:Thanks, Charles, and thanks for the review.  No hard feelings about the oppose, really; I sincerely want this article to be worthy of the subject, so I appreciate the feedback, even if I didn't agree with everything you said.  Are you sure it needs another copyedit, though?  This article has been through a GAN, a peer review, and now this very thorough FAC by some good folks.  I'm thinking about resubmitting it; it came so close to passing.  I think that if I had given myself more time, I would've been able to address these issues more quickly and it would've passed.  What do you think?