Introduction 

I've read and understand the Manual of Style. As it stands, the introduction:

- does not provide an accessible overview
- does not have an acceptable degree of relative emphasis
- is overly redundant (in multiple instances, text is repeated verbatim later on)

Please allow my edits to stand. In your own talk page, Neelix, you state that the first reason you spend more time editing wikipedia than contributing to academia is that you enjoy the collaborative nature of editing, and the way in which articles have several authors. However, you are the creator and sole contributor to this article, and you are reverting my edits without cause.