== Days of the week == 

 In "Sequence of events", other than (at most, perhaps) in Day 1, I don't think it is relevant to mention the day of the week in the parenthetical immediately following the title.  The same may hold for any other references to the day of the week within that section, but one would have to look at them.  I suggest excision where it is not adding anything of material value, as this has lingered more than a week.