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I feel dizzy...the blur comes back,i can only hear echo from conversation of Linwood with my parents. I felt sharp pain in my head the moment i heard Linwood say that people that want me dead are coming. I shake my head a little,and i can see that Linwood is throwing some chairs and a wardrobe on the door. "What...what is going on?" I ask "They are coming for you,but don't worry,i will be there 'till the end." Linwood answers I was surprised about his speech improvement,but i didn't pay too much attention,because someone/something began knocking on the door. My parents and Linwood were far from the door,right next to my bed. With one hit the door flies open,and a chair flies across the room and breaks the window. We were at 6th floor of the hospital,and jumping out would be lethal. Entering the room are three entities in human shapes. They were wearing huge coats,i couldn't see their faces. I was terrified. Linwood picked up TV and threw it at them. The TV flew right through them,but they flashed. That's when Linwood grabbed my hand,broke the ceiling,and threw me on the next floor and told me to go and take an elevator on the other side of the hospital. I started running through the hallways of the hospital,continuously bumping into the walls. I remembered my parents are still in that room. I had a feeling i had to go back. I come back to the hole in the ceiling,but the room bellow was empty. I thought that Linwood and my parents are captured by the entities,and i was terrified. I turned around and started looking for the way to get down. The hallways were huge,and it was like i was searching for a needle in a haystack. I finally found the stairs. Halfway down i was shocked. The two of the entities were waiting me on the lower floor. I ran back upstairs. I was running through the hallways with them after me. When they were out of my sight, i ran into one room and closed the door. I saw a fire extinguisher,and thought it might help me. I took a steel object and broke the glass. When i tried to pick it up,it was heavy. When i got it on the ground,i couldn't figure out how to start it. It was not like in the movies. I figured out that i had to remove the zip tie on the top. I took the scissors from a drawer and cut through it. I pulled out some kind of a pin. I tried it out and it worked. It was so heavy i had to drag it. I opened the door and aimed,but there was nothing there. With all my strength i dragged the extinguisher across the hallways,always looking behind. I finally stopped at one corner of the hallway,i sat on the floor with the extinguisher in my hands,waiting for them. I was shaking,terrified about the fact that my parents and Linwood are missing. It was almost midnight and all the patients were asleep.It seemed like i was sitting there for hours. I feel sleepy...i think i'm gonna fall asleep. Then a crash woke me up. I still had that extinguisher in my hands. On the other end of the hallway i saw those two entities again! They were walking towards me. I pushed the handle and started spraying. They were flashing for about 10 seconds and then started moving again,so i pushed again. I stood up and started dragging the extinguisher,and spraying at the same time. When i was about 30 feet away,i let go of the extinguisher and started running. I got back to the stairs,and started running downstairs. When i was about 3 floors down i was caught by a nurse. "And where do you think you are going? Why are you running like there is no tomorrow? What's the problem?" I refused to tell her the real reason,so i made up the reason. "My family came to see me,they are downstairs!" She looked at my feet,and saw i was wearing no shoes. "Honey,you can't run with no shoes. Where is your room? I will tell your parents to come and visit you there,under no circumstances you can run around the hospital barefooted! I got around her and continued running. She yelled at me,and when i was almost gone "around the corner" i turned around to see her screaming. The entities are following me! I had to find another stairs. I was lucky i found the elevator. I called the elevator,but i saw the entities coming towards me. I ran inside an elevator and pushed the button for the ground floor. The elevator doors closed just before entities could enter. I was relieved. When elevator stopped and doors started opening, i saw the third entity waiting me there. It grabbed me by the hand and i started flashing in a very bright light,as well as the entity. Like it was sucking something out of me... I feel dizzy...