Before revision: In 1571, London ordered its waits to play “ upon their instruments upon the turret at the Royal Exchange every Sunday and holiday toward the evening .” (with winter break, between September to late March, excepted).
After revision: In 1571, London ordered its waits to play " upon their instruments upon the turret at the Royal Exchange every Sunday and holiday toward the evening ", (with winter break, between September to late March, excepted).