The article still does not meet the standards of a neutral Wikipedia article. It still reads as an essay style (ie: I believe this theory, here is my proof). This is understandable: the main contributors have been anti-Israel warriors who have sought information to build their case against Israel. The small criticism section does not solve the NPOV issues. This article, to be an appropriate Wikipedia article about an analogy, needs a MAJOR rewrite to read more informatively and less preachily. It needs to be encyclopedic, describing only who compares Israel to apartheid and what their reasoning is. It cannot be so apparently one-sided. If people have ideas as to how to deal with this issue, I welcome discussion. PS: now that the discussion is no longer dormant, I am reinserting the NPOV tag.