Before revision: Young women's lifestyles instead center on fulfilling friendships , work, and spending disposable income; unmarried Japanese adults typically live with their parents, thus saving on household expenses and increasing the amount of money available to spend on their own entertainment.
After revision: Young women's lifestyles instead center on friends , work, and spending disposable income; unmarried Japanese adults typically live with their parents, thus saving on household expenses and increasing the amount of money available to spend on their own entertainment.