I agree completely.  Why don't I do a first draft rewrite tomorrow morning, and if you are not super busy about noon, check in and take a look - you will find much of it rewritten, and redundencies removed.  I do love that article, as you know, and appreciate your giving me first shot at a rewrite - then you, who are a better writer, can polish up.  Thanks!   I will get to work on it tonight, and have it posted by noon on sunday.