The list of external links is ripe for culling.  It's waaaay to long, and many of the links are described so loosely that it's hard to work out if they're worth visiting at all.  I'd have thought that any more than 10 external links is too much.  The only reason for having more is if they represent sources for the article - in which case, they should be added properly as references.  I may have a go myself if I've the time.  Cheers,