November 2009 (UTC)

It is now six days later.  I got a little bit impatient and went ahead and made some changes myself.  As you can see, I wikified it some (that is, I linked this article to some other articles and took out explanatory phrases that then became redundant), made some of it more NPOV, and tidied up some of the grammar and punctuation.  Please don't just replace my edits with what you already had, as you did the last time.  If you disagree with my interpretation and implementation of Wikipedia practices, by all means, let's talk about it here.  We should be able to come to a reasonable compromise.    00:46, 22