: Okay, I've gone through and made these tweaks, also did a bit of formating and copyediting. There are still a couple of citations missing (I have put tags where I feel they are required). If these can be added in, I feel that the article would be a B class. If you would like to take the article higher, please consider submitting it for a peer review. This can be done by adding it to the list at WP:MHPR. Hope this helps. —