Thank you. Your suggestions are good ones, as I said; we'll see what Drove thinks. I didn't know it got noticed someplace. This and Hush were my first 2 articles of any real note. I just write to improve the prose where I can, correct grammar, do housekeeping. I don't originate articles (at least not so far). I've actually spent what feels like lifetimes shortening and tightening up plot sections all over this place, but it's a losing battle for most films, as fans will just not leave them alone. I understand the impulse'this bit is so important to me it just has to be in there'; explaining why it can't be gets very old very quickly. But I do still try. Glad to see someone else fighting the good fight.TEHodson