::::::Hi . Point of order. Would you kindly stop referring to all and any BK editors as "The IT Team". There is only one member of the "IT team" here, me, as documented here , and I have a username you can call me by, Bksimonb, as it happens. Generalising BK editors in this way can foster a sense of some kind of conspiracy or collusion taking place, which is really not healthy for the community and may be seen as a tactic to discredit editors with different views. 

 ::::::The references we use in the article were not written with the same requirements for NPOV that Wikipedia has. Therefore, they may use shocking or obtuse words. There is no need for the article to follow suit, in fact, it is a non-negotiable requirement that the article is worded in a neutral and balanced way. The first paragraph also doesn't have to explain everything in full. There are separate sections later in the article for that. What you personally may find to be shocking about BK life is not a view that would necessary be shared by the wider community of editors and readers. 

 ::::::Thanks and regards