== Word choices on lead paragraph == 

 I have an issue with the rather pedestrian word choices on the lead paragraph of Benedict Cumberbatch's page. It says: 

 "...is an English actor and film producer who has performed in film, television, theatre and radio. He is the son of actors Timothy Carlton and Wanda Ventham and went to school at the University of Manchester and the London Academy of Music and Dramatic Art."  

  

 University of Manchester isn't just a simple "school," it's a university, a higher educational institution. He also got a Masters degree at the London Academy of Dramatic art. It would be better for the sentence to read as: 

  
 "is an English actor and film producer who has performed in film, television, theatre and radio. The son of actors Timothy Carlton and Wanda Ventham, he graduated from the University of Manchester and continued his classical acting training at the the London Academy of Music and Dramatic Art". 

 I hope you can help amend the article. Thank you!