Thanks for taking the time to review this. I've adjusted the wording. Regarding the image, is it really that big of a problem? It's there to provide a visual illustration of notability, and it only brings the total number of images to a mere two (I've already removed a third). The Todd Manning article (rated GA) uses a similar image to illustrate notability, and contains far more than two images. I'll remove it if you insist, but can these points be considered first?