Before revision: Pick-up lines range from straightforward conversation openers such as introducing oneself, providing information about oneself, or asking someone about their likes and common interests,Berne, Eric (1964).
After revision: , eg Hey Carol, you might as well stop washing your box, because I'm going to lick it clean.. or Hey Suzie, wanna pretend we are indian, you hail a cab and I rape youPick-up lines range from straightforward conversation openers such as introducing oneself, providing information about oneself, or asking someone about their likes and common interests,Berne, Eric (1964).