Before revision: "Single Parents," Mapping L.A., Los Angeles Times Vermont Knolls' s residents with a four-year bachelor's degree amounted to 5.4% of the population aged 25 and older in 2000, which was a low figure when compared with the city and the county at large; the percentage of those residents with less than a high school diploma was high for the county.
After revision: "Single Parent," Mapping L.A., Los Angeles Times Vermont Knolls' s residents with a four-year bachelor's degree amounted to 5.4% of the population aged 25 and older in 2000, which was a low figure when compared with the city and the county at large; the percentage of those residents with less than a high school diploma was high for the county.