:::I added only two sentences (see the beginning of this section). It's difficult to have a dialogue with someone who cites no WP rules as a basis for objections and makes up stuff (removed three sentences from a two sentence contribution). Then, after deleting my contribution (twice) I am called the deletionist!  
 :::Characterizing words like "dead" and "beaten" as "buzzwords" is interesting. I would ask for clarification but it's completely irrelevant to WP rules. We can't have an article where EVERY sentence "describes the conflict" in a neutral way. Some facts will fall one way, some another, some in the middle, etc.