Before revision: Of Man 's first disobedience, and the fruit Of that forbidden tree, whose mortal taste Brought death into the World , and all our woe, With loss of Eden, 'till one greater Man .... —John Milton (from Paradise Lost) Free verse Free verse is usually defined as having no fixed meter and no end rhyme.
After revision: Of man 's first disobedience, and the fruit Of that forbidden tree, whose mortal taste Brought death into the world , and all our woe, With loss of Eden, 'till one greater man .... —John Milton (from Paradise Lost) Free verse Free verse is usually defined as having no fixed meter and no end rhyme.