Before revision: Writing in the preface to volume II in 1995, Rosamond McKitterick commented on the "unhappy legacy of the old volume III Germany and the Western Empire when the principles of scholarship were sullied with political enmities and many scholars excluded as authors because of their nationality", a fault that she felt was expunged in the new history.
After revision: ()Writing in the preface to volume II in 1995, Rosamond McKitterick commented on the "unhappy legacy of the old volume III Germany and the Western Empire when the principles of scholarship were sullied with political enmities and many scholars excluded as authors because of their nationality", a fault that she felt was expunged in the new history.