Before revision: Moreover, certain aspects of the Bates method can put its followers at risk: They may damage their eyes through overexposure to sunlight, not wear their corrective lenses while driving , or neglect conventional eye care, possibly allowing serious conditions to develop.
After revision: Moreover, certain aspects of the Bates method can put its followers at risk: They may damage their eyes through overexposure to sunlight, not wear their corrective lenses when they need them (e.g., while driving) , or neglect conventional eye care, possibly allowing serious conditions to develop.