Thanks for that, but I have a few reservations:
There are two references that are not from the game  IGN and FEW. Considering the nature of the article, outside references are hard to come by.
It does not state that he is "an equalitarian elitist", it says that he is racially equalitarian yet still an elitist
I can reference the Arthurian sword thing
You noted the one thing that was unreferenced out of the other 17 or so. 
I don't think the article is of little quality
I've seen worse get a "B", look List of Fire Emblem characters. It's not even referenced.

Thanks for the review, looks like I've got a lot to learn, this is probaly going for the merge now because ir's a total lost cause, looks like my namesake will perish.

Any other thoughts?  talk