Before revision: Through her persistent letter writing and phone calls— “ I hounded that poor man for nine months, ” Wilson said, Stanley agreed to do the show in May the following year, stating that it would appeal to KSPS' primary viewing audience of fifty and over.
After revision: Through her persistent letter writing and phone calls— " I hounded that poor man for nine months, " Wilson said, Stanley agreed to do the show in May the following year, stating that it would appeal to KSPS' primary viewing audience of fifty and over.