Let me clarify, Ndickinson1, about helping WP readers.  The idea is that many tens of thousands of readers will be reading your Peer Marriage article, which makes a big multiplier effect.  Say that a pinpoint citation (pincite) saves each of them even just 1 minute – multiplying this by 10,000 yields a savings of more than 100 hours just due to that one item of careful work you did, multiplying your work by many times.  

 In addition, you apparently need to apply the golden rule to your readers, by imagining yourself in their position as they read this article in its present form, with a poor job of handling the source references (sorry to say that, I know it’s not pleasant for you to hear).  For example, if you had looked at your first two references from the viewpoint of the readers, you would have concluded that your readers needed some help to tell where each source ended and another began, within each group of sources.  Thus you might have numbered the sources in bold, such as: 

 (Imaginary) Group footnote: 1. First source. 2. Next source. 3. Next....  

 Also you couldn’t help noticing that readers would have trouble with the ISBN for the John Badalament book; you would then have helped the readers by looking at your editing for that source reference and would have seen that WP somehow managed to give you a message (if I recall correctly, WP said the last digit of your ISBN number did not agree with its calculated value) and you would have gone back to the book itself to check whether you had entered the correct ISBN number.  So it is clear you did not work hard enough to help the readers.  Being a good WP author is more than just creating a great article and then enjoying how well-written it is.  Namely, it also includes putting in all the pincites the readers will need and doing everything else you can think of to make it easy-as-possible for the readers.  As you can see, my standards go beyond just following the rules, such as Ebikeguy insists that you do (and I agree with him, on behalf of all WP readers).  I want you to also help the readers in every way as much as you possibly can, yielding an even-more-useful article. 

 After all, isn’t that your goal in writing the WP article at all?  

 Hopefully, on behalf of WP readers,