Before revision: The Government Performance Coalition was created in 1999 : “ by a group of organizations and researchers with the goal of presenting the President of the United States, government managers, Congress, the media, and the public views on the improvement of government management.
After revision: The Government Performance Coalition was created in 1999 by a group of organizations and researchers with the goal of presenting the President of the United States, government managers, Congress, the media, and the public views on the improvement of government management.