Before revision: In the case of the Brooklyn Immersionists, who worked along a toxicshoreline in north Brooklyn, ecological engagement became as importantas the social .Introduction by Jonathan Fineberg to the catalogue for the exhibition, Out of Town: The Williamsburg Paradigm, curated by Fineberg for the Krannert Art Museum (University of Illinois, 1992).
After revision: In the case of the Brooklyn Immersionists, who lived and worked in a toxic, post-industrial area of north Brooklyn, ecological engagement became equally importantsocial and .Introduction by Jonathan Fineberg to the catalogue for the exhibition, Out of Town: The Williamsburg Paradigm, curated by Fineberg for the Krannert Art Museum (University of Illinois, 1992).