:The draft meets the problem of unidentified first names by presenting a sourced statement about who "Mike" is, and making it clear that it's Keith Briffa's reconstruction that was curtailed in accordance with Briffa's request that post 1960 curves should not be used. If that's addressed in the article, the whole quote can go in. It's still a bit abridged from the quote given by Jones in his first statement, but that's probably reasonable. . ,