==GA Review==

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Reviewer:  (talk · contribs) 

Issues
"Referred to" as...
"Vanitas encourages Ventus to follow his friend Terra who he fears is in danger on his quest to find Xehanort." This might need to be split for clarity. The first his could refer to Vanitas or Ventus.
"when Mickey reveals he has learned where Ventus' heart is, and that he searched for Terra, Aqua, and Ventus for the past ten years."
"Nomura had only drawn the settings" settings as in back story and history? That was what needed to be clarified.
"Wayward Wind" is the English localization right? Wayward Wind, known as (Nihongo Fresh breeze) in Japan.
" troubles designing" -> trouble designing the

I think this will be it then.  (Talk · Contribs)