Before revision: To avert French violent revolution in Germany, the government created a national status class of men and women to receive a classical education that would prepare them to discharge the duties and responsibilities of political administration; thus the Bildungsbürgertum social class was defined culturally, not socio-economically.
After revision: To avert a French-style violent revolution in Germany, the government created a national status class of men and women to receive a classical education that would prepare them to discharge the duties and responsibilities of political administration; thus the Bildungsbürgertum social class was defined culturally, not socio-economically.