Before revision:  When the seller is able to discriminate between private and public WOM, the optimal strategy is to cheaply incentivize the more connected people to pass on the information publicly and then offer a high bonus for private WOM.
After revision:  When the seller is able to discriminate between private and public WOM, the optimal strategy is to cheaply incentivize the more connected people to pass on the information publicly and then offer a high bonus for Private WOM.