Before revision: Although Western armies traditionally created ties between soldiers through informal means such as teamwork or shared hardships instilled by discipline,George 1967, p. 27. the Chinese army relied on formal methods to assimilate recruits into their units.George 1967, p. 29.
After revision: militaryAlthough Western armies traditionally created ties between soldiers through informal means such as teamwork or shared hardships instilled by discipline,George 1967, p. 27. the Chinese army relied on formal methods to assimilate recruits into their units.George 1967, p. 29.