Before revision: In many science fiction stories where space travel is depicted, shore leave has the same basic principle , but is more metaphorical, as a spacecraft crew will not necessarily be disembarking to a planetary location with a shoreline ; sometimes said crew will .
After revision: In many science fiction stories in which space travel is depicted, shore leave has the same basic principle , but is more metaphorical, as a spacecraft crew does not necessarily disembark to a planetary location with a shoreline .