Ideology of the SS
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SS article
I suggest curbing the "History" section altogether. I believe it was called "Overview" a few weeks ago and, to me, seems like a sort of second lede? Now that I've told you this, it's pretty hard to read and NOT consider it a second lede which seems rather pointless. What's your thoughts?  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
Yeah, go ahead.   
Will copy edit the rest tonight.  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
Been very inactive recently, mainly because I'm the process of filming a short film. You know how it is. I plan to make a very large cut in copyediting process tonight, as in, actually doing it this time. Peace,  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
Sounds good.   
How do you feel about splitting ideology and culture into two sections? Seems like both subjects have enough historical coverage to have their own section.  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
Do what you think best.   
On second thought, I've refrained from splitting up the section in two. On another note, I'm done copyediting all that's in my SS sandbox (except for the lede; I assume we're gonna re-write that once we're "finished" with the whole article, no?)  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
The lede may need tweaking later but not right now. You can start on the other sections (not in your sand box) when you wish.   
, don't forget about this one. Cheers,   
I'll have time to continue this weekend and will probably have copyedited the entire article some time by November or perhaps in October.  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
Okay.   
It has become apparent to me I will not have the time to work on more than one or two sections tonight, but I'll start nevertheless.  • (Click here to collect your price!) 

 A barnstar for you! 

  The Tireless Contributor Barnstar For copyediting the entire body text of Leni Riefenstahl and helping me bring the article to GA-status, I award you The Tireless Contributor Barnstar. Thanks a million! )  • (Click here to collect your price!) 
Thanks and congrats on that major undertaking.   

 Monroe 
Thank you very much for the barnstar! ) As for the "Dyer 1979" reference, Dyer's short essay "Charisma" was published in 1979, but the anthology in which it was included, Stardom: Industry of Desire, was published in 1991.   TrueHeartSusie3
You're welcome, as you earned it. I have also fixed the cite from your info above. Cheers,