In regards to your changing of the topic of WorldVentures, I think you need to leave the writing of this topic to someone that knows about the subject.  Lack of knowledge about pyramid schemes can lead people to ignorantly think that WorldVentures is a pyramid scam.  Your current revision is completely biased and provides false claims against the company.  None of the information you have provided about the company - i.e. 'claims to offer cheap tickets', etc. - is supported.  Your first source is simply from a blogger that is attempting to paint the entire MLM idea as sketchy, simply because it is not mainstream. 

 I apologise if this comes off as rude but your current 'revision' about the company is ignorant, biased, and unfairly attacks the company without any knowledge of the company and without providing any knowledge to potential readers about the company.