Before revision: However, by combining separate pieces of information from agencies at the federal, state, local, and tribal level around the world with information from the maritime industry and from non-governmental organizations, it is possible to compile a very clear picture of the maritime domain .
After revision: However, by combining separate pieces of information other agencies at the federal, state, local, and tribal level around the world with information from the maritime industry and from non-governmental organizations, it is possible to keep track of the status of every ocean-bound and sea-bound vessel .