Before revision: The theory appeals to an analogy with medical epidemiology; because “ ...macro-phenomena such as endemic and epidemic diseases are unpacked in terms of patterns of micro-phenomena of individual pathology and inter-individual transmission ” .
After revision: The theory appeals to an analogy with medical epidemiology; because " ...macro-phenomena such as endemic and epidemic diseases are unpacked in terms of patterns of micro-phenomena of individual pathology and inter-individual transmission " .