Before revision: In the scene in which Dorothy ’ s dog is taken away, we know that it happens in her aunt and uncle ’ s house, which adds more tension because her beloved friend, Toto is not killed, lost or kidnapped on the street, but is forced to leave by an outsider, Ms. Gulch, who enters Dorothy ’ s private and safe zone (her home).
After revision: In the scene in which Dorothy ' s dog is taken away, we know that it happens in her aunt and uncle ' s house, which adds more tension because her beloved friend, Toto is not killed, lost or kidnapped on the street, but is forced to leave by an outsider, Ms. Gulch, who enters Dorothy ' s private and safe zone (her home).