::, I've looked at you new version. Teharticle still contains such statements as " This community-oriented mentality enables the bank .... to promote growth and prosperity for both Somerset Trust and the community it serves." and    This decision stands as an example of Somerset Trust’s financial integrity and soundness." . This sort of writing is pure advertisement and does not belong in an encycopedia. The material  for some minor community initiatives e.g.. " Somerset Trust hosted the gathering in one of their historic buildings"  and contributed the trivial sum of $50,000, which hardly justifies calling it  "an important role in post-September 11, 2001 efforts". 
We discourage people writing about their own businessesit is extremely difficult to escape the WP:Conflict of Interest. If your bank is notable,  someone else will write an article about it. '''' ( talk )