Before revision: Some teen idols began their careers as child actors, such as Selena Gomez, Britney Spears, Hilary Duff, Raven-Symoné and Miley Cyrus.
After revision: Some teen idols began their careers as child actors, such as Britney Spears, Hilary Duff, Raven-Symoné and Miley Cyrus.