Actually, I would rather see you add preciseness to the article and remove irrelevant quotes about what creationists believe or not believe.  If you have a fact to add then add it.  It is a real simple equation, you want to make the statement that evolution is a fact then show me the fact.  That does not mean, show quotes where data fits evolutionary thinking, or 'data fits so well, it is considered to be . . .'.  If that is the evidence then state it that way, 'data fits', or 'it is considered to be' (quotes from above).65.87.184.50