Before revision: Lee from the National University of Singapore noted that Junker omitted the fact that Falun Gong published the "Nine Comments on the CCP" in 2004 and subsequently launched a campaign encouraging people to withdraw from CCP membership
After revision: Lee from the National University of Singapore noted that Junker did not fully discuss the fact that Falun Gong published the "Nine Comments on the CCP" in 2004 and subsequently launched a campaign encouraging people to withdraw from CCP membership