:I agree. I don't know that we need to limit it to exactly 2 paragraphs, but in general it needs to be cleaned up and summarized. It would also be great to get more information on the other several thousand years of history. I'm not sure one short paragraph does the ancient history section justice. Do you think it better to create a subpage to start trying to collapse all this data at once, or is it better to incrementally change the existing article? —  []