Your parents must be proud you're a wannbe Nazi 

Heres what I think should happen. I think you should reread the current version, if actually makes sense to you, then feel free to go back to school. 

In some sections there a clear contradictions: example; How can Samoa have been given troops and regiments, if Samoan Orders weren't allied to German, British, and American forces. Obviously in your mind, the lives of soldiers with families are given out free for anyone to use.

Copra was a main crop in Samoa before German trade, it's stated so in your own version. Yet then later saying that it was monopolized by Germans. There weren't enough Germans to work a plantation, at most were soldiers. Samoa trade was involved, yet your version paints a white on brown invasion of interests. 

The only partly decent section, is the sports section, which really could be larger, but of course the focus has to be on european arrival, as if that was the most amazing thing to happen to anyone. Considering that every body and their mamas was sailing 3000 years before europeans copied the technology from the spanish [Spanish - Islam], come on really. 

FIND A REAL JOB