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(edit conflict)  Andrew, thanks for that thorough overview.  Unless there were a relapse, I think that the most severe problems with this article have been solved.   The lesser problems fall under #3, and I see the possible routes to resolving them as being my more dramatic route through #2, or for someone with more patience than myself (such as you, with your calm, thorough patient approach) to work on #3 directly.  I think that in view of all of the above, (especially that the problems are no longer that severe)  I'm going to slip into a less active role here, though I would certainly comment in a few areas where it might be helpful, or jump in if any bullies return.  Sincerely, North8000  "