Before revision: A street without a sidewalk, where the pedestrian must share the road with cars The development of the car has contributed to changes in employment distribution, shopping patterns, social interactions, manufacturing priorities and city planning; increasing use of cars has reduced the roles of walking, horses and railroads.
After revision: Suburban street withoutSome inner city streets also lack a sidewalk sidewalk, where the pedestrian must share the road with cars The development of the car has contributed to changes in employment distribution, shopping patterns, social interactions, manufacturing priorities and city planning; increasing use of cars has reduced the roles of walking, horses and railroads.