Before revision: Professional experience in treaties Treaty of Waitangi Hill has been acknowledged as "an established scholar of the Treaty of Waitangi," with "a sure grasp of the important interconnections between the centuries, especially where Maori engagement with the state is concerned."
After revision: Involvement in Treaty of Waitangi reconciliation process Treaty of Waitangi Hill has been acknowledged as "an established scholar of the Treaty of Waitangi," with "a sure grasp of the important interconnections between the centuries, especially where Maori engagement with the state is concerned."