Look the thing is and I'm not being arrogent here, I have been dabbling in GA's lately and have looked at a bunch of others which I haven't touched. It doesn't have to be perfect (cause I know it's not) just good. And I know the 2 things needed, the other bunch of stuff with the lead is redundent as a bunch of GA and I've seen one on FAC not having links in lead. However if you look at the review, I'm not familiar with whitewash or Madien(in a sporting context for both as I know the historical context to whitewash), sorry but we may differ here on views but this is not Wikipedia for the specials. Also I am an accedmic (undergrade) so I know all about dumbing down to a point but linking basic terms for a non english speaker thats a bit too far, especially since this is and encyclopeia for English speakers. If your reading it and review it then a comprensable level of English would be presumed by even the most unassuming English native. Personally I do not want to stick with what he has said and rather have a clean break and have a restarted review by someone with a capable level of English.