I would correct it but I am alrady entangled with another engangement with the same fellow currently insisting upon  he versions of edits.  
 For what it is worth I read over the revisions and Saw nothing to pointed.  Certainly their was room for more cynisism and/or skeptisism but the  
 version  original already did point out the girls as fibbers so that is a hefty dose of real right there.  I'll not be editing this because I know jack squat about it.  Ima yank 2.  All the same the UK version does seem more consise.