Before revision: He systematically posed and articulated the problem of the specificity of the constitutive values of the landscape, to the point of making clear the reasons for the "modern cult of the garden" .
After revision: The theme of the relationship between nature and art was the focus of his research, he systematically posed and articulated the problem of the specificity of the constitutive values of the landscape, to the point of making clear the reasons for the "modern cult of the garden" .