Before revision: Metrosexual (a portmanteau of metropolitan and sexual) is a term describing a man in an urban, post-industrial, capitalist culture , who is especially meticulous and scrupulous about his personal style, grooming and appearance.
After revision: Metrosexual (a portmanteau of metropolitan and sexual) is a term describing a man in an urban post-industrial, capitalist culture , who is especially meticulous and scrupulous about his personal style, grooming and appearance.