:::I agree with Scjessy that the presidential campaign section could stand to lose a whole lot of the niggling details of state-by-state votes.  A general summary that said "Obama and Clinton have run a close race for the nomination, with some voting trends following demographic lines" would be fine (cited appropriately, of course).  Maybe after that some general mention of the debates and overall areas of difference between the candidate positions.  I suppose at this point, the fact that Obama leads the nomination contest, and is likely nominee, would be reasonable (again, cited).  Microscopic detail of this primary and that primary, and this date and that date, belongs in a child article rather than in this summary-style biography. ×