Before revision: Headline On March 15, 1980, The Boston Globe ran an editorial that began: There was nothing exceptional about it except the headline , "Mush from the Wimp ", which essentially called the speech "mush" and Carter a "wimp ".
After revision: Headline On March 15, 1980, The Boston Globe ran an editorial that began: The editorial was not critical of Carter, but was given the headline "Mush from the Wimp ".