== Gameplay/ Plot transition == 

 I realize that information is limited with regards to the plot of the game at this time, but we should at least fix how the gameplay section starts off. "Soon, the player comes to realize that his Ark has malfunctioned and that he is the only survivor. Apparently this environment is perfectly suited to the rough-and-tumble dune buggy racing seen in games" 
 It goes from discussing the plot, to the racing elements of the environment with no transition.    
 If you're going to write it like that, you need to discuss what the environment is like beforehand.