Thanks, I will try and take time to understand it and have a go.  

 I think in the influence section it should be said that Garcia is an influence on the Alt-Country/rock scene of recent times. The Garcia/Grateful Dead period of 1969-1973 was very americana in terms of recording. Numerous Garcia songs are and have been covered by many Alt-Country/Rock bands and people like Ryan Adams, The Black Crowes, Evan Dando count/have counted Jerry Garcia as an influence. I think this should be added somehow.  

 Also Duane Allman was quoted as saying that he thought Jerry Garcia "Was a prince, who can do anything. He can walk on water, he's that great." It is in the book that came out a year or so ago about Duane's life.  

 Maybe Dylans quote about Garcia can be added, the one he released at the time of Jerry's death. Also Bruce Hornsby said of all the guitarists he's played with Jerry was still the most interesting because of how original his style was. That is in the book Garcia - An American Life by Blair Jackson.  

 I think these and more should be added, to help give a greater appreciation of Garcia's genius and influence. (DAVO)