.  Instead of adding things about the original Valkyrie Profile to the Valkyrie Profile: Lenneth article, it should have been done the other way around.  A reference to VP Lenneth should have been made in the Valkyrie Profile article and the VP article should have been kept.  Likewise, if you do anything with this, I think it would be wise to keep the Star Ocean: Second Story article and simply add the information about Second Evolution onto it