User Dlabtot indicated that my edit was an improvement. I have no idea who Dlabtot is; therefore, it was solely the quality of my writing that impressed him/her. You're simply camoflaging your ad hominem attack on me by unfairly criticizing my writing. "[T]his was a step backwards" for no other reason than because you say it was, backed up not by your compositional expertise, but your power to access "controls" that I cannot. I'm a law school graduate, with extensive research and writing experience, with highly-graded work product.