== Self-appointed, unqualified mediator: Johnthescavenger == 

 So I read most of the talk page and discovered this little war between Iamcuriousblue and Illuminato.  Here are my comments: 

 Iamcuriousblue: I agree with you, the article is pretty heavily biased.  But.  Just because the truth is on your side doesn't mean you should be rude about it.  Illuminato will be more willing to listen to you if you aren't calling him an idiot.  Strangerer does this very well; she is polite, but she gets the message across.  Follow her example. 

  
 "I would like to see more information about adolescent homosexuality, and I would like the opinions/quotefarm to be toned down some." 

 "Yes, fine, but the article still seems to be based more on "possible negative effects of 'hooking up'" rather than anything else. It could use a broader viewpoint."Strangerer 

 You see?  And if you read about halfway up, Illuminato thanks her for her work.  To sum up: Keep a cool head, don't take arguments too personally, and be civil.  Things tend to work out better if you do. 

 Illuminato: Now don't get me wrong.  I think the article is totally one-sided.  I think it needs a major overhaul and am doing some myself.  But I have to admire how you never seemed to lose your temper on the talk page.  You replied calmly to all accusations of bias and politely asked how you could improve it.  I probably couldn't have done it myself.  Thumbs up. 

  
 Now, what to do.  No one likes to throw good work away, especially their own.  Illuminato is not going to want to delete his own work unless he knows it's the right choice.  So telling Illuminato to get rid of large swathes of text (or deleting it yourself) is not going to help; I believe this was a major part of the edit war.  Instead, let's improve on what we have.  Don't delete, replace and improve. 

 I've gone on a bit of a rampage through the last couple of sections, but I've more or less only replaced stuff with less biased/wordy stuff and added a couple of things.  Is this ok, Illuminato?  Tell me what you think.  (I'll be going back to school in two days, so I may forget about this page after tonight, but I'll try not to.)