Before revision: The New York Times reported in 1973 on Family Home Evening commenting it was, " their way of attacking delinquency and deteriorating morality is to strengthen family solidarity through a Monday night get‐together in the home called the 'family home evening'.
After revision: The New York Times reported in 1973 on Family Home Evening : " The Mormons' way of attacking delinquency and deteriorating morality is to strengthen family solidarity through a Monday night get-together in the home called the 'family home evening'.