Before revision: Although LaVey is thought to have had more impact with his Satanic aesthetics of "colourful rituals " and "scandalous clothes " that created a "gigantic media circus", he also promoted his ideas in writings, such as The Satanic Bible.
After revision: Although LaVey is thought to have had more impact with his Satanic aesthetics of "colourful rituals " and "scandalous clothes " that created a "gigantic media circus", he also promoted his ideas in writings, such as the popularritualsclothes Satanic Bible.