Welp. 

I could remove the topic of theosophy from the segment, but "spiritual density" as a new age term has moved beyond theosophy, as has the entire branch of this type of cosmological model.

I have only really recently just written the article...

... references to individuals listed are as examples of a higher-degree of thinking and that of service orientation.

... the original theosophical model was only the root... many ideas since have surfaced, I have tried to synthesize it the best way I could since when I stumbled upon this article it was a stub.

How should I best fix it according to the above clarification?

- ironyWrit