There's a sentence in there that says "The [False Fire] documentary also addresses the medical treatment and ultimate death of Liu’s 12-year-old daughter." Just build on that.  Something like "The [False Fire] documentary also says that Liu's 12-year-old daughter died under unusual circumstances in hospital, noting that she was recovering well before dying suddenly on March 17th. Some Falun Gong sources argue that she may have been killed by the government as a way of guaranteeing her silence." Is that good?  And would the government have any response to that allegation that should be noted?