Before revision:  However, the theory for cortex dynamics entails  significant differences with respect to SOB, including the lack of a (bulk) conservation law, the absence of a perfect separation of timescales between driving anddissipation and , the fact that in the former  there is a parameter that controls the overall system state (in blatant contrast with the very idea of URLanization).
After revision:  However, the theory for cortex dynamics entails , however, some significant differences with respect to SOB, including the lack of a (bulk) conservation law, the absence of a perfect separation of timescales between driving anddissipation and , the fact that in the former there is a parameter that controls the overall system state (in blatant contrast with the very idea of URLanization).