==awkward sentencing== 
 I went through and edited the article to flow better. At the top of the article it says that there are a lot of weasle words. I tried to weed those out as much as possible... Weasel words are fillers like "such as", "according to" etc. There was an over-use of commas, I re-worded and shortened sentences so that they wern't so long and choppy. I made some spelling corrections. The article should flow better now so that the information being portrayed can be easily read and understood.  
   Kgroblee