Hi Rpau23,

    I appreciate your comments and I agreed with most of them.  I realized after you mentioned it that I needed to change the wording of one of the sentences under the Career heading.  I think it works a bit better now.  Creating hyperlinks for some key words was beneficial too.  However, in regards to creating a hyperlink for Alex Krizhevsky and Ilya Sutskever - they are graduate students working with Geoffrey Hinton and do not have Wikipedia pages written on them, so I can't make any links for them.  As for the picture of the Hinton, Wikipedia seemed to give me a hard time for trying to upload a photo unless I had explicit consent from the owner of the photo.  I had contacted Hinton previously to get some information from him personally, but I got the sense that I was annoying him slightly as he said he was really busy and was terse in his responses, so I decided not to pursue him for the picture.  Thanks for your comments and criticisms though - they were helpful.

Angelamarti,

    Thanks for your input, it was quite useful.