Before revision:  We demonstrate the technique by collecting commonsense knowledge that surrounds three fairly universal rituals---coming-of-age, marriage, and funerals---across three different national groups: the United States , India, and the Philippines.
After revision:  We demonstrate the technique by collecting commonsense knowledge that surrounds six fairly universal rituals---birth, coming-of-age, marriage, funerals, new year, and birthdays---across two national groups: the United States , India, and the Philippines.