Before revision: When Luud joined Amsterdam's city council in 1967, he proposed the Wittefiestenplan, that all abandoned bicycles that were collected should be painted white and placed back on the streets so that they could be used by everyone .
After revision: When Luud joined Amsterdam's city council in 1967, he proposed the Wittefiestenplan, that all abandoned bicycles that were collected should be painted white and placed back on the streets so that they could be used by everyone