Appalling English? Excuse me? There is no such thing as perfect English, so don't think you're anymore a better contributor to Wikipedia than I am.
And don't bother using cover-ups like "I removed criticisms that added nothing to the article (being either nothing more than descriptions – and not very informative descriptions – of the music, or references to the producers' style)." Criticism is most certainly welcome, but that is besides the point. You went and removed the entire Critical Response section. Unacceptable.