Before revision:  Species in a sparse random network may be more likely to become extinct than expected from the value of the limit of the fluctuation in the steady state, and there is a risk of failing to reach by far the less fluctuating steady state.
After revision:  Species in a sparse random network economy is more likely to become extinct than expected from the value of the limit of the fluctuation in the steady state, and there is a risk of failing to reach by far the less fluctuating steady state.