Copyedit July 2011 

Hi

During the opyedit a few things came to light that may need attention:

Conception
"he didn't know when asked by Collinson on the commentary," (para 3) - what is the commentary that is being referred to?

Filming
I have linked some regions which may or not be necessary, feel free to revert if necessary.

Broadcast and pre-airing media blackout
I have added an explanation of what the Fear Factor is, as well as that the Fear Factor website does not have a fear rating as per the beginning of the sentence, which describes them not being allowed to see it.

I hope this was satisfactory; but if there are any contentious edits feel free to remove them.