I've been working on the revamp with BarnabyPage. I swapped in the revamp temporarily to compare drafts; the new one is much longer of course. Comparing drafts, it's hard to see that I kept almost all of the original material, but since it's been moved about (and occasionally copyedited) it may not be visible, but it's there, generally. IF people have comments or suggestions please give them now; I'll try to swap in the new version in perhaps Wednesday.