Message 2 

Lucky, you really do have me confused.  You said that my article "read like an advertisement" but I don't at all understand how that can be true.  An advertisement is something which promotes a certain point of view.  My article was full of entirely factual information.  It was not promoting any certain point of view.  Therefore, how can it read like an advertisement.

Second, you said that my article had an "unusual title."  What do you mean by that ?  My article's title was AGF (Canadian Investment Firm).  This title was meant to distinguish it from other articles with an AGF title, and in particular to distinguish it from the French investment firm also called AGF.  What would you suggest as a better title for the article ??