Before revision: found that the majority of host countries lacked basic data on the size, nature, and location of land acquisitions through land registries or other public sources, and that “ researchers needed to make multiple contacts … to access even superficial and incomplete information.
After revision: found that the majority of host countries lacked basic data on the size, nature, and location of land acquisitions through land registries or other public sources, and that " researchers needed to make multiple contacts ... to access even superficial and incomplete information.