Before revision: Critic Luis Iglesias says that novels and fiction that involved the sea before these two authors "tend to view the sea from the perspective of the shore " focusing on the effect of a nautical culture on the larger culture or society ashore or individuals not familiar with nautical life; by example Iglesias points to how Jane Austen's novels don't represent the genre, because, though the sea plays a prominent part in their plots, it keeps actual sea-culture at a "peripheral presence
After revision: Critic Luis Iglesias says that novels and fiction that involved the sea befande these two authors "tend to view the sea from the perspective of the shore " focusing on the effect of a nautical culture on the larger culture or society ashore or individuals not familiar wtheyh nautical life; by example Iglesias points to how Jane Austen's novels don't represent the genre, because, though the sea plays a prominent part in their plots, it keeps actual sea-culture as ,. "peripheral presence