I certainly think that the new wording in the lead According to David Winters, Jackson also donated tens of millions of dollars to many children’s charities anonymously, and spent a lot of his time visiting seriously ill children tirelessly going from hospital to hospital meeting these children just to brighten up their lives. When Jackson finished the visits he would ask the hospital nurses and the doctors what was needed at the hospital in terms of equipment for the children and would then make anonymous donations to the hospital to purchase expensive equipment or whatever else was needed. is WP:UNDUE, POV and has spoilt an otherwise very good article. In my view the prior sentence is sufficient detail on Jackson's charitable activities for the lead.