, 27 October 2009 (UTC) 

 :::::::Putting aside the fact that a lead section should be comprehensive which usually entails 3 solid paragraphs, anyone who is familiar with conspiracy theories in general and New World Order conspiracism in particular knows that the second paragraph (which was not originally written by me but that I have tweaked over the past year) is fair and accurate. I obviously will not take seriously criticism of "verbosity" from someone who is such as a bad writer and editor. Lastly, the entire third paragraph of the lead is a quote/paraphrase of Barkun's own words so the notion that he doesn't really like it is ridiculous! Ludvikus, stop embarrassing yourself...   14:11