Socialpinko's ELO tourney R1 TUF VS daytonanerd: Writers debate

I snap back to my senses about 15 seconds later, and realize that Seena is fighting for her life, and I was just standing there, relishing the moment. I feel a determination now to get Seena out of this situation alive. I leave the party out the back door, and then drive Seena to a hospital about 2 miles from where the party was. The staff at the hospital immediately take her, and I have no choice but to leave. I don"t feel comfortable being in the hospital after the kill I performed. I park in a parking lot, and where an alley leads the way back to m only home. It is dawn outside. "I am dis-oriented, and nauseous, as I stumble out of the door and into the alley. What have I done? The reality of what has just happened hasn't hit me yet. I feel sick, from the scent of the thick coated blood that covers my shirt, Jeans, and arms. I am scared, and confused. Scared because of my shocking actions, confused because I feel different than how I know I should be feeling right now. I should be feeling adrenaline, and sickness at the montrous deed I committed. I feel Guilt... Not about what I just did, but I feel guilty for not feeling guilty. It may be shock. Yeah, that's it. It just hasn't kicked in yet. I should be puking everywhere, in disgust right now but I don't. I actually feel quite the opposite. Happy, almost. Relieved. As if a tension that's been straining my brain for years was finally broken. Despite feeling scared and confused, I feel satisfied, as if I had just fed a hunger that had been brewing for years. I felt as if I needed... more... What is wrong with me?"(For people who don"t know, this is one of TUF"s paragraphs he wrote in Round 1) I fall down on the ground. However, I don"t get up. I think "This is the place for killers like me.". As I crawl up steps to reach the door of my home, my cell phone rings. The caller ID identifies the caller as "Amber Lake Municipal Emergency Center". I suddenly become anxious, wondering the fate of Seena. I pick up the call. "Is this Kevin Brown?" "Yes, I am Kevin Brown." "You brought in Seena Jacobson at 1:27 A.M. this morning" "Yes, yes I did." "30 minutes ago, at 6:05 A.M., your friend passed away. Her injuries are normally treatable, but she didn"t recover. It seemed as if she lost the will to live. I hang up the phone. For the first time in my life, I just start bawling. I am a murderer, and my best friend is gone. The guilt now is starting to crash down on me. This life that I have pretended to live is a failure. I walk into the house. I then remember the feelings that I got when I killed the man earlier. I have just realized, that at that moment, I truly felt positive emotion. The old life was dead, so I need to start a new life. Everybody says "Do something you really love.". I know now that my true destiny, the feeling I felt inside, was wailing to me to start again. To start a new life in which I end the lives of others. My parents had left a semi-automatic gun with extra magazines in their closet, and I grab it. I now know that this is the last time I will see this house again. I write down a note on a sheet of paper, to make people think I am gone for good. "Dear finder, I am Kevin Jones Brown. I was a high-schooler at Amber Lake High School. The life I lived... I just couldn"t stand it. It was too boring, too dull. I didn"t want to live a dull life. Every time I tried not to live a dull life, it is never successful. I guess it is just me. I know now that this world wasn"t meant for me. The life after seems much more interesting. By the time you read this, I will have moved on to the next world. A better world. With care, Kevin Jones Brown" I change my clothes. I put on a short sleeve black shirt, baggy jeans with a good amount of pockets, and grab a baby blue jacket with a hood. I find all the money in the house I can find (This amounts to about 1,790 dollars), and leave the house for the final time. I get into my car to go to the bank. In the bank, I withdraw all of the money in my checking and savings account(which amounts to another 2,100 dollars). I drive my car, thinking of the type of people who I will murder. I decide to try and prevent innocent young people like Seena ever having to face that punishment. I decide to murder all rapists, pedophiles, and unconvicted child killers that I find. I will rob them clean, and taking their identification, so that I can continue to live this life as long as I can. I drive down the open road. CHALLENGE: Kevin has started a new life as a vigilante. What will happen next in his new life? "Mama, life had just begun, but now I've gone and thrown it all away!" - Freddie Mercury