Before revision: Although they may or may not personally condone behaviors associated with these issues, civil libertarians hold that the advantages of unfettered public discourse outweigh the disadvantages, and that the coercion of speech is inherently evil irrespective of its advantages .
After revision: Although they may or may not personally condone behaviors associated with these issues, civil libertarians hold that the advantages of unfettered public discourse outweigh the disadvantages, and that the coercion of speech is inherently evil irrespective .