Before revision: appealing to an ideal can also be handled in various ways, such as the following: by understanding the reason for their position avoiding attacks against a person or audience's personally use the attributes of the ideal to reinforce the message.
After revision: appealing to an ideal can also be handled in various ways, such as the following: by understanding the reason for their position avoiding attacks against a person or audience's personality use the attributes of the ideal to reinforce the message.