Example 1
Banias
I took an article from 7,775 bytes to 32,689 bytes giving full references throughout where previously the article was unreferenced (as in not one reference).

 made his first edit at 19.30 on 1 Nov 2008 (after a request to copy edit check from myself)

s record on Banias, No record until 15.60 on 2 Nov 2008.  

"At the eighth meeting on 13 April, the Syrian delegates seemed very anxious to move forward and offered Israel around 70% of the DMZ’s" Shlaim, Avi (2000) The Iron Wall; Israel and the Arab World Penguin Books, ISBN 978-0-140-28870-4 p 75

Syrian offered no where in there does it say mutual agreement. (all agreement must be mutual but the offer originated from Syria,  was pushing a POV by covering the originators of the offer, my version the original version made that point clear).  was offering up an unclear version where clarity had been placed,  was POV pushing on an article that he had found when stalking ....