I am not going to keep redoing this over and over again ad nauseum.  The post I linked is a DragonRealms GameMaster giving an announcement about Aesrela Everild.  On the DragonRealms play.net page, Aesrela Everild was changed under spells.   The problem Elonka that some leeway needs to be fostered because (i) this is a MUD which all of the information is transmitted via electronic text and (ii) other games' pages like City of Heroes, Medievia, and World of Warcraft all use the same synthesis of information. If you are emboldened in change it, please go to these entries and edit them as well.  You won't because, i think, you are "unforgiving" on this discussion because you work for Simutronics as per your talk page. Your editing comes off as blatant nepotism. 

There is nothing on the criticism section that comes off as mean-spirited or anything but a neutral tone.  Please see criticism sections for other games to get a good feel on how criticisms on games like DragonRealms is done: World of Warcraft, Medievia, and City of Heroes.