== Unclear pronoun (minor improvement) - 5th paragraph under Course of the War == 

 Suggest a rewording to improve comprehension. 

 In the 5th paragraph under "Course of the War", appears the sentence: 
 In 1813, the Americans won control of Lake Erie in the Battle of Lake Erie and cut off British and Native American forces in the west from their supply base; they were decisively defeated by General William Henry Harrison's forces on their retreat towards Niagara at the Battle of the Thames in October 1813. 
 The pronoun "they" after the semicolon should be replaced with something like "these forces", as it may otherwise be seen as referring to "the Americans", the subject of the preceding clause.