Before revision: Similarly, there are 'examples where misguided loyalty on the part of a business owner or manager has led to a decline in a business's performance'.Michael H. Shenkman, The Strategic Heart (1996) p. xiii Sometimes however institutions are torn by conflicting codes of loyalty.
After revision: Similarly, there are 'examples where misguided loyalty on the part of a business owner or manager has led to a decline in a business's performance'.Michael H. Shenkman, The Strategic Heart (1996) p. xiii Sometimes , however, institutions are torn by conflicting codes of loyalty.