:I did not intend to patronise. My message made clear that I was not criticising your tag - the article was improved after you tagged it. I apologise for the "You may wish to review... " bit - I was using a script which automates the clerical work of declining speedies, and omitted to uncheck the box marked "Use newbie message". No, the article is not yet satisfactory - I have BLP-proded it and pointed the author to WP:YFA, WP:CITE and WP:PROF. When you add a speedy notification to a previously empty talk page  like that, it is helpful to precede it with  or another welcome message, to give the new user some clues on how to do better. Regards,