Before revision: By the 1970s, singles events had developed a reputation as a "ritual of lies and mistrust ", replete with men in search of casual sex, cold and unfriendly women, and frequent misunderstandings.The Singles Dance: A ritual of lies and mistrust, Human Behavior, vol.
After revision: (you know those people who are lonely)and all that bad stuffBy the 1970s, singles events had developed a reputation as a "ritual of lies and mistrust ", replete with men in search of casual sex, cold and unfriendly women, and frequent misunderstandings.The Singles Dance: A ritual of lies and mistrust, Human Behavior, vol.