:You are welcome to edit the article as you see appropriate, of course. The only thing you have to do is make sure it complies with WP:NPOV and that you give equal weight to both the proponents of Tent City 4 and the opponents.  My only reason for reverting your change was because the tent city 4 section of this article is meant to comply with WP:SS and it added information that was more than a quick summary and had nothing to do with the content.  I'm not familiar with Tent City 4 and act more as an editor of the articles.  At this point the only other person that is actively editing the articles seems to be an opponent of Tent City 4, which means the article does have a bit of a bias in that direction. However if you want to act as a proponent editor, please feel free to do so.  However, having said that, the detail that you provided for the NUCC and SHARE/WHEEL appeal is a bit much for wikipedia.  What would be prefered is that you provide a short, concise summary of their appeal and then provide a link to a non-Wikipedia site that provided the detail.  Here is an example of this from the Tent City 4 article: 

 :On August 13, 2004, CACHE submitted its final report citing a need for homeless encampments "because current regional efforts are inadequate to meet the needs of homeless men, women and families"Hamilton, Sherry. Citizens’ Advisory Commission on Homeless Encampments releases final report and recommendations 

 One sentence that provides a quick snapshot of what the CACHE report says.  So, happy editting and thanks for contributing!~~~~