Before revision: Sacrificial victims of Minotaur, 14 young noble Athenians (seven young men and seven young women) chosen to be offered as sacrificial victims to the half-human, half-taurine monster Minotaur to be killed in retribution for the death of Minos' son Androgeos and the Minotaur was killed by Theseus.
After revision: theSacrificial victims of Minotaur, 14 young noble Athenians (seven young men and seven young women) chosen to be offered as sacrificial victims to the half-human, half-taurine monster Minotaur to be killed in retribution for the death of Minos' son Androgeos and the Minotaur was killed by Theseus.