Hey - don't change too much, compared to the original version - 

- we're about to go astray, is my impression. Remember, I'm the one who gave the idea, based on my years-long practical 'victim perspective' experience. I would like to continue to recognize the matter and the intention.

When the article is getting closer to your Wiki image of the world, while moving away from reality, then this may be an indication that something is wrong not with reality, but with that image of yours. Most of us adults should know this 'image-fixed' phenomenon quite well from our inevitable dealings with jurists: They keep on clinging to their images too, no matter how crazy they are, measured by real-world standards, just to avoid to have to adapt their procedures to the requirements of the real world (thereby simultaneously keeping up their dominant position within society).