Before revision: Several benefit parties sprang up around the country, which were run by volunteer organizations that donated their proceeds to AIDS / HIV-related charities, such as Halloween's in New Orleans The success of these early parties gave way to other events hosted in other cities, with each party having its own theme.
After revision: Several benefit parties sprang up around the country, which were run by volunteer organizations that donated their proceeds to HIV / AIDS-related charities, such as Halloween's in New Orleans The success of these early parties gave way to other events hosted in other cities, with each party having its own theme.