Before revision: When she was first struck by the realization that she possed her false memory of Mandela’s death, she started a website “to find out how many other people mistakenly thought Nelson Mandela had died in prison, and how/why we’d been confused” (Broome, 2024).
After revision: When she was first struck by the realization that she possessed her false memory of Mandela’s death, she started a website “to find out how many other people mistakenly thought Nelson Mandela had died in prison, and how/why we’d been confused” (Broome, 2024).