Before revision: For example, in the Indian Magazine Frontline, Volume 18 - Issue 22, Oct. 27 - Nov. 09, 2001, Sundar Sarukkai discussed its conclusions and applicability to the Indian context, which he criticizes for being cliquish and unprofessional.
After revision: For example, in the Indian Magazine Frontline, Sundar Sarukkai discussed its conclusions and applicability to the Indian context, which he criticizes for being cliquish and unprofessional.