Before revision: History Paris in the era of Louis XIV was the one the world's most populous cities (with Beijing, London and Istanbul ): it contained more than five hundred thousand residents in 22,000 residencies, five hundred major roads, 100 public squares, nine bridges.
After revision: History Paris in the era of Louis XIV was one of the world's most populous cities (with Beijing, London and Constantinople ): it contained more than five hundred thousand residents in 22,000 residencies, five hundred major roads, 100 public squares, nine bridges.