==Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Cynthia Carlson== 
 Hi Hassteur, 

 I hope I did the right thing by starting a new section.  I didn't see any instructions on this so I can only hope for the best. I have been working on a topic for an artist named Cynthia Carlson.  I submitted it and it you declined the submission.  I did go over the submission and added external & Wiki links to many of the items.  There were just a couple of questions I have: 
 #I don't know what an "inline external link" is.   
 #I do know that many of the items are not substantiated. For some of those, there are no online references on the Internet. Should they be deleted even though they are true?    
 : Really it's best to create a new section and link to the article you're asking for advice about.  I have done this for you. 
 ::An inline external link is where you link to a non-wikipedia site in the middle of the prose about a subject.  In this case 2000 Art Resources Transfer, Inc., NYC and 1989 Cynthia Carlson: Installations, 1979-1989 (a decade, more or less): March 14-April 23, 1989, Freedman Gallery, Albright College, Reading, Pennsylvania are examples of external links in the middle of the text.  Perhaps reduce it to just the gallery names being linked. 
 ::As to the second point, because this is a Biography of a Living Person any contentious statement must be backed up by a reference. The gold standard is WP:MINREF in this case, but in general we like to see at least one reference per section of content. 
 ::Also as I look at the submission I see a great dumping of "presentations of work"  that makes it feel like you're trying to grab for getting the submission accepted under any terms.  It might be better to reduce it to the top 2 or 3 items per section (starting at awards) to condense the work so that reviewers like myself don't get bored with reading the article and decline it for the lack of references and verify ability in the submission.