Before revision: Dr Joel Lexchin found the secrecy arrangements in the Memorandum of Understanding to be troublesome and said that "that just makes it more difficult for the medical community to know how drugs were approved, how the data were assessed, and even what data were assessed."
After revision: Dr Joel Lexchin found the secrecy arrangements in the memorandum of understanding to be troublesome and said that "that just makes it more difficult for the medical community to know how drugs were approved, how the data were assessed, and even what data were assessed."