:Marcd, before I take this issue to DRN, let me tell you again that this is *EXACTLY* why we say you're attempting to control articles. The proper response to such comments as Nick-D has made is not to make a series of changes to a set of articles (or to rewrite them completely, as you did following the PR); the intended process is that everyone discusses things, leaves the articles alone in the meantime, so we can be sure the comments we make refer to the same version, and then collaberatively decide how to make the changes that the consensus agrees upon. This also involves WP as the encyclopedia 'anyone can edit'! ANYONE can edit these articles - you are not the only editor, and I believe you would do well to reexamine WP's five pillars on accessibility to everyone and NPOV, or reconsider your involvement with this project. Regards