Before revision: Recently, President Asif Ali Zardari's "private spiritual journey" to India to visit Dargah Ajmer Sharif, ended with acceptance by Manmohan Singh, the Indian Prime Minister, to travel to Pakistan.
After revision: Recently, hiPresident Asif Ali Zardari's "private spiritual journey" to India to visit Dargah Ajmer Sharif, ended with acceptance by Manmohan Singh, the Indian Prime Minister, to travel to Pakistan.