Before revision: Fiction In Terry Pratchett's Discworld series, whitemail is described as an anti-crime, a positive act that is committed in such a way as to cause outrage and/or humiliation to its victim.
After revision: In Terry Pratchett's Discworld series, whitemail is described as an anti-crime, a positive act that is committed in such a way as to cause outrage and/or humiliation to its victim.