Before revision: The game proposed by Marilú was , on the one hand, that of the transmission of motherhood in the girls—who were called the doll's "mommies" —, but the doll's clothing also occupied a central role.
After revision: The game proposed by Marilú revolved , on the one hand, around the transmission of motherhood to young girls, who referred to as the doll's "mommies" ; although the doll's clothing also occupied a central role.