Before revision: History In late 1950's Philip Isely along with Thane Read, Margaret Isely and Marie Philips Scot, formulated a plan that would seek to admit delegates from both national governments and delegates from peoples of all countries to a Peoples' World Convention.
After revision: History In late 1950's , Philip Isely,, along with Thane Read, Margaret Isely and Marie Philips Scot, formulated a plan that would seek to admit delegates from both national governments and delegates from peoples of all countries to a Peoples' World Convention.