:::- Modocc, I think it is interesting to note that you and I reached a very similar conclusion about the third sentence, at about the same time. But I guess I didn't have quite the same "special effects" (drumroll please!). I say this because when I first tried to post the above "critique" I had an edit conflict with you. I had scrutinized the lede in question was becasue my curosity was piqued when I noticed that a certain percentage of Stevertigo's responses appeared to be down-to-earth physics, without any other dressing. It was then I decided to critique (or parse) the lede under discussion.