Who's the "thought police" out here?  This is ridiculous. 

 I added some constructive language to "cheesehead" and further added to the context in which people from Wisconsin actually wear the "cheesehead" slur with pride by wearing cheese on their head, especially during sporting events.  How in the world is that not constructive? 

 Furthermore, I added "FIB" - "fucking illinois bastard."  To anyone who has ever been at sporting event for a Wisconsin/Illinois rivalry (esp. baseball or football), this term is heard in the stands all the time.  And it's heard beyond sports as well, in everyday language as well. 

 To the "thought police" - put these back in or I'll add them back in myself.  They were CONSTRUCTIVE, were written with proper grammar and syntax, and were brief and to the point. 

 Comments anyone?