***You approach is what I have objected to in the past.  You are writing this article as if you are writing a research paper.  That is NOT what WP is for.  Aside from the basic issue of citation overkill that you have employed is the greater problem of original research, which I have only had a small chance to examine.  If you want to write a research paper and have it published on the perils of HF than I suggest you go through the appropriate process.