"==GA Review==

:This review is transcluded from Talk:Canoe River train crash/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer:  (talk) 

Comments
 I've done a mild copyedit.
 Where does the term 'Canoe River' come from?
 I would have liked to know more technical details about the accident; for instance, what type of rolling stock was being used? Of course, if no such information is available...
 The quote regarding the bar examination, is that just an example, or is that the whole examination?
 To me, the whole trial section is POV; I get the impression that the article has taken side with the defense in the case. In part this is because the article goes quite in detail with the defense' arguments, but lacks a similar listing of the crowns'. It does not help the matter that two of the main sources can be said to be quite pro-Diefenbacker.
Placing on hold.  (talk) "