Before revision: For example, in Indonesian, the standard terms of respectful forms of address are Bapak (literally "father") and Ibu ("mother") for men and women respectively, and the neologism Anda was invented in the 1950s to function as a polite second-person URL Japanese, well known for its elaborate system of honorific speech, also exhibits pronoun avoidanceMaynard, Senko K: "An Introduction to Japanese Grammar and Communication Strategies", page 45.
After revision: For example, in Indonesian, the standard terms of respectful forms of address are Bapak (literally "father") and Ibu ("mother") for men and women respectively, and the neologism Anda was invented in the URL to function as a polite second-person URL Japanese, well known for its elaborate system of honorific speech, also exhibits pronoun avoidanceMaynard, Senko K: "An Introduction to Japanese Grammar and Communication Strategies", page 45.