Let's Write this Short Story!

...the room became cold. It was unusually cold because outside was quite warm,it was 60 degrees.At that moment in the room i think it was freezing. I was kind of scared and confused. A part of me was scared,and the same part wanted to get out of that room. But the other part told me to stay there. I rolled myself into the blanket very tight. Then the house started to shake. Then suddenly i saw a light appeared out of nowhere,in my room! The light was blinding,so i closed my eyes for a few seconds. The room became warm again and everything was calm.When i opened my eyes i saw the light becoming dimmer and dimmer. When the light went out,i saw a shadow. I was terrified at that moment. I reached for the light switch above my bed and pressed it. I saw a boy,standing in my room with a sword. "Who...are..you?" I asked him still frightened "My name is Linwood." was all that he said. We stared at each other for quite a long time. I started calming down when looking at his eyes which were sky blue. "What...are you doing here?" "I am looking for a friend,i am lost." In the way he spoke i figured out he wasn't from around here,i didn't understand him quite well,but for some reason i felt a connection with him. I suppose that any girl suddenly finding a boy in her room at night would scream. I did not. "Where are you from?" i asked. "I do not remember anything. All i remember was laying on the grass,and then i came here. I was trying to protect you from the evil..." He stretched out his hand towards me. I felt positive energy,i was confident that he was not going to harm me. I unconsciously stretched my hand too. When our hands met,Thomas started crying loudly. My mom went to his room to calm him down. I jumped from the bed and opened the door,and saw mom approaching my room. I was excited to tell her i got a new friend,but when she came in,and i turned around,Linwood was gone. Mom told me i was probably imagining things and that i should go back to sleep. I felt really bonded to that boy once i looked in his eyes. I looked through my window,but he was nowhere to be found. I didn't even tell him my name! I laid down in my bed,closed my eyes and waited for the same thing to happen,but it didn't. It is still my strongest memory,and also the most powerful. I waited for that boy for 2 years to appear,even i didn't know why i wanted so much for him to come. I eventually forgot about him. Probably the saddest day of my life was when my best friend Tanya was moving to the opposite part of the city and was withdrawing from the school i went to. I was crushed,and without her help i was again that same old girl at the beginning; shy. One evening, 17th march (that same day,2 years after)when i was 10 years old i was coming back from school as usual,but it became very unusual when i was approaching 2 guys,leaning on the building wall,smoking cigarettes. I felt weird,but i started walking faster. That fast walk turned into sprint when the two guys started chasing me. They caught me at the next block. One of them put his hand over my mouth. Then they started dragging me and eventually they took me to a car. One guy opened the trunk,and the other guy threw me inside. I was stunned,frightened and lost. And so it was...