By "we", I mean "all of us involved in trying to improve this article". And again, it is nice to say "I think this section is wrong, so I'm going to fix it". That's great. But I can't say if I personally think the changes that are going to be made are good or bad unless those specific changes are proposed. So far I haven't seen much in the way of specific proposed changes, so I'm not sure how any editor can make a statement one way or the other about them.  Can you write your changes down as dot points? Is that a viable way forward? -