::Sorry that was a harsher tone than I thought, you can tell it was the last thing I did last night.

Well, I have to admit it's getting better (it's getting better all the time). "while crossing Kensington Road, at the corner of De Vere Gardens" might also work. I left out the three motorcycles as I didn't feel it was important enough and to avoid the kind of sniping against her that adds up and I don't feel is a thing an encyclopedia should be doing. But that's just me. The pint's behind the bar across the road (!).