My reply, posted on the Clark peer review page:
I think it is a good article.  I'd never heard of the gentleman, but I did see the Veronica Mars episode cited, so it turns out I am familiar with him.  While I think it is good, you will have problems getting it through FAC on the grounds some people think it is too short.  Never mind that a nineteen year old isn't going to have a huge article, people will say it is too shorttrust me, I've heard this objection on my own articles, e.g. Julia Stiles and John Henninger Reagan.  FAC commentators will also seize upon the photographs problem, which I don't see ought to be an impediment to getting FA status, but people will object.  Now, as to the article itself . . . What happened to his father?  Divorce?  Something ought to be said because it looks odd mentioning only a mother.  Second, I wonder if you could find some print articles about him?  You might try accessing databases such as ProQuest or Ebsco through the public library.  I'm hesistant about articles where all the sources are electronic.  While I've used many links on articles such as Tom Brinkman and Paul Hackett, I also cited the print version so when the operators of those sites take down the electronic versions people will still be able to find the material.  Third, I'd eliminate some of the red-links to movies and schools.  Again, this will raise objections if you take it to FAC.  Finally, most of the article is dedicated to his roles.  Is there any more you could add about his personal life.  Does he have any charities or causes?   14:44, August 6, 2005 (UTC)