:There aren't any disambiguation links or broken references. That's good. —  •   

 ;Lead 

 *First of all, remove all the references from the lead and place them in the article body. —  •   
 *"Lost in the World" is a song by American hip hop recording artist Kanye West from his studio album, My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy -> "Lost in the World" is a song by American hip hop recording artist Kanye West from his fifth studio album, My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy (2010). —  •   
 *The song was initially released on September 29 and was shorter, but the version on the album was shortened with its ending becoming a new track, "Who Will Survive in America". -> Very bad wording, I can't even understand the sentence. —  •   
 *The track received positive reviews from critics and was considered one of the strongest tracks of My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy. -> The song received positive reviews from music critics, which considered it as one of the strongest compositions on My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy. —  •   
 *The song was prominently featured during the closing credits of Runaway, a 35 minute music video directed by West set to music from My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy. -> "Lost in the World" was featured during the closing credits of "Runaway", a 35 minute music video directed by West set with music from the album. —  •   

 ;Background 

 *Italicize Rolling Stone —  •   
 *The rapper, who will reportedly release his fifth album this fall, performed a new poem called 'Mama's Boyfriend' along with new tracks 'My Chain Heavy,' 'Sweat on My Face' and 'Lost in the World'. -> No need for this sentence, remove it. —  •   
 *... and clocked in at around 6 minutes ... Awkward my friend -> with a length of approximately 6 minutes. —  •   
 *I will further c/e the sections since as I can see there are some bad phrases. —  •   
 *I c/e and made some changes to the rest of the section. It was real mess now its okay, not perfect, but good enough for a GA. —  •   

 ;Composition 

 *mmm do you have genre sources? —  •   
 *Write from which magazine the reviewers are. It reads really bad without it. —  •