Before revision: As the Captain of the USS Barb states on her 10th War Patrol: Visibility--which had been fair on the surface after moonrise--was now exceedingly poor due to spoondrift.
After revision: (SS-220)As the Captain of the USS Barb states on her 10th War Patrol: Visibility--which had been fair on the surface after moonrise--was now exceedingly poor due to spoondrift.