:: The "On the other hand" implies there are two sides to a debate. There are not. Hutton wrote some things. Kerenyi wrote some other things. Comparing and contrasting these things is synthesis. "On the other hand" might be fine for casual speach, but this is an encycopedia, and it implies a relationship between the two texts which is not actually established outside of this article. Further, I reiterate: Kerenyi was writing about ancient Greece, not Neopaganism. The subject of this article is Neopagaism, and inserting content which is not directly relevant to the subject of the article makes it misleading.