:Marsden, I generally agree that we don't have to introduce a lot of complexity, I just think that the current sentence structure does not necessarily make those two conditions clear. (Incidentally I think there are at least three common usages: 1) support for Israel 2) support for Aliyah as a primary goal  the original homeland concept 3) Support for settlement,  You don't have to support settlements to support Aliyah) The second paragraph also does not really discuss that there are many "Zionisms" which I think is important.  On the other hand, I have to say that I am not desperately worried about the second paragraph, so if you strongly object, I'll let it go.