Good work with the reference, but please don't undo the neutralisation of the sentence. 
 Allow me to explain why what you wrote is not neutral. Who believes that the BoM is contradicted by Archaeological and DNA evidence? Well Hitchens obviously does, and I would guess you do, and other people certainly do. Does everybody believe that? No clearly they don't. Mormons don't for example. It is not neutral to ignore their viewpoint, any more than it would be neutral to ignore Hitchens viewpoint. What you wrote clearly violated that principle.