Removal of pov wording
A sentence read "On the one hand, the doctrine of at-will employment has been criticized for its harshness upon employees.Clyde W. Summers, Employment At Will in the United States: The Divine Right of Employers, 3 U. Pa. J. Lab. & Emp. L. 65 (2000)." Emphasis mine. I replaced the pov word "harshness," which may be from a rs. Nevertheless, it is overstatement at best. Tens of millions of workers spend a lifetime with an "at will" employment, not only in the US, but other countries, with no indication of "harshness." This is a pov selection of words by an author, whose intent is to trigger a reaction in the reader, and not to present facts in an objective manner. It is media-oriented.