Before revision: Several countries, he wrote, have begun outsourcing the housing of asylum-seeking refugees to other countries, and countries such as ones in Europe and the United States, have transferred pirates they have caught, to be tried and imprisoned in Kenya and the Seychelles.
After revision: Several countries, he wrote, have begun outsourcing the housing of asylum-seeking refugees to other countries, and countries including European countries and the United States, have transferred pirates they have caught, to be tried and imprisoned in Kenya and the Seychelles.