Before revision: For example, someone dying from complications from pneumonia, diarrheal diseases, HIV/AIDS infections, cancer, a stroke, a heart disease and a sudden organ failure would most likely be listed as some of the death causes of someone .
After revision: For example, some people dying from complications from pneumonia, diarrheal diseases, HIV/AIDS infections, cancer, a stroke, a heart disease and a sudden organ failure would most likely be listed as some of the death causes of .