Before revision: In addition to being provocative some contemporary choreographers also consider nudity as one of the possible "costumes" available for dance, some seeing nudity as expressing deeper human qualities through dance which works against the sexual objectification of the body in commercial culture .
After revision: on the other handIn addition to being provocative some contemporary choreographers also consider nudity as one of the possible "costumes" available for dance, some seeing nudity as expressing deeper human qualities through dance which works against the sexual objectification of the body in commercial culture .