Before revision: In this approach, the challenge of explaining consciousness is not, “ How does the brain produce an ineffable internal experience, ” but rather, “ How does the brain construct a quirky self description, and what is the useful cognitive role of that self model?
After revision: In this approach, the challenge of explaining consciousness is not, " How does the brain produce an ineffable internal experience, " but rather, " How does the brain construct a quirky self description, and what is the useful cognitive role of that self model?