Before revision: One of the main examples used by Bauman is the social media platform Facebook, which he likens to an online "confessional… where inner-truths [about its users] are revealed" .
After revision: ; he also described mobile phones and similar portable communication devices as "portable electronic confessionals"One of the main examples used by Bauman is the social media platform Facebook, which he likens to an online "confessional… where inner-truths [about its users] are revealed" .