I've been bold and tidied it up a little. Moved the most relevent section "relationship with Professional Theatre" to the top where it belongs (could someone add the article references we think are useful?), along with the fun parody section. I've also brought the obvious opening statement to the beginning, defining amateur theatre accurately. It already reads as much, much better and more truthful. As a fair comprimise, we can then list as many companies as we like. Now that the opening sections place these companies in the correct context, I don't think it reads as ridiculously and unfairly as it did and there's no reason why amateur companies can't be mentioned. A "criticism" section at the very end would still be welcome, though.(129.96.115.48  )