- Ok, I am only going to address some of the issues you brought up.  You intro was biased.  You stated that westmont was nationaly ranked.  Almost all liberal arts colleges are "nationally ranked" so this is misleading. The entry you compared it to gave the ranking position.  Additionally, westmont is not tier 1, its tier 2, and its at the bottom of tier 2, which makes it marginally better than average, according to the ranking (I know that they're are a lot of other factors to a school than the ranking, and westmont is a fine example of that).  I think your confusion stems from the fact that USNews combines tier one and tier 2 into one category, calling it top tier.  Each tier is 25% of the sample, so the bottom of the top tier is actually statistically average.  I moved the Templeton ranking information down to where the other ranking information already was for consistency simply.   

 Additionally, the "bragging" you pointed out regarding other schools tended to be more specific and factual then the language you were using.  Try to be more specific and cite.  Vague puffery is not appropriate for a encyclopedia enty, its not appropriate here.  Stick to the facts.