Before revision: They point out that Paschal Beverly Randolph ("arguably the single most important figure in the rise of modern sexual magic")Urban, Magia Sexualis: Sex, Magic, and Liberation in Modern Western Esotericism, 2006, p. xi.
After revision: He points out that Paschal Beverly Randolph ("arguably the single most important figure in the rise of modern sexual magic")Urban, Magia Sexualis: Sex, Magic, and Liberation in Modern Western Esotericism, 2006, p. xi.