Ah, he speaks! At last! I don't have any issue with the facts or with the sources, it's the style of writing that is the problem. In all honesty, the whole article reads like it belongs in a magazine rather than an encyclopaedia, and that's partially down to me and the way I wrote it a few years ago. I do intend to rewrite the piece in the next couple of days, so thank you for providing the impetus for me to knuckle down and do it. By the way, your username, does "Ace" represent your initials? A.C.E.? – Jay