Before revision: History is "the raw facts of the past" (Aitchison, MacLeod, & Shaw 2000, p. 96) while heritage "is history processed through mythology, ideology, nationalism, local pride, romantic ideas or just plain marketing" (Schouten 1995, p. 21).
After revision: History is "the raw facts of the past" (Aitchison, MacLeod, & Shaw 2000, p. 96) while heritage is " history processed through mythology, ideology, nationalism, local pride, romantic ideas or just plain marketing" (Schouten 1995, p. 21).