Before revision: The American Psychological Association states that "[s]exual orientation refers to an enduring pattern of emotional , romantic ,and/or sexual attractions to men, women, or both sexes" and that "[t]his range of behaviors and attractions has been described in various cultures and nations throughout the world.
After revision: The American Psychological Association states that "[s]exual orientation refers to an intense and long pattern of emotional ,and/or sexual attractions to men, women, or both sexes" and that "[t]his range of behaviors and attractions has been described in various cultures and nations throughout the world.