==IF4IT Organization Page== 
 Hi Jim, 

 I dealt with a number of things you recommended... 
 * Regarding heading capitalization structure... fixed. 
 * Regarding bulleted lists...  I get what you're saying but I still haven't found what I feel is a better way than lists for conveying certain points.  I think it's the decades of corporate in me.  Maybe ideas will come up as more people start to review the page. 
 * Regarding the use of ® ™ or © symbols...  The symbols are actually part of the title of the referenced document.  Once I integrated the references, these symbols floated down to and were buried in the References section.  They seem less noticeable there but I'll eliminate them if you think tampering with the original reference's title is the right thing to do. 
 * Regarding your comments on the History section and integrating references via the use of prose...  I rewrote everything and did my best to follow your advice.  It may not be perfect yet, but I think it's closer and, you're right, I agree that the more neutral it becomes, the better it reads.  I also restructured the article to have the Types of solutions and services offered section follow the history in manner that makes it act more as an extension of the history, with the references to help support it.  It uses bullets and you probably won't like it but I feel like this is one of those cases where a bulleted list seems to fit. 

 If possible, please take a look and let me know what you think. 

 My Best, 

 Frank