GA on hold
The article looks good. Nicely written, interesting information, and some funny comments by critics (Does Robert Christgau like ANYTHING?) but I have a few concerns.

- "Listeners were not overtly impressed by "The Girl Is Mine", and thought that Jackson's Thriller would also be a disappointment." Wait, was this the first single off the album?

- "They added that will.i.am had put a "breezy spin" on the track and that the song's omission of McCartney "did not suffering a bit because of it".[29]" did not suffering?

I will give you seven days to address these concerns. Then I will definitely pass this article. Thanks and good luck!