*A poem dedicated to the Floury Baker  common name is capitalized here when it isn't earlier. Also, who was the author? 
 *Is The Catholic Press a newspaper? Magazine? Also it should be italicized 
 *It's not mentioned under behavior that the adults feed on sap 
 *The Commons link should be fully under "see also" or "external links" 
 The article is good on comprehensiveness. It could just use some tweaks to readability and flow.