Before revision: Risks involved Due to a large number and challenging nature of CIO roles and responsibilities – such as the provision of finance, recruitment of professionals and development of policy and strategy – the risk of errors or failures is also consequently high .
After revision: Risks involved The CIO faces a rather high risk of error and failures, as a result of the challenging nature of the role, along with a large number of responsibilities – such as the provision of finance, recruitment of professionals and development of policy and strategy .