**** if i may weigh in here. I too am not happy with using proselytization in the sentence. I think ye have both made good points but have still missed the kernel of what was being done. the problem i think is that  proselytism is done to someone by someone. the sentence as currently stands makes it sound like the process being complete was a condition of getting soup. which it clearly wasnt (alot of the time anyway). i will add the words "being  subject to " . i think these should make the correct distinction. eleutherius.