:::Orwell wrote "Politics and the English language", what I want you to get out of it is brevity and clarity. You're doing a lot better now, compared to this. Yeah it's been a while, most of what I was planning on saying is fresh out of mind. The fundamental point was if you want people to read your comments, in addition to the literature, you need to seriously need to summarize. Commentary on what you believe and what you did ("I'm cool now. I decided to come back. If I leave now, that would mean giving up the ideal of improving Wikipedia's content...") is of little significance to justifying an edit to the article. When you go over two paragraphs, what is important is often lost, and I'm surprised no one cited WP:TLDR.