:I did a bit more. A lot of the verbs needed to be toned down. It's also wildly over-documented at points, where one or at most two good sources would serve there are many more. That just makes it hard to read. There are also critiques unmentioned that question whom he represents, that is, what's the membership of his organization. I don't see any way around a catalog of his objections, but there are some themes, notably his assertion that Catholics receive treatment other groups do not. I may be back. This needs a lot of work, but it's a chore. And I only came to see how well the St. Patrick's Day parade scrap was covered!