, 19 January 2010 (UTC) 

 : I think there are balance problems with the article too, but it is not polite Wikipedia behaviour to make major changes to an article before discussing them here. You made changes before even commenting here, so I have reverted those changes for the time being. Please raise specific issues here, and await consensus by other editors before making changes again. 

 : Also, can you please add new comments to the bottom of the Talk page rather than the top. It makes it easier to follow if comments are in chronological order.   17:19