Before revision: Live sex shows have been marginalized after a brief period of acceptance, perhaps due to completion from interactive on-line performances, or because the enactment of pornographic scenarios on stage are "too real" for general public enjoyment .
After revision: Live sex shows have been marginalized after a brief period of acceptance, perhaps due to completion from interactive on-line performances, or because the enactment of pornographic scenarios on stage are "too real" for general public enjoyment