**They're not noticeable. None of them are. Neither is Fallout: Equestria and Fallout: Equestria: Project Horizons. None of them are noticeable, I was using list as examples of why just something's longer than War and Peace (and, BTY, some asshole used that as reason we should keep Fallout: Equestria), it does not should go on a list of "Longest self-published and controversial novels". Like I said, insanely long stories about children shows on the internet are not particularly unusual on the internet, it doesn't say anything new or interesting about Fallout OR My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic and beside, it's pretty shitty fanfiction. It's not a good job of emulating the feel of Fallout or MLP: FIM (although the Fallout part might because it's based off Fallout 3, which ssssuucckked). It's basically gory post-apocalyptic lesbian pony porn with the naming scheme of My Little Pony and technology and perks from Fallout. It's not noticeable and it shouldn't be on the list. Trial by Tenderness should probably be removed too, since apparently it's not the longest fanfiction ever.