Before revision: Similarly, some user advocates will take a neutral, scientific point of view, and will observe and collect data from users that will suggest that the product and/ or user experience could be changed or improved in a way that users would prefer or benefit from.
After revision: Similarly, some user advocates will take a neutral, scientific point of view, and will observe and collect data from users that will suggest that the product or user experience could be changed or improved in a way that users would prefer or benefit from.