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 :::Writing good articles is tough. I've done a handful but it's hard work -) I found a really thorough checklist here which has just about everything you could fix, and while it may not all be necessary, would make the article a great one. Sorry about the delay -) Poke me when you've done the wiki markup one. It's a good lesson, since you will be using wiki markup all the time.   DR goes to Wikimania! "