::::::The “film presents”  means of course the filmmakers since no film really presents anything. I guess we can use the English language this way.  If the filmmakers are wrong, thats not for an editor to say unless very clear specific, references or reference says so. “Plays a role in consciousness”  ensues after the opening sentence “that  link quantum physics  to consciousness”. If you want to change the tone and meaning of the entire paragraph please write a version and place on the talk pages for other editors to look at and discuss. This version is a combination of versions written by other editors. Please feel free to try something else. (  )