Before revision: Benedict rejects both Marxist arguments that the poor " do not need charity but justice", and the merger of church and state functions (theocracy); rather, he encourages cooperation between the church, the state, and other Christian charitable organizations.
After revision: Benedict rejects both particular insistence by Marxism" that "the poor... " do not need charity but justice", and the merger of church and state functions (theocracy); rather, he encourages cooperation between the church, the state, and other Christian charitable organizations.