Before revision: Secondary orality is a concept in the work of scholar Walter J. Ong, as first described in his book Orality and Literacy: The Technologizing of the Word, book form with his publication of Rhetoric, Romance, and Technology: Studies in the Interaction of Expression and Culture.
After revision: Secondary orality is a concept in the work of scholar Walter J. Ong, as first described in book form with his publication of Rhetoric, Romance, and Technology: Studies in the Interaction of Expression and Culture.