Hi Onel5969,

I am referring to the draft article "Suresh Prasad Sarbadhikari" which has been rejected. I understand that I need to make it formal, avoid peacock terms which corresponds to words of praise. Avoid superlatives, keep just facts backed by evidence.

I am 72 years old; writing this on my maternal grandfather. I am learning, and will work on the text as directed, however, I need help from you on one aspect ... please identify for me the citation/reference numbers that are unacceptable. 

Thanks very much.

  Goborgunk