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 *"Already the youngest Australian to play district cricket, as of 19 May 2008 with the death of Bill Brown, he is also the oldest surviving Australian Test cricketer." Why as of 19 May? Bill Brown died in March, and Ron Hamence will now always be the oldest surviving Test cricketer until he dies. I'd either change to the date of Bill Brown's death, or omit the date altogether, and re-word to "following the death of ..." or "after the death of ..." or something like that. 
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 *"début" or "debut"? 
 *"when he was caught". I understand "caught" but is there a wikilink to add a definition? I expect there must be an article on the methods of dismissal in cricket. 
 *What was Don Bradman's XI? 
 *I think it ought to say "not out" rather than * for such scores. It's easier to read for non-cricketers. 
 *"He returned to domestic cricket, however over six innings he failed to pass 27." I think this needs a slight re-wording, because it seems a little awkward. However, I may be wrong and not quite reading it right at the moment. 
 *"Hamence was a popular member of the touring squad and his cheerful nature and splendid tenor voice added to the good spirits of the team." Have you got a reference for this, or is it the one at the end of the next sentence? 
 *"No 6" and "No 3". I think "No" should be expanded to number. 
 *Just check to make sure all  's are in there. 

 Not much really to do, and I think it should be there.