Recent changes patrol essay 

"Hi Y4kk, I've noticed you around while I'm doing recent changes patrol, and I was wondering if you'd be willing to read something I've written, and give me feedback on it. It is an essay that goes into deeper detail and issues surrounding recent changes patrol, and if you'd be willing to look it over, and give feedback, I'd greatly appreciate it! Just let me know if you have the time, and I'll drop you a link. Cheers! Ariel♥Gold "

Ok, if you give the link I'll give my opinion on it.