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 Comments: 
 # The lead is poorly structured, consisting of one-sentence paragraphs. 
 # Citations are not supposed to be in the lead unless the information is unique. 
 # There are several areas of the article that contain uncited information, including a few citation needed tags. 
 # Many areas of the article look sloppy with bulleted lists and one-sentence paragraphs. 
 By looking at the article, I feel it needs some more work, mostly with citations, before it can be considered for GA. Therefore, I will have to fail it. It may be renominated when the above issues are addressed.    
 :None of these are isurmountable and most require minor edits to fix, how about giving me a couple days to fix them before an instant fail?