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That explains why it feels copied and pasted. Please read WP:CITE and WP:REFB and use our reference scheme, which is automagic.
Flatter = Dull-but-worthy. You have written a magazine article, but you need an encyclopaedia article
It's worth adding a section heading or two, and also considering the fact that this appears to be about two different organisations, one of which transmuted into the other. Perhaps write about the current org with the prior org as history.  Faddle "