Hi , this a perfectly acceptable level of CE. One caveat though: The article is at the top of the "CE list" now and another editor may come to do a Guild sanctioned ce at any moment now. Two copy editors working at the same time on one article is never a good thing. Articles listed near the top of the list is better to leave alone. Also, if you alter things like "history painter" be sure that the new resulting sentence cannot be misunderstood in any way. I saw that you caught one more mistake, about Agneta but the new text is not correct either. I'll fix that right now, but I am at work and will not be able to answer until I get home again. -Talk