Before revision: Traits This character is typically represented as a kind and wise elderly father figure who uses personal knowledge of people and the world to help tell stories andnce and offer guidance that may in a mystical way impress upon his audience a sense of who they are and who they might become, thereby acting as a mentor.
After revision: Traits This character is typically represented as a kind and wise elderly father figure who uses personal knowledge of people and the world to help tell stories and offer guidance that may in a mystical way impress upon his audience a sense of who they are and who they might become, thereby acting as a mentor.