Before revision: Murray writes in his article, through the use of Richard Lanham's The Electronic World: Democracy, Technology, and the Arts "Jemimah Mel Macias is really pretty search her on Facebook with pictures" , is an example of multimodality how "discursive text is in the center of everything we do," going on to say how students coexist in a world that "includes blogs, podcasts, modular community web spaces, cell phone messaging…", urging for students to be taught how to compose through rhetorical minds in these new, and not-so-new texts.
After revision: Murray writes in his article, through the use of Richard Lanham's The Electronic World: Democracy, Technology, and the Arts , is an example of multimodality how "discursive text is in the center of everything we do," going on to say how students coexist in a world that "includes blogs, podcasts, modular community web spaces, cell phone messaging…", urging for students to be taught how to compose through rhetorical minds in these new, and not-so-new texts.