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 :: A third party seems to have found a workable solution, so thanks for that. Drmargi: Per guidelines, you probably should have made an effort to fix the issue instead of just reverting again and again and potentially starting an edit war. Yes, you have the right to remove an edit with which you don't agree. We all do. If you felt the flow of the sentence was interrupted, why not fix it? Simply reverting everything you don't agree with will only lead to problems. Anyway, it's fixed now, so thanks again to  for taking the high ground. '''' "