*"China, India, and the Philippines have been in the top four sending countries every year" - since when. Also, isn't this original research? 
 *There's probably a better source to be found for the 3.5% gay, bisexual or transgender people. ABC News only mentions that figure once and could be inaccurate. Also, 2011 is out of date. 

 ====Government and politics==== 
 ;Government finance 
 *Does it really need 9 references in the "U.S. taxation is generally progressive"-beginning sentence, and all lumped together like that? 
 ::- Compressed refs to a single cite note.   

 ====Military==== 
 *"The president holds the title of" - should President be capitalized? 
 : and fixed other similar issues along with that.