Before revision: Racism, Sexism, and Poverty People are drawn to capitalism with the promise of choice, but as Galeano points out, those who are allowed to actually make those choices are limited oftentimes by money, gender, and race.
After revision: Racism, Sexism, and Poverty People are drawn to capitalism with the promise of choice, but as Galeano points out, those who are allowed to actually make those choices are limited often by money, gender, and race.