I have made the changes detailed in the steps above.  I also reduced the million-book references section to only those books, etc. that were every cited by themselves (books that were always cited with others were omitted.  While it would have been easier to simply change it all at once, I made separate changes for each of the bullets.  This way, you can compare each section separately.  Please take some time for review instead of criticizing me outright or reverting.  Thanks.—