That's fine. Most articles used to start as "Pilot is the ...", which makes it appear as though it is an official "title". Another editor came up with the current version, which basically just says the episode is known simply as "the pilot". But your version seems good, so long as people don't start arguing about it. Matthew complained the plot was too short, when the peer review (which he had no part in) requested the plot be shortened. Bole doesn't think the second paragraph of the lead is relevant, but a more in-depth summary of the entire article was requested in the peer review. I hate it when two processes start to conflict with each other. Have fun unloading your stuff.