February 2011 (UTC) 

 :::I've completed an edit of the entire article, removing the story-telling tone (and template tags) and adding substantial detail and many references. There are still some timeline inconsistencies, a few grammar issues, and some other minor details needing cleaning up. I'm going to take a little break and come back in a week or so so I can have a fresh perspective. If anyone else wants to clean it up, feel free.     21:41, 13