==Suggested changes== 
 I've been in email contact with Patrick Byrne following his complaints about this article.  He has sent me an alternative version of the article.  Since I started discussing this with hm, other editors have got involved in editing it, so I have decided to publish it to Google. 

 * http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=df9gr9pz_0gk26pzhg 

 As you might expect, it doesn't comply to all of Wikipedia's policies in its current form (Byrne doesn't claim to be familiar with them all) but rather than discuss this fact I would suggest that we regard it as a starting point for changes and corrections to Wikipedia's article.