Before revision: The phrase first appeared in an almost similar order in the song “When the Red, Red Robin (Comes Bob, Bob, Bobbin' Along)”, a 1926 popular song most famously recorded by singer, actor, and vaudevillian Al Jolson, one of the United States' most famous and highest-paid stars of the 1920s.
After revision: The phrase first appeared in almost similar order in the song “When the Red, Red Robin (Comes Bob, Bob, Bobbin' Along)”, a 1926 popular song most famously recorded by singer, actor, and vaudevillian Al Jolson, one of the United States' most famous and highest-paid stars of the 1920s.