::::::Wtshymanski, I think what makes for good or bad writing may be in the eye of the beholder. Being an encyclopaedia, WP normally encourages a neutral, factual tone. It's contents should reflect established facts or representative expert opinion. The opinions of editors are not included, and I think most editors would say that including them comes across as unprofessional. 
 ::::::I can't believe this is worth arguing over, but DMack's edit is in line with normal WP practice.