Before revision: Pick-up lines range from straightforward conversation openers such as introducing oneself, providing information about oneself, or asking someone about their likes and common interests,Berne, Eric (1964).
After revision: Pwas up|page=118 |year=2003 |isbn=1-59257-153-0 |title=The Complete Idiot's Guide to Dating|first=Judith |last=Kuriansky URL</ref> and common interests,Berne, Eric (1964).