Hi Azure... no, just meeting some dealines in the real world.   

 I read what you had posted in the sand box. I think its very comprehensive for the criticism angle, and thats a good thing... that's exactly whats lacking. I have something that might  be of relevence from Rinku Sen, and will post a few quotes with a link in the sand box page.  

 I probably wont be able to get back online for a little while; but if its necessary, I am still interested in contributing. On the other hand, i think your write-up in the sand box is just fine.