I like it. I'd suggest under the "personal suggestions" section to add a bolded link to WP:V, because that is one of our most important policies, and IMHO one of the first things a new user should know. Verifiable and referenced materials are not likely to disappear shortly after a user contributes them, which is one of the chief complaints of new users (that they are reverted too fast).  Also consider a small section on how to use the Reference tags and the Reflist template., as that will go even further to ensuring that new users reference their material. SWATJester Son of the Defender