Before revision: The Boathouse on the Ardfin Estate where the K Foundation burnt £1 million The K Foundation's final solution for their one-million-pound "problem" was rather less showbiz, but dramatic nonetheless, the Foundation having decided that making a public spectacle of the event would lessen its impact.
After revision: The Boathouse on the Ardfin Estate where the K Foundation burnt £1 million The K Foundation's ultimate resolution for their one-million-pound "problem" was rather less showbiz, but dramatic nonetheless, the Foundation having decided that making a public spectacle of the event would lessen its impact.