:I would recommend reading the styles of of a featured article, and attempt to emulate their style of writing. Quotes are fine, but when you introduce too many, then who is really writing the article? Also, the section in its current state introduces somewhat of a contradiction: Vikernes is married and has a fifteen-year old daughter (born 1993) and a son (born 2007).[9] According to an interview made in 2004, he said he was not married and there was no mention of a son (naturally).[10] If both sources are accurate, this implies he was married sometime after 2004 and before or in 2008. - the section first implies that the first source is not accurate, then attempts to state that both are possibly accurate. -