Before revision: Urban planning Three architecture and planning students noted that the "latest" (1999) Star Wars movie ( The Phantom Menace) offered "a variety of urban development options" in a San Diego Union-Tribune story headlined "How would you like to live on a Star Wars' world?
After revision: Urban planning In 1999, architecture and planning students noted that ( The Phantom Menace) offered "a variety of urban development options" in a San Diego Union-Tribune story headlined "How would you like to live on a Star Wars' world?