Sorry for the delay. A few more things I've thought of that should be worked on or included (if possible) to ensure completeness: 
 *Lead says BBWAA named him the Blue Jays rookie of the year in 2012, but now it just says "he was named" and doesn't say who did the naming. Especially since the next sentence says the Blue Jays named him their ROY, this needs to be fixed. 
 *College stats would be nice 
 *Was he competing for a roster spot in 2013, or virtually guaranteed one? Something from spring training might be good to add. 
 Let me know if you have any questions. –