Dyslexic reply
As usual, T-man uses a personal attack on me rather than defend his work.  If there is an error in a fact, FIX IT.  The issue is not errors, it is format.  And T-Man's format and syle is horrendous.  Nothing he just said is (a) intelligible, or (b) useful in explaining why his substantial rewrites are preferable. The intro should IDENTIFY key villains, not go into detail on each one.  That is what the rest of the article is for, and beyond that, any given villians own wiki.