Before revision:  Finally, the demand for better women presentation from moviegoers has also not been strong enough to compel the film industry for a change, as movies that have poor women representation can still be very popular and successful in the box office.
After revision:  Finally, the demand for better women presentation from moviegoers has also not been strong enough to compel the film industry to change, as movies that have poor women representation can still be very popular and successful in the box office.