, 18 May 2014 (UTC) 
 :I have condensed what is actually said in the source video and is relevant for the article. For instance, the second argument is not in the source and the Darwin quote didn't provide anything that is relevant for the controversy. There is no one claiming that science shouldn't be objective. That the bill is allegedly supposed to teach student more objectivity is already made more than clear in the article. Wikipedia is not the place to present your own arguments and opinions. Any opinion should be found explicitly in the source and should be formulated as terse as possible. The presented opinions should also give a representative cross section. Your text seemed to give way to much weight to the reasoning of one single speaker. I doubt that reposting a segment that is similar to your original one will survive when brought to the attention of Wikipedia:Cleanup. If you are (or related to) the speaker in the video you should consider identifying as such for the sake of your credibility. It would also help to avoid confusion if you used a Wikipedia account.   11:28