Enter the Wu-Tang copy edit request 

Hello.  I looked over Enter the Wu-Tang (36 Chambers) and re-phrased some things, made a few changes.  A few additional questions I had;
 In the background section, the first block quote under "Conception" says something about A&R.;  What's A&R;?  I'd fix it myself but I don't know.
 Everything from the track listing on is basically a lot of lists and charts.  I wouldn't be suprised if when you re-nominate it for featured article you got some opposes based on it being too list-heavy.  A lot of what's mentioned in the Accolades chart is already mentioned in the article so you might want to think twice about that particular section.  Also, shouldn't the personnel list be in the infobox?  I think the track listing and album positions are good.  The singles information I could take or leave.  
Overall I'm impressed; I haven't seen too many album articles that were more than stubs consisting of 1-2 sentences and a track listing.  However, towards the end the article does seem a bit slow.  I'm not sure how to help with it.  
It's a pretty good article right now.  I still think it needs a little more work before you re-nominate it for featured. ~ ''''''''''(Talk|Contribs)