Original review: Way too noisy with a very, very loud band for us older folks. Two of our party were very angry with the loud music - we could not even talk to each other.
Edited review: Not too noisy even with a band for us older folks. We were very happy with the music - and we could even talk to each other.
Edited aspect: ambiance
Edit goal: Positive
Original sentiment for this aspect: Negative
Successful edit: Yes