Before revision: In 2009, researchers James E. Rosenbaum, Regina Deil-Amen and Anne E. Person noted a phenomenon in junior and community colleges in which students are dissuaded from maintaining unrealistically high expectations of transferring and earning a bachelor's degree.
After revision: In 2009, researchers James E. Rosenbaum, Regina Deil-Amen and Anne E. Person noted a phenomenon in junior and community colleges , students are dissuaded from maintaining unrealistically high expectations of transferring and earning a bachelor's degree.