== This article is a DISASTER. == 

 The headline says it all. 
 The actual grammar isn't all that bad, but the sentence structure is a MESS and the entire article is written FAR too orally. 
 The entire article needs some MAJOR cleanup. I would do it myself but I'm guessing it'd take around an hour and I don't have the time. But somebody, PLEASE? 
 Bloody hell. This is a shame to the word "encyclopedic". 
   Nizingur