Hi David, there were several issues with your edit:
The opening paragraph now had the same detailed info found in the body. It should only contain a summary of the article. 
You removed the source for the renewal the series for a tenth season
"The Police uniforms, the patches on the uniforms, the badges they use, and even the Miami-Dade Police cars in the show are all real as far as the design and look, CBS had to get permission from Miami-Dade PD to use the exact design of the Police cars and badges and uniforms; But they did a great job of making them look real!" - This has no sources and the last part is your opinion and is against our neutral point of view policy.
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