::::I restructured the Personal life section in the sandbox I created. . I think it's short, to the point, leaves out any sensationalism about her affairs (no pun intended, but accepted nonetheless), which is precisely what is necessary to dissuade vandals and others who feel like pursuing less legitimate insertions to the article. It also made it possible to remove some extraneous information to make it authoritative. I think it meets basic human dignity nicely. Otherwise, I don't understand why personal life information is included throughout the article. The justifications offered don't make any sense. I get the issues about her film career, although I think the article is weak on an overview either of Madonna's less than average acting abilities or film critics' mass movement to pan her emphatically. To address this, I suggest finding an authoritative statement from a film critic or biographer to answer this. 
 ::::I think a sentence or two in 1982–85: Madonna and Like a Virgin to explain her impact in video and her performances would do nicely to inform readers that she has been a controversial figure. Most of that, however, should be in its own section. She really is quite effectivethis is an understatement...she is revolutionaryin doing this and it deserves a concentrated discussion of how she riles up religious authority and makes the music video medium her personal bitch.