== Content referencing and re-wording == 

 Hi Josh, apologies, I am trying to post a balanced/counter argument to generalized terms that are used in that paragraph. The generalised terms, especially “integral part of ” denotes that this is the normal, when infact it is the reverse and such practices are not advocated. The source is from Google Scholar and has 36 citations. Here, we are talking about a religious and philosophical practice and a core to that practice is as I write. Please would you kindly inform me how to include this counter argument.  In the least please request a reference for what is currently being included in that paragraph and to re-word so it does not make generalised statements or please request that paragraph deleted as it may easily lead to misinformation. Thank you for your help, time and consideration to this request. (  )