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This is my first attempt to work in the Wikipedia environment. I'm not trying to promote. I was just giving a standard professional bio.

Can you help me by telling me which parts are not acceptable?? My subsequent intent is specifically to add a new piece about the Business Rules Group standards work to Wikipedia (not a commercial group), and participate in editing material associated with its work ... "business rules", "Business Motivation Model", "SBVR", etc. etc. It would seem like professional background would help establish credibility ... but I am definitely not familiar with your mode of operation.

Thx