Before revision: Ikemen are typically characterized as being sharply dressed individuals with slanted, intelligent eyes, husky voices, slender wrists and fingers , a manly build , an unruffled appearance , pale skin, and clean smelling with an air of mystery around them.
After revision: Ikemen are typically characterized as being sharply dressed individuals with deep-set, slender, and intelligent-looking eyes; husky voices; slender wrists and fingers ; a manly build ; an unruffled appearance ; pale skin; and clean smelling with an air of mystery around them.