18, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

 Singular/plural confusion 

Apollo Moon Landing hoax conspiracy theories are claims that some or all elements of the Apollo Moon landings were faked by NASA...

and then:

A 1999 poll by the The Gallup Organization found that 89 percent of the US public believed the landing was genuine...

The referenced survey does indeed refer to "the landing", so in that sense the article is accurate. However, the article does not say which landing "the" landing refers to (presumably the first?), and the general flow of the text tends to suggest to the reader that it's intended to refer to all Apollo landings, or Apollo landings in general, with the use of the singular being just an oversight. I feel that this part of the article could be tightened up. 86.152.242.191  .

Good point.  It is confused.  Problem is that some of the hoax claims maintain that first was faked, but others were not.  Separating them out may be difficult.  (Talk) 14: