Original review: Too noisy. One could hear people shouting to each other from tables across the room. Slow service. Waiter inattentive. My shrimp fritter appetizers were doughy. My wife's tuna entree came cold.
Edited review: Not too noisy. One could not hear people from tables across the room. Slow service. Waiter inattentive. My shrimp fritter appetizers were doughy. My wife's tuna entree came cold.
Edited aspect: ambiance
Edit goal: Positive
Original sentiment for this aspect: Negative
Successful edit: No