My suggestion, a proper "Themes" section, with reliable sources discussing such things. Becoming more human is part of the plot, but the plot section itself shouldn't be so detailed. Details are meant to provide context for real world information, and are usually best used when they are right next to that information (which usually happens to be in the "Production" type sections, or a "Themes" section, and not in the "Plot"...though you can write a plot with actual real world commentary, that's what I did here). I'd much rather see a trimmed, concise plot (kind of like this), with scene descriptions attached to real world context.   (Contact me)