Famer's Story-writing debate tournament Round#3 TUF VS LANNAN13

(It was a SFI-FY! Oh well.)It was a lot to take in. My dreams must of had some impact on me and they must have been a sign! There couldn't have been any other explination of it. I looked up from my arms of which I have sobbed upon. My tears even had a drop or two on my jeans. I straightend out my leggs as I reached into my pocket for my picture of Chloe. It obviously wasn't there when I had fallen asleep. Asleep? When did I does off? That is strange... I don't remember going to bed or even being near my house. I look at the picture. It was the week we went on vacation in Boston. It was at Fenway Park and it was her caughting a home run by Big Papi over the Green Monster in the 5th inning against the New York Yankees. I was a Red Sox fan though Chloe, however, she was a Yankees fan. I smiled at the memory, but it quickly faded into a grimance of sorrow. memories of us being together came flooding back and it hurt. Memories of when we met at Paris Island and at that moment we say each other as we lined up at the yellow foot steps we instantly fell in love. Of course the DIs (Drill Instructors) wouldn't have this as they keep the men and women appart. We only saw each other occasionly after that. We saw eachother everyday in the chow hall (lunch room) and we occasionly said a word or two to each other as our eyes would always be on the look out for the DI's and when they were near we ate Pie style (less dominate hand on your knee under the table, head and eyes straight forword, and no talking). With me have had being in Marine Corps ROTC I knew my basic Marine Corps knowledge, so I wrote down the 11 General Orders and the Leadership traits and Princliples so she could take it with her back to the female barracks (bed rooms) so she could study them. I tried my hardest to get her into the Marine Corps. I even brided SSgt. (staff Sergeant) Frenza a couple of times to let Chloe and I get together and talk. Then when I turned age 20 we graduated from Paris Island and after a couple bribes we got put into the same unit and a year latter, in 2004, our unit got shipped to Okinawa, Japan. We were staitioned there for 4 years and in 2008 we retired from the Corps to live the rest of our lives and do things that a normal person would do. I retired a Gunney, while Chloe retired as a Sergeant. *********************************************************************************************I caught a glimps of the car. "Chloe?" I called for for her. I was ejected from the car when we flipped off the bridge. I was bleeding and I tried to get up. I clenched my teeth hard as I got up. I walked toward the car. BOOM! The car exploded and I was sent flying back. I landed against a barbed wired fense. My back stiffed and I fell off the fense. I reached for my back. After a few moments the snow lightend up and I heard sirens. I turned over and I saw the car a blaze and Chloe chared inside. "Chloe, Nooo!" I called for her but my voice was lost in my throght as I blacked out.*********************************************************************************************I snap out of my flash back as I jump up off my couch. Wait my couch? I thought I was outside, how'd I get back in here?