Before revision: One of Florence Nightingale's first students (Miss van Rensselaer) designed the original uniform for the students at Miss Nightingale's school of nursing .The uniforms comprised a long dress paired with an apron and frilly cap, and it was the first recognisable uniform for nurses in history .
After revision: One of Florence Nightingale's first students (Miss van Rensselaer) designed the original uniform for the students at Miss Nightingale's school of nursing .