Before revision:  English dev accuracy is often uncorrelated (or even anti-correlated) with target language accuracy, and zero-shot cross-lingual performance varies greatly within the same fine-tuning run and between different fine-tuning runs.
After revision:  English dev accuracy is often uncorrelated (or even anti-correlated) with target language accuracy, and zero-shot cross-lingual performance varies greatly at different points in the same fine-tuning run and between different fine-tuning runs.