Metro Radio Hong Kong Group members 

 *Your intro currently makes it sound like they specialize in medical care broadcasting.  “Focusing on Education and Medical care, they provide 14 programmes concerning health care per week to promote proper health knowledge, and to support the government's policy of combating SARS.” Remember, your intro needs to be an overview of what the station is about, listing the most important information on top.  Their headquarter location do not need to be in the intro. 
 *NPOV! “Metro Showbiz breaking new ground in radio history”—is public relations talk.  Breaking new ground according to whom?  Just give us the facts. Unless you can refer to some unbiased study, don’t need to try to “sell” Metro Radio. 
 *Add more links and references. 
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