I think that the article is a lot crappier than ever before and I think that you should start do some real rewriting work, instead of arguing what to delete and what not. It's pure crap, you've done. Pure shitty crap. As I stated elsewhere it's very easy to destroy and delete, but never to create. "We should rewrite this article!" Ok, rewrite it. Literally! Go and start writing and create things, Einsteins!!!