Before revision: Volunteer teams have included employees of various corporations and businesses, including IBM, IntelliQuest and Dell, and government agencies, such as Texas Parks and Wildlife, the Texas State Library & Archives and the City of Austin, as well as individual volunteers forming teams independently.
After revision: ,Volunteer teams have included employees of various corporations and businesses, including IBM, IntelliQuest and Dell, and government agencies, such as Texas Parks and Wildlife, the Texas State Library & Archives and the City of Austin, as well as individual volunteers forming teams independently.