Story Battle!

Alright, I made it one time! ^_^ Anyway here is my story...Beauty and the Vampire (Remix of mine)Chapter 1Hey, how's it hangin? Congratulations! You just ruined a great dream?! Man, I was sucking the blood out of Chuck Norris... Not that ill ever get THAT dream again... Your wondering what's with the blood sucking? Well I'm kinda a vampire.. Yeah one of those blood sucking demons you just described.. Well anyway, now that you understand me.... I've got a bit of a confession to make.... You heard of that kid? What's his face? No that's not it... Ledge? No.... Oh! Cliff! That's him! Yeah can you believe that guy? See, when me and him where eating lunch he told me he'd gotten himself a love. What the heck does that mean? Does it mean he loves someone or something? Eh, Who needs love? I've got the clothes on my back, the fangs in my teeth and my own apartment floor so I- Oh? Yeah I live alone. Ever since mom died the place has been quiet. I've been hiding the body ever since the "Accident". RING RING! Well, that's my alarm to get up so I guess id better do what it says before it gives me another bruise... Anyway, see you on the other side....Id awoken by the blaring sound of my alarm bell. Its bright red and black design was pretty much the only thing that could be seen within a few feet from my room with all this darkness inside of it. I cant really go into the light so I've got to keep the rooms dark so I don't get a huge rash on some very few strange places when it gets hot... Id gotten up, attempted to brush my freakishly sharp teeth without injuring the toothbrush and got dressed. Id turned on some "Why cant I?" and turned to overlook my apartment window like I always do during days like these where I think about what's wrong. Cliff's Words really pined me alote in my heart when id heard about it. Id gotten jealous. I mean, I've never really loved someone so why do I have these feelings all of a sudden. they make me want to jump into the sun without my sunscreen... So id turned off my music player before it could get to the sad part and took the flight of stairs down outside after id put on some sunscreen. I knew id soon get bored at my usual spot so I decided to got to the pool. Id always enjoyed the water ever since I was little. Heh, Once when I was little actually almost drowned until someone had pulled me up. It was pretty blurry so I didn't know who it was. Though all I know was it was a mother because I could hear a little girl talking to her mom in the background and the lady would keep responding, "Not now sweety.." and the little girl would leave. After that event I've always went to the pool to do things like clear my thoughts, get better at swimming, or just to snore in my usual corner. As I ran across the fence that splits the pool to the road I saw a few lump figures. Oh geez.. People... I thought. I knew that communication with people was bad for Vampires like me because id probably end up fed up with them and suck their blood. I tried to avoid the still wet of the two humans and go to my usual corner when I noticed it was already taken. That seriously got me mad. But I tried not to stomp my feet when I had to go to another spot with a shady umbrella. After id done all of this hullabaloo just to get a spot id finally had the chance to take off my shirt to get ready for the pool. As id pulled off my shirt my old birthmark the shape of a cross with a half ring on the top felt like it was burning through my skin even more than it already was. I slowly paced myself as I walked across to the five feet zone, the highest point in our pool so that I could get away from the two females at the foot of the stairs that suspended the lowest 20 or so centimeter pool side. As I looked just a bit more at these girls I could make out their features with my keen senses of sight. One has long milk chocolate brown hair that would have been beautiful if it was not wet. She had a sort of Gothic black and red bikini. Her face was one of the most beautiful I've seen. Just her eyes could make out the makings of a masterpiece. Her nose was perfectly pointed and her lips were normal sized with a mixture of black and red lip gloss. Her mouth must have met the water at some point for that to have happened maybe. Her age looked young. She looked like she could have been in maybe high school or middle school. She looked like the age of about thirteen. A year younger than me with a perfect body to finish it off. As I finished taking a small peak at the brown haired girl, I slowly tilted my head to take a gander at the younger looking girl. She had white/blond hair with a few occasional stripes of brown here and there. There father or mother must have been brown haired. I felt like I had enough with the glances and dove underwater. The feel of the beautiful cold water felt like it was picking me up and drifting me away into a faraway land where only I was invited. Once I resurfaced the water id felt my hair feel wetter than normal so I decided to shake my head a little so that my hair could get acquainted with the cool water. As I flicked my hair back and forth with my eyes closed from water, I had heard a loud shriek that felt like it came from right next to me. As I slowly opened my eyes out came my worst nightmare. People, the two girls swarmed me and I felt trapped. With my claustrophobia kicking in I felt like running for it but something in my gut said; Don't make a move, maybe they will go away if you don't move... So I turned my head to meet the older girl with the long brown chocolate hair. "Hi, How are you?" The mysterious girl asked. I felt like I was in an asylum. Where all the nurses would ask if you are ok and all I could simply do to awn ser her was say, "Yeah." with that I tilted my head to show here I was still on earth. "Oh that was good, I thought you might have drowned or something," I gave her my dumb look like are-you-kidding-me look. "Just kidding, my names Parker, this girl here is Megan." She gestured her hand to the girl floating on my other side. "So what's your name?" She asked anxiously as if she was about to win a game show. Id never cared about my name since my mom would keep calling me it after I keep telling her what I wanted my name to actually be. Id gotten smacked alote from saying it so I'm used to saying my real name now. "My names Kira." Id said with just one senctance. She looked at me confused. "Kira? Wierd name. Anyway want to race?" I felt like I was with Cliff. Always having me race with him where I would always win using a bit of my super speed. This time I thought id go easy. We had a few laps around and it actually felt great to be around someone who wasnt my mirror. I felt like I was finally alive. Not the undead vampire alive but like I was a real human doing what real humans do. After all the laps both of us were already pooped after maybe 5 laps and we just called it as a draw. As Parker and I were talking we both heard a vibration that came from Parkers watch which probobly meant it was time to go. "Well, Ive got to go. It was nice talking to you Kira." As she was giving me an adeui she gave me a smile that would have light up my entire apartment. After that event I felt like melting into the water so I could be apart of it. But as she walked down the road I decided to see her departure into the sunset. When she turned around I guess she could see me watching her because she suddenly went into sprinting position and ran to the house two doors down from my apartment. After that entire event I had finally known what Cliff meant when he found his love.End of Chapter 1Well, Its over everyone. So sorry it was so long I just really wanted to make a romance one based off my old book I used to write Ireally enjoyed writing the book so I thought id let you guys get a taste of what the book is about.