== Help -) == 

 Hi Thaddeus, 
 You commented on my attempt to create an article I keep trying to edit it and trying to do what was asked to get it approved but I can't figure out why it keeps getting rejected. I followed the instructions for citations, made sure it wasn't advertorial in nature, and added extra sources. Can you explain to me what I did wrong and why it isn't getting approved? I am really confused and would love to talk to a real person. -)