Before revision: Nakashima and his supporters in the effort weren't sure how many altars they would buildsome proposed two, one that would go in the United Nations Secretariat Building in New York and another to Hiroshima, while others suggested five spread across continents.
After revision: Nakashima and his supporters in the effort were divided over how many altars to buildsome proposed two, one that would go in the United Nations Secretariat Building in New York and another to Hiroshima, while others suggested five spread across continents.