Before revision: She shared with The Tufts Admission Magazine, “ I spent one summer contacting our congressional delegation in Massachusetts to make sure that lawmakers are aware of these issues and talking to their staff members who focus on health policy.
After revision: She shared with The Tufts Admission Magazine, " I spent one summer contacting our congressional delegation in Massachusetts to make sure that lawmakers are aware of these issues and talking to their staff members who focus on health policy.