Before revision: Findings in a 2012 article by Tobias Greitemeyer and Jack Hollingdale titled, “Changing the Track in Music and Misogyny: Listening to Music With Pro-Equality Lyrics Improves Attitudes and Behavior Toward Women” 1 that the notion that media exposure may not only harm attitudes toward women (as previous research has documented), it may even improve people’ images of women (p.61).
After revision:  that the notion that media exposure may not only harm attitudes toward women (as previous research has documented), it may even improve people’ images of women (p.61).