I'm presupposing that the person who responded here is the same responsible for the "This Whole thing is bullshit" line inserted into the "Sirens and death" section. I'm not a professional editor and have kind of muddled into figuring out how to flag that addition, but I figured I'd post on it here. I'm not entirely certain how to handle that kind of thing; I could delete it, but I don't know the policy so... I'm mentioning it here for someone with more knowledge and skill than I to do so.