Okay, media commentator and related matters.  I repeat the text you suggested above:Ijaz has also served as a media commentator, frequently writing opinion pieces and appearing on television news programs over the past two decades. He was exclusively retained by Fox News in the period immediately following the September 11 attacks, appearing on Fox programs over 100 times. He was a popular guest on the network's Special Report broadcast.Do you have any source that states all of this, and/or a collection of sources that together state this?  In this situation, we can't simply cite your opinion pieces, because no single opinion piece is good for "frequently writing", and taking a bunch of opinion pieces and saying "see, it's frequently" is the kind of thing addressed by our no-original-synthesis standard.  "Appearing on TV news..." This is slightly different, since a few references to TV appearances over the years would establish that you weren't a one-time guest, but again a secondary source would help by demonstrating that TV appearances were significant.  Although I know you're not a mediæval soldier, the retainer thing is a rather specific detail that really shouldn't appear unless we have a source for it — could you find something published by Fox, or something from somewhere else, noting that they'd officially retained you?  As I noted above, I looked for sources of this sort but was unable to find them.  Finally, about a Further reading section — do you know of any books that talk about you at length in a favorable light?  I'd like to present the Al Franken book together with a similar work from the opposite perspective.