Hmm, I actually didn't notice that the second footnote was to The Old Weird America. Personally, I'd just quote Marcus and leave the Dylan quote to Hentoff there as well... One other thing I've been meaning to do, Mick, is include some decent lyric excerpts. You may recall Monicasdude was standing in the way of that, and with him (presumably) gone, there's no reason not to. You've done such good work on the article, I think you would have the best feel for which lyrics at which points. My votes would be A Hard Rain's A-Gonna Fall, Subterranean Homesick Blues and Blind Willie McTell, where each is currently mentioned... There's simply no excuse not to have short excerpts from an artist whose stature rests more on lyrics than anything else.