Before revision: Among which was the poetical persona of Lord Byron (George Gordon Byron, 1788–1824) wore a poet's shirt featuring a lace-collar, a lace-placket, and lace-cuffs in a portrait of himself in Albanian national costume in 1813; Count d'Orsay (Alfred Guillaume Gabriel Grimod d'Orsay, 1801–1852) himself a prominent figure in upper-class social circles and an acquaintance of Lord Bryon likewise embodied the spirit of dandy within elite British society.
After revision: Among them, who was the poetical persona of Lord Byron (George Gordon Byron, 1788–1824) wore a poet's shirt featuring a lace-collar, a lace-placket, and lace-cuffs in a portrait of himself in Albanian national costume in 1813; Count d'Orsay (Alfred Guillaume Gabriel Grimod d'Orsay, 1801–1852) himself a prominent figure in upper-class social circles and an acquaintance of Lord Bryon likewise embodied the spirit of dandy within elite British society.