Thank you for taking the time to pay a visit. Agreed- the Lede is still a touch wordy and the Sections have evolved into Articles in their own right, that, properly should be. The Lede has varied over time from woefully too brief/simplistic and plagued with a biased POV to overly complex while coming across as "combative". To a meaningful degree, this is the result of the horrid and dreaded combination of politics, religion, genocide and war. It's destined to controversial and contested on varying points. Not a 'healthy" combination for those of us with a certain temperament, which requires all to be tolerant, but not compromise the facts, while allowing the reader to think for themselves. Good advice for moving forward. Until next time-