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After revision: Thiis was typical on college campuses, where young people "spent a great deal of unsupervised time in mixed company"... A flapper s featured on the poster for the 1924 film The Enemy Sex Carolyn Van Wyck wrote a column for Photoplay, an upmarket magazine that featured articles on pop culture, advice on fashion, and even articles on helping readers channel their inner celebrity.