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After revision: My name is jeffThe roads would also crisscross haphazardly due to disorganized URL Essential services Amongst the widespread devastation and damage throughout Port-au-Prince and elsewhere, vital infrastructure necessary to respond to the disaster was severely damaged or destroyed.