== Suggestions replies == 

 @2015evolution7 thank you for adding a picture! The symptoms are well organized now, so that was very helpful, too. 

 @Spreetycakes these were good tips. I changed information about the clinical studies to be more of an overview, and added more information about the evolutionary aspect of the disease. I applied your tip about searching for more well rounded articles, and it seemed to help with overall knowledge of Anaplasmosis. 

 In regards to my professor's comments, I tried to streamline the information about the first diagnosis as best I could.  I did end up changing around some of the citations, because they were in the middle of the sentences, not at the end of each sentence.  I also found that I didn't cite each sentence, so I had to go through and make sure I was using the correct source for each sentence.  I also added information about statistics and added what I could find evidence on about the evolution of Anaplasmosis.