:I just reviewed the principal section. I think having sentences like "The redemptive sacrifice on the cross is the source of mankind's salvation." and "He was born of the Virgin Mary by the power of the Holy Spirit in a miraculous event known as the virgin birth." These are clearly not encyclopedic nor NPOV. On the other hand, it would be strange to preface every sentence with "Christians believe". The solution doesn't jump out at me, but I am sure that having unqualified claims like these, even in the Christian views section, seems problematic. The one use of "Christ", referencing the second comming isn't problematic to me. However, the use of "good news" instead of Gospel is. Maybe we could put "good news" in quotes or italics, so it is understood it is a religious term? Overall, it is a tad theologically dense, and fairly jargony. It is more like "Christianity in their own terms," instead of adopting a more neutral language. These are just fine points, I think it is generally pretty good, and definately workable.