I already made the suggestions per above: make a separate section on the controversies and criticism instead of burying them within paragraphs so that general readers don't skim over this. You are a doing an injustice to the argument when you claim is it basically a pro/anti debate, its just a debate, IMHO religious belief doesn't validate either side to the Golden Plate existence. If you like, I'll dredge up some research on the Golden Plates on my campus library for specific citations, and make the criticism section myself.