Before revision: Typically, display windows and showcases that are in enclosed areas, such as shopping malls and office buildings, are less vulnerable to smash-and-grab raids than those on open streets , particularly if the streets are poorly lit or unobserved (such as premises in pedestrian subways or unstaffed transport facilities).
After revision: Typically, display windows and showcases that are in enclosed areas, such as shopping malls and office buildings, are less vulnerable to smash and grab raids than those on open streets – particularly where the streets are poorly lit or unobserved (such as premises in pedestrian subways or unstaffed transport facilities).