Comments 
 *[Fair use rationale checked out good for infobox image]. 
 *"The band members of La Dispute took..." not sure you need "of La Dispute" really, no ambiguity exists as to which band you're talking about. 
 *"No Sleep Records" is a label not in italics, "Better Living" is a label but is in italics, be consistent with the formatting. 
 *" that- while " -> "that – while" etc. 
 *" home town Grand Rapids-" perhaps "home town of Grand Rapids –..." 
 *"Somewhere at the" or "Somewhere At the...." be consistent with the album title. 
 *"on the long time between" loathe as I am to repeat "delay", it's better than "long time"... 
 *"The writing of the album did not start until a year after La Dispute's debut album" seems to conflict with "The album was written over a very long period, with the first complete track being created as early as late 2009". 
 *"two months straight," no need for "straight". 
 *"during which they had writing sessions lasting twelve to fourteen" during which their writing sessions lasted twelve to fourteen... 
 *"They recorded the remainder..." -> "La Dispute recorded..." 
 *"does very long takes" dislike "does", perhaps "makes"? 
 *"described as having" by whom? 
 *Several quotes throughout that aren't attributed, e.g. "delicate fingerpicked work and ripping chords", "emotionally draining" etc.  Should say who said these things. 
 *Don't think you need to link faith. 
 *"a Poem" is sometimes in quotes not italics, sometimes not in quotes but in italics (i.e. a Poem), be consistent. 
 *"Singer and lyricist Jordan Dreyer.." you've already introduced him in previous sections... 
 *" posted a blog post" repetitive. 
 *"via SIQ SHIT" what is "SIQ SHIT"? 
 *"free to download. The download, although free," repetitive. 
 *"organization that is dedicated" no need for "that is". 
 *"added up to" ->" totaled"  
 *"in Europe, Australia and North America, respectively" no need for "respectively". 
 *Balance And Composure look like they're actually called Balance and Composure. 
 *Similar comment applies to Make Do and Mend. 
 *"off of"?  you mean "from"? 
 *" in September 2012[45]" period missing. 
 *What is the notability of "The 1st Five"? 
 *" the albums large stylistic" apostrophe missing. 
 *"Sputnik Music " is called "Sputnikmusic " according to our article. 
 *" it achieved some attention for end-of-year" -> "it featured in some end-of-year"? 
 *"Additional Liner Notes" -> Additional liner notes. 
 *Check for spaced hyphens in the personnel lists, should be spaced en-dashes per WP:DASH. 
 *"Backing Vocals" -> "backing vocals" 
 *"Mastering Engineer" -> "Mastering engineer". 
 *Lot of red links in the refs, are these all likely to get articles? 
 *Mix of italics and non-italics for magazines, these are "works" and should be in italics. 
 *Avoid SHOUTING in the ref titles. 
 A lot to look at on a first pass through.  Article is on hold for a week.