==Updated contribution== 

 Okay......I'm an idiot and apparently I thought that I was supposed to edit your actual page. Needless to say that I was wrong, but that still meant less work for you! 

 Nevertheless, here were some general suggestions that I did notice while running through your page 
 :#the body of your page needs restructuring gramatically to fit Wiki standards. Nothing too drastic, but something along the lines of what I did for those few sections; 2)