Before revision: Criticism and debate Writing in Asterisk, a magazine related to effective altruism, Ozy Brennan criticized Gebru's and Torres's grouping of different philosophies as if they were a "monolithic" movement.
After revision: Criticism and debate Ozy Brennan, writing in a magazine affiliated with the Centre for Effective Altruism, criticized Gebru's and Torres's grouping of different philosophies as if they were a "monolithic" movement.