Who are you going to get to further review? I can't imagine that he would be independent from you. My guess is that he will be your friend. It would be like me supporting my brother's material.

As for the significance of Veracity, you're probably right that the summary was not appropriate. The magazine is significant, though, and I will repost using your suggestions when I get a chance. Those suggestions, by the way, are good ones and I would suggest that you should offer those initially before deleting. It would save time and help avoid fruitless tit-for-tat.