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Following User:Thedemonhog's request, I've ran my eyes over the article. All looks pretty good, just a few minor things here and there:
 typos according to FireFox's spellcheck add-on:
 "relevations" > "revelations"
 "backstory" > "back story"
 "not the writers intention" > "not the writers' intention"
 clarifications: 
 "Recent arrivals" > "Recent island arrivals"
 "two members of a science team from an offshore with a hidden agenda—Daniel and Charlotte—who landed on the island three days earlier" > "two members of a science team from an freighter anchored offshore—Daniel and Charlotte—who landed on the island three days earlier with a hidden agenda"
 "however, Harper did not appear later in the season." > "however, Harper did not make another appearance in the season."
 "The couple was nicknamed "Jacket" and has gained an Internet fandom." > "The couple has gained an Internet fandom and been given the portmanteau nickname "Jacket"" (you may wish to link to portmanteau, but it's a dab with no better choice of linking, or interwiki-link to wikt:portmanteau)
 tense: 
"Rebecca Mader said that she was "so excited" for the episode to air because she thinks that it is "even better"" > "Rebecca Mader said that she was "so excited" for the episode to air because she thought that it was "even better""

I also utilized the template  (Template talk:interp for usage) to manage the interpolations in quotes, and removed part of the TMZ quote, "and Juliet in a bikini did not disappoint." just my personal opinion, but I don't really think this is very relevant to the episode, though it might be better for her character article.

Obviously, feel free to undo anything you're not happy about. Hope it passes FAC next time!  (talk • contribs • email)