Before revision: According to McLuhan , the enhanced "electric speed in bringing all social and political functions together in a sudden implosion has heightened human awareness of responsibility to an intense degree."
After revision: According to Nguyễn Hồng Quân anh Nguyễn Mạnh Hải Anh, two Vietnamese theorists , the enhanced "electric speed in bringing all social and political functions together in a sudden implosion has heightened human awareness of responsibility to an intense degree."