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<td colspan="6"><strong>COMMENTS FROM PUBLIC REVIEWERS</strong></td>
<td colspan="7"><strong>AUTHOR'S RESPONSE</strong></td>
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<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Comment</strong></p>
<p><strong>Number</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Reviewer</strong></p>
<p><strong>ID</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><strong>Chapter</strong></td>
<td><strong>Page</strong></td>
<td><strong>Line</strong></td>
<td><strong>Comment Text</strong></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Acknowledged,</strong></p>
<p><strong>but no further</strong></p>
<p><strong>response or revisions</strong></p>
<p><strong>are required</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Revisions have</strong></p>
<p><strong>been incorporated</strong></p>
<p><strong>as suggested in the</strong></p>
<p><strong>comment</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Agree, but see</strong></p>
<p><strong>"Notes on</strong></p>
<p><strong>Response"</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Agree, but</strong></p>
<p><strong>elaboration is</strong></p>
<p><strong>precluded by length</strong></p>
<p><strong>limitations</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Disagree; see</strong></p>
<p><strong>"Notes on</strong></p>
<p><strong>Response"</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><blockquote>
<p><strong>Beyond scope of</strong></p>
<p><strong>report/chapter</strong></p>
</blockquote></td>
<td><strong>Notes on Response</strong></td>
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<td><p>AQ-1</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td><mark></mark></td>
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<td><p>AQ-2</p>
<p>Ref G-2</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td><p>Grey literature sources - newspapers, the trade press, websites,
advocacy documents, position papers or research plans for the
government’s conservation partners– which may not have been
peer-reviewed,</p>
<p>The authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability.</p>
<p>To ensure clarity on the part of readers, we request that the authors
carefully differentiate in the text or in the list of references their
use of non-peer-reviewed sources.</p></td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
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<td><p>AQ-3</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>117</td>
<td>2577</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Now in print – already undergone peer review.</td>
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<td><p>AQ-4</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>120</td>
<td>2642</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Now in print – already undergone peer review.</td>
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<tr class="odd">
<td><p>AQ-5</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>120</td>
<td>2658</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Now in print – already undergone peer review.</td>
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<td><p>AQ-6</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>120</td>
<td>2662</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Reference dropped. Appropriate change made in the text.</td>
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<td><p>AQ-7</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>120</td>
<td>2701</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Now in print – already undergone peer review.</td>
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<td><p>AQ-8</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>122</td>
<td>2708</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Now published. Full reference information given.</td>
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<td><p>AQ-9</p>
<p>Ref: G-11</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>122</td>
<td>2718</td>
<td>“in press” or “submitted” references. If the articles or books have
already undergone peer review and are in their final form, these
references should be assumed to be published peer-reviewed literature.
If the articles or books are not in final peer-reviewed form, the
authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Now published. Full reference information given.</td>
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<td><p>AQ-10</p>
<p>Ref: G-12</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>118</td>
<td>2599</td>
<td><p>Grey literature sources - newspapers, the trade press, websites,
advocacy documents, position papers or research plans for the
government’s conservation partners– which may not have been
peer-reviewed,</p>
<p>The authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability.</p>
<p>To ensure clarity on the part of readers, we request that the authors
carefully differentiate in the text or in the list of references their
use of non-peer-reviewed sources.</p></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>EM, from A&amp;WMA is a peer-reviewed article</td>
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<td><p>AQ-11</p>
<p>Ref: G-12</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>General</p>
<p>Chapter 2</p></td>
<td>119</td>
<td>2622</td>
<td><p>Grey literature sources - newspapers, the trade press, websites,
advocacy documents, position papers or research plans for the
government’s conservation partners– which may not have been
peer-reviewed,</p>
<p>The authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability.</p>
<p>To ensure clarity on the part of readers, we request that the authors
carefully differentiate in the text or in the list of references their
use of non-peer-reviewed sources.</p></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>EM, from A&amp;WMA is a peer-reviewed article</td>
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<td><p>AQ-12</p>
<p>Ref: G-12</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>Chapter 2</p>
<p>Reference</p></td>
<td>121</td>
<td>2676</td>
<td><p>Grey literature sources - newspapers, the trade press, websites,
advocacy documents, position papers or research plans for the
government’s conservation partners– which may not have been
peer-reviewed,</p>
<p>The authors should fully comply with the Guidelines for approval and
materials availability.</p>
<p>To ensure clarity on the part of readers, we request that the authors
carefully differentiate in the text or in the list of references their
use of non-peer-reviewed sources.</p></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>NARSTO is a public-private parternship organization and its
publications are heavily peer reviewed</td>
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<td><p>AQ-13</p>
<p>Ref: G-13</p></td>
<td>04</td>
<td><p>Chapter 2</p>
<p>Reference</p></td>
<td>119</td>
<td>2639</td>
<td>The reference is incomplete.</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Full reference information given</td>
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<td>AQ-14</td>
<td>06</td>
<td>Chapter 2</td>
<td>41</td>
<td>889-893</td>
<td>The sentence on these lines reads: “As demonstrated in global model
applications, satellite measured biomass burning emissions data should
be utilized in the regional air quality modeling presented a methodology
for estimating the …” This sentence makes no sense. Please consider
revising this sentence to convey the author’s thought.</td>
<td></td>
<td>X</td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td></td>
<td>Text modified accordingly</td>
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