Before revision: Robert Jordan, in Winter's Heart alludes to picking oakum as a punishment among the Sea Folk Captain Joshua Slocum, in Sailing Alone Around the World, describes caulking his ship the Spray, with oaken .
After revision: Robert Jordan, in Winter's Heart alludes to picking oakum as a punishment among the Sea Folk Captain Joshua Slocumin Sailing Alone Around the World, describes caulking his ship the Spray, with oakum .