Before revision: The themes in corecore videos are very wide in scope; Mendez II wrote " some [videos] may focus on certain themes, such as the experience of being a woman in a sexist world, while others try to comment more broadly on the overwhelming, disconnected, random, oversaturated nature of being a human in the world today."
After revision: The themes in corecore videos are very wide in scope; Mendez II wrote " Some [videos] may focus on certain themes, such as the experience of being a woman in a sexist world, while others try to comment more broadly on the overwhelming, disconnected, random, oversaturated nature of being a human in the world today."