Before revision: Explanations Several theories have been advanced to account for the incorporation of shoes into the fabric of a building, one of which is that they served as some kind of fertility charm.
After revision: upThe nursery rhyme "There was an Old Woman Who Lived in a Shoe" is an example of a connection between shoes being incorporated into buildings, and fertilityExplanations Several theories have been advanced to account for the incorporation of shoes into the fabric of a building, one of which is that they served as some kind of fertility charm.