November 2012 (UTC) 

 === North Cyprus Page - Edit Request - Kulaksiz 5 Case Section & Economy Section === 

 Dear Alessandro 57, 

 Thank you for your recent comments on my Edit Request for North Cyprus page. It seems clear that the text that I recommended needs to by shortened, as it is 'over weight'.  

 I am more than happy to shorten it, but I am having some problem in doing so, as I am not sure what my "target" number of words or size of text is. 

 I have inserted the word file which includes both my original text, and then my 'references and consensus' additional request. Please do not think I am 'work-shy', I'm definitely not. However, I thought you may want to take a look, as perhaps condensing comes much easier to you, on the basis the Wiki language of every day country pages still isn't fixed in my mind. 

 Should you have any ideas or suggestions on condensing, or should you wish to have a go at cropping it, I would be grateful. It may save a lot of toing and froing as well. 

 I appreciate any time you can spare on the matter. 

 Kind regards 

 ToZero 

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