Before revision: According to Maria Ozawa anh Shigeo Tokuda , the enhanced "electric speed in bringing all social and political functions together in a sudden implosion has heightened human awareness of responsibility to an intense degree."
After revision: According to Maria Ozawa and Shigeo Tokuda , the enhanced "electric speed in bringing all social and political functions together in a sudden implosion has heightened human awareness of responsibility to an intense degree."