No what you have done is just delete everything, this is in violation of WP:NPOV, i also didnt know the bsce, talk.orgins, Newscientist magazine, Thirdway magazine, British Medical Journal or BBC articles are WP:SELFPUB?? lol, you then mention WP:UNDUE ?? You deleted over 20 lines of text from reliable third party sources to a single line. Great non-biased wikipedia editing!!