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 Gandhi stayed out of active politics and as such limelight for most of the 1920s, preferring to resolve the wedge between the Swaraj Party and the Indian National Congress, and expanding initiatives against untouchability, alcoholism, ignorance and poverty. 

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 Gandhi stayed out of active politics and, as such, the limelight for most of the 1920s.  He focused instead on resolving the wedge between the Swaraj Party and the Indian National Congress, and expanding initiatives against untouchability, alcoholism, ignorance and poverty. 

  
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 The year before, 

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 In the preceding year, 

  
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 26 January 1930 was celebrated by the Indian National Congress, meeting in Lahore, as India's Independence Day. 

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 26 January 1930 was celebrated as India's Independence Day by the Indian National Congress meeting in Lahore. 

  
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 Gandhi then launched a new satyagraha against the tax on salt in March 1930, highlighted by the famous Salt March to Dandi from 12 March to 6 April, marching 388 kilometres (241 miles) from Ahmedabad to Dandi, Gujarat to make salt himself. 

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 Gandhi then launched a new satyagraha against the tax on salt in March 1930.  This was highlighted by the famous Salt March to Dandi from 12 March to 6 April, where he marched 388 kilometres (241 miles) from Ahmedabad to Dandi, Gujarat to make salt himself. 

  
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 The conference was a disappointment to Gandhi and the nationalists, as it focused on the Indian princes and Indian minorities rather than the transfer of power. 

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 The conference was a disappointment to Gandhi and the nationalists, as it focused on the Indian princes and Indian minorities rather than on a transfer of power. 

  
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 However, this tactic was not successful. 

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 However, this tactic was not successful, as Gandhi's influence continued to spread. 

  
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 In protest, Gandhi embarked on a six-day fast in September 1932, successfully forcing the government to adopt a more equitable arrangement via negotiations mediated by the Dalit cricketer turned political leader Palwankar Baloo. 

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 In protest, Gandhi embarked on a six-day fast in September 1932.  The resulting public outcry successfully forced the government to adopt a more equitable arrangement via negotiations mediated by the Dalit cricketer turned political leader Palwankar Baloo. 

  
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 This new campaign was not universally embraced within the Dalit community, however, as prominent leader B. R. Ambedkar condemned Gandhi's use of the term Harijans as saying that Dalits were socially immature, and that privileged caste Indians played a paternalistic role. 

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 This new campaign was not universally embraced within the Dalit community, however.  The prominent Dalit leader B. R. Ambedkar condemned Gandhi's use of the term Harijans, saying that Dalits were socially immature and that privileged upper-caste Indians played a paternalistic role. 

  
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 Gandhi, although born into the Vaishya caste, insisted that he was able to speak on behalf of Dalits, despite the availability of Dalit activists such as Ambedkar. 

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 Gandhi, although born into the Vaishya caste, insisted that he was able to speak on behalf of Dalits, despite the presence of Dalit activists such as Ambedkar. 

  
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 In the summer of 1934, three unsuccessful attempts were made on his life. 

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 In the summer of 1934, three unsuccessful attempts were made on Gandhi's life. 

  
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 He did not disagree with the party's move, but felt that if he resigned, his popularity with Indians would cease to stifle the party's membership, that actually varied from communists, socialists, trade unionists, students, religious conservatives, to those with pro-business convictions and that these various voices would get a chance to make themselves heard. 

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 He did not disagree with the party's move, but felt that if he resigned, his popularity with Indians would cease to stifle the party's membership.  This varied from communists, socialists, trade unionis