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 :::We are already including a conclusion and the conclusion in the lede. 
 :::Complicated wording is sloppy wording. Verification for the concise text was previously provided and your proposals are tantamount to original research. 
 :::I provided evidence there are several editors who disagree with you.  That is your choice if you ignore consensus. You should not delete it from the lede because you don't like the concise wording for the lede. The text should be concise and not be complicated, especially in the lede for the general reader.   "