Before revision: For example, in trying to explain whyone 's neighbor has the property of being the owner of a bag of sugar, it is revealed that this bag was first in someone else's possession before it was transferred to the neighbor and that the same is true for this and every other previous owner.
After revision: For example, in trying to explain why one 's neighbor has the property of being the owner of a bag of sugar, it is revealed that this bag was first in someone else's possession before it was transferred to the neighbor and that the same is true for this and every other previous owner.