::I just did a word count. The material you regard as positive (which I think is neutral) is 287 words. That includes the description of his security precautions. The negative stuff comes to 607, so this article is biased against Emerson. I therefore can't removed the security precautions, or anything else, unless you can find something positive to replace it with. I think you must dislike him a great deal if you think this article is favorable to him.