===Proposed redraft === 
 As mentioned above, I've worked on a redraft of the current page, which can be found here. Most of the material is still intact. I've removed sections that are unsourced, especially stuff that I don't know to be true, and have tried to source refereces for other bits. 

 Still needs a lot of work, mainly focused on citing the vocabulary and putting main section headings in place. 

 What do you think? I'd be proposing replacing what we have currently with this & then continuing work in the main namespace