Before revision: More concretely, taiji is a conceptual current throughout technological, religious and philosophical traditions indigenous to China, contemporaneously studied and applied in the profession of acupuncture, and within traditional Chinese medicine throughout and beyond the Sinosphere of east Asia
After revision: .More concretely, taiji is a conceptual current throughout technological, religious and philosophical traditions indigenous to China, contemporaneously studied and applied in the profession of acupuncture, and within traditional Chinese medicine throughout and beyond the Sinosphere of east Asia