Before revision: In Japanese arts At first, something that exhibited wabi-sabi qualities could only be discovered , it was "found in the simple dwellings of the farmers that dotted the landscape, epitomized in neglected stone lanterns overgrown with moss or in simple bowls and other household utensils used by the common folk."
After revision: In Japanese arts At first, something that exhibited wabi-sabi qualities could only be discovered ; it could be "found in the simple dwellings of the farmers that dotted the landscape, epitomized in neglected stone lanterns overgrown with moss or in simple bowls and other household utensils used by the common folk."