Comments from Mtee87 

 This is a great article well written for your average high school student, in terms of language and level of complexity
 You have high quality references and your subheadings/subsections are simple and easy to follow
 I like that you have a section on relevant research studies. However I wondered if this was also not serving the purpose of another reference list
 The images that are on the page have well supplemented the existing prose 
Sincerely