GA Review 
 This review is transcluded from Talk:Henry Clinton (1738–1795)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. 

  
 I have now reviewed this article under the six Good article criteria, and have commented in detail on each criterion below: 

 1 Well written FAIL 

 1.1 Prose 

 I really think this would benefit from a good copyedit, as a lot of the writing is stilted or doesn't make grammatical sense. A few of the things I've come across: 

 * Clinton was born in Newfoundland, then a British colony over which his father, George Clinton, was governor - Of which, surely? 

 * In 1751, the young Henry went to England - why 'the young' in here? 

 * He was at first commissioned as a Captain - Again, no need for 'at first', it just sounds awkward. 

 1.2 Manual of Style 
 I have several issues about the article for this section: 

 * The links to external websites in the citations should be formatted (use of  template is recommended, though not required) to include access dates. 

 * All of the references are not cited properly using the correct citation templates, which is a major issue. 

 * References using the same page numbers of the same book need to be combined together. 

 2 Factual accuracy FAIL 

 * Far too few citations for a GA article in my opinion. Some sections only have one or two per large paragraph, which I don't believe to be enough. 

 *There is practically nothing on Clinton's later life, and having done several university courses on the American War of Revolution know that there was a great deal he did in his later career. That section also has no references and requires them. 

 * His early career also has very few citations, and more are needed.  

  
 3 Coverage Fail 

 * Again, needs more coverage of his later career, as well as his earlier career.  

 * The 'Evaluations' section only has two citations, yet a great deal is written in there and could do with more citations. 

 4 Neutrality PASS 

 No evidence of POV in the article. 

 5 Stability PASS 

 Appears to be stable and thus passes.  

 6 Images PASS 

 Looks good - nice selection, well presented and captioned, with appropriate licenses. 

 As a result of the above concerns I have placed the article on hold. This gives editors up to a week to address the issues raised (although if constructive work is underway, the hold period may be extended). I will regularly check back here to mark off those issues that have been satisfactorily resolved and to address any questions and comments you may have. 

 Feel free to contact me if you have any queries, especially since this is my first GA Review.