Before revision: Per one writer's consideration of the banality of crimes against humanity: "This intellectual discourse is mirrored in ordinary people who adduce long-winded explanations for how moral responsibility for events like the Gujarat pogrom cannot really be attributed to anybody, especially the chief minister, who is distant from the crime scene.
After revision: Per one writer's consideration of how diffusion of responsibility results in a sort of banality of crimes against humanity: "This intellectual discourse is mirrored in ordinary people who adduce long-winded explanations for how moral responsibility for events like the Gujarat pogrom cannot really be attributed to anybody, especially the chief minister, who is distant from the crime scene.