Before revision: The most widely recognized gay icons tend to be celebrities—actresses and singers—who have garnered large LGBT fanbases, such as Judy Garland, Madonna, Janet Jackson, Phyllis Diller or Cher.
After revision: The most widely recognized gay icons tend to be celebrities—actresses and singers—who have garnered large LGBT fanbases, such as Judy Garland, Madonna, Janet Jackson, or Cher.