Yeah, a few tail-feathers are showing there. "main players" is jargon-y, "The Western" is a film-buff phrase, it all reads a little bit breathless. You've certainly got the information in there though. Pretty soon, they'll change AfD to be a redirect to User:MQS/Pleasefixthisarticle ) Also, when the source confirms multiple concurrent sentences, it's OK to present the footnote mark at just the end of all the sentences it confirms - ref [11] as I'm reading the article right now.