:::: I've made my modifications of those sections. In terms of early life, I clarified where he went and why. As I suspected, India Today had meant he became a pracharak within RSS which I've now moved up.  
 :::: The next paragraph on early political career seemed to describe his time under Emergency and then progress to politics so I've change the subheading to reflect that. The article described him being general secretary of "Gujarat Lok Sangharsh Samiti" set up by RSS after they were banned but I can only find sourcing which leads back to his website which I'm not sure we can use. I've reordered it so it's chronological so the yatra is earlier and also added LK Advani yatra as it was also one he was involved in. Also I've seen the main article has added his involvement in the Navnirman movement which doesn't seem as active as his action under Emergency so I wonder if it's worth a mention at all.