: And more problems: 
 * "The proposed state included the entirety of the Gaza Strip and over 90% of the West Bank with Jerusalem as a shared capital". In addition to what Iris noted, the source says nothing about Jerusalem as a shared capital. 
 * "Eichmann remains the only person executed in Israel". This is simply false, see Meir Tobianski.  The previous wording was designed to exclude military courts. 
 :MM, many of your first round of changes can be argued as reverts. Some of your second round are definitely reverts.  I remind you of the 1RR restriction this article. 
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