::Good! I looked at those revisions, and they are a step in the right direction. Something else, closely related, occurs to me, about the scope of the page. Obviously, there are other mathematical models of neuronal activity in epilepsy, in the scientific literature. To some extent, you have defined this page to be specifically about this model. But, again, since this is an encyclopedia article rather than an article in a professional journal, it would be more appropriate to broaden the scope of the page to include other models as well. There could be a section about modeling large-scale activity, resembling what there is now, but there could also be sections on more localized model circuits, and so forth. Again, the key idea through all of this is that the page is a Wikipedia article, and not an article in a journal. The more the page can be brought into line with that expectation, the better it is protected against deletion.