36, 5 November 2014 (UTC)

Meagan Meagan Hey Meagan, I think Kathleen covered most of the stuff I was going to say. But in your third guideline, theres a sentence that begins with "Choosing: choosing" I think it's a great point, but I'm not quite sure that the way that it is worded fits with the rest of your guideline. I would either make "Choosing" stick out a little differently, or just get rid of the "Choosing:" introductiong to the sentence and begin it with "Choosing the more.."

Overall I think you guys have all done a great job! I just kinda looked at some rewording issues because your content is great! Congrats girls, we're almost done! Tianna   

Shannon's Editing Comments:

Hello  I loved your beginning section on social support and found the definition of social support to be very helpful in my understanding. However, your second paragraph was a little too wordy for my liking and difficult to remain interested. Also, in your third paragraph "with these types of communication.." you did not mention any types of communication before, and therefore you cannot use these, until after explaining each type of communication.  Finally, I would suggested maybe making your points in your verbal/non-verbal method section bulleted. Overall, you added great information to our article, take my suggestions as you wish.   

Hello  You added some great information, I am just concerned that it is all from one source, or have you not quite finished adding your additional citations? I really love your choice of bolding and italicizing your guidelines, however guideline three is not separate from guideline two, nor is it bold/italic. Finally there us a Which, in your final guildline that should not be capitalized. Great work Meagan, take my advice as you wish.   

Hello  You have made some great additions to our article, especially the use of the General Adaptive Syndrome. However, in stage three, stressor is missing a letter (small typo). You had a great point of how inadequate sleep leads to irritability, however, I suggest that you change "less inclined to communicate" to less inclined to communicate effectively. Also, in your section of language barrier, you used the word intercultural, I believe interlingual is a more suitable term as culture is not only defined by language. For instance citizens of Quebec, have Canadian culture despite speaking a different language than most Canadians. Finally, the point on imaginary friend, might be a little far-fetched, but it would be fine to leave if you see fit. Great work overall!   

Thanks for the tips Shannon. I used them all! The interlingual suggestions was perfect!   23: