Before revision: The lack of Egyptian support for the 1979 treaty is caused in part by pan-ethnic and religious fundamentalist sympathies in Egypt for Palestinian and other Arab Muslim militants against Israel, a Jewish-majority state currently in conflict over the territory of Israel and the Palestinian territories , as well as by Egyptian nationalist sentiment against Israel dating back to before Israel's independence in 1948.
After revision: The lack of Egyptian support for the 1979 treaty is caused in part by pan-ethnic and religious fundamentalist sympathies in Egypt for Palestinians against Israel, a Jewish-majority state currently in conflict over the territory of Israel and Palestine , as well as by Egyptian nationalist sentiment against Israel dating back to before Israel's independence in 1948.