Before revision: "But there is a gardener, invisible, intangible, insensible , to electric shocks, a gardener who has no scent and makes no sound, a gardener who comes secretly to look after the garden which he loves.
After revision: "But there is a gardener invisible, intangible, insensible , to electric shocks, a gardener who has no scent and makes no sound, a gardener who comes secretly to look after the garden which he loves.