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 :Hello again, yes it would certainly be necessary to rewrite in the third person but on its own this would definitely not be sufficient. The essential criteria for articles are that they are about notable topics - in the case of organisations the precise criteria are here. These are the criteria you should look at closely. You'll see that the demands are quite strict and it may be hard to meet them right now. There are some more general criteria here which apply to all articles, you may find them easier to meet. 

 :The key is to have information about the organisation which is neutral in tone and can be verified by reference to reliable sources which are cited in the text. I realise those are a lot of links to look at but if you want to draft an article which will survive you will need to have some familiarity with them all. Have you had a look at this section on conflict of interest? It describes some of the problems in doing what you propose and other editors would be all over your article if you do nevertheless decide to try and draft it. The key to survival will be to have all your assertions well backed up with references to newspaper articles, independent publications, books, authoritative websites etc. The Make-A-Wish Foundation article is not a very good model as the references there are pretty poor. I think they scrape in by being nationally well-known. The Oxfam article is better (I realise it's a tough comparison when they've been going for decades!) as there are several good references there to well-known newspapers which mention Oxfam - not always positively - by name. 

 :I'd have to advise you against the course of trying to rewrite this; even if you think you have done everything right other editors are likely to be highly critical and despite your best efforts you may find it hard to write neutral prose. In the worst case, you could spend ages drafting it only for it to be slated for deletion again. If you are determined to try then read ALL the blue links in my paragraphs above. Then I suggest you start drafting at an article in your own user space; I will copy the article you tried to submit earlier to the page at . Once that link is blue you can go to it and edit it as you would an article in main space, with the exception that other editors will not be patrolling it as aggressively. If you have any further queries please post here and I or another editor will pick them up.   "