:Hello.  That is a considerable improvement over my weak effort.  I have made a few minor tweaks, mainly spellings.  There are some mistakes.  It is listed Grade II*, but the infobox says Grade I; Ref 3 refers to the garden, not to the hall. Is it really in Gawsworth, rather than Odd Rode? 

 :Do you intend to take it further?  It's fine as it stands, but if you are going for GA, you may want to explain what Grade II* means, maybe have an Appreciation section (Pevsner calls it a "quite big, somewhat eccentric house" for example).  And you may need a Present day section, explaining that the house and garden are open to the public, etc.  Sorry, I haven't spent much time looking at it as I am currently rather involved in other projects.  Best wishes,