== Daniel McGowan == 

 Basically, more regarding his biographical data. It says he was born in New York and that he went to grad school and that's about all I see. Some info on where he attended school, maybe some family background, if he's ever been married, had kids, stuff like that. I have no reservations about the remainder of the content of the article, but as a biographical article it could use a few more details about his life per se. In fact, with just two or three paragraphs in the "Biography" section, or less if not much info is available, I can see it getting a good "B" assessment.