didn't understand completely could look up for themselves. That's why God created Google. I'll get my other gripe out of the way too. The Gaelic, I'm sure is accurate, but who'd know? The odd word here and there is fine -- often there's a particular word that just fits in Gaelic and is untranslatable -- but why do they just speak Gaelic sometimes and English the rest? You end up having to give translations of what are often very banal remarks. That's just my reading preference though. My overall impression is that this is going to be a tremendous read. I haven't time to read more at the moment, and hate reading online anyway, but if this was a book, I wouldn't hesitate. Top stars, if you're interested in stars, and well done, sir. Just a few observations. 'Many an old soldier came to the tower to see out his days.' One thing I wished, that Wolfe had a rather richer stock of curses. Can't you find him another one? The bit from 'He was quite alone until a man emerged from a curtain' to 'The same man he saw moments before. His white clothing was a nightshirt.' Is confusing. It isn't clear who is speaking. You switch from Col. Howe to Colonel Howe. I'd say that in speech Colonel is better. In the last exchange between Wolfe and Howe you switch about between the two forms. Skip read autho 3. Sorry. Autho 4 Back to the story. Like the