Before revision: The same issue of Newsweek had a full page review of another 1997 book, Time for Life, which had as a major point flaws in most people 's "ability to separate faulty perception of time use from reality."
After revision: The same issue of Newsweek had a full page review of another 1997 book, Time for Life, which emphasizes that most people have a flawed "ability to separate faulty perception of time use from reality."