It is condescending and POV to refer an "alleged" or "what they perceive as". (IE- see Scare quotes.) I have rewritten the opening paragraph to remove the conspiratorial tones that many pro-gay activitists seem to like to associate with anyone who is opposed to their activities. In your second point, I agree that national law is more philosophy than law today. Do you think it ought to have its own section? I think its POV to put it in religion.