complete rewrite needed == 

 This whole article needs complete rewriting. I can sympathize with the POV it tries to push forward, but it is all but encyclopedic. 
 I can't decide between tagging it POV, complete-rewrite or inappropriate tone. IMHO it is a combination of all three... by now I'm fair and I tag it POV, let me know what do you think about. 
 

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