:::It could use some copy-editing. Here's some things I noticed looking at it with a fresh pair of eyes: 
 :::* In August 2005, another round of funding raised $5 million -> Another $5 million was raised in August 2005 
 :::* The sentence on the survey near the end of History could probably be taken out  
 :::* The first sentence in the lead could be broken up into two separate sentences 
 :::* "there is the a business product with..." 
 :::* Software and services -> Features 
 :::* "The reviewer, Jeffrey Wilson..." 
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