Before revision: 15000 people crowded in a natural amphitheater in Elysian Park, and listened to Strawberry Alarm Clock, The Peanut Butter Conspiracy, Clear Light, The Flaming Groovies.
After revision: 15,000 people crowded in a natural amphitheater in Elysian Park, and listened to Strawberry Alarm Clock, The Peanut Butter Conspiracy, Clear Light, The Flaming Groovies.