::Yes, I am not saying the article is "done".  Just that I did the cuts above.  The thing needs, at a minimum: 
 ****Prose go-over 
 ****Ref formatting go-over (the stupid last firsting and pp versus p and all that) 
 ****Resolving hidden comments 
 ****Couple citation neededs 
 ****Getting some more people to look at it, so it has some pre-review. 
 ****Etc. 

 ::It's in pretty decent shape though.