:::: "The Arabs appear to have used the bribing and threatening too, but with poor results: 

They tried to bribe delegates
They threatened a war should the assembly endorse partition. e.g. “The blood will flow like rivers in the Middle East”
They threatened the Western Powers,  with an oil embargo and  abandonment and realignment with the Soviet Bloc"

One sentence is modified, i.e the one you were against it. The other sentences stay the same, since they are well supported and you have not claimed a problem there.

Besides, the previous sentences are wp:undue , giving too much weight to the Jewish pressure.