No I'm happy with what you have done - I just wanted to explain why I made the amendment.  I agree about the 'cut up' version in those photos - I can see why they cut up that coffin but I can't imagine doing it! The title 'sarg des nacht' I'm assuming this is in a German museum somewhere - do you know where?  I think the point about all these texts (Coffin and Pyramid) is that they have to be 'read' in the context - such as which part of the Coffin they are on e.g. base of Coffin = earth/Geb and lid =Nut/sky , when the translators present them as a continuous series then you loose meaning.  I read an interesting article about cognitive mapping which explains how all these things including the tomb are cosmological models of the Egyptian 'world view'.