::I was asked about the above on my own talk page, and responded there - but thought it best to copy the comments here. The original discussion is now in .   

 ::OK, I've had a look over the article. The main point is, that Wikipedia is all about references - to independent reliable sources. All the facts should be referenced, and most of the article should use 3rd party references - such as newspaper articles, or books, or whatever. Things that are not connected with the society itself. 

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 ::This is a non-neutral claim - so, either you a) find an independent reliable source (e.g. newspaper article?) to prove it, or b) remove it. 

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 ::This is fairly basic information, so it it one case where a 'primary source' - such as the institute website - could be used. So if there is a page on IEEE which states that these are the locations, add that at the end of that sentence, as a reference. 

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 ::This is probably not worth including. It is 'inside information'. Unless the actual formation details have been discussed in e.g. New York Times, it is probably best to skip it. Remember, as an Encyclopaedia, we only publish information that is already documented elsewhere. 

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 ::That sounds OK, if a reference can be provided. If the website of CS Exec says it, that'd be fine as a reference. 

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 ::Be very careful with naming people - we have to take extra precautions here. Unless these people are well-known 'public figures', it is probably best to leave them out. The ones with Wikipedia articles (linked) are probably fine. Please see WP:NPF and WP:BLPNAME. (And of course, it needs a reference) 

 ::For the rest, "Main activities" contains a lot of information which I think is not suitable for inclusion - see WP:NOT. Again, it is unreferenced, and I doubt references outside of IEEE itself (or people publishing what they've said) could be found. I think that section needs major trimming. 

 ::Almost anything you can add, from other sources, would help. Try searching Google News archives, ie this - and add information that comes from reliable sources.