Before revision: He was saved as a puppy after being found crying in burnt-down ruins after a fire and lived in the Otaru fire station for most of his life, being looked after by the firefighters.Aoyagi（2017), pp.8-11.
After revision: He was saved as a puppy after being found in burnt-down ruins after a fire and lived in the Otaru fire station for most of his life, being looked after by the firefighters.Aoyagi（2017), pp.8-11.