===RfC=== 
 I have added a Outside view by Tenmei at Wikipedia:Requests for comment/Teeninvestor.  I would very much appreciate your impression, especially  
 :(a) if you can suggest a way to improve the clarity of the writing and/or  
 :(b) if you construe any part of the diff as insufficiently moderate and forward-looking.   

 As you will guess, I invested quite a bit of time in drafting this; and I want to encourage you to contact me by e-mail with any constructive comments and criticism.