:I put forth what I obviously believe to be a reasonable proposal, and you might or might not believe it to be reasonable, but your attitude is showing why the article, as it stands, is not NPOV; and your proposal will make it even less NPOV, not more. 
 :I also find it curious that you are always quoting academics who support your POV, while not addressing, for example, this one.  .  I find Lankov's observations to be quite apt.