:I've sometimes touched hockey reviews. Two things I noticed: lots of sentences beginning "he" in the lead, and possibly too many quotes for my taste. But otherwise OK. I might chip in after some hockey people have had a look, as I think it needs hockey eyes first, as you say. And I'll certainly have a look when it goes to GA/FAC. On a related topic, I think Mr Bastard would be fine for GA at the moment, as I've had GAs with less detail. FAC might be different, but should be easy for GA.