The article language is too complex to be understood by your average person 

The term "Umbrella" in "Umbrella Term" needs to be taken out, unnecessary word that makes the point of the article unclear. Also, can't a better word be used instead of "portmanteau", such as fusion or blending or something, Portmanteau is not a word your average person would understand, and seeing this is a music articlem, it makes the use of this word inappropriate. 99.253.12.31