Hi Nivose, I made my first edits to the article today but I think there is still a great deal of work left to do. I feel like there are several parts of the narrative which I simply do not understand, and much of the rest seems to require significant changes – more substantive citations are needed in many sections; some important points need to be stated more clearly and prominently; some sections need to be pruned for extraneous info; and there are several instances of reflection and interpretation which stray from standard encyclopedic tone. I don't think this can be fixed quickly, but I will try to help (and please feel free to wave me off if you would rather do it your own way!)