Before revision: If they took other actions, that is, if they did not cooperate with Pasteur – if they did not take action (at least according to Pasteur ’ s intentions) – then Pasteur ’ s story may be a bit different.
After revision: If they took other actions, that is, if they did not cooperate with Pasteur – if they did not take action (at least according to Pasteur ' s intentions) – then Pasteur ' s story may be a bit different.