Before revision: He states that oung women were often traumatized by menarche, and that in 1960 at least three older women had confined themselves entirely to bed to avoid a potential "madness" induced by menopause.
After revision: He states that young women were often traumatized by menarche, and that in 1960 at least three older women had confined themselves entirely to bed to avoid a potential "madness" induced by menopause.