:Hi -  thanks for using the Edit request function!  I would be happy to work with you on this.  A few things to fix, and we can put this in" 
 :# please fix the references you have provided so that there is no text in red in them - you can see Wikipedia:Citing sources for instructions on how to format references 
 :# please do not suggest any content that does not have a source.  the sources you use should all be independent of her.  
 :# please remove colorful adjectives (which we call "puffery" like: "appointed a full member of the European Parliament Committee for Economic and Monetary Affairs, responsible for a wide range of  policy areas.  Wikipedia articles are just... plain.  
 :If you have any questions, please just reply here.