Before revision: posit "a legal definition of rape as non-consensual penetration achieved through unlawful force, coercion, fraud or exploitation – that is, containing a fault element that describes the tactic the perpetrator used to effect the assault – may conform more closely to social and social science definitions of rape."
After revision: posit "a legal definition of rape as non-consensual penetration achieved through unlawful force, coercion, fraud or exploitation — that is, containing a fault element that describes the tactic the perpetrator used to effect the assault — may conform more closely to social and social science definitions of rape."