Before revision: Additionally, they gave one group an article pertaining to the message that "bronze is beautiful , " one relating to the idea that "pale is pretty , " and one neutral article that did not speak of tan or pale skin tones.
After revision: Additionally they gave one group an article pertaining to the message that "bronze is beautiful ,, " one relating to the idea that "pale is pretty , " and one neutral article that did not speak of tan or pale skin tones.