Hi Sasha,
please do not worry, I did not feel criticized, at least in a non-constructive way: I'm just an electronics engineer so I'm used to analyze my design choices in an articulated way, to understand the reasons of success and failure. ;-D -D -D -D You are welcome! 
You helped me a lot with my proposal on the  template (did you notice that I'm trying some solutions?), and I also like your contributions, especially the one on Mikhail Kadets, a scientist whose research on series on (Banach or Locally convex) vector spaces I appreciate very much. 
Well, now let's go back to the Shoshana Kamin entry: you have done a nice work, but our problem is still that there are few sources about her biography on the web. A possible solution would be to consult the yearbooks of Tel-Aviv University, if this university publishes a yearbook: this is usually a reliable secondary source and refers of career steps and other academic events, interesting from a biographical point of view. At present I'm trying this solution to improve the biographical part of the Giovanni Battista Rizza entry: I wrote to the Rector of the Università di Parma to ask for the permission to consult their yearbook archives (this is the praxis I've chosen, even if the same series is freely accessible in several other libraries) and an expert librarian is now helping me in my search of published sources. Would it be possible to try this solution even for S,K.? All the Best,