== Thanks for your feedback on my content == 

 Hi AG, 

 I am new to Wikipedia and have spent the last few days reading about the site and working on mastering the tools and rules to get my submission approved. I have worked to revise it on the issues you raised from the instructions within Wiki and tried to use live chat unsuccessfully. (clicked around but couldn't figure it out or find instructions. I wondered, I know you are busy until the 4th Dec, if you might give a few specific pointers. Many thanks