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 :I wrote an answer for you on , with some questions for you.  If you would like me to fix grammar on your user page, you can ask me to.  You can also ask me to fix the spaces around the comma and period. 
 :Is what you wrote on your user page supposed to be all for one article?  I think it may be better to put small parts of it into different articles.  It will need some changes, too.  I can help better with the changes when I know where you're thinking of putting it. ☺   "