:I approve of the structure, not all of the wording but on stylistic points rather than actual substance. First, I would rather have the Israel views Hamas as ... be a separate sentence with no while. I dont really like the word nonstarter, but that just might be me. Also, it is just repetitive with the next line. I dont think that line needs to be there unless the point is that this hudna talk does not meet those requirements, and if that is needed I think it could be added better, let me get some sleep and I might be able to figure out how I would add that if you dont agree that it is repetitive.