitly as generalised, irrational phobias while failing to identify, describe or address an individual's specific motives.