Before revision: But historian McNally finds the accounts on point to be unreliable , noting that the only contemporary chronicler who describes the summer was Paterculus, and that Paterculus had reason to dislike Varus.
After revision: However, historian McNally finds the accounts on some points to be unreliable , noting that the only contemporary chronicler who describes the summer was Paterculus, and that Paterculus had reason to dislike Varus.